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* Nyx asks Twilight if she's in trouble for sneaking out. Twilight says she is…but that her reasons for grounding her were wrong so they should just enjoy the night right now.
* Near the end of chapter 6, after Nyx figures out that she doesn't have any blood relatives after Twilight confesses that Nyx is the product of a spell meant to bring back Nightmare Moon, Twilight Sparkle makes it all better for her by explaining that she doesn't need to have relatives to have a family. The crowner is when, after telling Nyx that Spike and Owlowiscious are brothers to her, Twilight contemplates her relationship with Nyx.
* Near the end of chapter 6, after Nyx figures out that she doesn't have any blood relatives after Twilight confesses that Nyx is the product of a spell meant to bring back Nightmare Moon, Twilight Sparkle makes it all better for her by explaining that she doesn't need to have relatives to have a family. The crowner is when, after telling Nyx that Spike and Owlowiscious are brothers to her, Twilight contemplates her relationship with Nyx.
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* Nyx asks Twilight if she's in trouble for sneaking out. Twilight says she is…but is...but that her reasons for grounding her were wrong so they should just enjoy the night right now.
* Near the end ofchapter Chapter 6, after Nyx figures out that she doesn't have any blood relatives after Twilight confesses that Nyx is the product of a spell meant to bring back Nightmare Moon, Twilight Sparkle makes it all better for her by explaining that she doesn't need to have relatives to have a family. The crowner is when, after telling Nyx that Spike and Owlowiscious are brothers to her, Twilight contemplates her relationship with Nyx.
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-->'''Nyx:''' You promise you won’t let her banish me, but I’m still scared. If we’re going to release Celestia and Luna, and if you can’t stop them, I want one last memory. Just one last, good memory…something I can hold onto if the worst should happen.
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-->'''Nyx:''' You promise you won’t won't let her banish me, but I’m still scared. If we’re we're going to release Celestia and Luna, and if you can’t stop them, I want one last memory. Just one last, good memory…something I can hold onto if the worst should happen.
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--> '''Twilight Sparkle''': “Because, Nyx, I’m your mother, and a mother will always love her daughter, no matter what.”
* Nyx reminiscing with Celestia about why celery soup and daffodil sandwiches are her favorite foods. They aren't particularly fancy, and they don't taste anything exceptional, but they were still the first things Twilight offered for her to eat when she first came to the library.
* Nyx reminiscing with Celestia about why celery soup and daffodil sandwiches are her favorite foods. They aren't particularly fancy, and they don't taste anything exceptional, but they were still the first things Twilight offered for her to eat when she first came to the library.
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--> '''Twilight Sparkle''': “Because, '''Twilight''': Because, Nyx, I’m your mother, and a mother will always love her daughter, no matter what.”
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* Nyx reminiscing with Celestia about why celery soup and daffodil sandwiches are her favorite foods. They aren't particularly fancy, and they don't taste anything exceptional, but they were still the first things Twilight offered for her to eat when she first came to thelibrary.library.
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* Nyx reminiscing with Celestia about why celery soup and daffodil sandwiches are her favorite foods. They aren't particularly fancy, and they don't taste anything exceptional, but they were still the first things Twilight offered for her to eat when she first came to the
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* It's a small one in the grand scheme of things; but this troper found Nightmare!Nyx ordering that Twilight Sparkle be well taken care of even if she was her prisoner to be both touching and telling about her true character.
** For that matter, Nightmare!Nyx forgiving the Mane Cast [[AndZoidberg and Trixie]] for their attempt to stop her is also a bit telling. To say nothing of her restoring a dummy of Twilight Sparkle and sleeping with it in her hooves while [[WoobieDestroyerOfWorlds weeping for her mother]]. One begins to wonder if Nightmare Moon's heart is really in it.
** For that matter, Nightmare!Nyx forgiving the Mane Cast [[AndZoidberg and Trixie]] for their attempt to stop her is also a bit telling. To say nothing of her restoring a dummy of Twilight Sparkle and sleeping with it in her hooves while [[WoobieDestroyerOfWorlds weeping for her mother]]. One begins to wonder if Nightmare Moon's heart is really in it.
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* Nyx asks Twilight if she's in trouble for sneaking out. Twilight says she is... but that her reasons for grounding her were wrong so they should just enjoy the night right now.
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* Nyx asks Twilight if she's in trouble for sneaking out. Twilight says she is... but is…but that her reasons for grounding her were wrong so they should just enjoy the night right now.
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-->'''Twilight Sparkle:''' Well... Nyx... if I was really honest... I’d say...(Twilight had to swallow, the words getting caught on the knot in her throat) That... I’m like... well... your mother.
