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* WretchedHiveOfScumAndVillainy: According to the title page, anyway. Doesn't get much more explicit than "A blight on the face of the world."
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* WretchedHiveOfScumAndVillainy: WretchedHive: According to the title page, anyway. Doesn't get much more explicit than "A blight on the face of the world."
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Starting in 2022, the story was re-published on [[https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/57474/domina-city-superpowers-zombies-and-bio-mods Royal Road]] under the title ''Domina City'', with minor quality changes.
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Starting in 2022, the story was re-published on [[https://www.Website/RoyalRoad ([[https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/57474/domina-city-superpowers-zombies-and-bio-mods Royal Road]] here]]) under the title ''Domina City'', with minor quality changes.
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* NaiveNewcomer: Adam plays with this. Yes, he enters a WretchedHive with no training and no idea what to expect, giving plenty of opportunities for him to absorb exposition. On the other hand, it turns out that as a "[[{{Sociopath}} natural-born killer]]," he is uniquely suited to [[LikeADuckToWater thrive in this exact environment]].
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* NaiveNewcomer: Adam plays with this. Yes, he enters a WretchedHive with no training and no idea what to expect, giving plenty of opportunities for him to absorb exposition. On the other hand, it turns out that as a "[[{{Sociopath}} natural-born killer]]," he is uniquely suited to [[LikeADuckToWater [[LikeADuckTakesToWater thrive in this exact environment]].
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* NaiveNewcomer: Adam plays with this. Yes, he enters a WretchedHive with no training and no idea what to expect, giving plenty of opportunities for him to absorb exposition. On the other hand, it turns out that as a "[[{{Sociopath}} natural-born killer]]," he is uniquely suited to [[LikeAFishToWater thrive in this exact environment]].
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* NaiveNewcomer: Adam plays with this. Yes, he enters a WretchedHive with no training and no idea what to expect, giving plenty of opportunities for him to absorb exposition. On the other hand, it turns out that as a "[[{{Sociopath}} natural-born killer]]," he is uniquely suited to [[LikeAFishToWater [[LikeADuckToWater thrive in this exact environment]].
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Starting in 2022, the story was re-published on [[https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/57474/domina-city-superpowers-zombies-and-bio-mods Royal Road]] under the title ''Domina City'', with minor quality changes.
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* NonHumanNonBinary: Well, sort of. Angels are human, but they shrug off their gender identity when they join the culture as a show of devotion. In the original version people still mostly used gendered pronouns (sometimes with [[AmbiguousGender different people using different pronouns for the same person]]), but the updated version changed them to gender-neutral pronouns.
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* OurDemonsAreDifferent: Demons are just people with horns. Except for the [[HornyDevils succubi]].
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* OurDemonsAreDifferent: Demons are just people with horns. Except for the [[HornyDevils [[SuccubiAndIncubi succubi]].
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* CityOfAdventure: The titular Domina City.
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* ConvenientlyAnOrphan: Per WordOfGod, pretty much everyone.
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* InnocentBlueEyes: Derek again.
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** OurAngelsAreDifferent: [[LightEmUp Light-emitting]] [[FantasticRacism vampire-haters]].
** OurDemonsAreDifferent: Just people with horns. Except for the [[HornyDevils succubi]].
** OurFairiesAreDifferent: Apparently, they have monsters.
** OurVampiresAreDifferent: Mostly, just people with special eyes so they can see in the dark.
** OurZombiesAreDifferent: Not undead, fast, and they never stop screaming (hence the name "screamers"). Any body fluid is infectious. Oh, and they have super powers.
** OurDemonsAreDifferent: Just people with horns. Except for the [[HornyDevils succubi]].
** OurFairiesAreDifferent: Apparently, they have monsters.
** OurVampiresAreDifferent: Mostly, just people with special eyes so they can see in the dark.
** OurZombiesAreDifferent: Not undead, fast, and they never stop screaming (hence the name "screamers"). Any body fluid is infectious. Oh, and they have super powers.
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* StockSuperpowers: A number powers have been demonstrated so far, though it has not been revealed where they come from.
