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** ''Brainbent'''s Bro Strider is an [[ParentalAbuse abusive]], [[ParentalNeglect neglectful]] caregiver, mostly leaving Dave to fend for himself in an apartment full of weapons and sexual puppets but no food. This and the psychological trauma it causes Dave turn out to be almost entirely accurate. In early ''Homestuck'' acts things like the Striders' fridge being [[http://www.mspaintadventures.com/?s=6&p=002495 full of swords]] are played for laughs; much later, Dave [[http://mspaintadventures.com/?s=6&p=009649 admits]] that he had to learn from movies that fridges are supposed to be used for food, and outright says that he's convinced that Bro must have absolutely hated him and viewed raising a child as a fucked-up game.
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** ''Brainbent'''s Bro Strider is an [[ParentalAbuse abusive]], {{abusive|dad}}, [[ParentalNeglect neglectful]] caregiver, mostly leaving Dave to fend for himself in an apartment full of weapons and sexual puppets but no food. This and the psychological trauma it causes Dave turn out to be almost entirely accurate. In early ''Homestuck'' acts things like the Striders' fridge being [[http://www.mspaintadventures.com/?s=6&p=002495 full of swords]] are played for laughs; much later, Dave [[http://mspaintadventures.com/?s=6&p=009649 admits]] that he had to learn from movies that fridges are supposed to be used for food, and outright says that he's convinced that Bro must have absolutely hated him and viewed raising a child as a fucked-up game.
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** ''Brainbent'''s Bro Strider is an [[ParentalAbuse abusive]], [[ParentalNeglect neglectful]] caregiver, mostly leaving Dave to fend for himself in an apartment full of weapons and sexual puppets but no food. This and the psychological trauma it causes Dave turn out to be almost entirely accurate. In early ''Homestuck'' acts things like the Striders' fridge being [[http://www.mspaintadventures.com/?s=6&p=002495 full of swords]] are played for laughs; much later, Dave [[http://mspaintadventures.com/?s=6&p=009649 admits]] that he had to learn from movies that fridges are supposed to be used for food.
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** ''Brainbent'''s Bro Strider is an [[ParentalAbuse abusive]], [[ParentalNeglect neglectful]] caregiver, mostly leaving Dave to fend for himself in an apartment full of weapons and sexual puppets but no food. This and the psychological trauma it causes Dave turn out to be almost entirely accurate. In early ''Homestuck'' acts things like the Striders' fridge being [[http://www.mspaintadventures.com/?s=6&p=002495 full of swords]] are played for laughs; much later, Dave [[http://mspaintadventures.com/?s=6&p=009649 admits]] that he had to learn from movies that fridges are supposed to be used for food.food, and outright says that he's convinced that Bro must have absolutely hated him and viewed raising a child as a fucked-up game.
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** This fic's version of Rose being an alcoholic actually predates the ''Homestuck'' canon version of Rose developing an alcohol problem by at least a year. When asked about it the authors suspect that they picked up on parts of her personality in canon that would predispose her to addiction.
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** This fic's version of Rose being an alcoholic actually predates the ''Homestuck'' canon version of Rose developing an alcohol problem by at least a year. When asked about it the authors said that they suspect that they picked up on parts of her personality in canon that would predispose her to addiction.
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* BaseBreaker: Vriska is not much less controversial in this ''Brainbent'' than she is in ''Homestuck'' proper, and since it's a fanfic, people who don't like her portrayal can complain that she's being written wrong. VastDerp has complained about the resulting deluge of fan opinions in his inbox.
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* BaseBreaker: She's Vriska is not a lot much less controversial in this ''Brainbent'' than she is in ''Homestuck'' proper, and since it's a fanfic, people who don't like her portrayal can complain that she's being written wrong. VastDerp has complained about the resulting deluge of fan opinions in his inbox.
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** This fic's version of Rose being an alcoholic actually predates the ''Homestuck'' canon version of Rose developing an alcohol problem by at least a year. When asked about it the authors suspect that they picked up on parts of her personality in canon that would predispose her toaddiction.addiction.
** ''Brainbent'''s Bro Strider is an [[ParentalAbuse abusive]], [[ParentalNeglect neglectful]] caregiver, mostly leaving Dave to fend for himself in an apartment full of weapons and sexual puppets but no food. This and the psychological trauma it causes Dave turn out to be almost entirely accurate. In early ''Homestuck'' acts things like the Striders' fridge being [[http://www.mspaintadventures.com/?s=6&p=002495 full of swords]] are played for laughs; much later, Dave [[http://mspaintadventures.com/?s=6&p=009649 admits]] that he had to learn from movies that fridges are supposed to be used for food.
* BaseBreaker: She's not a lot less controversial in this ''Brainbent'' than she is in ''Homestuck'' proper, and since it's a fanfic, people who don't like her portrayal can complain that she's being written wrong. VastDerp has complained about the resulting deluge of fan opinions in his inbox.
** This fic's version of Rose being an alcoholic actually predates the ''Homestuck'' canon version of Rose developing an alcohol problem by at least a year. When asked about it the authors suspect that they picked up on parts of her personality in canon that would predispose her to
** ''Brainbent'''s Bro Strider is an [[ParentalAbuse abusive]], [[ParentalNeglect neglectful]] caregiver, mostly leaving Dave to fend for himself in an apartment full of weapons and sexual puppets but no food. This and the psychological trauma it causes Dave turn out to be almost entirely accurate. In early ''Homestuck'' acts things like the Striders' fridge being [[http://www.mspaintadventures.com/?s=6&p=002495 full of swords]] are played for laughs; much later, Dave [[http://mspaintadventures.com/?s=6&p=009649 admits]] that he had to learn from movies that fridges are supposed to be used for food.
* BaseBreaker: She's not a lot less controversial in this ''Brainbent'' than she is in ''Homestuck'' proper, and since it's a fanfic, people who don't like her portrayal can complain that she's being written wrong. VastDerp has complained about the resulting deluge of fan opinions in his inbox.
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* AccidentallyAccurate: This fic's version of Rose being an alcoholic actually predates the ''Homestuck'' canon version of Rose developing an alcohol problem by at least a year. When asked about it the authors suspect that they picked up on parts of her personality in canon that would predispose her to addiction.
* AscendedFanon: The authors sometimes adopt fan submissions into the main canon of the story; mostly psychological pieces that don't conflict with existing background; but there is still a good chunk of canon written by Brainbent's fans.
* FandomNod: The appearance of a NoCelebritiesWereHarmed alternate universe Creator/DanteBasco ([[CompositeCharacter with elements of Rufioh Nitram]]) as Tavros's boyfriend.
* AscendedFanon: The authors sometimes adopt fan submissions into the main canon of the story; mostly psychological pieces that don't conflict with existing background; but there is still a good chunk of canon written by Brainbent's fans.
* FandomNod: The appearance of a NoCelebritiesWereHarmed alternate universe Creator/DanteBasco ([[CompositeCharacter with elements of Rufioh Nitram]]) as Tavros's boyfriend.
