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This bite-sized RockOpera is a RecursiveFanfiction based on the [[{{Gorn}} infamously terrifying]] ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' fanfiction, Fanfic/{{Cupcakes}}. It takes place during and after [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS1E16SonicRainboom a]] [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS1E25PartyOfOne few]] episodes. It [[AdaptationExpansion expands]] upon several ideas that weren't in the original fic, like how [[FreudianExcuse Pinkie's father abused her as a filly]].
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This bite-sized RockOpera is a RecursiveFanfiction based on the [[{{Gorn}} infamously terrifying]] ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' fanfiction, Fanfic/{{Cupcakes}}.''Fanfic/CupcakesSergeantSprinkles''. It takes place during and after [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS1E16SonicRainboom a]] [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS1E25PartyOfOne few]] episodes. It [[AdaptationExpansion expands]] upon several ideas that weren't in the original fic, like how [[FreudianExcuse Pinkie's father abused her as a filly]].
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bandcamp link is broken and he never made the album, so theres no point in mentioning it.
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It can be found on Bandcamp [[http://tarbyrocks.bandcamp.com/album/something-broke-the-continuing-tale-of-pinkie-pie-ponycide here,]] and on Soundcloud [[http://soundcloud.com/tarbyrocks/something-broke here.]]
According to creator George [=DesRoches=] (better known as Tarby), the story of ''Something Broke'' is far from over. A redux of the song is planned as the opening track of his upcoming RockOpera ''Forever Broken,'' which will expand on the original story even more.
According to creator George [=DesRoches=] (better known as Tarby), the story of ''Something Broke'' is far from over. A redux of the song is planned as the opening track of his upcoming RockOpera ''Forever Broken,'' which will expand on the original story even more.
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It can be found on Bandcamp [[http://tarbyrocks.bandcamp.com/album/something-broke-the-continuing-tale-of-pinkie-pie-ponycide here,]] and on Soundcloud [[http://soundcloud.com/tarbyrocks/something-broke here.]]
According to creator George [=DesRoches=] (better known as Tarby), the story of ''Something Broke'' is far from over. A redux of the song is planned as the opening track of his upcoming RockOpera ''Forever Broken,'' which will expand on the original story even more.]]
According to creator George [=DesRoches=] (better known as Tarby), the story of ''Something Broke'' is far from over. A redux of the song is planned as the opening track of his upcoming RockOpera ''Forever Broken,'' which will expand on the original story even more.
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* InTheStyleOf: The third part ("Young Fliers' Competition) sounds a lot like the RedHotChiliPeppers, complete with funky guitar, informal, slang-filled lyrics, and gratuitous swearing.
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* InTheStyleOf: The third part ("Young Fliers' Competition) sounds a lot like the RedHotChiliPeppers, Music/RedHotChiliPeppers, complete with funky guitar, informal, slang-filled lyrics, and gratuitous swearing.
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* {{Sampling}}: [[TheLegendOfZeldaMajorasMask The Skull Kid's scream]] can be heard towards the end of "Late-Night Accident."
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* {{Sampling}}: [[TheLegendOfZeldaMajorasMask [[VideoGame/TheLegendOfZeldaMajorasMask The Skull Kid's scream]] can be heard towards the end of "Late-Night Accident."
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* SpiritualSuccessor: It's like ''TheWall'' written for ponies.
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* SpiritualSuccessor: It's like ''TheWall'' ''Music/TheWall'' written for ponies.
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* ScareChord: The ending of "Practice Makes Perfect (Crime)."
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* EpicRocking: If you count the whole thing as one song.
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* InTheStyleOf: The third part ("Young Fliers' Competition) sounds a lot like the RedHotChiliPeppers.
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* InTheStyleOf: The third part ("Young Fliers' Competition) sounds a lot like the RedHotChiliPeppers.RedHotChiliPeppers, complete with funky guitar, informal, slang-filled lyrics, and gratuitous swearing.
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* InTheStyleOf: The third part ("Young Fliers' Competition) sounds a lot like the RedHotChiliPeppers.
