Pony Fanfiction Thread:

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Because the My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic thread in Western Animation is getting clogged with fanfiction stuff, it's probably better to just make a thread for that and let the thread be about the actual show.

Anyway, here's my crap.

EDIT: And now for a list of works by the various people in this thread.

  • Myself: Bedtime Story, With a Little Help From My Friends, Catch Me If You Can, The Book of Friendship, Make Our Garden Grow, AAAAAAAAAAArientation, This Nearly Was Mine, The Ballad of the White Rose.
  • Kegisak: Feedback, They Never Fall Far, The Colour You Bleed, My Time Among Clothes Hangers
  • CDRW: A Still More Glorious Dawn Awaits
  • Perpetual Lurker: Make a Wish.
  • Rich Reeders: Punch Drunk, Quit Dragon Your Heels, Sun and Moon
  • Kuroi Tsubasa Tenshi: Evil's Twilight, Passions,
  • Sereg: An Earth Pony's Guide to Magic
  • Sessalisk: Darkest Before Dawn
  • Librarian: The Griffin War, Come To Your Senses.

Also, this got posted and people thought it should be on front here

Rambler's Law

The farther the Pony Fanfiction Thread strays from its declared topic, the faster it accumulates new posts.

If you wish to discuss Fallout: Equestria, please take it to the Fallout: Equestria thread also in this forum.

Oh Wow. That list is now out of date. Anyway, other update thingy in that some folks decided we should have

edited 26th Aug '14 10:29:10 PM by Pannic

2 gingerninja66627th Jun 2011 06:57:59 PM from Aboard The Damocles
SCH-NEIGH-ZEL
it's for the best probably
"Contests fought between two masters are decided instantly. An invisible battle is now raging between the two of them." Lulu vs Schneizel
3 RichReeders27th Jun 2011 07:05:32 PM from Watching this muffin.
Official Muffin Watcher

edited 28th Jun '11 9:50:12 AM by RichReeders

Don't you try anything, you baked good you.
Thank you
5 gingerninja66627th Jun 2011 07:20:17 PM from Aboard The Damocles
SCH-NEIGH-ZEL
Yeah i really need help in writing for Rarity. I can't keep her sounding kind, while also being The Libby
"Contests fought between two masters are decided instantly. An invisible battle is now raging between the two of them." Lulu vs Schneizel
6 JapaneseTeeth27th Jun 2011 07:47:01 PM from Meinong's jungle , Relationship Status: Mu
Twilight Princess Twilight
Okay, for now I'm just leaving this here for posterity. It's a crossover involving the ponies, so I guess it fits, even if they won't be dominating the plot the whole way through.
7 Anemoi27th Jun 2011 07:49:13 PM from Arendelle Proctology , Relationship Status: Wanna dance with somebody
8 NekoLLX27th Jun 2011 07:53:47 PM from Soviet America
Writer: Tokusatsu 5YrWar
7 friends, a robot, and a spirit, will find a way to protect us...if it kills them.
9 NekoLLX27th Jun 2011 09:31:13 PM from Soviet America
Writer: Tokusatsu 5YrWar
so are people going to comment here or am i suppose to look for something in goggle docs?
7 friends, a robot, and a spirit, will find a way to protect us...if it kills them.
10 NapoleonDeCheese27th Jun 2011 09:36:02 PM from Valencia, Venezuela
Quico will Return in The Avengers 3
Fanfiction threads overall don't advance as fast as other kinds of threads. Give it some time.
I'm a horrible person and so are you.
11 NekoLLX27th Jun 2011 09:41:59 PM from Soviet America
Writer: Tokusatsu 5YrWar
Ah but this is a transpose from here so i kind of expect the same people and activity there here since it's a Spin-Off
7 friends, a robot, and a spirit, will find a way to protect us...if it kills them.
12 NapoleonDeCheese27th Jun 2011 09:44:45 PM from Valencia, Venezuela
Quico will Return in The Avengers 3
Spinoffs are often not as popular as the mother thread. It happens.
I'm a horrible person and so are you.
13 MoeDantes28th Jun 2011 06:02:10 AM from the Land of Classics
cuter, cuddlier Edmond
This topic WILL become popular! YOU WILL LOVE IT!!!

In other news, my fanfics are no longer hosted on Google Docs. I've now set up a Tumblr account for them.

