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%% * LoveTriangle: Looks to be [[TriangRelations Type 4]], with C and H2 in a relationship and H interested in H2.
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%% * LoveTriangle: Looks to be [[TriangRelations Type 4]], 4, with C and H2 in a relationship and H interested in H2.
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%% * BodyHorror: The main character vomits up an eyeball at one point.
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* AteHisGun: H does this, although he does not kill himself due to being distracted by a black hole... in the floor.
* ArcWords: "I don't know what you're talking about", [[SelfDemonstrating appropriately enough]].
* BodyHorror: The main character vomits up an eyeball at one point.
* ArcWords: "I don't know what you're talking about", [[SelfDemonstrating appropriately enough]].
* BodyHorror: The main character vomits up an eyeball at one point.
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%% * AteHisGun: H does this, although he does not kill himself due to being distracted by a black hole... in the floor.
%% * ArcWords: "I don't know what you're talking about", [[SelfDemonstrating appropriately enough]].
%% * BodyHorror: The main character vomits up an eyeball at one point.
%% * ArcWords: "I don't know what you're talking about", [[SelfDemonstrating appropriately enough]].
%% * BodyHorror: The main character vomits up an eyeball at one point.
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* DrivenToSuicide: [[spoiler:The main character, though it's not entirely clear if he went through with it.]]
* {{Dystopia}}: The first line in the movie sets up the world as this.
--> ''In a future with mass unemployment, young people are forced to sell blood.''
* FutureSlang: Implied to be why everyone talks so funny.
* LoveTriangle: Looks to be [[TriangRelations Type 4]], with C and H2 in a relationship and H interested in H2.
* MostWritersAreHuman: Averted. The script was written by a computer.
* ParentalAbandonment: Implied.
--> ''I was the one who got on this rock with a child... [[IDidWhatIHadToDo and I left the other two behind.]]''
* {{Dystopia}}: The first line in the movie sets up the world as this.
--> ''In a future with mass unemployment, young people are forced to sell blood.''
* FutureSlang: Implied to be why everyone talks so funny.
* LoveTriangle: Looks to be [[TriangRelations Type 4]], with C and H2 in a relationship and H interested in H2.
* MostWritersAreHuman: Averted. The script was written by a computer.
* ParentalAbandonment: Implied.
--> ''I was the one who got on this rock with a child... [[IDidWhatIHadToDo and I left the other two behind.]]''
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%% * DrivenToSuicide: [[spoiler:The main character, though it's not entirely clear if he went through with it.]]
%% * {{Dystopia}}: The first line in the movie sets up the world as this.
%% --> ''In a future with mass unemployment, young people are forced to sell blood.''
%% * FutureSlang: Implied to be why everyone talks so funny.
%% * LoveTriangle: Looks to be [[TriangRelations Type 4]], with C and H2 in a relationship and H interested in H2.
%% * MostWritersAreHuman: Averted. The script was written by a computer.
%% * ParentalAbandonment: Implied.
%% --> ''I was the one who got on this rock with a child... [[IDidWhatIHadToDo and I left the other two behind.]]''
%% * {{Dystopia}}: The first line in the movie sets up the world as this.
%% --> ''In a future with mass unemployment, young people are forced to sell blood.''
%% * FutureSlang: Implied to be why everyone talks so funny.
%% * LoveTriangle: Looks to be [[TriangRelations Type 4]], with C and H2 in a relationship and H interested in H2.
%% * MostWritersAreHuman: Averted. The script was written by a computer.
%% * ParentalAbandonment: Implied.
%% --> ''I was the one who got on this rock with a child... [[IDidWhatIHadToDo and I left the other two behind.]]''
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* RichBitch: Rich Bastard: The other main character.
--> ''We're going to see the money.''
* UsedFuture: The first line in the movie sets up the world as this.
--> ''In a future with mass unemployment, young people are forced to sell blood.''
** Alternately, that may be the plot of the [[ShowWithinAShow in-universe book Sunspring]], which H picks up immediately before saying that line.
* UnusualEuphemism: "Well, I have to go to the skull!", although, it's not clear what it actually means... assuming it actually means anything at all.
--> ''We're going to see the money.''
* UsedFuture: The first line in the movie sets up the world as this.
--> ''In a future with mass unemployment, young people are forced to sell blood.''
** Alternately, that may be the plot of the [[ShowWithinAShow in-universe book Sunspring]], which H picks up immediately before saying that line.
* UnusualEuphemism: "Well, I have to go to the skull!", although, it's not clear what it actually means... assuming it actually means anything at all.
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%% * RichBitch: Rich Bastard: The other main character.
