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* ArmorPiercingSlap: [[spoiler: Baatar to Gantxu.]]
* LargeHam: Amari. And how.
* LargeHam: Amari. And how.
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* LargeHam: Amari. And how.
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It’s now the early 600’s. [[FantasticRacism Racial tensions]] formed in the early days of cultural assimilation have not abated. [[TheProtagonist Eliano]] [[BigBrotherInstinct Davrey]], a fourteen year old [[RaisedAsTheOppositeGender Sworn Maiden]] from a respectable family, is considering joining a training phalanx. Unexpectedly, the Goddess Amari, who normally hibernates for years at a time, arrives in Saltrust. That night a close friend of Eli brings him news that there’s been a riot in the smith’s quarter, and that his father and uncle have been gravely injured…
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It’s now the early 600’s. [[FantasticRacism Racial tensions]] formed in the early days of cultural assimilation have not abated. [[TheProtagonist Eliano]] [[BigBrotherInstinct Davrey]], a fourteen year old [[RaisedAsTheOppositeGender Sworn Maiden]] Maiden from a respectable family, is considering joining a training phalanx. Unexpectedly, the Goddess Amari, who normally hibernates for years at a time, arrives in Saltrust. That night a close friend of Eli brings him news that there’s been a riot in the smith’s quarter, and that his father and uncle have been gravely injured…
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* RaisedAsTheOppositeGender: Eliano is a sworn maiden, biologically female but legally male. Enoran culture allows girls to formally assume male gender to serve as their father's heirs. However this option comes at such a high price (a lifetime vow of chastity, herbs to suppress puberty and compulsory military service) that it's not a course to be taken lightly. Other than this Enoran gender roles are so rigid {{tomboy}} isn't even an option.
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* FanNickname: [[spoiler: the fandom uses "Sranark" to refer to instances where Srana's mysterious possessor seems to come to the surface.]]
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It’s now the early 600’s. [[FantasticRacism Racial tensions]] formed in the early days of cultural assimilation have not abated. [[TheProtagonist Eliano]] [[BigBrotherInstinct Davrey]], a fourteen year old [[RaisedAsTheOppositeGender Sworn]] [[{{Transgender}} Maiden]] from a respectable family, is considering joining a training phalanx. Unexpectedly, the Goddess Amari, who normally hibernates for years at a time, arrives in Saltrust. That night a close friend of Eli brings him news that there’s been a riot in the smith’s quarter, and that his father and uncle have been gravely injured…
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It’s now the early 600’s. [[FantasticRacism Racial tensions]] formed in the early days of cultural assimilation have not abated. [[TheProtagonist Eliano]] [[BigBrotherInstinct Davrey]], a fourteen year old [[RaisedAsTheOppositeGender Sworn]] [[{{Transgender}} Sworn Maiden]] from a respectable family, is considering joining a training phalanx. Unexpectedly, the Goddess Amari, who normally hibernates for years at a time, arrives in Saltrust. That night a close friend of Eli brings him news that there’s been a riot in the smith’s quarter, and that his father and uncle have been gravely injured…
* RaisedAsTheOppositeGender: Eliano is a sworn maiden, biologically female but legally male. Enoran culture allows girls to formally assume male gender to serve as their father's heirs. However this option comes at such a high price (a lifetime vow of chastity, herbs to suppress puberty and compulsory military service) that it's not a course to be taken lightly. Other than this Enoran gender roles are so rigid {{tomboy}} isn't even an option.
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* {{Transgender}}: Eliano is a sworn maiden, biologically female but legally male. Enoran culture allows girls to formally assume male gender to serve as their father's heirs. However this option comes at such a high price (a lifetime vow of chastity, herbs to suppress puberty and compulsory military service) that it's not a course to be taken lightly. Other than this Enoran gender roles are so rigid {{tomboy}} isn't even an option.
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Long ago, when the world was divided, a [[GreatOffscreenWar war]] was waged in the names of [[TheOldGods gods]]. From that conflict, several nations of man were [[TheAlliance united]] by the [[BigGood Goddess Amari]]. From the blood of Enorans, one of the human races, the Goddess created the [[OurElvesAreBetter Elves]], the [[HornedHumanoid Kipira]], and the [[BirdPeople Lamiak]], and through their covenant with the [[BarrierMaiden Goddess]], the [[TheWallAroundTheWorld Saltblood Barrier]] was erected. It was an unsurpassable defense—no enemy could cross the threshold of Saltblood and live—and so the newly founded Anocura knew a peace that would last for generations.
