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* '''Subverted''': Alice thought Lucy knew kung fu, but when an enemy appears Lucy cowers in terror.
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* '''Subverted''': '''Subverted''':
** Alice thought Lucy knew kung fu, but when an enemy appears Lucy cowers in terror.
** Alice thought Lucy knew kung fu, but when an enemy appears Lucy cowers in terror.
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* '''Double Subverted''': It turns out Lucy was just pretending and pounced when the enemy their turned their back.
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* '''Double Subverted''': Subverted''':
** It turns out Lucy was just pretending and pounced when the enemy their turned their back.
** It turns out Lucy was just pretending and pounced when the enemy their turned their back.
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* '''Exploited''': ???Lucy makes some extra money on the side teaching martial arts at a local dojo.
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* '''Implied''': The broom closets in Alice's house contain [[KatanasAreJustBetter katanas]] for some reason.
* '''Played For Laughs''': Lucy treats fighting {{Mooks}} as just another casual cleaning task, and by the time she's done fighting, you'd swear nothing happened.
* '''Played For Drama''': Lucy's last employer died on her watch, making her feel very guilty, so she trained herself in combat so this won't happen again.
* '''Played For Laughs''': Lucy treats fighting {{Mooks}} as just another casual cleaning task, and by the time she's done fighting, you'd swear nothing happened.
* '''Played For Drama''': Lucy's last employer died on her watch, making her feel very guilty, so she trained herself in combat so this won't happen again.
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** Lucy's skills include ImprobableWeaponUser and thereby makes everything in arm's reach a poetentially weapon. Additionally, her broom is also a SwordCane.
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** Lucy's skills include ImprobableWeaponUser and thereby makes everything in arm's reach a poetentially potential weapon. Additionally, her broom is also a SwordCane.SwordCane.
** Lucy's employer allows her to carry weapons as she is assigned the roles of both a guard and a maid.
** Lucy's employer allows her to carry weapons as she is assigned the roles of both a guard and a maid.
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* '''Enforced''': The writers want to give a lower-class character a CrowningMomentOfAwesome to prove they're not elitist, so they let Lucy fight off the enemies.
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* '''Enforced''': The writers want to give a lower-class character a CrowningMomentOfAwesome achievement to prove they're not elitist, so they let Lucy fight off the enemies.
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** Lucy is a Ninja first and a maid somewhere third- The only reason she's wearing [[FrenchMaid the maid outfit]] is[[HumiliatingWager because she lost a bet with Alice,]]
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** Lucy is a Ninja ninja first and a maid somewhere third- The only reason she's wearing [[FrenchMaid the maid outfit]] is[[HumiliatingWager is [[HumiliatingWager because she lost a bet with Alice,]]
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** Lucy Looses another bet with alice, and becomes her WagerSlave permanently.
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** Lucy Looses loses another bet with alice, Alice, and becomes her WagerSlave permanently.permanently-which naturally includes the normal maid tasks.
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* '''Double Subverted''': It turns out Lucy was just pretending and pounced when the enemy their turned their back
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**Lucy is a Ninja first and a maid somewhere third- The only reason she's wearing [[FrenchMaid the maid outfit]] is[[HumiliatingWager because she lost a bet with Alice,]]
* '''Double Subverted''': It turns out Lucy was just pretending and pounced when the enemy their turned theirback back.
** Lucy Looses another bet with alice, and becomes her WagerSlave permanently.
* '''Double Subverted''': It turns out Lucy was just pretending and pounced when the enemy their turned their
** Lucy Looses another bet with alice, and becomes her WagerSlave permanently.
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** "Ah, Alice. Great Ninja; Horrible maid."
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** "Ah, Alice. "Ah yes, Lucy. Great Ninja; Horrible ninja, but a ''horrible'' maid."
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* '''Gender-Flipped''': Lucius, the butler, is a skilled martial artist.
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* '''Gender-Flipped''': Lucius, the butler, is a [[BattleButler skilled martial artist.artist]].
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* '''Invoked''': Alice is looking for a maid because she needs someone to protect her.
** Lucy learns domestic skills and equitique in order to diversify her employment options
* '''Exploited''': When Evulz attacks Alice's mansion, he orders his snipers to shoot the maids first, correctly guessing they're warriors.
* '''Defied''': When planning his attack on Alice, Bob waits for Lucy's day off.
** Lucy learns domestic skills and equitique in order to diversify her employment options
* '''Exploited''': When Evulz attacks Alice's mansion, he orders his snipers to shoot the maids first, correctly guessing they're warriors.
