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* In the first chapter, after [[color:green:Lyra]] (however briefly) convinces Twilight of their past friendship, Twi helps her finish Lunar Elegy #7 and gives her a much-needed hug.
** More generally, Twilight's sincere desperation to help her forgotten friend out of her situation, which [[color:green: Lyra]] remarks upon:
** More generally, Twilight's sincere desperation to help her forgotten friend out of her situation, which [[color:green: Lyra]] remarks upon:
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* In the first chapter, after [[color:green:Lyra]] Lyra (however briefly) convinces Twilight of their past friendship, Twi helps her finish Lunar Elegy #7 and gives her a much-needed hug.
** More generally, Twilight's sincere desperation to help her forgotten friend out of her situation, which[[color:green: Lyra]] Lyra remarks upon:
** More generally, Twilight's sincere desperation to help her forgotten friend out of her situation, which
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* At the end of the first day of her cursed life, [[color:green:Lyra]] decides to try and kill herself. A passing stallion manages to [[TalkingDownTheSuicidal talk her out of it]] when [[color:green:Lyra]] asks him why she shouldn't end her nightmare and he replies:
-->[[color:green:Because you are so special, so precious, and this world would be a lot less worth enjoying if you chose to leave it.]]
* Applejack in Chapter III, when she feeds a freezing, starving and desperate [[color:green:Lyra]] and carries her back to Sweet Apple Acres to rest and heal up. Although it doesn't last, she later helps [[color:green:Lyra]] build her own cottage to keep warm.
* In Chapter IX, [[color:green:Lyra]] is returned to Ponyville after discovering the effects of the ''Threnody of Night'', and is found by the unnamed village confectioner ([[spoiler: Bon Bon]]), who brings her inside and warms her by her oven. At this point [[color:green:Lyra]] is on the verge of another DespairEventHorizon, after her brief experience in the Realm of the Unsung and having now discovered a ninth elegy in her head. This exchange occurs after a few minutes in the confectionary.
-->[[color:green:Because you are so special, so precious, and this world would be a lot less worth enjoying if you chose to leave it.]]
* Applejack in Chapter III, when she feeds a freezing, starving and desperate [[color:green:Lyra]] and carries her back to Sweet Apple Acres to rest and heal up. Although it doesn't last, she later helps [[color:green:Lyra]] build her own cottage to keep warm.
* In Chapter IX, [[color:green:Lyra]] is returned to Ponyville after discovering the effects of the ''Threnody of Night'', and is found by the unnamed village confectioner ([[spoiler: Bon Bon]]), who brings her inside and warms her by her oven. At this point [[color:green:Lyra]] is on the verge of another DespairEventHorizon, after her brief experience in the Realm of the Unsung and having now discovered a ninth elegy in her head. This exchange occurs after a few minutes in the confectionary.
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* At the end of the first day of her cursed life, [[color:green:Lyra]] Lyra decides to try and kill herself. A passing stallion manages to [[TalkingDownTheSuicidal talk her out of it]] when [[color:green:Lyra]] Lyra asks him why she shouldn't end her nightmare and he replies:
-->[[color:green:Because -->Because you are so special, so precious, and this world would be a lot less worth enjoying if you chose to leave it.]]
* Applejack in Chapter III, when she feeds a freezing, starving and desperate[[color:green:Lyra]] Lyra and carries her back to Sweet Apple Acres to rest and heal up. Although it doesn't last, she later helps [[color:green:Lyra]] Lyra build her own cottage to keep warm.
* In Chapter IX,[[color:green:Lyra]] Lyra is returned to Ponyville after discovering the effects of the ''Threnody of Night'', and is found by the unnamed village confectioner ([[spoiler: Bon Bon]]), who brings her inside and warms her by her oven. At this point [[color:green:Lyra]] Lyra is on the verge of another DespairEventHorizon, after her brief experience in the Realm of the Unsung and having now discovered a ninth elegy in her head. This exchange occurs after a few minutes in the confectionary.
* Applejack in Chapter III, when she feeds a freezing, starving and desperate
* In Chapter IX,
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-->'''[[color:green:Lyra]]''': I... I fell... just outside, remember? And... and you brought me in. You insisted...
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-->'''[[color:green:Lyra]]''': You... You ''forgot about me''... You forgot how I came here... and yet... and y-yet you ''still'' took care of me?”
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* At the end of Chapter XIII, Al, a cat that [[color:green:Lyra]] had been taking care of through the chapter and just gave up to make sure he could have a better life, runs away from [[FriendtoAllLivingThings Fluttershy]] across all of Ponyville to go back home to [[color:green:Lyra]].
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* At the end of Chapter XIII, Al, a cat that [[color:green:Lyra]] Lyra had been taking care of through the chapter and just gave up to make sure he could have a better life, runs away from [[FriendtoAllLivingThings Fluttershy]] across all of Ponyville to go back home to [[color:green:Lyra]].Lyra.
