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* CriticalResearchFailure: the usual one about the Canadians burning down the White House in the War of 1812 is mentioned and debunked. However, Qabanni's assertion that the United States took in a "token handful" of refugees as opposed to the "legions" of refugees Canada took in is incorrect--the United States takes in far more refugees than Canada does [[note]] For instance, between May 2015 and April 2016, the United States took in 150,875 refugees, while Canada took 17,578 [[http://globalnews.ca/news/2951263/these-14-countries-have-taken-more-refugees-than-canada/ source]] [[/note]]. It is possible this has changed in the 100 or so years in the future that the story is set.
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* MagnificentBitch: [[TheRevolutionWillNotBeCivilized Amber Roos]] was a 6-year-old girl when the US invaded Canada and destroyed her hometown of Ottawa, killing her parents in the process. With the help of various kind strangers, Amber was able to flee to the Northwest Territories and grew up to be a hunter who lived off the land. At 18, she joins up with a [[LaResistance Canadian rebel group]], the Two Fours, and [[SociopathicSoldier kills a US soldier]] to prove her loyalty. After Vic, the leader of the Two Fours is captured and tortured until she reveals the location of their base, American forces attack the giant mine the Two Fours were hold up in. Defeating the American forces, Amber discovers the mine contains arsenic and will poison a nearby lake if destroyed. Knowing the US forces invaded Canada to take its freshwater, Amber hijacks an American military jet and uses it to get aboard the main American airship. Amber reveals to the main American administrator that she is wearing a [[SuicideAttack suicide vest]] and is holding a [[DeadMansSwitch dead man trigger]]. Amber sees through the American administrator's attempts to dissuade her and sets off the bomb, causing the airship to crash into the mine.[[TheRevolutionWillNotBeCivilized Amber Roos]] was a 6-year-old girl when the US invaded Canada and destroyed her hometown of Ottawa, killing her parents in the process. With the help of various kind strangers, Amber was able to flee to the Northwest Territories and grew up to be a hunter who lived off the land. At 18, she joins up with a [[LaResistance Canadian rebel group]], the Two Fours, and [[SociopathicSoldier kills a US soldier]] to prove her loyalty. After Vic, the leader of the Two Fours is captured and tortured until she reveals the location of their base, American forces attack the giant mine the Two Fours were hold up in. Defeating the American forces, Amber discovers the mine contains arsenic and will poison a nearby lake if destroyed. Knowing the US forces invaded Canada to take its freshwater, Amber hijacks an American military jet and uses it to get aboard the main American airship. Amber reveals to the main American administrator that she is wearing a [[SuicideAttack suicide vest]] and is holding a [[DeadMansSwitch dead man trigger]]. Amber sees through the American administrator's attempts to dissuade her and sets off the bomb, causing the airship to crash into the mine.
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* MagnificentBitch: [[TheRevolutionWillNotBeCivilized Amber Roos]] was a 6-year-old girl when the US invaded Canada and destroyed her hometown of Ottawa, killing her parents in the process. With the help of various kind strangers, Amber was able to flee to the Northwest Territories and grew up to be a hunter who lived off the land. At 18, she joins up with a [[LaResistance Canadian rebel group]], the Two Fours, and [[SociopathicSoldier kills a US soldier]] to prove her loyalty. After Vic, the leader of the Two Fours is captured and tortured until she reveals the location of their base, American forces attack the giant mine the Two Fours were hold up in. Defeating the American forces, Amber discovers the mine contains arsenic and will poison a nearby lake if destroyed. Knowing the US forces invaded Canada to take its freshwater, Amber hijacks an American military jet and uses it to get aboard the main American airship. Amber reveals to the main American administrator that she is wearing a [[SuicideAttack suicide vest]] and is holding a [[DeadMansSwitch dead man trigger]]. Amber sees through the American administrator's attempts to dissuade her and sets off the bomb, causing the airship to crash into the mine.[[TheRevolutionWillNotBeCivilized Amber Roos]] was a 6-year-old girl when the US invaded Canada and destroyed her hometown of Ottawa, killing her parents in the process. With the help of various kind strangers, Amber was able to flee to the Northwest Territories and grew up to be a hunter who lived off the land. At 18, she joins up with a [[LaResistance Canadian rebel group]], the Two Fours, and [[SociopathicSoldier kills a US soldier]] to prove her loyalty. After Vic, the leader of the Two Fours is captured and tortured until she reveals the location of their base, American forces attack the giant mine the Two Fours were hold up in. Defeating the American forces, Amber discovers the mine contains arsenic and will poison a nearby lake if destroyed. Knowing the US forces invaded Canada to take its freshwater, Amber hijacks an American military jet and uses it to get aboard the main American airship. Amber reveals to the main American administrator that she is wearing a [[SuicideAttack suicide vest]] and is holding a [[DeadMansSwitch dead man trigger]]. Amber sees through the American administrator's attempts to dissuade her and sets off the bomb, causing the airship to crash into the mine.
