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--> '''Audrey''': Hello, deary…you'll pardon me for a moment."\\
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--> '''Audrey''': Hello, deary…you'll pardon me for a moment."\\\\
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--->'''Rarity:''' Mmm…oh, my…Why, Commodore Silverhooves, you're so forward…it's only our first date…”
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--->'''Rarity:''' Mmm…oh, my…Why, Commodore Silverhooves, you're so forward…it's only our first date…” date…
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--> '''Rainbow''': "APPLEJACK, QUIT TALKING TO YOUR BOYFRIEND, AND LET'S GET GOING!"
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--> '''Rainbow''': "APPLEJACK, APPLEJACK, QUIT TALKING TO YOUR BOYFRIEND, AND LET'S GET GOING!"GOING!
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'''Rainbow''': Huh, why-"\\
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'''Rainbow''': Huh, why-"\\why-\\
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--> '''Applejack''': '''ROPEY!''' I really ''can't'' lose you! [[CompanionCube Oh Ropey, you're the best rope ever!]] *hugs it*
--> '''Twilight''': Okay, now I ''have'' to hear this story.
--> '''Twilight''': Okay, now I ''have'' to hear this story.
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--> '''Applejack''': '''ROPEY!''' I really ''can't'' lose you! [[CompanionCube Oh Ropey, you're the best rope ever!]] *hugs it*
-->it*\\
'''Twilight''': Okay, now I ''have'' to hear this story.
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'''Twilight''': Okay, now I ''have'' to hear this story.
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--> '''Audrey''': Hello, deary…you'll pardon me for a moment."
--> '''Rainbow''': Huh, why-"
--> '''Audrey''': BOO!
** Plus Audrey and Niles' argument about where to keep good champagne. Not under the bed, apparently.
--> '''Rainbow''': Huh, why-"
--> '''Audrey''': BOO!
** Plus Audrey and Niles' argument about where to keep good champagne. Not under the bed, apparently.
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--> '''Audrey''': Hello, deary…you'll pardon me for a moment."
-->"\\
'''Rainbow''': Huh,why-"
-->why-"\\
'''Audrey''': BOO!
** Plus Audrey and Niles' argument about where to keep good champagne. Not under the bed,apparently.apparently.
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'''Rainbow''': Huh,
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'''Audrey''': BOO!
** Plus Audrey and Niles' argument about where to keep good champagne. Not under the bed,
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* At the end of Chapter 6, Applejack, Rarity and Rainbow Dash get caught in an avalanche and are forced to sleep huddled tightly together for warmth. The next morning, however, something (or somepony) starts [[FantasticArousal licking Rarity's horn]]...
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* At the end of Chapter 6, Applejack, Rarity and Rainbow Dash get caught in an avalanche and are forced to sleep huddled tightly together for warmth. The next morning, however, something (or somepony) starts [[FantasticArousal licking Rarity's horn]]...horn]]…
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--->'''Rarity:''' Mmm.... oh, my...Why, Commodore Silverhooves, you're so forward... it's only our first date...”
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--->'''Rarity:''' Mmm.... oh, my...Why, Mmm…oh, my…Why, Commodore Silverhooves, you're so forward... it's forward…it's only our first date...” date…”
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--> '''Audrey''': Hello, dearie...you'll pardon me for a moment."
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--> '''Audrey''': Hello, dearie...you'll deary…you'll pardon me for a moment."
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** And then finding out Lady Falalauria knew it was going to happen and had been waiting for their argument
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--> '''Audrey'': Hello, dearie...you'll pardon me for a moment."
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--> '''Audrey'': '''Audrey''': Hello, dearie...you'll pardon me for a moment."
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--> ''Audrey'': BOO!
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--> ''Audrey'': '''Audrey''': BOO!
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Plus Audrey and Niles' argument about where to keep good champagne. Not under the bed, apparently.
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** Plus Audrey and Niles' argument about where to keep good champagne. Not under the bed, apparently.
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Rainbow: "APPLEJACK, QUIT TALKING TO YOUR BOYFRIEND, AND LET'S GET GOING!"
