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I heard Administrivia.Chained Sinkholes aren't allowed, so I tried to fix the only one I could find.
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* '''Exaggerated''': Dracone feels that being evil, doing ''[[AllCrimesAreEqual everything]]'' that is evil [[ForTheEvulz for the sole purpose of]] [[DepartmentOfRedundancyDepartment doing evil]] is traumatizing him enormously.
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* '''Exaggerated''': Dracone feels that being evil, doing ''[[AllCrimesAreEqual everything]]'' that is evil [[ForTheEvulz for the sole purpose of]] purpose]] of [[DepartmentOfRedundancyDepartment doing evil]] is traumatizing him enormously.
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** Doing evil means that Dracone have driven away everyone that cared about him.
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** Doing evil means that Dracone have has driven away everyone that cared about him.
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** Because Dracone realizes that being evil is destroying his life, he quickly tries to stop doing evil, only to [[ReformedButRejected realize that no one, including the heroes, will ever forgive him for the evil he has done]]. After all, [[MoralEventHorizon the moment Dracone crossed the boundary, he can't turn back from it]].
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** Because Dracone realizes that being evil is destroying his life, he quickly tries to stop doing evil, only to [[ReformedButRejected realize that no one, including the heroes, will ever forgive him for the evil he has done]]. After all, [[MoralEventHorizon the moment Dracone crossed the boundary, he can't turn back from it]]. Once Dracone realized that as well, [[DrivenToSuicide he takes his own life out of despair and guilt]].
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* '''Downplayed''': Dracone lives a villainous life, and is slightly shaken by it.
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* '''Downplayed''': '''Downplayed''':
** Dracone lives a villainous life, and is slightly shaken byit.it.
** Dracone realizes that being a {{Main/Jerkass}} sucks.
** Dracone lives a villainous life, and is slightly shaken by
** Dracone realizes that being a {{Main/Jerkass}} sucks.
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** Because Dracone realizes that being evil is destroying his life, he quickly tries to stop doing evil, only to [[ReformedButRejected realize that no one, including the heroes, will never ever forgive him for the evil he has done]]. After all, [[MoralEventHorizon the moment Dracone crossed the boundary, he can't turn back from it]].
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** Because Dracone realizes that being evil is destroying his life, he quickly tries to stop doing evil, only to [[ReformedButRejected realize that no one, including the heroes, will never ever forgive him for the evil he has done]]. After all, [[MoralEventHorizon the moment Dracone crossed the boundary, he can't turn back from it]].
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* '''Straight''': After years of committing evil to get what he wants, Dracone feels uneasy about himself.
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* '''Straight''': After years of committing evil to get what he wants, Dracone feels uneasy about himself.comes to realize that his life of crime only made him more miserable.
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** The Author wants to oppose the idea of evil feeling good.
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** The Author wants to oppose opposes the idea of [[EvilIsCool evil feeling good.being portrayed as glamorous]], so the author shows the horrific consequences of villainy for both the villain and their victims.
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Bad Dreams was renamed by TRS due to misuse. IDK if the context here fits the trope so I removed it to be safe.
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* '''Double Subverted''': He's a StepfordSmiler tormented by BadDreams.
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* '''Double Subverted''': He's a StepfordSmiler tormented by BadDreams.nightmares.
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** Even if Dracone suffered the consequences of his actions and is unable to change what he has done, he decides to do good unto others. While it may not change some people's minds about him, he doesn't care as long as he's doing good to benefit society.
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%%* '''Reconstructed''': ???
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* '''Discussed''': When questioned why Dracone decided to change sides, Dracone points out how much he hated being evil, possibly mentioning a MistreatmentInducedBetrayal.
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* '''Discussed''': When questioned why Dracone decided to change sides, Dracone points out how much he hated "After all the horrible things you've done, after all you've put everyone who has had the ill fortune of being evil, possibly mentioning in your vicinity through, just ''why'' are you coming to us asking for redemption and a MistreatmentInducedBetrayal.chance to join our side? What makes you think we want to have anything to do with you?" "I can't make you understand, nor do I expect you to, but let me put it like this: the realities of the life I chose and the people I surrounded myself with made for worse enemies than you or anyone else could ever be. Villainy is a losing game. I can't take back the things I've done, I can't erase the guilt I feel every day, and I can't lift the weight of the consequences that I earned. What I can do is work to fix the damage I've done. It's all I have left - the path I took cost me everything else."
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* '''Discussed''': ???
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* '''Discussed''': ???When questioned why Dracone decided to change sides, Dracone points out how much he hated being evil, possibly mentioning a MistreatmentInducedBetrayal.
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** Alternately, after constantly losing and turning into an IneffectualSympatheticVillain, Dracone throws his hands up and changes sides, performing a HeelFaceTurn.
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* '''Defied''': "Oh, dear. I seem to be depressed. Minion! Fetch me some HookersAndBlow! That should cheer me up..."
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* '''Defied''': "Oh, dear. I seem to be depressed. Minion! Fetch me some HookersAndBlow! That should cheer me up..."
