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* When Rue asks Zoe, "No magical girl title yet?", Zoe smiles and says, "…Nah, I'm pretty happy with just this name for now." Knowing that Zoe is trans, this line holds deeper meaning.
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* [[https://www.sleeplessdomain.com/comic/chapter-13-page-27 When Rue asks Zoe, Zoe]], "No magical girl title yet?", Zoe smiles and says, "…Nah, I'm pretty happy with just this name for now." Knowing that Zoe is trans, this line holds deeper meaning.
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* Undine finds out about Kicks and immediately wants to meet her.
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* Undine's parents are right there in the front row to support their daughter. Kokoro's dad is there too, even if he's in the back row trying to be inconspicuous.
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[[AC: Chapter 21]]
* Undine and Kokoro transforming together, in which the joy they feel in each other's presence is palpable. And the transformation revealed Undine's back bow is starting to take on similar characteristics as Kokoro's scarf.
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* Rue reassures Zoe that it's okay to be afraid and tells her that even if she never fights again, she's officially saved one person, which is more than most people can say.
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* Rue reassures Zoe that it's okay to be afraid and tells her that even if she never fights again, she's officially saved one person, which is more than most people can say. Zoe takes a moment to absorb that and smiles to herself before following Rue, looking at peace for the first time since the start of their conversation, like a weight has been lifted from her.
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* In the interstitial, there's someone just plain adorable about Kokoro encouraging baby Kicks to drink the milk.
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* In the interstitial, there's someone something just plain adorable about Kokoro encouraging baby Kicks to drink the milk.milk.
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-->'''Kokoro:''' Go, baby, go!
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* In the interstitial, there's someone just plain adorable about Kokoro encouraging baby Kicks to drink the milk.
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* In the flashback, Mingxing vowing to get baby Kokoro to a hospital with her SuperSpeed, despite ''just'' losing her arm and facing the prospect of running out of magic (which does happen). [[https://www.sleeplessdomain.com/comic/chapter-17-page-34 As she lies on the ground]] just outside the hospital, hospital staff rushing around her, she makes eye contact with Kokoro and smiles, and it's clear she considers it {{worth it}}.
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* In the flashback, Mingxing vowing to get baby Kokoro to a hospital with her SuperSpeed, despite ''just'' losing her arm and facing the prospect of running out of magic (which does happen). [[https://www.sleeplessdomain.com/comic/chapter-17-page-34 As she lies on the ground]] just outside the hospital, hospital staff rushing around her, her and the magic fading from her body, she makes eye contact with Kokoro and smiles, and it's clear she considers it {{worth it}}.
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* In the flashback, Mingxing vowing to get baby Kokoro to a hospital with her SuperSpeed, despite ''just'' losing her arm and facing the prospect of running out of magic (which does happen). As she lies outside on the ground just outside the hospital, hospital staff rushing around her, she makes eye contact with Kokoro and smiles, and it's clear she considers it WorthIt.
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* In the flashback, Mingxing vowing to get baby Kokoro to a hospital with her SuperSpeed, despite ''just'' losing her arm and facing the prospect of running out of magic (which does happen). [[https://www.sleeplessdomain.com/comic/chapter-17-page-34 As she lies outside on the ground ground]] just outside the hospital, hospital staff rushing around her, she makes eye contact with Kokoro and smiles, and it's clear she considers it WorthIt.{{worth it}}.
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* In the flashback, Mingxing vowing to get baby Kokoro to a hospital with her SuperSpeed, despite ''just'' losing her arm and facing the prospect of running out of magic (which does happen).
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* In the flashback, Mingxing vowing to get baby Kokoro to a hospital with her SuperSpeed, despite ''just'' losing her arm and facing the prospect of running out of magic (which does happen). As she lies outside on the ground just outside the hospital, hospital staff rushing around her, she makes eye contact with Kokoro and smiles, and it's clear she considers it WorthIt.
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* Uudine tackling HP in a hug after she returns from meeting Tessa-Goops and nearly disappearing.
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* Uudine Undine tackling HP in a hug after she returns from meeting Tessa-Goops and nearly disappearing.
