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-->'''Jar Jar:''' GENERAL!? ''[Faints almost immediately, to Boss Nass's amusement.]''
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-->'''Jar Jar:''' GENERAL!? ''[Faints GENERAL?! ''[faints almost immediately, to Boss Nass's amusement.]''
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** His reaction to the Colo Claw-Fish when the power comes on afterwards is also priceless.
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** His reaction to the Colo Claw-Fish Claw Fish when the power comes on afterwards is also priceless.
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Figured that I might as well add in the creature’s name.
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** His reaction to the giant eel-thing when the power comes on afterwards is also priceless.
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** His reaction to the giant eel-thing Colo Claw-Fish when the power comes on afterwards is also priceless.
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* Jar Jar's rather sensible reaction to Qui-Gon's assured "We're not in trouble yet.":
--> '''Jar Jar:''' What "yet"?! Monsters out dere, leakin' in here, all sinkin' and no power? ''When are yousa THINKIN' wesa in trouble?!?!?!''
--> '''Jar Jar:''' What "yet"?! Monsters out dere, leakin' in here, all sinkin' and no power? ''When are yousa THINKIN' wesa in trouble?!?!?!''
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* Jar Jar's [[DumbassHasAPoint rather sensible reaction reaction]] to Qui-Gon's assured "We're not in trouble yet.":
--> '''Jar Jar:''' What "yet"?! Monsters out dere, leakin' in here, all sinkin' and no power?''When ''[[TemptingFate When are yousa THINKIN' wesa in trouble?!?!?!''trouble?!?!?!]]''
--> '''Jar Jar:''' What "yet"?! Monsters out dere, leakin' in here, all sinkin' and no power?
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'''Jar Jar:''' AUGH, monster's back!!!
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'''Jar Jar:''' [[OhCrap AUGH, monster's back!!!back!!!]]
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Ditto.
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* Jar Jar's rude table manners at Anakin's home is pretty hard to get through without a laugh, especially when Qui-Gon swiftly grabs Jar Jar's tongue and says to him sternly but also deadpan not to do that again.
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I wanted to remove a redundant section.
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* Qui-Gon getting a NoSell from Watto on his JediMindTrick. The brief pause before he attempts a second less subtle one is funny enough, but when Watto explains that the trick won't work on him, Qui-Gon then just looks embarrassed that not only does he have to find another solution to the hyperdrive problem, but he can't believe this flying goblin made his master Jedi powers look like worthless party tricks.
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** What makes this even better is that upon Watto's rebuttal, Qui-Gon then just looks embarrassed that not only does he have to find another solution to the hyperdrive problem, but he can't believe this flying goblin made his master Jedi powers look like worthless party tricks.
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** The [[OhCrap weird froglike noises]] Ratts makes [[DeathAsComedy seconds before he crashed]]. [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=p12o-Dno35M Just hear it]].
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* In many levels, the player can [[AnyoneCanDie kill anyone]] from [[AssholeVictim thugs]] to [[VideoGameCrueltyPotential innocent civilians]], [[even children]]. Killing a major character, however, [[VideoGameCrueltyPunishment results in a game over]]. Some of the NPC reactions to the killing sprees are hilarious.
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* In many levels, the player can [[AnyoneCanDie kill anyone]] from [[AssholeVictim thugs]] to [[VideoGameCrueltyPotential innocent civilians]], [[even [[WouldHurtAChild even children]]. Killing a major character, however, [[VideoGameCrueltyPunishment results in a game over]]. Some of the NPC reactions to the killing sprees are hilarious.
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* In many levels, the player can [[VideoGameCrueltyPotential kill anyone from thugs to innocent civilians, even children]]. Killing a major character, however, [[VideoGameCrueltyPunishment results in a game over]]. Some of the NPC reactions to the killing sprees are hilarious.
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* In many levels, the player can [[AnyoneCanDie kill anyone]] from [[AssholeVictim thugs]] to [[VideoGameCrueltyPotential kill anyone from thugs to innocent civilians, even civilians]], [[even children]]. Killing a major character, however, [[VideoGameCrueltyPunishment results in a game over]]. Some of the NPC reactions to the killing sprees are hilarious.
