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** Later, the aliens copy the technology he has on him, which inadvertently creates an AI that corrupts and destroys the entire data of the ship. The result is that a robot sent to dissect Snippy suddenly becomes convinced he is a pear that it must make into a salad. When he protests that he's human, it believes that he is a pear that wants to become human and [[MakesJustAsMuchSenseInContext becomes convinced it's]] [[WesternAnimation/TheLittleMermaid Ursula and starts singing "Poor, Unfortunate Souls"]] before shutting down.
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** Later, the aliens copy the technology he has on him, which inadvertently creates an AI that corrupts and destroys the entire data of the ship. The result is that a robot sent to dissect Snippy suddenly becomes convinced he is a pear that it must make into a salad. When he protests that he's human, it believes that he is a pear that wants to become human and [[MakesJustAsMuchSenseInContext becomes convinced it's]] [[WesternAnimation/TheLittleMermaid [[WesternAnimation/TheLittleMermaid1989 Ursula and starts singing "Poor, Unfortunate Souls"]] before shutting down.
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* When Zee Captain begins narrating his childhood experience, if you're looking you see he gave his can to the skeleton next to him to hold.
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* When Zee Captain begins narrating his childhood experience, if you're looking you see he gave his his[=/=]her can to the skeleton next to him to hold.hold. And then there's the story itself, which is about how a strange man tried to lure a young Captain into their van. When the man succeeded...
--> '''Man:''' I'm gonna suck out your precious eyeball fluids with this straw!
--> '''Man:''' I'm gonna suck out your precious eyeball fluids with this straw!
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** Later, the aliens copy the technology he has on him, which inadvertently creates an AI that corrupts and destroys the entire data of the ship. The result is that a robot sent to dissect Snippy suddenly becomes convinced he is a pear that it must make into a salad. When he protests that he's human, it believes that he is a pear that wants to become human and [[MakesJustAsMuchSenseInContext becomes convinced it's]] [[WesternAnimation/TheLittleMermaid Ursula and starts singing "Poor, Unfortunate Souls"]] before shutting down.
--> REMEMBER THIS! YOU ONLY HAVE THREE DAYS TO KISS THE PRINCE, OR YOU SHAN'T BE HUMAN ANYMORE!
--> REMEMBER THIS! YOU ONLY HAVE THREE DAYS TO KISS THE PRINCE, OR YOU SHAN'T BE HUMAN ANYMORE!
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* The [[spoiler: fizzy-drink cult]]. Zee captain pretending to be the prophet Lemonade.
* The pit of Sugary Suffering.
* The pit of Sugary Suffering.
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* The [[spoiler: fizzy-drink cult]]. cult]], and Zee captain Captain pretending to be the prophet Lemonade.
* ** The pit of Sugary Suffering.Suffering they throw him in when they cotton on that he's a fake. Captain escapes by drinking it all with a straw.
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* [[ShoutOut My captain always said]] [[ForrestGump life is like a box of chocolates]].
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* [[ShoutOut My captain always said]] [[ForrestGump [[Film/ForrestGump life is like a box of chocolates]].
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[[http://romanticallyapocalyptic.com/181 Cash Cab!]]
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* [[http://romanticallyapocalyptic.com/181 Cash Cab!]]
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* When ANNET's [[spoiler: massive hordes of cube bots]] starts [[http://romanticallyapocalyptic.com/169 masquerading]]:
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* When ANNET's [[spoiler: massive hordes of cube bots]] starts [[http://romanticallyapocalyptic.com/169 masquerading]]:
-->'''Pilot''' : It's raining gifts!
--> '''Snippy''' : [[DeadpanSnarker Here comes the flesh harvesting committee.]]
--> '''Captain''' : 'Tis but a sky advert. [[VisualPun Boxing Day]] must be upon us. And per ancient tradition, [[CasualDangerDialogue we must shop till we drop]]!
-->'''Pilot''' : It's raining gifts!
--> '''Snippy''' : [[DeadpanSnarker Here comes the flesh harvesting committee.]]
--> '''Captain''' : 'Tis but a sky advert. [[VisualPun Boxing Day]] must be upon us. And per ancient tradition, [[CasualDangerDialogue we must shop till we drop]]!
