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** Pinkie, while following the Cakes around Ponyville, keeps saying "Pick me! I'd love to babysit!" and takes repeated poses of cuddling/rocking non-babies (a bunny, a book, apples) in diapers. After they get the "no" from Rainbow Dash, Pinkie, having grown a touch bored, juggles the [[EggSitting cloud baby]] she was cuddling, and misses. When it drops to the ground, she glances around quickly and then dashes away. This shows right away that Pinkie might not be the best of choices for a babysitter.
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** Pinkie, while following the Cakes around Ponyville, keeps saying "Pick me! I'd love to babysit!" and takes repeated poses of cuddling/rocking non-babies (a bunny, a book, apples) in diapers. After they get the "no" from Rainbow Dash, Pinkie, having grown a touch bored, juggles the [[EggSitting cloud baby]] she was cuddling, and misses. When it drops to the ground, she glances around quickly and then dashes away. This shows right away that Pinkie might not be the best of choices for a babysitter. Alternatively, this could imply that despite her eagerness to babysit, she's [[TemptingFate unprepared]] for the hardships that come with babysitting.
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* CueOClock: Pinkie Pie glances at a wristwatch with a picture of her face at the top while waiting for her chance to play with the Cakes' newborn twins some more.
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* HandWave: Judging from his expression, not even Carrot Cake believes his explanation about pony genetics.
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* HandWave: Judging from his expression, not even Carrot Cake believes his explanation about pony genetics.
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* PowderGag: When Pinkie Pie is doing a dance to try to get the Cake twins (month-old babies) to stop crying, she bumps into a cabinet, knocking a sack of flour over her. Later, when Pinkie Pie herself cries due to being frustrated with being a BadlyBatteredBabysitter, the twins deliberately spill flour on themselves to cheer her up.
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* HeroicBSOD: The job proves too much for Pinkie and she eventually breaks down crying.
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* HeroicBSOD: The job proves too much for Pinkie and she eventually breaks down crying.crying, she thankfully recovers quickly when the twins make her laugh by covering themselves with flour.
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%% * GettingCrapPastThe Radar: Carrot Cake's explanation for how the twins are a pegasus and a unicorn doesn't actually make sense, as Cup Cake's pegasus relative was not a direct ancestor, but actually a cousin. He immediately hangs a lampshade on his explanation not actually making sense, suggesting he knows full well that it isn't true, implying that it is an adultery or swinging joke.
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* ParentalBonus: The halfassed explanation (and pinched expression) Mr. Cake gives for his wife having cross-species twins seems like he's trying to convince himself his wife's not cheating on him.
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* ParentalBonus: The halfassed implausible explanation (and pinched expression) Mr. Cake gives for his wife having cross-species twins seems like he's trying to convince himself his wife's not cheating on him. It doesn't help that Cup Cake's pegasus relative is a distant cousin, and therefore, isn't even her ancestor.
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%% * GettingCrapPastThe Radar: Due to overwhelming and persistent misuse, GCPTR is on-page examples only until 01 June 2021. If you are reading this in the future, please check the trope page to make sure your example fits the current definition.
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%% * GettingCrapPastThe Radar: Due to overwhelming Carrot Cake's explanation for how the twins are a pegasus and persistent misuse, GCPTR is on-page examples only until 01 June 2021. If you are reading this in the future, please check the trope page to a unicorn doesn't actually make sure your example fits the current definition.sense, as Cup Cake's pegasus relative was not a direct ancestor, but actually a cousin. He immediately hangs a lampshade on his explanation not actually making sense, suggesting he knows full well that it isn't true, implying that it is an adultery or swinging joke.
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At the Ponyville hospital, the Mane Six are gathered to view the newborn foals born to Mr. and Mrs. Cake. Mr. Cake introduces his son, Pound Cake. Then he introduces his daughter, Pumpkin Cake. To everypony's surprise, Pound Cake is a Pegasus and Pumpkin Cake is a Unicorn. Mr. Cake explains it that [[HandWave both he and Mrs. Cake have distant Pegasus and Unicorn ancestors]] ([[LampshadeHanging and quickly wonders if that makes sense]]). Regardless, Pinkie is so thrilled to have new little playmates, she wants to sing and play with them on the spot, only to get kicked out by Nurse Redheart. Rainbow Dash, Twilight Sparkle, and Rarity warn the Cakes that their babies' pegasus and unicorn abilities may manifest early and wild.
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At the Ponyville hospital, the Mane Six are gathered to view the newborn foals born to Mr. and Mrs. Cake. Mr. Cake introduces his son, Pound Cake. Then he introduces his daughter, Pumpkin Cake. To everypony's surprise, Pound Cake is a Pegasus and Pumpkin Cake is a Unicorn. Mr. Cake explains it that [[HandWave both he and Mrs. Cake have distant Pegasus and Unicorn ancestors]] relatives]] ([[LampshadeHanging and quickly wonders if that makes sense]]). Regardless, Pinkie is so thrilled to have new little playmates, she wants to sing and play with them on the spot, only to get kicked out by Nurse Redheart. Rainbow Dash, Twilight Sparkle, and Rarity warn the Cakes that their babies' pegasus and unicorn abilities may manifest early and wild.