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Removing Nightmare Fuel potholes. NF should be on YMMV only.
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This bite-sized RockOpera is a RecursiveFanfiction based on the [[{{Gorn}} infamously]] [[NightmareFuel terrifying]] ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' fanfiction, Fanfic/{{Cupcakes}}. It takes place during and after [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS1E16SonicRainboom a]] [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS1E25PartyOfOne few]] episodes. It [[AdaptationExpansion expands]] upon several ideas that weren't in the original fic, like how [[FreudianExcuse Pinkie's father abused her as a filly]].
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This bite-sized RockOpera is a RecursiveFanfiction based on the [[{{Gorn}} infamously]] [[NightmareFuel infamously terrifying]] ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' fanfiction, Fanfic/{{Cupcakes}}. It takes place during and after [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS1E16SonicRainboom a]] [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS1E25PartyOfOne few]] episodes. It [[AdaptationExpansion expands]] upon several ideas that weren't in the original fic, like how [[FreudianExcuse Pinkie's father abused her as a filly]].
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It can be found on Bandcamp [[http://tarbyrocks.bandcamp.com/album/something-broke-the-continuing-tale-of-pinkie-pie-ponycide here,]], and on Soundcloud [[http://soundcloud.com/tarbyrocks/something-broke here.]]
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It can be found on Bandcamp [[http://tarbyrocks.bandcamp.com/album/something-broke-the-continuing-tale-of-pinkie-pie-ponycide here,]], here,]] and on Soundcloud [[http://soundcloud.com/tarbyrocks/something-broke here.]]
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[[http://tarbyrocks.bandcamp.com/album/something-broke-the-continuing-tale-of-pinkie-pie-ponycide It can be found here.]]
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It can be found on Bandcamp [[http://tarbyrocks.bandcamp.com/album/something-broke-the-continuing-tale-of-pinkie-pie-ponycide It can be found here,]], and on Soundcloud [[http://soundcloud.com/tarbyrocks/something-broke here.]]
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[[DescribeTopicHere Describe]] Music/SomethingBroke [[DescribeTopicHere here.]]
Well, where to start? This bite-sized RockOpera is a RecursiveFanfiction based on the [[{{Gorn}} infamously]] [[NightmareFuel terrifying]] FanFiction, {{Cupcakes}}. It takes place during and after [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS1E16SonicRainboom a]] [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS1E25PartyOfOne few]] episodes. It [[AdaptationExpansion expands]] upon several ideas that weren't in the original fic, like how [[FreudianExcuse Pinkie's father abused her as a filly]].
Well, where to start? This bite-sized RockOpera is a RecursiveFanfiction based on the [[{{Gorn}} infamously]] [[NightmareFuel terrifying]] FanFiction, {{Cupcakes}}. It takes place during and after [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS1E16SonicRainboom a]] [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS1E25PartyOfOne few]] episodes. It [[AdaptationExpansion expands]] upon several ideas that weren't in the original fic, like how [[FreudianExcuse Pinkie's father abused her as a filly]].
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Well, where to start?
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* DarkReprise: "Hide the Body" is a slow, melancholy version of "[[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic Art of the Dress]]" whose ending reprises "Cupcakes" (from the same show). The album's final track combines this with LyricalDissonance.
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* DarkReprise: "Hide the Body" is a slow, melancholy version of "[[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic "[[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS1E14SuitedForSuccess Art of the Dress]]" whose ending reprises "Cupcakes" (from the same show)."[[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS1E12CallOfTheCutie Cupcakes]]". The album's final track combines this with LyricalDissonance.
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* SplitPersonalityTakeover: Pinkamena takes over, starting during Awakening, and finishing during Hide The Body.
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* SplitPersonalityTakeover: Pinkamena takes over, starting during Awakening, and finishing during Hide The Body.Body.
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According to creator George DesRoches (better known as Tarby), the story of ''Something Broke'' is far from over. A redux of the song is planned as the opening track of his upcoming RockOpera ''Forever Broken,'' which will expand on the original story even more.
