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** [[WesternAnimation/PussInBootsTheLastWish Maxine has an argument between 8 past versions of herself.]]
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* '''Straight''': [[ActionGirl Maxine]] goes [[ExtyYearsFromNow ten years]] back in time to assist her younger self in an important mission. She spots her younger self engaged in melee combat and mopes about how poor a fighter she was.
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* '''Straight''': [[ActionGirl Maxine]] goes [[ExtyYearsFromNow [[ExactlyExtyYearsAgo ten years]] back in time to assist her younger self in an important mission. She spots her younger self engaged in melee combat and mopes about how poor a fighter she was.
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** Alternatively, Maxine goes back three hours into the past and remarks about how inept she was at fighting.
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** Alternatively, Maxine goes back three hours into the past and remarks about how inept she was at fighting.
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* '''Downplayed''': Maxine goes back in time and notes that, while her past self's fighting skills showed much potential, the rookie mistakes her past self continually makes causes her to sigh at her inexperience. Future Maxine's cringing at her past self's unrefined performance is tempered by the fact that she keeps in mind it's the experiences Past Maxine has yet to have that makes her that way.
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* '''Downplayed''': '''Downplayed''':
** Maxine goes back in time and notes that, while her past self's fighting skills showed much potential, the rookie mistakes her past self continually makes causes her to sigh at her inexperience. Future Maxine's cringing at her past self's unrefined performance is tempered by the fact that she keeps in mind it's the experiences Past Maxine has yet to have that makes her thatway.way.
** Alice reminds Maxine of her previous behavior, and annoys her quite a bit.
** Maxine goes back in time and notes that, while her past self's fighting skills showed much potential, the rookie mistakes her past self continually makes causes her to sigh at her inexperience. Future Maxine's cringing at her past self's unrefined performance is tempered by the fact that she keeps in mind it's the experiences Past Maxine has yet to have that makes her that
** Alice reminds Maxine of her previous behavior, and annoys her quite a bit.
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* '''Lampshaded''': ???"You know, I didn't think I'd hate myself this much."
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** She then decides to kill her younger self, despite the [[GrandfatherParadox unfortunate implications]] (or may decide nonexistence is preferable).
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** She then decides to kill her younger self, despite the [[GrandfatherParadox unfortunate cosmic implications]] (or may decide nonexistence is preferable).
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* '''Enforced''': ???"Alice, the actress who plays Maxine, has a little sister that looks like Alice ten years ago. Let's do a story where Maxine goes back in time and is ashamed of who she used to be."
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* '''Deconstructed''': Maxine is so fed up with her past self's actions that she jumps in and knocks her aside in order to take over and do things the "right" way. The dazed past Maxine is trampled and killed before she can realize what has happened... [[TemporalParadox whoops]].
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* '''Deconstructed''': '''Deconstructed''':
** Maxine is so fed up with her past self's actions that she jumps in and knocks her aside in order to take over and do things the "right" way. The dazed past Maxine is trampled and killed before she can realize what has happened... [[TemporalParadox whoops]].
** Maxine is so fed up with her past self's actions that she jumps in and knocks her aside in order to take over and do things the "right" way. The dazed past Maxine is trampled and killed before she can realize what has happened... [[TemporalParadox whoops]].
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* '''Reconstructed''': Past Maxine survives, vows she'll never get upstaged like that again, and puts herself through much TrainingFromHell in order to make it so, [[StableTimeLoop thereby becoming the Maxine who hated her past self in the first place.]]
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* '''Reconstructed''': '''Reconstructed''':
** Past Maxine survives, vows she'll never get upstaged like that again, and puts herself through much TrainingFromHell in order to make it so, [[StableTimeLoop thereby becoming the Maxine who hated her past self in the first place.]]
** Past Maxine survives, vows she'll never get upstaged like that again, and puts herself through much TrainingFromHell in order to make it so, [[StableTimeLoop thereby becoming the Maxine who hated her past self in the first place.]]