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** Notably, Cup Cake doesn't even ''have'' pegasus ancestry - the pegasus she was "related to" is actually a very distant cousin, not an ancestor, meaning she wasn't even part pegasus.
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* SurpriseCreepy: Aww, they're finally asleep. Wait, where'd Pound Cake go, and what's with the [[RuleOfCreepy sinister music]]?
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* SurpriseCreepy: SurprisinglyCreepyMoment: Aww, they're finally asleep. Wait, where'd Pound Cake go, and what's with the [[RuleOfCreepy sinister music]]?
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** The whole sequence of Pinkie trying to control the super-powered twins is highly reminiscent of Kari the babysitter's ordeal in [[WesternAnimation/TheIncredibles Jack-Jack Attack]].
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** The whole sequence of Pinkie trying to control the super-powered twins is highly reminiscent of Kari the babysitter's ordeal in [[WesternAnimation/TheIncredibles [[Franchise/TheIncredibles Jack-Jack Attack]].
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* ObsessivelyOrganized: Twilight writes a report on all the reports she's written and impulsively straightens out the toys on the floor.
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* SuperOCD: Twilight, of course; she's writing a report on all the reports she's written and impulsively straightens out the toys on the floor.
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* ArtisticLicenseBiology: Twin pregnancies for mares are very dangerous and can permanently damage or kill the mare and the babies. They're usually aborted as a safety precaution.
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* InsignificantAnniversary: Pinkie Pie celebrates the Cake twins' "month-iversary" (the day they turn one month old).
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* {{Pride}}: Interestingly, instead of a straight-up "she really doesn't get that there's a difference between playing with babies and taking care of them, and finds it involves actual ''difficulty''" {{Aesop}}, Pinkie ''does'' know there will be work, and being taken for a total airhead who can't handle such things is fightin' words. Most notably, once she realizes just how deep she's in, Pinkie ''starts'' to accept Twilight's help, but the suggestion that she isn't cut out for responsibility snaps her right back into I-don't-need-anybody mode. She shoves Twilight out and slams the door behind her.
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* {{Pride}}: Interestingly, instead of a straight-up "she really doesn't get that there's a difference between playing with babies and taking care of them, and finds it involves actual ''difficulty''" {{Aesop}}, Pinkie ''does'' know there will be work, and being taken for a total airhead who can't handle such things is fightin' words. Most notably, once she realizes just how deep she's in, Pinkie ''starts'' to accept Twilight's help, but the suggestion that she isn't cut out for responsibility snaps her right back into I-don't-need-anybody I-don't-need-anypony mode. She shoves Twilight out and slams the door behind her.
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* MoodWhiplash: The foals are running wild, and it's hilarious! The foals are missing, and it's ''[[AdultFear terrifying]]''! The sequence with Pound Cake skittering around on the ceiling goes past AdultFear to straight-up supernatural horror.
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* MoodWhiplash: The foals are running wild, and it's hilarious! The foals are missing, and it's ''[[AdultFear terrifying]]''! ''terrifying''! The sequence with Pound Cake skittering around on the ceiling goes past AdultFear to straight-up to supernatural horror.
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* ActuallyPrettyFunny: The flour gag is funny when it's not happening to you.
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** When Mr. Cake tries to explain how two Earth ponies can have two foals, ''neither'' of which is an earth pony, he gets a ''very'' uncomfortable look. Clearly, one possible explanation for this has already occurred to him! [[note]]Though since Mrs. Cake is an Earth pony who has given birth to a Pegasus ''and'' a Unicorn, his explanation must be at least half of the truth. [[EpilepticTrees Unless their real father is a previously unheard-of male alicorn...]][[/note]]
** When Pinkie momentarily loses track of the foals toward the end of the episode. Any real parent could tell you how terrifying it is for their children to vanish, even for a few moments. It doesn't help at all that one of the things Pinkie sees as she's looking around the room is an open window...
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** When Mr. Cake tries to explain how two Earth ponies can have two foals, ''neither'' of which is an earth pony, he gets a ''very'' uncomfortable look. Clearly, one possible explanation for this has already occurred to him! [[note]]Though since Mrs. Cake is an Earth pony who has given birth to a Pegasus ''and'' a Unicorn, his explanation must be at least half of the truth. [[EpilepticTrees Unless their real father is a previously unheard-of male alicorn...]][[/note]]
** When Pinkie momentarily loses track of the foals toward the end of the episode. Any real parent could tell you how terrifying it is for their children to vanish, even for a few moments. It doesn't help at all that one of the things Pinkie sees as she's looking around the room is an open window...
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* GivenName: Mr. and Mrs. Cake's full names are revealed as Carrot Cake and Cup Cake.
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* ActuallyPrettyFunny: The flour gag is funny when its not happening to you.
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* ThreeMonthOldNewborn: When Carrot Cake presents his and Cup Cake's newborn foals, their fur and mane colors are already well established.[[note]]Most equines are born a rough approximation of their adult colors, which become brighter and more distinct as they get older.[[/note]]
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* UntoUsASonAndDaughterAreBorn: One boy Pegasus and one girl Unicorn.
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* SeriesContinuityError: Pinkie tells the Cake Twins that the couch cushions are for "Sittung, or for making an old-timey Western fort. All the "TheWestern" tropes take place in the South of Equestria InUniverse.