Hey Tropers. I know this is my first post, and that it may seem like I'm jumping the gun a little, but I need a little help. See, I wrote a play for my high school's Playwriting Festival, and people who saw it thought it was good. Really good. My drama teacher told me he wants me to submit it for professional publishing, and for professional performance. The thing is, I want to make sure it's good, and I know TV Tropes knows quality. I've been reading this site for a little over a year, and I learned a lot about writing good fiction from you guys. And by "a lot", I mean everything I know. So please, help me out here. I was hoping some of you could read the show and give me feedback. Just a good few paragraphs/sentences/whatever on what you think of it. And prententious as it's going to sound, it would make my year if someone troped it. So, if you've got time, it would mean the world to me. I can post a synopsis here if you need it, and I'd be grateful forever. Thank you all for your help.
Rinella Was Here