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Long ago, when the world was divided, a [[GreatOffscreenWar war]] was waged in the names of [[TheOldGods gods]]. From that conflict, several nations of man were [[TheAlliance united]] by the [[BigGood Goddess Amari]]. From the blood of Enorans, one of the human races, the Goddess created the [[OurElvesAreBetter [[OurElvesAreDifferent Elves]], the [[HornedHumanoid Kipira]], and the [[BirdPeople Lamiak]], and through their covenant with the [[BarrierMaiden Goddess]], the [[TheWallAroundTheWorld Saltblood Barrier]] was erected. It was an unsurpassable defense—no enemy could cross the threshold of Saltblood and live—and so the newly founded Anocura knew a peace that would last for generations.
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* RedemptionQuest: The Trial of the Sun.
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* TroubleFromThePast: [[spoiler: Filumena’s alleged murderer.]]
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* WildWilderness: The wastes.
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* MeaningfulAppearance: Eli, Summas, and their eldest sister Minano have cat-like eyes, just like their father. They take after him in personality as well.
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* WindowsToTheSoul: Eli, Summas, and their eldest sister Minano have cat-like eyes, just like their father. They take after him in personality as well.
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* AnArmAndALeg: Anocuran people swear oaths on specific fingers. The punishment for breaking that oath is the loss of that finger. And that's just a start as they don't seem to believe in jails and most of their other punishments also involve drastic mutilation of one sort or another.
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* AnArmAndALeg: AnArmAndALeg:
** Anocuran people swear oaths on specific fingers. The punishment for breaking that oath is the loss of that finger. And that's just a start as they don't seem to believe in jails and most of their other punishments also involve drastic mutilation of one sort or another.
** Anocuran people swear oaths on specific fingers. The punishment for breaking that oath is the loss of that finger. And that's just a start as they don't seem to believe in jails and most of their other punishments also involve drastic mutilation of one sort or another.
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* HiddenDepths: Sure, Eli thinks he’s hot stuff, but underneath the tough exterior he’s a lot more insecure than he’d have you believe.
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* HiddenDepths: HiddenDepths:
** Sure, Eli thinks he’s hot stuff, but underneath the tough exterior he’s a lot more insecure than he’d have you believe.
** Sure, Eli thinks he’s hot stuff, but underneath the tough exterior he’s a lot more insecure than he’d have you believe.
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* HoistByTheirOwnPetard: Eliano, Relmin and Orsino commit perjury so Eliano can represent his father in court, and then can't back down because admitting what they've done will ruin the whole family.
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* HoistByTheirOwnPetard: HoistByTheirOwnPetard:
** Eliano, Relmin and Orsino commit perjury so Eliano can represent his father in court, and then can't back down because admitting what they've done will ruin the whole family.
** Eliano, Relmin and Orsino commit perjury so Eliano can represent his father in court, and then can't back down because admitting what they've done will ruin the whole family.
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* NotHelpingYourCase: Khesar’s [[spoiler: brother Gantxu at the hearing.]]
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* NotHelpingYourCase: NotHelpingYourCase:
** Khesar’s [[spoiler: brother Gantxu at the hearing.]]
** Khesar’s [[spoiler: brother Gantxu at the hearing.]]
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* RedHeadedStepChild: Khesar accuses his brothers of trying to discard him and appears used to a certain level of abuse.
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* RedHeadedStepChild: RedHeadedStepChild:
** Khesar accuses his brothers of trying to discard him and appears used to a certain level of abuse.
** Khesar accuses his brothers of trying to discard him and appears used to a certain level of abuse.
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* DudeLooksLikeALady: Other characters are constantly addressing Eliano as "girl" despite his male clothing. Even his uncle and father forget a time or two. His father even greets him with his former female name "Eleta" at one point.
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* DudeLooksLikeALady: Other characters are constantly addressing Eliano as "girl" despite his male clothing. Even his uncle and father forget a time or two. His father even greets him with his former female name "Eleta" at one point. Justified as Eli's legally male status does not actually change his appearance.
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* ExactWords: an unintentional version. Amari and the feral god both address Srana implying some transgression on her part.[[spoiler: when they're actually speaking to her poasessor, and the transgression is the possession of Srana herself.]]
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* ExactWords: an unintentional version. Amari and the feral god both address Srana implying some transgression on her part.[[spoiler: when they're actually speaking to her poasessor, possessor, and the transgression is the possession of Srana herself.]]