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-->'''[[color:green:Lyra]]''': You... You forgot about me... You forgot how I came here... and yet... and y-yet you still took care of me?”
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-->'''[[color:green:Lyra]]''': You... You forgot ''forgot about me...me''... You forgot how I came here... and yet... and y-yet you still ''still'' took care of me?”
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* In Chapter IX, [[color:green:Lyra]] is returned to Ponyville after discovering the effects of the ''Threnody of Night'', and is found by the unnamed village confectioner ([[spoiler: Bon Bon]]), who brings her inside and warms her by her oven. At this point [[color:green:Lyra]] is on the verge of another DespairEventHorizon, after her brief experience in purgatory and having now discovered a ninth elegy in her head. This exchange occurs after a few minutes in the confectionary.
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* In Chapter IX, [[color:green:Lyra]] is returned to Ponyville after discovering the effects of the ''Threnody of Night'', and is found by the unnamed village confectioner ([[spoiler: Bon Bon]]), who brings her inside and warms her by her oven. At this point [[color:green:Lyra]] is on the verge of another DespairEventHorizon, after her brief experience in purgatory the Realm of the Unsung and having now discovered a ninth elegy in her head. This exchange occurs after a few minutes in the confectionary.
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* Applejack in Chapter III, when she feeds a freezing, starving and desperate [[color:green:Lyra]] and carries her back to Sweet Apple Acres to rest and heal up. Although it doesn't last, she later helps [[color:green:Lyra]] build her own cottage to keep warm.
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* At the end of Chapter XIII, Al, a cat that [[color:green:Lyra]] had been taking care of through the chapter and just gave up to make sure he could have a better life, runs away from [[FriendtoAllLivingThings Fluttershy]] across all of Ponyville to go back home to [[color:green:Lyra]].
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* At the end of Chapter XIII, Al, a cat that [[color:green:Lyra]] had been taking care of through the chapter and just gave up to make sure he could have a better life, runs away from [[FriendtoAllLivingThings Fluttershy]] across all of Ponyville to go back home to [[color:green:Lyra]].[[color:green:Lyra]].
* In Chapter XVII, the reconciliation between Scarlet and [[spoiler: her estranged mother, Mayor Mare.]]
* In Chapter XVII, the reconciliation between Scarlet and [[spoiler: her estranged mother, Mayor Mare.]]
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* At the end of Chapter XIII, Al, a cat that [[color:green:Lyra]] had been taking care of through the chapter and just gave up to make sure he could have a better life, runs away from [FriendtoAllLivingThings Fluttershy] across all of Ponyville to go back home to [[color:green:Lyra]].
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* At the end of Chapter XIII, Al, a cat that [[color:green:Lyra]] had been taking care of through the chapter and just gave up to make sure he could have a better life, runs away from [FriendtoAllLivingThings Fluttershy] [[FriendtoAllLivingThings Fluttershy]] across all of Ponyville to go back home to [[color:green:Lyra]].
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-->'''[[spoiler: Bon Bon]]''': And why wouldn't I? You're a pony in need. Isn't that what matters?
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-->'''[[spoiler: Bon Bon]]''': And why wouldn't I? You're a pony in need. Isn't that what matters?matters?
* At the end of Chapter XIII, Al, a cat that [[color:green:Lyra]] had been taking care of through the chapter and just gave up to make sure he could have a better life, runs away from [FriendtoAllLivingThings Fluttershy] across all of Ponyville to go back home to [[color:green:Lyra]].
* At the end of Chapter XIII, Al, a cat that [[color:green:Lyra]] had been taking care of through the chapter and just gave up to make sure he could have a better life, runs away from [FriendtoAllLivingThings Fluttershy] across all of Ponyville to go back home to [[color:green:Lyra]].
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* At the end of the first day of her cursed life, [[color:green:Lyra]] decides to try and kill herself. A passing stallion manages to [[TalkingDownTheSuicidal talk her out of it]] when [[color:green:Lyra]] asks him why she shouldn't end her nightmare and he replies:
-->[[color:green:Because you are so special, so precious, and this world would be a lot less worth enjoying if you chose to leave it.]]
-->[[color:green:Because you are so special, so precious, and this world would be a lot less worth enjoying if you chose to leave it.]]
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* In Chapter IX, [[color:green:Lyra]] is returned to Ponyville after discovering the effects of the ''Threnody of Night'', and is found by the unnamed village confectioner ([[spoiler: Bon Bon]]), who brings her inside and warms her by her oven. At this point [[color:green:Lyra]] is on the verge of another DespairEventHorizon, after her brief experience in and having now discovered a ninth elegy in her head. This exchange occurs after a few minutes in the confectionary.