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* MagnificentBitch: [[TheRevolutionWillNotBeCivilized Amber Roos]] was a 6-year-old girl when the US invaded Canada and destroyed her hometown of Ottawa, killing her parents in the process. With the help of various kind strangers, Amber was able to flee to the Northwest Territories and grew up to be a hunter who lived off the land. At 18, she joins up with a [[LaResistance Canadian rebel group]], the Two Fours, and [[SociopathicSoldier kills a US soldier]] to prove her loyalty. After Vic, the leader of the Two Fours is captured and tortured until she reveals the location of their base, American forces attack the giant mine the Two Fours were hold up in. Defeating the American forces, Amber discovers the mine contains arsenic and will poison a nearby lake if destroyed. Knowing the US forces invaded Canada to take its freshwater, Amber hijacks an American military jet and uses it to get aboard the main American airship. Amber reveals to the main American administrator that she is wearing a [[SuicideAttack suicide vest]] and is holding a [[DeadMansSwitch dead man trigger]]. Amber sees through the American administrator's attempts to dissuade her and sets off the bomb, causing the airship to crash into the mine.[[TheRevolutionWillNotBeCivilized Amber Roos]] was a 6-year-old girl when the US invaded Canada and destroyed her hometown of Ottawa, killing her parents in the process. With the help of various kind strangers, Amber was able to flee to the Northwest Territories and grew up to be a hunter who lived off the land. At 18, she joins up with a [[LaResistance Canadian rebel group]], the Two Fours, and [[SociopathicSoldier kills a US soldier]] to prove her loyalty. After Vic, the leader of the Two Fours is captured and tortured until she reveals the location of their base, American forces attack the giant mine the Two Fours were hold up in. Defeating the American forces, Amber discovers the mine contains arsenic and will poison a nearby lake if destroyed. Knowing the US forces invaded Canada to take its freshwater, Amber hijacks an American military jet and uses it to get aboard the main American airship. Amber reveals to the main American administrator that she is wearing a [[SuicideAttack suicide vest]] and is holding a [[DeadMansSwitch dead man trigger]]. Amber sees through the American administrator's attempts to dissuade her and sets off the bomb, causing the airship to crash into the mine.
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* CriticalResearchFailure: the usual one about the Canadians burning down the White House in the War of 1812 is mentioned and debunked. However, Qabanni's assertion that the United States took in a "token handful" of refugees as opposed to the "legions" of refugees Canada took in is incorrect--the United States takes in far more refugees than Canada does [[note]] For instance, between May 2015 and April 2016, the United States took in 150,875 refugees, while Canada took 17,578 [[http://globalnews.ca/news/2951263/these-14-countries-have-taken-more-refugees-than-canada/ source]] [[/note]]. It is possible this has changed in the 100 or so years in the future that the story is set.
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* MoralEventHorizon: The American administrator invoking [[spoiler: Vic's history of sexual abuse]] to break her after simulated torture failed. For what it's worth, she at least looked remorseful.
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* MoralEventHorizon: The American administrator invoking [[spoiler: Vic's history of sexual abuse]] to break her after simulated torture failed. For what it's worth, she at least looked remorseful.remorseful.
** And long before that, [[DayOfTheJackboot the United States conquering Canada and going hyper-fascist on the Canadians of captured territories]].
** And long before that, [[DayOfTheJackboot the United States conquering Canada and going hyper-fascist on the Canadians of captured territories]].
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* MoralEventHorizon: The American administrator invoking [[spoiler: Vic's history of sexual abuse]] to break her after simulated torture failed. For what it's worth, she at least looked remorseful.