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* EveryoneHasStandards: the sect leaders are horrified to discover the trial substitutes are both children [[spoiler: and by what they must do to poor Srana.]]
* ExactWords: an unintentional version. Amari and the feral god both address Srana implying some transgression on her part.[[spoiler: when they're actually speaking to her poasessor, and the transgression is the possession of Srana herself.]]
* FanNickname: [[spoiler: the fandom uses "Sranark" to refer to instances where Srana's mysterious possessor seems to come to the surface.]]
* ExactWords: an unintentional version. Amari and the feral god both address Srana implying some transgression on her part.[[spoiler: when they're actually speaking to her poasessor, and the transgression is the possession of Srana herself.]]
* FanNickname: [[spoiler: the fandom uses "Sranark" to refer to instances where Srana's mysterious possessor seems to come to the surface.]]
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* TheFundamentalist: Eliano is extremely devout, for all the good it does him. It often appears that his faith is misplaced.
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* TheFundamentalist: Eliano is extremely devout, for all the good it does him. It often appears that his faith is misplaced. It certainly makes it easier for Srana to manipulate him.
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* TheQuest: The trial takes this form
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* TheQuest: The trial takes this formform, though the object is simply to survive the journey
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* ReallySeventeenYearsOld: [[spoiler: Eli never would’ve been able to represent his father in the Trial if Relmin hadn’t helped him fake his age documentation.]]
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* ReallySeventeenYearsOld: [[spoiler: Eli never would’ve been able to represent his father in the Trial if Relmin hadn’t helped him fake his age documentation.]]]] Though in this case it's really fourteen pretending to be be seventeen (the age of majority in Anocura.)
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* AbnormalLimbRotationRange: The Kipiru (tree people) look like humans with their heads and arms on backwards
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* BrokenBird: Relmin. She forged the papers that got her little brother into the trial, revealing the truth would render her untouchable and destroy her entire family, and she's so convinced he's going to die she can't even put on a brave face for him before he leaves.
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* AnArmAndALeg: Anocuran people swear oaths on specific fingers. The punishment for breaking that oath is the loss of that finger. And that's just a start as they don't seem to believe in jails most of their other punishments also involve drastic mutilation of one sort or another.
** [[spoiler: One Elven sect leader implies they actually cut off Srana's "appendeges" after they discovered her fingers wouldn't stay broken, only to have them heal nearly instantaneously.]]
** [[spoiler: One Elven sect leader implies they actually cut off Srana's "appendeges" after they discovered her fingers wouldn't stay broken, only to have them heal nearly instantaneously.]]
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* AnArmAndALeg: Anocuran people swear oaths on specific fingers. The punishment for breaking that oath is the loss of that finger. And that's just a start as they don't seem to believe in jails and most of their other punishments also involve drastic mutilation of one sort or another.
** [[spoiler: One Elven sect leader implies they actually cut off Srana's"appendeges" "appendages" after they discovered her fingers wouldn't stay broken, only to have them heal nearly instantaneously.grow back immediately.]]
** [[spoiler: One Elven sect leader implies they actually cut off Srana's
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* BreakTheHaughty: Look’s like Eli’s headed this way.
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* BreakTheHaughty: Look’s like Eli’s headed this way. He's had several near-breaking moments already.
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* ClearTheirName: On the surface, the Trial of the Sun is supposed to retroactively “prove” that the winner (or the person they represent) is innocent. [[spoiler: In reality it was never more than capital punishment in all but name, and the Goddess put a stop to it until she felt it necessary to make a spectacular example of some troublemakers who dared to disturb her peace.]]
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* ClearTheirName: On the surface, the Trial of the Sun is supposed to retroactively “prove” that the winner (or the person they represent) is innocent. [[spoiler: In reality it was never more than capital punishment in all but name, and the Goddess put a stop to it until she felt it necessary to make a spectacular example of some troublemakers who dared to disturb her peace.peace when she was in town.]]
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* AFateWorseThanDeath: Relmin completely loses it when the judges announce the nature of the trial, because she's studied the history and believes death would be kinder. [[spoiler: there's only ever been one survivor and it took him 14 years to make it back disfigured and insane.]]
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* AFateWorseThanDeath: Relmin completely loses it when the judges announce the nature of the trial, because she's studied the history and believes death would be kinder. [[spoiler: there's only ever been one survivor and it took him 14 years to make it back complete the journey disfigured and insane.]]