%% --> ''We're going to see the money.''
%% * UsedFuture: The first line in the movie sets up the world asthis.
this. Alternately, that may be the plot of the [[ShowWithinAShow in-universe book Sunspring]], which H picks up immediately before saying that line.
%% --> ''In a future with mass unemployment, young people are forced to sell blood.''
** Alternately, that may be the plot of the [[ShowWithinAShow in-universe book Sunspring]], which H picks up immediately before saying that line.
%% * UnusualEuphemism: "Well, I have to go to the skull!", although, it's not clear what it actually means... assuming it actually means anything at all.
%% --> ''We're going to see the money.''
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%% --> ''In a future with mass unemployment, young people are forced to sell blood.''
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** The main character, the rival, and the female lead are never named. The credits refer to them as "H", "C" and "H", respectively. Most other sources refer to the second H as H2.
** The script appears to refer to C as Coffey and H2 as Hauk.
** The main character, the rival, and the female lead are never named. The credits refer to them as "H", "C" and "H", respectively. Most other sources refer to the second H as H2.
** The script appears to refer to C as Coffey and H2 as Hauk.
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* NoNameGiven: The main character, the rival, and the female lead are never named. The credits refer to them as "H", "C" and "H", respectively. Most other sources refer to the second H as H2.
** The script appears to refer to C as Coffey and H2 as Hauk.
** The script appears to refer to C as Coffey and H2 as Hauk.
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* OneWordTitle: Also a {{Portmantitle}}.
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* WordSaladHumor: Played for drama.
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* WordSaladHumor: Played for drama. The plot includes such gibberish lines as "Well, I have to go to the skull!" It's also quite hard to figure out the plot because of the word-salad dialogue. Pretty much all that is distinguishable is that there is probably a love triangle between the three characters, one may or may not have gone to space, and he at least contemplates suicide.
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* AteHisGun: H does this, although he does not kill himself due to being distracted by a black hole... in the floor.
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* ArcWords: "I don't know what you're talking about", [[SelfDemonstrating appropriately enough]].
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* CompositeCharacter: In the script the final monologue is delivered by a fourth character called "T", unseen until now. The film has H2 deliver the monologue to the camera.
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It was produced as part of Sci-Fi London's 48 Hour film challenge and it's... well, it's kind of wierd. It's about an affair, we think? And a guy commits suicide?
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It was produced as part of Sci-Fi London's 48 Hour film challenge and it's... well, it's kind of wierd.weird. It's about an affair, we think? And a guy commits suicide?
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* DrivenToSuicide: [[spoiler: The main character, though it's not entirely clear if he went through with it.]]
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* DrivenToSuicide: [[spoiler: The [[spoiler:The main character, though it's not entirely clear if he went through with it.]]]]
* {{Dystopia}}: The first line in the movie sets up the world as this.
--> ''In a future with mass unemployment, young people are forced to sell blood.''
* {{Dystopia}}: The first line in the movie sets up the world as this.
--> ''In a future with mass unemployment, young people are forced to sell blood.''
* OneWordTitle: Also a {{Portmantitle}}.
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* [[RichBitch Rich Bastard]]: The other main character.
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* [[RichBitch {{Portmantitle}}: "Sun" + "Spring"
* RichBitch: RichBastard]]: Bastard: The other main character.
* RichBitch: Rich
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* UsedFuture / {{Dystopia}}: The first line in the movie sets up the world as this.
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* UsedFuture / {{Dystopia}}: UsedFuture: The first line in the movie sets up the world as this.
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* UnusualEuphemism: "Well, I have to go to the skull!"
** Subverted in that it's not clear what it actually means... assuming it actually means anything at all.
** Subverted in that it's not clear what it actually means... assuming it actually means anything at all.
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* UnusualEuphemism: "Well, I have to go to the skull!"
** Subverted in thatskull!", although, it's not clear what it actually means... assuming it actually means anything at all.
** Subverted in that
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''Sunspring'' is a 2016 science-fiction short film directed by Oscar Sharp, written by an screenwriting A.I. named [[http://benjamin.wtf/ Benjamin]] and starring Thomas Middleditch of ''Series/SiliconValley'' fame.
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''Sunspring'' is a 2016 science-fiction short film directed by Oscar Sharp, written by an screenwriting A.I. named [[http://benjamin.wtf/ Benjamin]] and starring Thomas Middleditch Creator/ThomasMiddleditch of ''Series/SiliconValley'' fame.
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* MostWritersAreHuman: Averted. The script was written by a computer.
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** The script appears to refer to C as Coffey and H2 as Hauk.