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According to creator George DesRoches [=DesRoches=] (better known as Tarby), the story of ''Something Broke'' is far from over. A redux of the song is planned as the opening track of his upcoming RockOpera ''Forever Broken,'' which will expand on the original story even more.
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I\'m the person who wrote the song in question - just editing my name (it was misspelled) and one or two facts involving her and her dad.
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According to creator George Desroaches (better known as Tarby), the story of ''Something Broke'' is far from over. A redux of the song is planned as the opening track of his upcoming RockOpera ''Forever Broken,'' which will expand on the original story even more.
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According to creator George Desroaches DesRoches (better known as Tarby), the story of ''Something Broke'' is far from over. A redux of the song is planned as the opening track of his upcoming RockOpera ''Forever Broken,'' which will expand on the original story even more.
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* FreudianExcuse: Pinkie has one now, in that [[AbusiveParents her dad hit her when she was young.]]
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* FreudianExcuse: Pinkie has one now, in that [[AbusiveParents her dad hit took advantage of her when she was young.]]
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* {{Sampling}}: [[TheLegendOfZeldaMajorasMask The Skull Kid's scream]] can be heard towards the end of "Late-Night Accident."
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* AdaptationExpansion: The song weaves two episodes from [[MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic the actual show]] into its storyline, and it works surprisingly well.
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* AdaptationExpansion: The song weaves two episodes from [[MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic [[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic the actual show]] into its storyline, and it works surprisingly well.
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* DarkReprise: "Hide the Body" is a slow, melancholy version of "[[MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic Art of the Dress]]" whose ending reprises "Cupcakes" (from the same show). The album's final track combines this with LyricalDissonance.
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* DarkReprise: "Hide the Body" is a slow, melancholy version of "[[MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic "[[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic Art of the Dress]]" whose ending reprises "Cupcakes" (from the same show). The album's final track combines this with LyricalDissonance.
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[[http://tarbyrocks.bandcamp.com/album/something-broke-the-continuing-tale-of-pinkie-pie-ponycide You can find it here.]]
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[[http://tarbyrocks.bandcamp.com/album/something-broke-the-continuing-tale-of-pinkie-pie-ponycide You It can find it be found here.]]
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* CreatorBacklash: Tarby doesn't hate the song, but he's somewhat annoyed that it overshadows his other work.
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Well, where to start? This bite-sized RockOpera is a RecursiveFanfiction based on the [[{{Gorn}} infamously]] [[NightmareFuel terrifying]] FanFiction, {{Cupcakes}}. It takes place during and after [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS1E16SonicRainboom a]] [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS1E25PartyOfOne few]] episodes. It [[AdaptationExpansion expands]] upon several ideas that weren't in the original fic, like how [[FreudianExcuse her father abused her as a filly]].
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Well, where to start? This bite-sized RockOpera is a RecursiveFanfiction based on the [[{{Gorn}} infamously]] [[NightmareFuel terrifying]] FanFiction, {{Cupcakes}}. It takes place during and after [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS1E16SonicRainboom a]] [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS1E25PartyOfOne few]] episodes. It [[AdaptationExpansion expands]] upon several ideas that weren't in the original fic, like how [[FreudianExcuse her Pinkie's father abused her as a filly]].
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* DarkReprise: "Hide the Body" is a slow, melancholy version of "[[MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic Art of the Dress]]" whose ending reprises "Cupcakes" (from the same show). The album's final track combines this with LyricalDissonance.
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* LastNoteNightmare: [[spoiler: [[DarkReprise The last song]] has a particularly good one.]][[hottip:*:Specifically, Tarby goes from singing to screaming on a dime and the music suddenly becomes loud, dissonant, and abrasive, before cutting into a series of dissonant, lonely guitar notes.]]
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* LastNoteNightmare: At the end of the final track, [[spoiler: [[DarkReprise The last song]] has a particularly good one.]][[hottip:*:Specifically, Tarby goes from singing to screaming on a dime and the music suddenly becomes loud, dissonant, and abrasive, before cutting into a series of dissonant, lonely guitar notes.]]
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* MoodWhiplash: Once again, the ending.