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* '''Zig Zagged''': ???Maxine finds her past self to be a competent fighter. [[DrivesLikeCrazy Her driving, however]], makes her ashamed to know herself. But Maxine reflects that her past self is [[WaifFu a better gymnast]], since she's fallen out of practice in the future. But [[DefrostingIceQueen she used to be]] [[NoSocialSkills a complete jerk]]...
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** Maxine's past self is driven to distraction by her future self's disdain, taking greater and greater risks in hopes of proving herself.
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** Both Maxines sit down and have a frank discussion, which leads to past Maxine [[TakeALevelInBadass working out the flaws in her routine]] and perhaps avoiding [[MyGreatestFailure the costly mistakes]] she [[TimeTravelTenseTrouble was going to have made]].
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* '''UpToEleven''':
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* '''Deconstructed''': Maxine is so fed up with her past self's actions that she jumps in and knocks her aside in order to take over and do things the "right" way. The dazed past Maxine is trampled and killed before she can realize what has happened... [[TemporalParadox whoops]].
* '''Reconstructed''': Past Maxine survives, vows she'll never get upstaged like that again, and puts herself through much TrainingFromHell in order to make it so, [[StableTimeLoop thereby becoming the Maxine who hated her past self in the first place.]]
* '''Reconstructed''': Past Maxine survives, vows she'll never get upstaged like that again, and puts herself through much TrainingFromHell in order to make it so, [[StableTimeLoop thereby becoming the Maxine who hated her past self in the first place.]]
* '''Deconstructed''': Maxine is so fed up with her past self's actions that she jumps in and knocks her aside in order to take over and do things the "right" way. The dazed past Maxine is trampled and killed before she can realize what has happened... [[TemporalParadox whoops]].
* '''Reconstructed''': Past Maxine survives, vows she'll never get upstaged like that again, and puts herself through much TrainingFromHell in order to make it so, [[StableTimeLoop thereby becoming the Maxine who hated her past self in the first place.]]
* '''Reconstructed''': Past Maxine survives, vows she'll never get upstaged like that again, and puts herself through much TrainingFromHell in order to make it so, [[StableTimeLoop thereby becoming the Maxine who hated her past self in the first place.]]
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%%* '''Implied''': ???
%%* '''Plotted A Good Waste''': ???
%%* '''Played For Laughs''': ???
%%* '''Played For Drama''': ???
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* '''Downplayed''': Maxine goes back in time and notes that, while her past self's fighting skills showed much potential, the rookie mistakes her past self continually makes causes her to sigh at her noob-ness.
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* '''Downplayed''': Maxine goes back in time and notes that, while her past self's fighting skills showed much potential, the rookie mistakes her past self continually makes causes her to sigh at her noob-ness.inexperience. Future Maxine's cringing at her past self's unrefined performance is tempered by the fact that she keeps in mind it's the experiences Past Maxine has yet to have that makes her that way.
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* '''Downplayed''': Maxine goes back in time and notes that, while her past self's fighting skills showed much potential, they really did need to be refined in order for them to develop into the fine-tuned fighting machine her Future self will be.
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* '''Downplayed''': Maxine goes back in time and notes that, while her past self's fighting skills showed much potential, they really did need to be refined in order for them to develop into the fine-tuned fighting machine rookie mistakes her Future past self will be.continually makes causes her to sigh at her noob-ness.
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* '''Downplayed''': ???Maxine goes back in time and notes that, while her past self's fighting skills showed much potential, they really did need to be refined in order for them to develop into the fine-tuned fighting machine her Future self will be.
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** even moreso, she goes back in time to right before entering the machine, and hates how terrible she used to be at boarding time machine
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* '''Exaggerated''': She then decides to kill her younger self, despite the [[GrandfatherParadox unfortunate implications]] (or may decide nonexistence is preferable).
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* '''Exaggerated''': '''Exaggerated''':
** She then decides to kill her younger self, despite the [[GrandfatherParadox unfortunate implications]] (or may decide nonexistence is preferable).