If Kuroi or Kegisak are reading this, you'll be happy to know I acted on your suggestions and improved some parts, especially in the second chapter. I'd like ya'll to re-read it and tell me what you think.

(and anyone else whose interested, tell me what you think too).

edited 28th Jun '11 6:03:39 AM by MoeDantes

14 Justanotherbrony28th Jun 2011 07:28:38 AM from the hay if i know.....
TAAARRR-DEEEEEEE!
@ Pannic

I read all six chapters of With a little help from my friends, and I'm intrigued. I want to read on to see where the story is going, which is a good sign of course.

There are a few mistakes I picked up on, such as in chapter 4, it says that 'he saw that the front gat was open,' but overall, good effort.
In another forum, I'm a sentient off road vehicle.
Apathy is one thousand times worse than hate.
@Neko I'd like to help everyone, but much of the writing isn't exactly short and to actually give good advice, I find I need to do a bit of analysing. It's pretty easy to run out of both steam and time. I'll be around and see what I can do, but that's about all I can promise.

@Moe Alright, I'll take a look and get back to you later.
16 NekoLLX28th Jun 2011 09:36:50 AM from Soviet America
Writer: Tokusatsu 5YrWar
[up]Just wasn't sure if between Google Docs and the new thread there was something else i needed to do.
7 friends, a robot, and a spirit, will find a way to protect us...if it kills them.
17 gingerninja66628th Jun 2011 09:57:05 AM from Aboard The Damocles
SCH-NEIGH-ZEL
I know it's been done to death, but would Celestia work as a Magnificent Bastard type villain? cuz in my fanfiction I wanted both her AND Nightmare Moon to be the villains, not working together of course.
"Contests fought between two masters are decided instantly. An invisible battle is now raging between the two of them." Lulu vs Schneizel
Hiding a box of scraps
You know, Neko, it would help if you allowed us to see your fic without having to ask permisson first.
A good writer puts in a lot of details in there story. But a great one gets a story from a single detail.
19 gingerninja66628th Jun 2011 02:29:01 PM from Aboard The Damocles
SCH-NEIGH-ZEL
Is writing a fanfic out like a script a wise thing to do? As in do people actually read fanfics when their formatted like that?
"Contests fought between two masters are decided instantly. An invisible battle is now raging between the two of them." Lulu vs Schneizel
20 Eventua28th Jun 2011 02:44:55 PM from Dumundi , Relationship Status: I won't say I'm in love
Lord of the Citadel
Right, started a fic: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1kMwMRsgUJw2JjM9OKjS-le8riXn3LTFZx9aeq0jiJQ4/edit?hl=en_US&authkey=COLuotAK#

Feedback would be appreciated. The full title is The Four Lords of Equestria, but for now it's just the prologue.

edited 28th Jun '11 2:51:05 PM by Eventua

The Signature Of Me
21 JapaneseTeeth28th Jun 2011 03:03:48 PM from Meinong's jungle , Relationship Status: Mu
Twilight Princess Twilight
[up][up]It's been used before. Stuff like writing a chatlog between characters or something like that. Whether it's a good idea usually depends on each individual fic.
22 NekoLLX28th Jun 2011 03:32:56 PM from Soviet America
Writer: Tokusatsu 5YrWar
[up][up][up][up] now see that what I need to know since i'm new to goggle Docs better?
7 friends, a robot, and a spirit, will find a way to protect us...if it kills them.
23 MoeDantes28th Jun 2011 04:08:02 PM from the Land of Classics
cuter, cuddlier Edmond
re Script Fics - They can be done well and used to be quite popular before fanfiction.net put a ban on them. The main problem is that younger writers use them as an excuse to be lazy. As long as you know how to properly write and format a script and you're not going to use it as an excuse not to describe anything, then it should work.
24 NekoLLX28th Jun 2011 04:27:43 PM from Soviet America
Writer: Tokusatsu 5YrWar
since mine is a game script is sometimes reads as a cript since well the interactive elements need to be clear for the programmer to follow non linerally, while Cutscenes are done in a narative format.
7 friends, a robot, and a spirit, will find a way to protect us...if it kills them.
25 gingerninja66628th Jun 2011 04:29:48 PM from Aboard The Damocles
SCH-NEIGH-ZEL
Damn, I feel bad now. While I try to keep details in, scripts are by design less detailed than prose. I'm a film student so i'm more used to writing scripts
"Contests fought between two masters are decided instantly. An invisible battle is now raging between the two of them." Lulu vs Schneizel

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