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* In between cooking up ways to put the UF characters (and the audience) [[TearJerker through the emotional wringer]], Jenn and her fans came up with the "Water Mom" AU, a variant on the classic "Mystery Twins separated at birth" alternate universe where Lapis Lazuli escapes her mirror early and raises an orphaned Dipper as her own child, while Mabel is raised by Grunkle Stan. It mainly exists to play up Lapis's motherly feelings towards Dipper found in the normal version of ''Universe Falls''.
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** What ''causes'' said HeelFaceTurn? [[ThePowerofLove Reverse Dipper's feelings for Reverse Pacifica]].
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** What ''causes'' said HeelFaceTurn? [[ThePowerofLove [[LoveRedeems Reverse Dipper's feelings for Reverse Pacifica]].
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* Dipper emphasizing with Malachite based on [[NotSoDifferent his experience as part of Stepper before he stabilized]], asks the fusion what ''she'', not Jasper or Lapis, wants.
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* Dipper emphasizing with Malachite based on [[NotSoDifferent his experience as part of Stepper before he stabilized]], stabilized, asks the fusion what ''she'', not Jasper or Lapis, wants.
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* The Rises kids apologizing to Pacifica for judging her to quickly after realizing that she is nothing like their version of her.
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* The Rises kids apologizing to Pacifica for judging her to too quickly after realizing that she is nothing like their version of her.
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[[AC:Measure Up]]
* While it predictably backfires, Steven tries to make amends with Gideon and put their differences aside following the amulet incident a few chapters prior.
* Steven and Soos are the only ones who don't make fun of Dipper for being a millimeter shorter than Mabel. Steven, compared to Soos, actually [[WhatTheHellHero calls Mabel out for it]].
* While it predictably backfires, Steven tries to make amends with Gideon and put their differences aside following the amulet incident a few chapters prior.
* Steven and Soos are the only ones who don't make fun of Dipper for being a millimeter shorter than Mabel. Steven, compared to Soos, actually [[WhatTheHellHero calls Mabel out for it]].
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* Steven assuring Connie and Mabel that neither of them are useless, leading to a group hug that results in the three of them fusing into Mabonnven.
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* The Rises universe apologizing to Pacifica for judging her to quickly after realizing that she is nothing like their version of her.
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* The Rises universe kids apologizing to Pacifica for judging her to quickly after realizing that she is nothing like their version of her.
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* Rises Jasper gives Amethyst a ''much''-needed YouAreBetterThanYouThinkYouAre speech, since the latter is still sulking from what happened in "Crack The Whip". [[DontYouDarePityMe (Unfortunately this still does nothing to alleviate her mood)]]
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* Rises Jasper gives Amethyst a ''much''-needed YouAreBetterThanYouThinkYouAre speech, since the latter is still sulking from what happened in "Crack The Whip". [[DontYouDarePityMe (Unfortunately this still does nothing to alleviate her mood)]]mood)
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* Rises Jasper gives Amethyst a ''much''-needed YouAreBetterThanYouThinkYouAre speech, since the latter is still sulking from what happened in "Crack The Whip". [[DontYouDarePityMe (Unfortunately the fact that it comes from ''Jasper'' does nothing to alleviate her mood)]]
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* Rises Jasper gives Amethyst a ''much''-needed YouAreBetterThanYouThinkYouAre speech, since the latter is still sulking from what happened in "Crack The Whip". [[DontYouDarePityMe (Unfortunately the fact that it comes from ''Jasper'' this still does nothing to alleviate her mood)]]
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* Rises Jasper gives Amethyst a ''much''-needed YouAreBetterThanYouThinkYouAre speech, since the latter is still sulking from what happened in "Crack The Whip".
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* Rises Jasper gives Amethyst a ''much''-needed YouAreBetterThanYouThinkYouAre speech, since the latter is still sulking from what happened in "Crack The Whip". [[DontYouDarePityMe (Unfortunately the fact that it comes from ''Jasper'' does nothing to alleviate her mood)]]
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* Rises Jasper gives Amethyst a ''much''-needed YouAreBetterThanYouThinkYouAre speech, since the latter is still smarting from what happened in "Crack The Whip".
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* Rises Jasper gives Amethyst a ''much''-needed YouAreBetterThanYouThinkYouAre speech, since the latter is still smarting sulking from what happened in "Crack The Whip".Whip".
* The Rises universe apologizing to Pacifica for judging her to quickly after realizing that she is nothing like their version of her.
* The Rises universe apologizing to Pacifica for judging her to quickly after realizing that she is nothing like their version of her.
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* Rises Mabel gives her counterpart a reassuring speech over her concerns about confessing her crush on Steven.
-->'''Rises Mabel:''' I don’t really know what your Steven is like, but if he’s anything like the Steven I know, then you ''won’t'' lose him if you tell him the truth. Even if things don’t work out the way you want them to with him, I still think he’ll appreciate your honesty.
-->'''Rises Mabel:''' I don’t really know what your Steven is like, but if he’s anything like the Steven I know, then you ''won’t'' lose him if you tell him the truth. Even if things don’t work out the way you want them to with him, I still think he’ll appreciate your honesty.