* '''Defied''': When planning his attack on Alice, Bob waits for Lucy's day off.
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* '''Invoked''': '''Invoked''':
** Alice is looking for a maid because she needs someone to protect her.
** Lucy learns domestic skills andequitique etiquette in order to diversify her employment options
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* '''Defied''':
** When planning his attack on Alice, Bob waits for Lucy's day off.
** When Evulz attacks Alice's mansion, he orders his snipers to shoot the maids first, correctly guessing they'rewarriors.
* '''Defied''': When planning his attack on Alice, Bob waits for Lucy's day off.warriors.
** Alice is looking for a maid because she needs someone to protect her.
** Lucy learns domestic skills and
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** When planning his attack on Alice, Bob waits for Lucy's day off.
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* '''Defied''': When planning his attack on Alice, Bob waits for Lucy's day off.
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* '''Exploited''': ???
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**Lucy learns domestic skills and equitique in order to diversify her employment options
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* '''Gender-Flipped''': Lucius, the butler, is a skilled martial artist.
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** There are several flashbacks to Lucy's maid training school, which resembles a boot camp more than anything. Scenes lampooning well-known works set in the military are a must.
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** There are several flashbacks to Lucy's maid training school, which resembles is basically a boot camp more than anything. Scenes lampooning well-known except with maids instead of soldiers. References to popular works set in the military are a must.
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** There are several flashbacks to Lucy's maid training school, which resembles a boot camp more than anything. Scenes lampooning well-known works set in the military are a must.
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* '''Justified''': Alice needed an inconspicuous, female bodyguard, so she hired kung fu expert Lucy to pretend to be her maid.
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* '''Justified''': '''Justified''':
** Alice needed an inconspicuous, female bodyguard, so she hired kung fu expert Lucy to pretend to be her maid.
** Alice needed an inconspicuous, female bodyguard, so she hired kung fu expert Lucy to pretend to be her maid.
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* '''Inverted''': Alice breaks out the martial arts skills to protect her maid, Lucy.
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* '''Inverted''': '''Inverted''':
** Alice breaks out the martial arts skills to protect her maid, Lucy.
** Alice breaks out the martial arts skills to protect her maid, Lucy.
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* '''Parodied''': All maids are expected to know kung fu, and part of the standard job interview involves defeating other household servants in a fight. Young girls are taught martial arts in school to be better suited to the job of domestic workers.
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* '''Parodied''': '''Parodied''':
** All maids are expected to know kung fu, and part of the standard job interview involves defeating other household servants in a fight. Young girls are taught martial arts in school to be better suited to the job of domestic workers.
** All maids are expected to know kung fu, and part of the standard job interview involves defeating other household servants in a fight. Young girls are taught martial arts in school to be better suited to the job of domestic workers.
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* '''Deconstructed''': After a violent episode in young Lucy's life, she began to study martial arts to ensure that she would never be a victim again. She's poor, so she takes a job as a domestic servant. When Alice is attacked, Lucy protects her, to everyone's amazement. However, none of Lucy's co-workers can look at her the same way after this, including the butler who once crushed on her but is no longer interested because NoGuyWantsAnAmazon.
** While skilled, Lucy is still outmatched against an armed assailant, as she can't carry her weapons to work and her broom isn't made to withstand being used as a melee weapon.
* '''Reconstructed''': However, Alice is immensely grateful and officially employs Lucy as her personal bodyguard, keeping the maid attire just so she'll remain undercover. Lucy's co-workers gradually adjust to this new situation, and she gains the attention of Daniel, an AmazonChaser.
** Lucy's skills include ImprobableWeaponUser and thereby makes everything in arm's reach a poetentially weapon. Additionally, her broom is also a SwordCane.
** While skilled, Lucy is still outmatched against an armed assailant, as she can't carry her weapons to work and her broom isn't made to withstand being used as a melee weapon.
* '''Reconstructed''': However, Alice is immensely grateful and officially employs Lucy as her personal bodyguard, keeping the maid attire just so she'll remain undercover. Lucy's co-workers gradually adjust to this new situation, and she gains the attention of Daniel, an AmazonChaser.
** Lucy's skills include ImprobableWeaponUser and thereby makes everything in arm's reach a poetentially weapon. Additionally, her broom is also a SwordCane.
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* '''Lampshaded''': "Wow, I'd never have expected that from a maid, Lucy."