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* Audrey the Pronghorn's way of testing Rainbow Dash:
--> '''Audrey'': Hello, dearie...you'll pardon me for a moment."
--> '''Rainbow''': Huh, why-"
--> ''Audrey'': BOO!
Plus Audrey and Niles' argument about where to keep good champagne. Not under the bed, apparently.
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* Applejack finally ''snapping'' at the umpteenth instance of Rainbow Dash not knowing the plural form of her own species.
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* Applejack finally ''snapping'' at the umpteenth instance of Rainbow Dash not knowing the plural form of her own species.species.
* Applejack and Ashtail getting a moment alone before the friends leave to continue their journey.
Rainbow: "APPLEJACK, QUIT TALKING TO YOUR BOYFRIEND, AND LET'S GET GOING!"
* Applejack and Ashtail getting a moment alone before the friends leave to continue their journey.
Rainbow: "APPLEJACK, QUIT TALKING TO YOUR BOYFRIEND, AND LET'S GET GOING!"
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* At the end of Chapter 6, Applejack, Rarity and Rainbow Dash get caught in an avalanche and are forced to sleep huddled tightly together for warmth. The next morning, however, something (or somepony) starts [[FantasticArousal licking Rarity's horn]]...
-->''A gentle mouth sucked daintily on Rarity's horn. Stirred from full sleep into a half-daze, the unicorn found the sensation was not altogether unpleasant.''
--->'''Rarity:''' Mmm.... oh, my...Why, Commodore Silverhooves, you're so forward... it's only our first date...”
-->''Rainbow Dash, half-conscious herself, obliged the dazed Rarity by wrapping her tongue around her horn. Rarity murmured and moaned until she slowly came awake, at which point she realized that nopony was taking her on a fancy date or its racy aftermath. But something was sucking on her horn. “Aah!” she yelped, a burst of magic flaring off her horn. It bounced Dash's head back, bringing her fully awake and causing her to flutter her wings rapidly.''
-->''A gentle mouth sucked daintily on Rarity's horn. Stirred from full sleep into a half-daze, the unicorn found the sensation was not altogether unpleasant.''
--->'''Rarity:''' Mmm.... oh, my...Why, Commodore Silverhooves, you're so forward... it's only our first date...”
-->''Rainbow Dash, half-conscious herself, obliged the dazed Rarity by wrapping her tongue around her horn. Rarity murmured and moaned until she slowly came awake, at which point she realized that nopony was taking her on a fancy date or its racy aftermath. But something was sucking on her horn. “Aah!” she yelped, a burst of magic flaring off her horn. It bounced Dash's head back, bringing her fully awake and causing her to flutter her wings rapidly.''
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--> '''Twilight''': Okay, now I ''have'' to hear this story.
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--> '''Twilight''': Okay, now I ''have'' to hear this story.story.
* Applejack finally ''snapping'' at the umpteenth instance of Rainbow Dash not knowing the plural form of her own species.
* Applejack finally ''snapping'' at the umpteenth instance of Rainbow Dash not knowing the plural form of her own species.
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* In the final chapter after getting back home, Applejack's rope teleports to her after a short time. She then ''squeals'':
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*Moments after the avalanche in Chapter 6, Rarity, panicking, provides a hilarious bit of MoodWhiplash when she shouts:
-->"AND WHEN SOME POOR TRAVELER FINDS OUR BODIES, MY MANE WILL BE BLEACHED WHITE, SO THEY'LL LOOK AT MY SWEATER AND THINK 'THIS PONY DIDN'T KNOW HOW TO COLOR COORDINATE AT ALL!' AND-"
* In the finalchapter chapter, after getting back home, Applejack's rope teleports to her after a short time. She then ''squeals'':
-->"AND WHEN SOME POOR TRAVELER FINDS OUR BODIES, MY MANE WILL BE BLEACHED WHITE, SO THEY'LL LOOK AT MY SWEATER AND THINK 'THIS PONY DIDN'T KNOW HOW TO COLOR COORDINATE AT ALL!' AND-"
* In the final