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* In Chapter IX, [[color:green:Lyra]] is returned to Ponyville after discovering the effects of the ''Threnody of Night'', and is found by the unnamed village confectioner ([[spoiler: Bon Bon]]), who brings her inside and warms her by her oven. At this point [[color:green:Lyra]] is on the verge of another DespairEventHorizon, after her brief experience in purgatory and having now discovered a ninth elegy in her head. This exchange occurs after a few minutes in the confectionary.
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** More generally, Twilight's sincere desperation to help her forgotten friend out of her situation, which Lyra remarks upon: "Twilight was fumbling for ideas at this point. She was trembling all over. I will always admire her concern and sincerity when she comes to this point of “knowing,” but I also can't stand to see her so distraught. My only solace is that it never lasts long, and I knew it would only be a matter of time then."
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** More generally, Twilight's sincere desperation to help her forgotten friend out of her situation, which Lyra [[color:green: Lyra]] remarks upon: "Twilight upon:
-->"Twilight was fumbling for ideas at this point. She was trembling all over. I will always admire her concern and sincerity when she comes to this point of “knowing,” but I also can't stand to see her so distraught. My only solace is that it never lasts long, and I knew it would only be a matter of time then."
-->"Twilight was fumbling for ideas at this point. She was trembling all over. I will always admire her concern and sincerity when she comes to this point of “knowing,” but I also can't stand to see her so distraught. My only solace is that it never lasts long, and I knew it would only be a matter of time then."
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* In Chapter IX, [[color:green:Lyra]] is returned to Ponyville after discovering the effects of the ''Threnody of Night'', and is found by the unnamed village confectioner (read [[spoiler: Bon Bon]]), who brings her inside and warms her by her oven. At this point [[color:green:Lyra]] is on the verge of another DespairEventHorizon, after her brief experience in and having now discovered a ninth elegy in her head. This exchange occurs after a few minutes in the confectionary.
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** More generally, Twilight's sincere desperation to help her forgotten friend out of her situation, which Lyra remarks upon: "Twilight was fumbling for ideas at this point. She was trembling all over. I will always admire her concern and sincerity when she comes to this point of “knowing,” but I also can't stand to see her so distraught. My only solace is that it never lasts long, and I knew it would only be a matter of time then."
* In Chapter IX, [[color:green:Lyra]] is returned to Ponyville after discovering the effects of the ''Threnody of Night'', and is found by the unnamed village confectioner(read [[spoiler: ([[spoiler: Bon Bon]]), who brings her inside and warms her by her oven. At this point [[color:green:Lyra]] is on the verge of another DespairEventHorizon, after her brief experience in and having now discovered a ninth elegy in her head. This exchange occurs after a few minutes in the confectionary.
* In Chapter IX, [[color:green:Lyra]] is returned to Ponyville after discovering the effects of the ''Threnody of Night'', and is found by the unnamed village confectioner
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* In Chapter IX, [[color:green:Lyra]] is returned to Ponyville after discovering the effects of ''Twilight's Requiem'', and is found by the unnamed village confectioner (read [[spoiler: Bon Bon]]), who brings her inside and warms her by her oven. At this point [[color:green:Lyra]] is on the verge of another DespairEventHorizon, after discovering a ninth elegy. This exchange occurs after a few minutes.
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* In Chapter IX, [[color:green:Lyra]] is returned to Ponyville after discovering the effects of ''Twilight's Requiem'', the ''Threnody of Night'', and is found by the unnamed village confectioner (read [[spoiler: Bon Bon]]), who brings her inside and warms her by her oven. At this point [[color:green:Lyra]] is on the verge of another DespairEventHorizon, after discovering her brief experience in and having now discovered a ninth elegy. elegy in her head. This exchange occurs after a few minutes.minutes in the confectionary.
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* In Chapter IX, [[color:green:Lyra]] is returned to Ponyville after discovering the effects of ''Twilight's Requiem'', and is found by the unnamed village confectioner (read [[spoiler: Bon Bon]]), who brings her inside and warms her by her oven. At this point [[color:green:Lyra]] is on the verge of another DespairEventHorizon, after discovering a ninth elegy. This exchange after a few minutes.
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* In Chapter IX, [[color:green:Lyra]] is returned to Ponyville after discovering the effects of ''Twilight's Requiem'', and is found by the unnamed village confectioner (read [[spoiler: Bon Bon]]), who brings her inside and warms her by her oven. At this point [[color:green:Lyra]] is on the verge of another DespairEventHorizon, after discovering a ninth elegy. This exchange occurs after a few minutes.
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* In Chapter IX, [[color:green:Lyra]] is returned to Ponyville after discovering the effects of ''Twilight's Requiem'', and is found by the village confectioner Bon Bon, who brings her inside and warms her by the oven. At this point [[color:green:Lyra]] is on the verge of another DespairEventHorizon, after discovering a ninth elegy. This exchange occurs a few minutes later.