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* '''Lampshaded''': '''Lampshaded''':
** "Wow, I'd never have expected that from a maid, Lucy."
** "Wow, I'd never have expected that from a maid, Lucy."
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* '''Deconstructed''':
** After a violent episode in young Lucy's life, she began to study martial arts to ensure that she would never be a victim again. She's poor, so she takes a job as a domestic servant. When Alice is attacked, Lucy protects her, to everyone's amazement. However, none of Lucy's co-workers can look at her the same way after this, including the butler who once crushed on her but is no longer interested because NoGuyWantsAnAmazon.
** While skilled, Lucy is still outmatched against an armed assailant, as she can't carry her weapons to work and her broom isn't made to withstand being used as a melee weapon.
* '''Reconstructed''':
** However, Alice is immensely grateful and officially employs Lucy as her personal bodyguard, keeping the maid attire just so she'll remain undercover. Lucy's co-workers gradually adjust to this new situation, and she gains the attention of Daniel, an AmazonChaser.
** Lucy's skills include ImprobableWeaponUser and thereby makes everything in arm's reach a poetentially weapon. Additionally, her broom is also a SwordCane.
** After a violent episode in young Lucy's life, she began to study martial arts to ensure that she would never be a victim again. She's poor, so she takes a job as a domestic servant. When Alice is attacked, Lucy protects her, to everyone's amazement. However, none of Lucy's co-workers can look at her the same way after this, including the butler who once crushed on her but is no longer interested because NoGuyWantsAnAmazon.
** While skilled, Lucy is still outmatched against an armed assailant, as she can't carry her weapons to work and her broom isn't made to withstand being used as a melee weapon.
* '''Reconstructed''':
** However, Alice is immensely grateful and officially employs Lucy as her personal bodyguard, keeping the maid attire just so she'll remain undercover. Lucy's co-workers gradually adjust to this new situation, and she gains the attention of Daniel, an AmazonChaser.
** Lucy's skills include ImprobableWeaponUser and thereby makes everything in arm's reach a poetentially weapon. Additionally, her broom is also a SwordCane.
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** BattleButler
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* '''Reconstructed''': However, Alice is immensely grateful and officially employs Lucy as her personal bodyguard, keeping the maid attire just so she'll remain undercover. Lucy's co-workers gradually adjust to this new situation, and she gains the attention of Daniel, who ''loves'' stronger women.
* '''Zig Zagged''': Lucy fights off an enemy, but later it turns out that was just luck.
* '''Zig Zagged''': Lucy fights off an enemy, but later it turns out that was just luck.
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* '''Reconstructed''': However, Alice is immensely grateful and officially employs Lucy as her personal bodyguard, keeping the maid attire just so she'll remain undercover. Lucy's co-workers gradually adjust to this new situation, and she gains the attention of Daniel, who ''loves'' stronger women.
an AmazonChaser.
**Lucy's skills include ImprobableWeaponUser and thereby makes everything in arm's reach a poetentially weapon. Additionally, her broom is also a SwordCane.
* '''Zig Zagged''': Lucy fights off an enemy, but later it turns out that was just luck. Later still, she reveals "just lucky is a ruse for her fighting style, "DeadlyDodging," and later ''still'' it turns out she is simply BornLucky.
**Lucy's skills include ImprobableWeaponUser and thereby makes everything in arm's reach a poetentially weapon. Additionally, her broom is also a SwordCane.
* '''Zig Zagged''': Lucy fights off an enemy, but later it turns out that was just luck. Later still, she reveals "just lucky is a ruse for her fighting style, "DeadlyDodging," and later ''still'' it turns out she is simply BornLucky.
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* '''Downplayed''': Lucy has taken enough self-defense courses to know how to fight off some muggers.
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** "Ah, Alice. Great Ninja; Horrible maid."
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** Lucy is a martial artist who takes a job as a maid because she can't find any other work, for some reason.
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** While skilled, Lucy is still outmatched against an armed assailant, as she can't carry her weapons to work and her broom isn't made to withstand being used as a melee weapon.
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** "Now if you'll excuse me, I have to clean up this blood before it stains the carpet."
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* '''Double Subverted''': Alice thought Lucy knew kung fu, but when an enemy appears Lucy cowers in terror. Then it turns out Lucy was just pretending.
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* '''Double Subverted''': Alice thought Lucy knew kung fu, but when an enemy appears Lucy cowers in terror. Then it It turns out Lucy was just pretending.pretending and pounced when the enemy their turned their back