** BarrierWarrior: Derek.
** DishingOutDirt: Ling
** LivingLieDetector: Laura.
** PlayingWithFire: The first "screamer."
** SuperSpeed: Akane.
** BarrierWarrior: Derek.
** DishingOutDirt: Ling
** LivingLieDetector: Laura.
** PlayingWithFire: The first "screamer."
** SuperSpeed: Akane.
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* ZombieApocalypse: What the city might be headed towards.
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* OdangoHair: Ling, Akane's Chinese roommate.
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* SlidingScaleOfAnthropomorphism: The kemos vary on this scale, from people with [[LittleBitBeastly just ears]] to full-on [[BeastMan anthropomorphic animals]] called "anthros." For bonus points, "kemo" is [[https://dominaurbana.wordpress.com/2015/08/31/domina-cultures-kemos/ explicitly]] short for "{{Kemonomimi}}."
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* SlidingScaleOfAnthropomorphism: The kemos vary on this scale, from people with [[LittleBitBeastly just ears]] to full-on [[BeastMan anthropomorphic animals]] called "anthros." For bonus points, "kemo" is [[https://dominaurbana.wordpress.com/2015/08/31/domina-cultures-kemos/ explicitly]] short for "{{Kemonomimi}}."[[LittleBitBeastly kemonomimi]]."
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''Domina'' is a [[WebSerialNovel web novel]] [[http://dominaurbana.wordpress.com/ about the title city,]] updating Mondays. The plot revolves around Adam Anders, a newcomer to the city, and his roommate, Derek Huntsman. The first few chapters are just {{Worldbuilding}}, setting up the background of the city. But soon enough, things start going in unexpected directions. Derek discovers he has powers, and several of his close friends do as well. Then it turns out that there are super-powered zombies attacking the city, and a gang lord asks them to save it.
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''Domina'' is a novel (originally a [[WebSerialNovel web novel]] [[http://dominaurbana.wordpress.com/ published on wordpress) about the title city,]] updating Mondays.city. The plot revolves around Adam Anders, a newcomer to the city, and his roommate, Derek Huntsman. The first few chapters are just {{Worldbuilding}}, setting up the background of the city. But soon enough, things start going in unexpected directions. Derek discovers he has powers, and several of his close friends do as well. Then it turns out that there are super-powered zombies attacking the city, and a gang lord asks them to save it.
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The story finished in October of 2017 at 335 chapters.
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The story finished in October of 2017 at 335 chapters.
chapters. It was later published in book form, with two novels so far:
* ''The City of Monsters'' (February 2020)
* ''The Composer of Screams'' (April 2020)
* ''The City of Monsters'' (February 2020)
* ''The Composer of Screams'' (April 2020)
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* TheAllConcealingI: Every character's first POV chapter starts with "My name is ___" and a few short facts about themselves. [[BigBad The Composer]] is the sole exception, which means we don't know their name, gender, or anything else other than that they [[AxCrazy like killing]].
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** Every character's first POV chapter starts with "My name is ___" and a few short facts about themselves. [[BigBad The Composer]] is the sole exception, which means we don't know their name, gender, or anything else other than that they [[AxCrazy likekilling]].killing]].
** In the rewrite, while the chapters are no longer first person, the Composer's POV chapters are still carefully worded to avoid any pronouns that might imply they have an identity besides killing.
** Every character's first POV chapter starts with "My name is ___" and a few short facts about themselves. [[BigBad The Composer]] is the sole exception, which means we don't know their name, gender, or anything else other than that they [[AxCrazy like
** In the rewrite, while the chapters are no longer first person, the Composer's POV chapters are still carefully worded to avoid any pronouns that might imply they have an identity besides killing.
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-->'''TheRant:''' [[{{Handwave}} Any and all inconsistencies with the Irish grammar shall henceforth be answered by "The fey are crazy, and not actually Irish]]."
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* PointOfView: The web-novel was first-person with a rotating narrator, but when republished the novels were third-person.
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* EvilAlbino / HeroicAlbino: Artemis Butler is implied to be an albino, though which of these he falls into remains unclear.