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* ParentalAbandonment: Implied.
--> ''I was the one who got on this rock with a child... [[IDidWhatIHadToDo and I left the other two behind.]]''
--> ''I was the one who got on this rock with a child... [[IDidWhatIHadToDo and I left the other two behind.]]''
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* NoNameGiven: The main character, the rival, and the female lead are never named. The credits refer to them as "H", "C" and "H", respectively.
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* LoveTriangle: Looks to be [[TriangRelations Type 4]], with C and H2 in a relationship and H interested in H2.
* NoNameGiven: The main character, the rival, and the female lead are never named. The credits refer to them as "H", "C" and "H", respectively. Most other sources refer to the second H as H2.
* ParentalAbandonment: Implied.
--> ''I was the one who got on this rock with a child... [[IDidWhatIHadToDo and I left the other two behind.]]''
* NoNameGiven: The main character, the rival, and the female lead are never named. The credits refer to them as "H", "C" and "H", respectively. Most other sources refer to the second H as H2.
* ParentalAbandonment: Implied.
--> ''I was the one who got on this rock with a child... [[IDidWhatIHadToDo and I left the other two behind.]]''
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** Alternately, that may be the plot of the [[ShowWithinAShow in-universe book Sunspring]], which H picks up immediately before saying that line.
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''Sunspring'' is a 2016 science-fiction short film directed by Oscar Sharp, and written by an screenwriting A.I. named [[http://benjamin.wtf/ Benjamin]], and starring Thomas Middleditch of ''Series/SiliconValley'' fame.
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''Sunspring'' is a 2016 science-fiction short film directed by Oscar Sharp, and written by an screenwriting A.I. named [[http://benjamin.wtf/ Benjamin]], Benjamin]] and starring Thomas Middleditch of ''Series/SiliconValley'' fame.
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* BodyHorror: The main character vomits up an eyeball at one point.
* DrivenToSuicide: [[spoiler: The main character, though it's not entirely clear if he went through with it.]]
* DrivenToSuicide: [[spoiler: The main character, though it's not entirely clear if he went through with it.]]
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* [[RichBitch Rich Bastard]]: The other main character.
--> ''We're going to see the money.''
--> ''We're going to see the money.''
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* UnusualEuphemism: "Well, I have to go to the skull!"
** Subverted in that it's not clear what it actually means... assuming it actually means anything at all.
** Subverted in that it's not clear what it actually means... assuming it actually means anything at all.
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* UsedFuture / {{Dystopia}}: The first line in the movie sets up the world as this.
--> ''In a future with mass unemployment, young people are forced to sell blood.''
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* ParentalAbandonment ParentalAbandonment: Implied.
--> ''I was the one who got on this rock with a child... [[IDidWhatIHadToDo and I left the other two behind.]]''
--> ''I was the one who got on this rock with a child... [[IDidWhatIHadToDo and I left the other two behind.]]''
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-> ''Whatever you need to know about the presence of the story, I'm a little bit of a boy on the floor.''
''Sunspring'' is a 2016 science-fiction short film directed by Oscar Sharp, and written by an screenwriting A.I. named [[http://benjamin.wtf/ Benjamin]], and starring Thomas Middleditch of ''Series/SiliconValley'' fame.
It was produced as part of Sci-Fi London's 48 Hour film challenge and it's... well, it's kind of wierd. It's about an affair, we think? And a guy commits suicide?
Either way, if you have ten minutes to spare, you could do worse than to watch it [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LY7x2Ihqjmc here on youtube.]]
!!This film presents examples of the following tropes:
* ParentalAbandonment
* FutureSlang: Implied to be why everyone talks so funny.
* NoNameGiven: The main character, the rival, and the female lead are never named. The credits refer to them as "H", "C" and "H", respectively.
* WordSaladHumor: Played for drama.
''Sunspring'' is a 2016 science-fiction short film directed by Oscar Sharp, and written by an screenwriting A.I. named [[http://benjamin.wtf/ Benjamin]], and starring Thomas Middleditch of ''Series/SiliconValley'' fame.
It was produced as part of Sci-Fi London's 48 Hour film challenge and it's... well, it's kind of wierd. It's about an affair, we think? And a guy commits suicide?
Either way, if you have ten minutes to spare, you could do worse than to watch it [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LY7x2Ihqjmc here on youtube.]]
!!This film presents examples of the following tropes:
* ParentalAbandonment
* FutureSlang: Implied to be why everyone talks so funny.
* NoNameGiven: The main character, the rival, and the female lead are never named. The credits refer to them as "H", "C" and "H", respectively.
* WordSaladHumor: Played for drama.