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[[AC: Opposites Attract]]
* Pacifica is making an effort be nicer, including not insulting ''Crying Breakfast Friends''.
* Rises Jasper gives Amethyst a ''much''-needed YouAreBetterThanYouThinkYouAre speech, since the latter is still smarting from what happened in "Crack The Whip".
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[[AC: Catch The Whip]]
* Mabel fawning over a kitten that crawled into Peridot's hair.
* Stan asking if Amethyst is alright after she sees Convenper defeating Jasper.
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[[AC: The New Stan]]
* Stan admits that, while he ''is'' upset that Steven basically hijacked his body, he's willing to let it slide once he figured out Steven did so by accident and only because he wanted Stan to get closer to his brother.
* Stan admits that, while he ''is'' upset that Steven basically hijacked his body, he's willing to let it slide once he figured out Steven did so by accident and only because he wanted Stan to get closer to his brother.
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* Stan letting Dipper fight Malachite, realizing that Dipper is doing what he did with trying to save his brother after 30 years.
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* While Pearl and Amethyst are angry at Dipper for disobeying their orders for Dipper to stay behind, Garnet praises Dipper for not giving up in trying to save Lapis and thanks him.
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[[AC: Friend Ship]]
* When Peridot makes a joke about how only a Pearl could fall for her hologram trick, which causes Pearl to have a mini breakdown, Ford and the kids try to offer some comfort to her.
* Amethyst admits that Ford's plan to use her whips to cut off the ship's power was pretty cool (though she playfully attempts to take back said statement). Especially when you consider how cold (or, at the very least, indifferent) Amethyst has been towards Ford since his return.
* After Garnet and Pearl escape from the cramped pit, Garnet tells Ford that they're thankful for him trying to prevent their inevitable demises.
* When Peridot makes a joke about how only a Pearl could fall for her hologram trick, which causes Pearl to have a mini breakdown, Ford and the kids try to offer some comfort to her.
* Amethyst admits that Ford's plan to use her whips to cut off the ship's power was pretty cool (though she playfully attempts to take back said statement). Especially when you consider how cold (or, at the very least, indifferent) Amethyst has been towards Ford since his return.
* After Garnet and Pearl escape from the cramped pit, Garnet tells Ford that they're thankful for him trying to prevent their inevitable demises.
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* While Connie and Dipper ''are'' disappointed with Steven for even considering erasing their memories of Bill, they let it slide because they knew Steven was just trying to help them.
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* After near-perpetual bickering with each other, Stan and Pearl finally have a pep talk with each other that allows the two to get more connected.
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* Dipper finally breaks down after Mable, Steven, and Connie get him to confess how he has been feeling since the events of "Sock Opera". It's both a tearjerker and a heartwarming moment as the trio embrace Dipper in a gentle hug and Dipper realizes that they're there to help him when he needs it.
* Dipper accepting Steven'shealing.
healing after denying it several times beforehand.
* Dipper accepting Steven's
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** Despite how he felt about Rose, the fact that Stan ''never'' held that against her son, despite being an annoyance to him, is quite touching.
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** Despite how he felt about Rose, the fact that Stan ''never'' held that against her son, despite being as much of an annoyance to he may be for him, is quite touching.
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* At the end of the chapter, after Stan confides that Ford is making him move out of the Mystery Shack at the end of the summer, Greg is all too willing to return the favor and give Stan some money in case he needs it.
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[[AC: Greg the Babysitter]]
* While Stan does let Greg go from the Mystery Shack, it's mostly so he can take the money Stan loaned him and make something of his life elsewhere.
-->'''Stan:''' You just need someone to give you a chance. And well, even if nobody ever really gave me a chance when I was younger, that doesn’t mean I can’t be the one to do that for you.
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* Steven is the only one who's against using the mind-control tie on Stan. Eventually he couldn't it anymore and told Stan the truth.
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* Steven is the only one who's against using the mind-control tie on Stan. Eventually he couldn't it anymore and told Stan the truth.
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-->'''Steven:''' We can’t stick around here and fight in a futuristic battle to the death, no matter how cool that kinda sounds. What about Soos?
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-->'''Steven:''' We can’t can't stick around here and fight in a futuristic battle to the death, no matter how cool that kinda sounds. What about Soos?
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-->'''Garnet:''' Greg. Don’t sell yourself short. You may still be new at this, but if it’s any consolation, so are we. You spent all day looking for Steven, and I’m willing to bet it was all worth it to come back here and see him safe and sound.
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-->'''Garnet:''' Greg. Don’t Don't sell yourself short. You may still be new at this, but if it’s it's any consolation, so are we. You spent all day looking for Steven, and I’m I'm willing to bet it was all worth it to come back here and see him safe and sound.
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[[AC:The Dinner Shack]]
* After the dinner became a disaster and Connie apologized to Steven and the twins for the way she acted, the twins also apologize for not trying hard enough to get Stan to behave.
[[AC:The Dinner Shack]]
* After the dinner became a disaster and Connie apologized to Steven and the twins for the way she acted, the twins also apologize for not trying hard enough to get Stan to behave.
