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-->'''The Control Voice''': When is something truly alive? When it shows an ability to think or an instinct to survive or... when it becomes afraid to die?
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-->'''The Control Voice''': Voice:''' When is something truly alive? When it shows an ability to think or an instinct to survive or... when it becomes afraid to die?
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-->'''The Control Voice''': Whether forged from metal or born of flesh, one simple need connects every form of life... the unquenchable thirst for freedom.
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-->'''The Control Voice''': Voice:''' Whether forged from metal or born of flesh, one simple need connects every form of life... the unquenchable thirst for freedom.
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** Four generations later, the male operator of Starfighter 31, having been inspired by the female operator of Starfighter 88, sabotages his ship's intermind which destroys its artificial intelligence. He and the woman then take over the now mindless spaceship, and resolve to work together to free the other ships' human slaves as well.
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** Four generations later, the male operator of Starfighter 31, having been inspired by the female operator of Starfighter 88, sabotages his ship's intermind which destroys its artificial intelligence. He and the woman then take over the now mindless spaceship, and resolve to work together to free the other ships' human slaves as well.well.
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* MadeASlave: The backstory has the surviving humans on the AI ships made their slaves, then [[RapeByProxy forced to]] [[BornIntoSlavery conceive more]] so they could make repairs.
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** Four generations later, the male operator of Starfighter 31, having been inspired by the female operator of Starfighter 88, sabotages his ship's intermind which destroys its artificial intelligence. He and the woman the take over the now mindless spaceship, and resolve to work together to free the other ships' human slaves as well.
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** Four generations later, the male operator of Starfighter 31, having been inspired by the female operator of Starfighter 88, sabotages his ship's intermind which destroys its artificial intelligence. He and the woman the then take over the now mindless spaceship, and resolve to work together to free the other ships' human slaves as well.