** She then decides to kill her younger self, despite the [[GrandfatherParadox unfortunate implications]] (or may decide nonexistence is preferable).
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* '''UpToEleven''': '''UpToEleven''':
** Maxine goes back a very short period of time (anywhere from a day to several hours) and remarks about how stupid she was.
** Maxine goes back a very short period of time (anywhere from a day to several hours) and remarks about how stupid she was.
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** FutureMeScaresMe
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** After going back in time, Future Maxine realizes how much Past Maxine sucks. Then she remembers that ''she's'' Past Maxine, not Future Maxine. Ouch...
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** UpToEleven Version: Maxine goes back a very short period of time (anywhere from a day to several hours) and remarks about how stupid she was.
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** Maxine create a time machine solely so she can inflict ColdBloodedTorture on her past self, because she hates what she was ''that much.''
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** UpToEleven Version: Maxine goes back a very short period of time (anywhere from a day to several hours) and remarks about how stupid she was.
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** Alternatively, Maxine goes back three minutes into the past and remarks about how inept she was at fighting.
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** Alternatively, Maxine goes back three minutes hours into the past and remarks about how inept she was at fighting.fighting.
** even moreso, she goes back in time to right before entering the machine, and hates how terrible she used to be at boarding time machine
** even moreso, she goes back in time to right before entering the machine, and hates how terrible she used to be at boarding time machine
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** Alternatively, Maxine goes back three days into the past and remarks about how inept she was at fighting.
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** Alternatively, Maxine goes back three days minutes into the past and remarks about how inept she was at fighting.
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** Alternatively, Maxine goes back three days into the past and remarks about how inept she was at fighting.
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* '''Parodied''': Maxine runs up to her past self, pushes her onto the ground, calls her past self a loser and runs off.
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* '''Parodied''': Maxine runs up to her past self, pushes her onto the ground, calls her past self a loser and runs off.off while laughing.
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* '''Parodied''': ???Maxine runs up to her past self, pushes her onto the ground, calls her past self a loser and runs off.
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* '''Exaggerated''': She then decides to kill her younger self, despite the [[GrandfatherParadox unfortunate implications]] (or may decide nonexistance is preferable).
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* '''Exaggerated''': She then decides to kill her younger self, despite the [[GrandfatherParadox unfortunate implications]] (or may decide nonexistance nonexistence is preferable).
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* '''Exaggerated''': She then decides to kill her younger self, despite the [[Grandfather Paradox [[GrandfatherParadox unfortunate implications]] (or may decide nonexistance is preferable).
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* '''Exaggerated''': ???She then decides to kill her younger self, despite the [[Grandfather Paradox unfortunate implications]] (or may decide nonexistance is preferable).
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Maxine tells her past self that she is her older incarnation, and her past self asks "So am I a disappointment to you?"
* '''Conversed''':???Maxine tells her past self "If you were my daughter, I wouldn't let you carry on like this."
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* '''Invoked''': ???Maxine makes a list of all the flaws she had in the past, so she can more easily hate herself.
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* '''Defied''': ???Maxine makes a list of all the ''good'' qualities her past self had, so she can convince herself that she wasn't all that bad.
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* '''Straight''': Maxine goes ten years back in time to assist her younger self in an important mission. She spots her younger self engaged in melee combat and mopes about how poor a fighter she was.
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* '''Straight''': Maxine [[ActionGirl Maxine]] goes [[ExtyYearsFromNow ten years years]] back in time to assist her younger self in an important mission. She spots her younger self engaged in melee combat and mopes about how poor a fighter she was.
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* '''Reconstructed''': ???Past Maxine survives, vows she'll never get upstaged like that again, and puts herself through much TrainingFromHell in order to make it so, [[StableTimeLoop thereby becoming the Maxine who hated her past self in the first place.]]
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* '''Justified''': Maxine has gone through quite a bit of CharacterDevelopment since her younger years.