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* The Captain's plan to save Earth from being destroyed by a black hole? [[spoiler: Drink said black hole with a straw.]]
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* The pit of [[WhatDoYouMeanItsNotAwesome Sugary Suffering]].
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* The pit of [[WhatDoYouMeanItsNotAwesome Sugary Suffering]]. Suffering.
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* Mr. Snippy being threatened/attacked by a [[spoiler: malevolent snowflake]]. Yes, you read that correctly.
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* [[http://romanticallyapocalyptic.com/81shoes SHOOOOOOES!!!]]
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* [[http://ask-snippy.tumblr.com/post/19187678560 "Dance with ZEE CAPTAIN?"]]
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* The purse. "It summons cancer"
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** [[ImprovisedWeapon CAKED!]]
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* Zee captain's list: Pineapple, bathtub, umbrella, new lieutenant, mustache, a song, dental floss, love, etc..
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* Zee captain's list: Pineapple, bathtub, umbrella, new lieutenant, mustache, a song, dental floss, love, etc..etc.
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* [[ShoutOut My captain always said]] [[ForrestGump life is like a box of chocolates.]]
* [[http://romanticallyapocalyptic.com/16 GRAVITY.]] ''WHY'' DO U. DISOBEY. CAPTAIN.
* [[http://romanticallyapocalyptic.com/16 GRAVITY.]] ''WHY'' DO U. DISOBEY. CAPTAIN.
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* [[ShoutOut My captain always said]] [[ForrestGump life is like a box of chocolates.]]
chocolates]].
* [[http://romanticallyapocalyptic.com/16GRAVITY.]] GRAVITY]]. ''WHY'' DO U. DISOBEY. CAPTAIN.
* [[http://romanticallyapocalyptic.com/16
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** And then he gives the worm a ''name.'' Photoshop. [[WhoNamesTheirKidDude He named the worm Photoshop.]]
* [[http://romanticallyapocalyptic.com/70 Sandwich malfunction.]]
* [[http://romanticallyapocalyptic.com/23 "I kill you in the name of DELICIOUS!"]]
** And then he gives the worm a ''name.'' Photoshop. [[WhoNamesTheirKidDude He named the worm Photoshop.]]
* [[http://romanticallyapocalyptic.com/70 Sandwich malfunction.]]
* [[http://romanticallyapocalyptic.com/23 "I kill you in the name of DELICIOUS!"]]
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* Pilot tying balloons to seemingly everything he could find: a clock, a pair of headphones, one of the worm monsters, a pineapple ... and a boat.
**boat. And then he gives the worm a ''name.'' ''name''; Photoshop. [[WhoNamesTheirKidDude He named the worm Photoshop.]]
Photoshop]].
* [[http://romanticallyapocalyptic.com/70 Sandwichmalfunction.]]
malfunction]].
* [[http://romanticallyapocalyptic.com/23 "I kill you in the name ofDELICIOUS!"]]DELICIOUS!"]]
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* Zee Captain at McDonald's.
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* Zee Captain at McDonald's.[=McDonald=]'s.
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* Zee captain trying (and failing) to convince a skeleton that the moon landing never happened. Then trying to strangle it when it insults him.
* Zee captain trying to get connected to the internet on a computer without a screen, causing Mr. Snippy to take a photo of his epic failure ... [[HypocriticalHumor with a phone without a screen]].
* Pilot being all serious about the flying, and then you see he's piggy-backing on zee captain with a little toy airplane, whilst zee captain bemoans his back.
* When zee captain begins narrating his childhood experience, if you're looking you see he gave his can to the skeleton next to him to hold.
* Zee captain trying to get connected to the internet on a computer without a screen, causing Mr. Snippy to take a photo of his epic failure ... [[HypocriticalHumor with a phone without a screen]].
* Pilot being all serious about the flying, and then you see he's piggy-backing on zee captain with a little toy airplane, whilst zee captain bemoans his back.
* When zee captain begins narrating his childhood experience, if you're looking you see he gave his can to the skeleton next to him to hold.