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* LittleBitBeastly / PettingZooPeople: The kemos vary on this scale, from people with just the ears to full-on anthropomorphic animals called "anthros." For bonus points, "kemo" is [[https://dominaurbana.wordpress.com/2015/08/31/domina-cultures-kemos/ explicitly]] short for "{{Kemonomimi}}."
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* SlidingScaleOfAnthropomorphism: The kemos vary on this scale, from people with [[LittleBitBeastly just ears]] to full-on [[BeastMan anthropomorphic animals]] called "anthros." For bonus points, "kemo" is [[https://dominaurbana.wordpress.com/2015/08/31/domina-cultures-kemos/ explicitly]] short for "{{Kemonomimi}}."
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* RedEyesTakeWarning: Seemingly subverted with Lily. She has red eyes, but seems gentle and kind.
** Possibly played straight with Artemis Butler. He's an albino (probably), and not someone you should cross.
** Possibly played straight with Artemis Butler. He's an albino (probably), and not someone you should cross.
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* RedEyesTakeWarning: Seemingly subverted Subverted with Lily. She has red eyes, but seems is gentle and kind.
**Possibly played Played straight with Artemis Butler. He's an albino (probably), and Butler, who is not someone you should cross.
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** There are many mentions of [[spoilers:loudspeakers being installed]] in the background before [[spoiler:the Composer is revealed to have a system of speakers, separate from MC's, that she can use to zombify the entire city at once]].
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** There are many mentions of [[spoilers:loudspeakers [[spoiler:loudspeakers being installed]] in the background before [[spoiler:the Composer is revealed to have a system of speakers, separate from MC's, that she can use to zombify the entire city at once]].
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* ChekhovsGunman: The para get nameddropped over two hundred chapters before they actually appear.
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* FantasticRacism: Between the various "monsters." The footnote makes clear that technically speaking its not racism, but more like a gang war.
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* FantasticRacism: Between the various "monsters." The footnote makes clear that technically speaking its it's not racism, but more like a gang war.war.
* {{Foreshadowing}}:
** There are many mentions of [[spoilers:loudspeakers being installed]] in the background before [[spoiler:the Composer is revealed to have a system of speakers, separate from MC's, that she can use to zombify the entire city at once]].
** MC, Lily, and Robyn all mention their sisters a few times before [[spoiler:the reveal that they consider each other sisters]].
** Speaking of MC, [[spoiler:in dialogue she is often mentioned as pausing "as if taking a deep breath;" as an AI, of course she can't actually breathe]].
** Whenever someone says Lily is a demon, someone else corrects them.
* {{Foreshadowing}}:
** There are many mentions of [[spoilers:loudspeakers being installed]] in the background before [[spoiler:the Composer is revealed to have a system of speakers, separate from MC's, that she can use to zombify the entire city at once]].
** MC, Lily, and Robyn all mention their sisters a few times before [[spoiler:the reveal that they consider each other sisters]].
** Speaking of MC, [[spoiler:in dialogue she is often mentioned as pausing "as if taking a deep breath;" as an AI, of course she can't actually breathe]].
** Whenever someone says Lily is a demon, someone else corrects them.
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** "Akamatsu University" is named after Ken Akamatsu, a famous mangaka.
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** "Akamatsu University" is named after Ken Akamatsu, a famous mangaka.Creator/KenAkamatsu.
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** During that same report, Butler mentions an officer who was dealing with (and soon infected by) a screamer was named John Romero.
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** During that same report, Butler mentions an officer who was dealing with (and soon infected by) a screamer was named John Romero.Creator/JohnRomero.
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** Two bloodlines of the Nosferatu subculture of vampires are named [[WorldOfDarkness Niktuku and Guruhi]].
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** Two bloodlines of the Nosferatu subculture of vampires are named [[WorldOfDarkness [[Franchise/TheWorldOfDarkness Niktuku and Guruhi]].
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** There's an Orc who calls himself Obould, and his chat handle is [[ForgottenRealms Many-Arrows]]. He is also currently the leader of the Orcs.