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* Outside of the Mos Espa Arena, Qui-Gon can talk to a dried chokie vendor about acquiring a thermal detonator. If Qui-Gon tells him that he's doing farm construction and that he's helping a friend doing this, the vendor will direct him to another merchant in the pavilion selling dweezel and pallie. Qui-Gon can go to this merchant and mind trick him into accepting republic credits for the detonator.
** If Qui-Gon asks the dweezel and pallie merchant for a plasma fusion trigger, he'll get this response:
--->'''Merchant''': Nah, I couldn't possibly sell you an illegal plasma fusion trigger. Are you trying to start a war or something?
** If Qui-Gon asks the dweezel and pallie merchant for a plasma fusion trigger, he'll get this response:
--->'''Merchant''': Nah, I couldn't possibly sell you an illegal plasma fusion trigger. Are you trying to start a war or something?
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* Outside of the Mos Espa Arena, Qui-Gon can talk to a dried chokie vendor about acquiring a thermal detonator. If Qui-Gon tells him that he's doing farm construction and that he's helping a friend doing this, the vendor will direct him to another merchant in the pavilion Anabar who's selling dweezel and pallie. pallie in the pavilion. Qui-Gon can go to this merchant Anabar and mind trick him into accepting republic credits for the detonator.
** If Qui-Gon asksthe dweezel and pallie merchant Anabar for a plasma fusion trigger, he'll get this response:
--->'''Merchant''': --->'''Anabar''': Nah, I couldn't possibly sell you an illegal plasma fusion trigger. Are you trying to start a war or something?
** If Qui-Gon asks
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-->'''Merchant''': Nah, I couldn't possibly sell you an illegal plasma fusion trigger. Are you trying to start a war or something?
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-->'''Jar Jar:''' GENERAL!?(faints almost immediately, to Boss Nass's amusement)
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-->'''Jar Jar:''' GENERAL!?(faints GENERAL!? ''[Faints almost immediately, to Boss Nass's amusement)amusement.]''
** What sells it is Boss Nass laughing and then casually stepping over Jar Jar to join the discussion taking place nearby.
** What sells it is Boss Nass laughing and then casually stepping over Jar Jar to join the discussion taking place nearby.
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* "[[CallForward We shall watch your career with great interest.]]"
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* "[[CallForward We shall will watch your career with great interest.]]"
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* Jar Jar’s rude table manners at Anakin's home is pretty hard to get through without a laugh, especially when Qui-Gon swiftly grabs Jar Jar’s tongue and says to him sternly but also deadpan not to do that again.
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* Jar Jar’s rude table manners at Anakin's home is pretty hard to get through without a laugh, especially when Qui-Gon swiftly grabs Jar Jar’s Jar's tongue and says to him sternly but also deadpan not to do that again.
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-->'''OOM Battle Droid Commander''': ''(Qui Gon and Obi Wan are leading the Queen, her handmaidens, and a number of guards toward the Queen's ship)'' Halt.
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-->'''OOM Battle Droid Commander''': ''(Qui Gon ''(Qui-Gon and Obi Wan are leading the Queen, her handmaidens, and a number of guards toward the Queen's ship)'' Halt.
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* Qui Gon, while cutting through the door to the bridge, has his work undone by a second set of doors closing on top of the one he's been cutting. The look on his face just screams, ''"Really?!"''
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* Qui Gon, Qui-Gon, while cutting through the door to the bridge, has his work undone by a second set of doors closing on top of the one he's been cutting. The look on his face just screams, ''"Really?!"''
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* Jar Jar’s rude table manners at Anakin’s home is pretty hard to get through without a laugh, especially when Qui Gonn swiftly grabs Jar Jar’s tongue and says to him sternly but also deadpan not to do that again.
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* Jar Jar’s rude table manners at Anakin’s Anakin's home is pretty hard to get through without a laugh, especially when Qui Gonn Qui-Gon swiftly grabs Jar Jar’s tongue and says to him sternly but also deadpan not to do that again.