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* Zee captain Captain trying (and failing) to convince a skeleton that the moon landing never happened. Then trying to strangle it when it insults him.
* Zeecaptain Captain trying to get connected to the internet on a computer without a screen, causing Mr. Snippy to take a photo of his epic failure ... [[HypocriticalHumor with a phone without a screen]].
** Considering Snippy's personality, that was probably sarcasm, but it's still totally hilarious. Especially with the smiling emoticon next to Captain's head.
* Pilot being all serious about the flying, and then you see he's piggy-backing onzee captain Zee Captain with a little toy airplane, whilst zee captain Zee Captain bemoans his back.
* Whenzee captain Zee Captain begins narrating his childhood experience, if you're looking you see he gave his can to the skeleton next to him to hold.
* Zee
** Considering Snippy's personality, that was probably sarcasm, but it's still totally hilarious. Especially with the smiling emoticon next to Captain's head.
* Pilot being all serious about the flying, and then you see he's piggy-backing on
* When
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* The jet-powered train. You can just imagine how Mr. Snippy voice would sound on the "Dear god, we're actually moving" line.
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* Zee captain Captain forgetting Mr. Snippy. It keeps cutting back to him getting more and more bored.
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* Zee captain Captain at Macdonald's.
McDonald's.
-->...oh and your [[http://romanticallyapocalyptic.com/14 drive through]] is broken, I had to walk in here like a common boob.
* Zeecaptain Captain sending the Geiger counter off the scale.scale.
-->Do I ''[[http://romanticallyapocalyptic.com/16 win?]]''
-->...oh and your [[http://romanticallyapocalyptic.com/14 drive through]] is broken, I had to walk in here like a common boob.
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-->Do I ''[[http://romanticallyapocalyptic.com/16 win?]]''
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* Zee captain Captain asking Mr. Snippy about Santa.
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* The [[ReplacementGoldfish new Mr. Snippy]]. Zee captain Captain talking to it about aliens and Santa.
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* Why does gravity disobey captain?[[http://romanticallyapocalyptic.com/16 GRAVITY.]] ''WHY'' DO U. DISOBEY. CAPTAIN.
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* [[http://romanticallyapocalyptic.com/70 Sandwich malfunction.]]
* [[http://romanticallyapocalyptic.com/23 "I kill you in the name of DELICIOUS!"]]
* [[http://romanticallyapocalyptic.com/23 "I kill you in the name of DELICIOUS!"]]
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** And then he gives the worm a ''name.'' Photoshop. [[WhoNamesTheirKidDude He named the worm Photoshop.]]
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** And then he gives the worm a ''name.'' Photoshop. [[WhoNamesTheirKidDude He named the worm Photoshop.]]]]
* Sandwich malfunction.
* Sandwich malfunction.
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* Pilot tying balloons to seemingly everything he could find: a clock, a pair of headphones, one of the worm monsters, a pineapple ... and a boat.
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* Pilot tying balloons to seemingly everything he could find: a clock, a pair of headphones, one of the worm monsters, a pineapple ... and a boat.boat.
** And then he gives the worm a ''name.'' Photoshop. [[WhoNamesTheirKidDude He named the worm Photoshop.]]
** And then he gives the worm a ''name.'' Photoshop. [[WhoNamesTheirKidDude He named the worm Photoshop.]]
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* Pilot being so crazy he shuts down the EldritchAbomination
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* Pilot being so crazy he shuts down the EldritchAbominationEldritchAbomination. And the resulting hallucination.
* Pilot tying balloons to seemingly everything he could find: a clock, a pair of headphones, one of the worm monsters, a pineapple ... and a boat.
* Pilot tying balloons to seemingly everything he could find: a clock, a pair of headphones, one of the worm monsters, a pineapple ... and a boat.
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* [[http://romanticallyapocalyptic.com/49 This]] ImagineSpot.
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* [[http://romanticallyapocalyptic.com/49 This]] ImagineSpot.ImagineSpot.
* Pilot being so crazy he shuts down the EldritchAbomination
* Pilot being so crazy he shuts down the EldritchAbomination
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* Zee captain sending the Geiger counter of the scale.
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* Zee captain sending the Geiger counter of off the scale.