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** There's an Orc who calls himself Obould, and his chat handle is [[ForgottenRealms [[TabletopGame/ForgottenRealms Many-Arrows]]. He is also currently the leader of the Orcs.
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''Domina'' is a [[WebSerialNovel web novel]] [[http://dominaurbana.wordpress.com/ about the title city, city,]] updating Mondays. The plot revolves around Adam Anders, a newcomer to the city, and his roommate, Derek Huntsman. The first few chapters are just {{Worldbuilding}}, setting up the background of the city. But soon enough, things start going in unexpected directions. Derek discovers he has powers, and several of his close friends do as well. Then it turns out that there are super-powered zombies attacking the city, and a gang lord asks them to save it.
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The site broke in March 2013, and was moved to a [[http://dominaurbana.wordpress.com/ wordpress.com blog]] for the foreseeable future.
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October of 2017 at 335 chapters.
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''Domina'' is a [[WebSerialNovel web novel novel]] about the title city, updating Mondays. The plot revolves around Adam Anders, a newcomer to the city, and his roommate, Derek Huntsman. The first few chapters are just {{Worldbuilding}}, setting up the background of the city. But soon enough, things start going in unexpected directions. Derek discovers he has powers, and several of his close friends do as well. Then it turns out that there are super-powered zombies attacking the city, and a gang lord asks them to save it.
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** The political parties of the city are named after famous individual trees; [[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Iluvatar_%28tree%29 Iluvatar]] (isolationist), [[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Great_Banyan the Great Banyan]] (diplomatic expansionist), [[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Kongeegen Kongeegen]] (social Darwinists), and [[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Granit_Oak the Granit Oak]] (imperialist expansionist).
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** The giants are named after the Norse gods and titans, with some related famous monsters thrown in. Ogres tend to be named after ''Franchise/WarCraft'' ogres, such as Gruul the Dragonkiller.
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** The giants are named after the Norse gods and titans, with some related famous monsters thrown in. Ogres tend to be named after ''Franchise/WarCraft'' ''VideoGame/WarCraft'' ogres, such as Gruul the Dragonkiller.
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* ThemeNaming: More than a few.
** The angel Archsaints are named after the ''TabletopGame/DungeonsAndDragons'' Celestial Hebdomad. Likewise, the demon Powers are named after the demon princes, and the vampire Nobles after the Archdevils. Lesser warlords and honored are named after lesser saints and gods.
** The giants are named after the Norse gods and titans, with some related famous monsters thrown in. Ogres tend to be named after ''Franchise/WarCraft'' ogres, such as Gruul the Dragonkiller.
** The dragons are named after the dragon-gods of ''TabletopGame/DungeonsAndDragons''. Even their subcultures are based on some of the dragon-specific prestige classes from ''The Draconimicon''.
** The Atlantean cities are named after Greek philosophers, the Dagonite towns are named after famous writers, and the Rahab wrecks are named after emperors.
** The angel Archsaints are named after the ''TabletopGame/DungeonsAndDragons'' Celestial Hebdomad. Likewise, the demon Powers are named after the demon princes, and the vampire Nobles after the Archdevils. Lesser warlords and honored are named after lesser saints and gods.
** The giants are named after the Norse gods and titans, with some related famous monsters thrown in. Ogres tend to be named after ''Franchise/WarCraft'' ogres, such as Gruul the Dragonkiller.
** The dragons are named after the dragon-gods of ''TabletopGame/DungeonsAndDragons''. Even their subcultures are based on some of the dragon-specific prestige classes from ''The Draconimicon''.
** The Atlantean cities are named after Greek philosophers, the Dagonite towns are named after famous writers, and the Rahab wrecks are named after emperors.
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** Kelly describes her immediate superior (a wolf-kemo) as "An ex-Rahu, a warrior wolf." In ''WerewolfTheForsaken'', Rahu are the warrior auspice.
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** Kelly describes her immediate superior (a wolf-kemo) as "An ex-Rahu, a warrior wolf." In ''WerewolfTheForsaken'', ''TabletopGame/WerewolfTheForsaken'', Rahu are the warrior auspice.