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** The last time the Trial of the Sun was used was when the goddess Amari found out the sects were using it as backdoor capital punishment and sentenced all eight sect leaders to undergo the trial themselves -- a event that went down in history as the "Abundant Feast."
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** The last time the Trial of the Sun was used was back in year 260 when the goddess Amari found out the sects were using it the trial as a form of backdoor capital punishment during her hibernation and sentenced ordered all eight sect leaders to undergo the trial themselves -- a event that went down in history as the "Abundant Feast." Feast" as they were all eaten as soon as they crossed the barrier.
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* IronicEcho: Eli replies "Is that a trick question?" to Srana's clueless question about his military training, only to have Srana reply "Is this a trick question" in turn to Eli's clueless question about her mother.
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* IronicEcho: Eli replies "Is that a trick question?" to Srana's clueless question about his military training, training only to have Srana reply "Is this a trick question" in turn it right back at him in response to Eli's clueless question about her mother.
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* KidsAreCruel: A pair of Enoran children throw rocks at a mid-flight Japer. Even a little bruising can kill a bird if you aren’t careful.
* LIsForDyslexia: Eli probably has some form of Dyslexia.
* LIsForDyslexia: Eli probably has some form of Dyslexia.
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* KidsAreCruel: A pair of Enoran children throw sling rocks at a mid-flight Japer. Even a little bruising can kill a bird if you aren’t careful.
* LIsForDyslexia: Eliprobably has some form of Dyslexia.Dyslexia. It probably influenced his choice to take maiden's vows since arts and letters appear to be primarily if not exclusively female roles in Enoran society.
* LIsForDyslexia: Eli
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* RaceNameBasis: Eliano constantly refers to Khesar as "the Deotian". Enoran culture seems to be on a race name basis in general.
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* RaceNameBasis: Eliano constantly refers to Khesar as "the Deotian"."Deotian". Enoran culture seems to be on a race name basis in general.
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* SureLetsGoWithThat: Srana doesn't actually lie to Eli so much as play to his preconceived notions.
* TheTheocracy: A very strict theocracy with a fully revealed religion and an in-your-face goddess who makes damn sure you know who is in charge.
* TheTheocracy: A very strict theocracy with a fully revealed religion and an in-your-face goddess who makes damn sure you know who is in charge.
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* SureLetsGoWithThat: Srana doesn't actually lie to Eli so much as play to his preconceived notions.notions while allowing him to jump to convenient conclusions.
* TheTheocracy: A very strict theocracy with a fully revealed religion and an in-your-face goddess who makes damn sure you knowwho is she's in charge.
* TheTheocracy: A very strict theocracy with a fully revealed religion and an in-your-face goddess who makes damn sure you know
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* AnArmAndALeg: Anocuran people swear oaths on specific fingers. The punishment for breaking that oath is the loss of that finger. And that's just a start. Most of their punishments seem to involve mutilation of some sort.
** [[spoiler: One Elven sect leader implies they cut off Srana's hands after they discovered her fingers wouldn't stay broken.]]
** [[spoiler: One Elven sect leader implies they cut off Srana's hands after they discovered her fingers wouldn't stay broken.]]
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* AnArmAndALeg: Anocuran people swear oaths on specific fingers. The punishment for breaking that oath is the loss of that finger. And that's just a start. Most start as they don't seem to believe in jails most of their other punishments seem to also involve drastic mutilation of some sort.
one sort or another.
** [[spoiler: One Elven sect leader implies they actually cut off Srana'shands "appendeges" after they discovered her fingers wouldn't stay broken.broken, only to have them heal nearly instantaneously.]]
** [[spoiler: One Elven sect leader implies they actually cut off Srana's
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* ComicallyIneptHealing: Srana. she gets the job done--without pain suppression--but there's a risk of future infection.
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* ComicallyIneptHealing: Srana. she gets the job done--without pain suppression--but there's a serious risk of future infection.
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* CrouchingMoronHiddenBadass[=/=]PingPongNaivete: Srana reveals disturbing flashes of cunning competence to Khesar while acting as TheLoad in front of Eliano.
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* CrouchingMoronHiddenBadass[=/=]PingPongNaivete: Srana reveals disturbing flashes of cunning and competence to Khesar while acting as TheLoad in front of Eliano.
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* DadTheVeteran: Eli’s father and uncle, Rennin and Caliosis, both served in the military.
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* DadTheVeteran: Eli’s father Caliosis and uncle, uncle Rennin and Caliosis, both served in the military.