-->'''Bon Bon''': Now, don't be shy. I'm not mad at you in the least for trespassing, darling. The way I see it, life isn't so terrible that we must keep our painful experiences secret. So, would you like to tell me just what brought you here?
-->'''Bon Bon''': Now, don't be shy. I'm not mad at you in the least for trespassing, darling. The way I see it, life isn't so terrible that we must keep our painful experiences secret. So, would you like to tell me just what brought you here?
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* In Chapter IX, [[color:green:Lyra]] is returned to Ponyville after discovering the effects of ''Twilight's Requiem'', and is found by the unnamed village confectioner (read [[spoiler: Bon Bon, Bon]]), who brings her inside and warms her by the her oven. At this point [[color:green:Lyra]] is on the verge of another DespairEventHorizon, after discovering a ninth elegy. This exchange occurs after a few minutes later.
-->'''Bon Bon''':minutes.
-->'''[[spoiler: Bon Bon]]''': Now, don't be shy. I'm not mad at you in the least for trespassing, darling. The way I see it, life isn't so terrible that we must keep our painful experiences secret. So, would you like to tell me just what brought you here?
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-->'''[[spoiler: Bon Bon]]''': Now, don't be shy. I'm not mad at you in the least for trespassing, darling. The way I see it, life isn't so terrible that we must keep our painful experiences secret. So, would you like to tell me just what brought you here?
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-->'''Bon Bon''': And why wouldn't I? You're a pony in need. Isn't that what matters?
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* In Chapter IX, Lyra is returned to Ponyville after discovering the effects of ''Twilight's Requiem'', and is found by the village confectioner Bon Bon, who brings her inside and warms her by the oven. At this point Lyra is on the verge of another DespairEventHorizon, after discovering a ninth elegy. This exchange occurs a few minutes later.
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* In Chapter IX, Lyra [[color:green:Lyra]] is returned to Ponyville after discovering the effects of ''Twilight's Requiem'', and is found by the village confectioner Bon Bon, who brings her inside and warms her by the oven. At this point Lyra [[color:green:Lyra]] is on the verge of another DespairEventHorizon, after discovering a ninth elegy. This exchange occurs a few minutes later.
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-->'''Lyra''': I... I fell... just outside, remember? And... and you brought me in. You insisted...
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-->'''Lyra''': You... You forgot about me... You forgot how I came here... and yet... and y-yet you still took care of me?”
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* In the first chapter, after [[color:green:Lyra]] (however briefly) convinces Twilight of their past friendship, Twi helps her finish Lunar Elegy #7 and gives her a much needed hug.
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* In the first chapter, after [[color:green:Lyra]] (however briefly) convinces Twilight of their past friendship, Twi helps her finish Lunar Elegy #7 and gives her a much needed hug.much-needed hug.
* In Chapter IX, Lyra is returned to Ponyville after discovering the effects of ''Twilight's Requiem'', and is found by the village confectioner Bon Bon, who brings her inside and warms her by the oven. At this point Lyra is on the verge of another DespairEventHorizon, after discovering a ninth elegy. This exchange occurs a few minutes later.
-->'''Bon Bon''': Now, don't be shy. I'm not mad at you in the least for trespassing, darling. The way I see it, life isn't so terrible that we must keep our painful experiences secret. So, would you like to tell me just what brought you here?
-->'''Lyra''': I... I fell... just outside, remember? And... and you brought me in. You insisted...
-->'''Bon Bon''': Did I, now?
-->'''Lyra''': You... You forgot about me... You forgot how I came here... and yet... and y-yet you still took care of me?”
-->'''Bon Bon''': And why wouldn't I? You're a pony in need. Isn't that what matters?
* In Chapter IX, Lyra is returned to Ponyville after discovering the effects of ''Twilight's Requiem'', and is found by the village confectioner Bon Bon, who brings her inside and warms her by the oven. At this point Lyra is on the verge of another DespairEventHorizon, after discovering a ninth elegy. This exchange occurs a few minutes later.
-->'''Bon Bon''': Now, don't be shy. I'm not mad at you in the least for trespassing, darling. The way I see it, life isn't so terrible that we must keep our painful experiences secret. So, would you like to tell me just what brought you here?
-->'''Lyra''': I... I fell... just outside, remember? And... and you brought me in. You insisted...
-->'''Bon Bon''': Did I, now?
-->'''Lyra''': You... You forgot about me... You forgot how I came here... and yet... and y-yet you still took care of me?”
-->'''Bon Bon''': And why wouldn't I? You're a pony in need. Isn't that what matters?
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* In the first chapter, after [[color:green:Lyra]] (however briefly) convinces Twilight of their past friendship, Twi helps her finish Lunar Elegy #7 and gives her a much needed hug.