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-->'''Twilight Sparkle:''' Well... Nyx... if Well…Nyx…if I was really honest... I’d say...(Twilight honest…I’d say…(Twilight had to swallow, the words getting caught on the knot in her throat) That... I’m like... well... your That…I’m like…well…your mother.
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-->'''Twilight:''' I’d love to be your mother... if you’d let me?
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-->'''Twilight:''' I’d love to be your mother... if mother…if you’d let me?
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** For that matter, Nightmare!Nyx forgiving the mane cast [[AndZoidberg and Trixie]] for their attempt to stop her is also a bit telling. To say nothing of her restoring a dummy of Twilight Sparkle and sleeping with it in her hooves while [[WoobieDestroyerOfWorlds weeping for her mother]]. One begins to wonder if Nightmare Moon's heart is really in it.
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** For that matter, Nightmare!Nyx forgiving the mane cast Mane Cast [[AndZoidberg and Trixie]] for their attempt to stop her is also a bit telling. To say nothing of her restoring a dummy of Twilight Sparkle and sleeping with it in her hooves while [[WoobieDestroyerOfWorlds weeping for her mother]]. One begins to wonder if Nightmare Moon's heart is really in it.
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-->'''Nyx:''' You promise you won’t let her banish me, but I’m still scared. If we’re going to release Celestia and Luna, and if you can’t stop them, I want one last memory. Just one last, good memory... something I can hold onto if the worst should happen.
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-->'''Nyx:''' You promise you won’t let her banish me, but I’m still scared. If we’re going to release Celestia and Luna, and if you can’t stop them, I want one last memory. Just one last, good memory... something memory…something I can hold onto if the worst should happen.
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-->'''Nyx:''' That... that does sound nice, and... after we eat... could we read a book together, like we used to?
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-->'''Nyx:''' That... that That…that does sound nice, and... after and…after we eat... could eat…could we read a book together, like we used to?
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-->'''Nyx:''' You pick, Twilight... you always pick the best stories.
** Cheerilee giving Twilight drawings and get well cards all the foals made for Nightmare!Nyx for saving them... I'm sorry, [[SandInMyEyes I Have Something In My Eye...]]
** Cheerilee giving Twilight drawings and get well cards all the foals made for Nightmare!Nyx for saving them... I'm sorry, [[SandInMyEyes I Have Something In My Eye...]]
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-->'''Nyx:''' You pick, Twilight... you Twilight…you always pick the best stories.
** Cheerilee giving Twilight drawings and get well cards all the foals made for Nightmare!Nyx for savingthem... I'm them…I'm sorry, [[SandInMyEyes I Have Something In My Eye...]]
** Cheerilee giving Twilight drawings and get well cards all the foals made for Nightmare!Nyx for saving
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** Cheelilee giving Twilight drawings and get well cards all the foals made for Nightmare!Nyx for saving them... I'm sorry, [[SandInMyEyes I Have Something In My Eye...]]
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** Cheelilee Cheerilee giving Twilight drawings and get well cards all the foals made for Nightmare!Nyx for saving them... I'm sorry, [[SandInMyEyes I Have Something In My Eye...]]
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--> '''Twilight Sparkle''': “Because, Nyx, I’m your mother, and a mother will always love her daughter, no matter what.”
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--> '''Twilight Sparkle''': “Because, Nyx, I’m your mother, and a mother will always love her daughter, no matter what.””
* Nyx reminiscing with Celestia about why celery soup and daffodil sandwiches are her favorite foods. They aren't particularly fancy, and they don't taste anything exceptional, but they were still the first things Twilight offered for her to eat when she first came to the library.
* Nyx reminiscing with Celestia about why celery soup and daffodil sandwiches are her favorite foods. They aren't particularly fancy, and they don't taste anything exceptional, but they were still the first things Twilight offered for her to eat when she first came to the library.
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* It's over, and everything's alright. Nyx is ''just'' Nyx again. The sweet little filly she deserves to be. Break out the party favours.
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* It's over, and everything's alright. Nyx is ''just'' Nyx again. The sweet little filly she deserves to be. Break out the party favours.favours.
* This gem:
--> '''Twilight Sparkle''': “Because, Nyx, I’m your mother, and a mother will always love her daughter, no matter what.”
* This gem:
--> '''Twilight Sparkle''': “Because, Nyx, I’m your mother, and a mother will always love her daughter, no matter what.”
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* The Cutie Mark Crusaders taking an insane risk and sneaking into the castle to help the pony they still see as their friend, and Nightmare!Nyx seeing to it that they're safe.
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** And later, Nightmare!Nyx releasing the CMC as part of a birthday gift to Twist.