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* EnemyMine: The core of the trial: two boys from diametrically opposed ethnic factions must work together for survival's sake.
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* EnemyMine: The core of Eli starts out viewing the trial: two boys from diametrically opposed ethnic factions must work trial as a straightforward trial by combat, but Srana sort-of convinces him the goddess' real purpose is them working together for survival's sake. mutual survival. The likely truth is much uglier and a lot more cynical: [[spoiler: Amari just wanted to make a spectacular example out of them and Srana just wants to survive, whatever it takes.]]
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* FromNobodyToNightmare: [[spoiler: Srana may not have become a nightmare, but she unleashed one. Later comics confirm it's possessing her.]]
* TheFundamentalist: Eliano is extremely devout, for all the good it does him.
* TheFundamentalist: Eliano is extremely devout, for all the good it does him.
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* FromNobodyToNightmare: [[spoiler: Srana may not have become a nightmare, but she unleashed one. Later comics confirm imply it's possessing her.]]
* TheFundamentalist: Eliano is extremely devout, for all the good it does him. It often appears that his faith is misplaced.
* TheFundamentalist: Eliano is extremely devout, for all the good it does him. It often appears that his faith is misplaced.
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* IntergenerationalFriendship: An interesting example. At 14 years, Eli may be older than the Lamiak Japer, but Japer’s well into adulthood by his own species’ standards and already has children,
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* IntergenerationalFriendship: An interesting example. At 14 years, Eli may be older than the Lamiak Japer, but Japer’s well into adulthood by his own species’ standards and already has children,children.
* IronicEcho: Eli replies "Is that a trick question?" to Srana's clueless question about his military training, only to have Srana reply "Is this a trick question" in turn to Eli's clueless question about her mother.
* IronicEcho: Eli replies "Is that a trick question?" to Srana's clueless question about his military training, only to have Srana reply "Is this a trick question" in turn to Eli's clueless question about her mother.
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* PronounTrouble:
**Lots of people use the wrong pronouns for Eli. Even his own uncle once.
**The Elves cannot settle on singular, plural, male or female pronouns for [[spoiler: Srana post-possesion]] and finally just go with "it".
**Lots of people use the wrong pronouns for Eli. Even his own uncle once.
**The Elves cannot settle on singular, plural, male or female pronouns for [[spoiler: Srana post-possesion]] and finally just go with "it".
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* SetRightWhatOnceWentWrong: The trial is ostensibly to break the bloody cycle of vengeance that's developing between Eli's and Khesar's families. [[spoiler: while it's actually intended to get rid of Srana or whatever may be possessing her while fixing whatever Srana did to make the healing magic stop working.]]
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* SetRightWhatOnceWentWrong: The trial is ostensibly to break the bloody cycle of vengeance that's developing between Eli's and Khesar's families. [[spoiler: while it's actually intended to get getting rid of Srana or and whatever may appears to be possessing her while appears to be a coincidence, as does fixing whatever Srana did to make the healing magic stop working.]]
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* TheStoic: Khesar is able to bear the breaking of all of the fingers on his right hand without changing expression. Turns out there's a reason for this.
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* TheStoic: Khesar is able to bear the breaking of all of the fingers on his right left hand without changing expression. Turns out there's a reason for this.
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* TellMeAboutMyFather: Concerning Filumena’s death. Ironically Eli already knows and Sumasen is too young to understand.
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* TellMeAboutMyFather: Concerning Filumena’s death. Ironically Turns out Eli already knows and Sumasen Summas is too young to understand.
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* {{Transgender}}: Eliano is a sworn maiden, biologically female but legally male. Enoran culture allows girls to formally assume male gender to serve as their father's heirs. However this option comes at such a high price (a lifetime vow of chastity, herbs to suppress puberty and compulsory military service) that it's not a course to be taken lightly.
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* {{Transgender}}: Eliano is a sworn maiden, biologically female but legally male. Enoran culture allows girls to formally assume male gender to serve as their father's heirs. However this option comes at such a high price (a lifetime vow of chastity, herbs to suppress puberty and compulsory military service) that it's not a course to be taken lightly. Other than this Enoran gender roles are so rigid {{tomboy}} isn't even an option.
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* WindowsToTheSoul: Eli, Summas, and their sister Minano have cat-like eyes, just like their father. They take after him in personality as well.
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* WindowsToTheSoul: Eli, Summas, and their eldest sister Minano have cat-like eyes, just like their father. They take after him in personality as well.
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* AFateWorseThanDeath: Relmin completely loses it when the judges announce the nature of the trial, because she's studied the history and believes death would be kinder.
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* AFateWorseThanDeath: Relmin completely loses it when the judges announce the nature of the trial, because she's studied the history and believes death would be kinder. [[spoiler: there's only ever been one survivor and it took him 14 years to make it back disfigured and insane.]]
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* IntergenerationalFriendship: An interesting example. At 14 years, Eli may be older than the Lamiak Japer, but Japer’s well into adulthood by his own species’ standards and already has children by the leaders of the Sect of Light to distance themselves from what they feel they must do.
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* IntergenerationalFriendship: An interesting example. At 14 years, Eli may be older than the Lamiak Japer, but Japer’s well into adulthood by his own species’ standards and already has children children,
* ItIsDehumanizing: Deliberately employed by the leaders of the Sect of Light to distance themselves from what they feel they mustdo.do [[spoiler:to poor Srana]].
* ItIsDehumanizing: Deliberately employed by the leaders of the Sect of Light to distance themselves from what they feel they must
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* AnArmAndALeg: Anocuran people swear oaths on their fingers. If you break the oath they amputate that finger
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* AnArmAndALeg: Anocuran people swear oaths on their specific fingers. If you break the The punishment for breaking that oath they amputate is the loss of that fingerfinger. And that's just a start. Most of their punishments seem to involve mutilation of some sort.
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* ClearTheirName: On the surface, the Trial of the Sun is this. The substitute who wins retroactively “proves” that the person they represent is innocent. [[spoiler: underneath it's a trial of faith on which the whole community may be judged.]]
* ComicallyIneptHealing: Srana. she gets the job done -- without pain suppression--but there's a risk of future infection.
* ComicallyIneptHealing: Srana. she gets the job done -- without pain suppression--but there's a risk of future infection.
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* ClearTheirName: On the surface, the Trial of the Sun is this. The substitute who wins supposed to retroactively “proves” “prove” that the winner (or the person they represent represent) is innocent. [[spoiler: underneath it's a trial of faith on which In reality it was never more than capital punishment in all but name, and the whole community may be judged.Goddess put a stop to it until she felt it necessary to make a spectacular example of some troublemakers who dared to disturb her peace.]]
* ComicallyIneptHealing: Srana. she gets the jobdone -- without done--without pain suppression--but there's a risk of future infection.
* ComicallyIneptHealing: Srana. she gets the job
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* HoistByTheirOwnPetard: Eliano, Relmin and Orsino commit perjury so Eliano can represent his father at the
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* HoistByTheirOwnPetard: Eliano, Relmin and Orsino commit perjury so Eliano can represent his father at in court, and then can't back down because admitting what they've done will ruin the whole family.
** The last time the Trial of the Sun was used was when the goddess Amari found out the sects were using it as backdoor capital punishment and sentenced all eight sect leaders to undergo the trial themselves -- a event that went down in history as the "Abundant Feast."
** The last time the Trial of the Sun was used was when the goddess Amari found out the sects were using it as backdoor capital punishment and sentenced all eight sect leaders to undergo the trial themselves -- a event that went down in history as the "Abundant Feast."
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* MissionFromGod: A literal mission ordered by an in-your-face goddess.
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* MissionFromGod: A literal mission ordered by an in-your-face goddess.actual goddess. [[spoiler: subverted as the Goddess' words and actions imply she's actually just sending them out to die in a very spectacular fashion to serve as a warning to others. That doesn't stop Srana from playing on Eliano's belief in validity of the trial to manipulate him.]]
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* TheTheocracy: A very strict theocracy with a fully revealed religion and a corporeal goddess who makes damn sure you know who is in charge.
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* TheTheocracy: A very strict theocracy with a fully revealed religion and a corporeal an in-your-face goddess who makes damn sure you know who is in charge.
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* WrongGenreSavvy: Eli has some shades of this. As Relmin put it, “real life is ''never'' like poetry.” [[spoiler: and once the trial begins his blind faith in the Goddess blinds him to some obvious inconsistencies.]]
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* WrongGenreSavvy: Eli has some shades of this. As Relmin put it, “real life is ''never'' like poetry.” [[spoiler: and once the trial begins his blind faith in the Goddess blinds him to some obvious inconsistencies.inconsistencies and allows Srana to lead him around by the nose.]]
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* HoistByTheirOwnPetard: Eliano, Relmin and Orsino commit perjury so Eliano can represent his father at the