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The story is on Fanfiction.net as a complete story ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9131009/1/ here]]'', as well as on spacebattles.com with comentary ''[[http://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/terran-ingenuity-starcraft-x-mass-effect.251914/ here]]'' and ''[[http://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/terran-ingenuity-starcraft-x-mass-effect-thread-two.264131/ here]]''.
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The story is on Fanfiction.net as a complete story ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9131009/1/ here]]'', as well as on spacebattles.com with comentary commentary ''[[http://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/terran-ingenuity-starcraft-x-mass-effect.251914/ here]]'' and ''[[http://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/terran-ingenuity-starcraft-x-mass-effect-thread-two.264131/ here]]''.
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* SurvivorGuilt: Discussed; an Asari anthropologist contacts Valerian Mengsk, because she hasn't been able to contact any Terran anthropologists. Valerian informs her that while there ''are'' some Terran anthropologists who survived the Great Wars, they are ashamed of not doing their part. Valerian specifically points out that in the [[RealityEnsues realities of planetary invasion]] by [[HordeOfAlienLocusts the Zerg,]] it's entirely possible that those men could have saved their families or friends if they had been prepared for combat.
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* SurvivorGuilt: Discussed; an Asari anthropologist contacts Valerian Mengsk, because she hasn't been able to contact any Terran anthropologists. Valerian informs her that while there ''are'' some Terran anthropologists who survived the Great Wars, they are ashamed of not doing their part. Valerian specifically points out that in the [[RealityEnsues realities of planetary invasion]] invasion by [[HordeOfAlienLocusts the Zerg,]] it's entirely possible that those men could have saved their families or friends if they had been prepared for combat.
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-->“My apologies, but… when you first met the Terrans, you ''burned'' one of their worlds?” Tevos questioned incredulously. “And yet, now your people are ''allies''?”
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* WeAreStrugglingTogether: The Terrans are ''so'' used to this that in one omake, Terran Marines are extremely confused that the aliens are stopping their attack for no other reason then that they don't want to fight. In fact, several marines immediately start planning for an incoming Zerg fleet, as that's the only reason why they could conceive of aliens and humans working together.
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* WeAreStrugglingTogether: The Terrans are ''so'' used to this that in one omake, Terran Marines are extremely confused that the aliens turians are stopping their attack for no other reason then than that they don't want to fight. fight any longer. In fact, several marines they seem to immediately start planning for an incoming default to thinking that there's a Zerg fleet, as invasion incoming, because that's the only reason why most likely scenario that they could conceive can think of in which an abrupt appearance by inexplicably hostile aliens and humans working together.would suddenly halt.
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* WeAreStrugglingTogether: The Terrans are ''so'' used to this that in one omake, Terran Marines are extremely confused that the aliens are stopping their attack for no other reason then that they don't want to fight. In fact, several marines immediately start planning for an incoming Zerg fleet, as that's the only reason why they could conceive of aliens and humans working together.
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* {{Squick}}: Protoss tend to make a point of flat-out avoiding curious Asari, even when a simple "no" would suffice.
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* InSpiteOfANail: While some events have occurred (Relay 314, attacking a colony to secure a beacon), they have different outcomes. Desolas Arterius, despite not finding a Reaper artifact on Shanxi, still became indoctrinated and tried to active Temple Palaven; without Jack Harper, Saren himself calls the Hierarchy down on him. [[spoiler: In addition, the roles of Benezia and Saren appear to be reversed from canon.]]
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* InSpiteOfANail: While some events have occurred (Relay 314, attacking a colony to secure a beacon), they have different outcomes. Desolas Arterius, despite not finding a Reaper artifact on Shanxi, still became indoctrinated and tried to active activate Temple Palaven; without Jack Harper, Saren himself calls the Hierarchy down on him. [[spoiler: In addition, the roles of Benezia and Saren appear to be reversed from canon.]]
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** Alternatively, [[FridgeLogic they could simply be different people.]]
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** Alternatively, [[FridgeLogic they could simply be different people.]]]] People having similar names is fairly common in human society, after all.
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* InSpiteOfANail: While some events have occured (Relay 314, attacking a colony to secure a beacon), they have different outcomes. Desolas Arterius, despite not finding a Reaper artifact on Shanxi, still became indoctrinated and tried to active Temple Palaven; without Jack Harper, Saren himself calls the Hierarchy down on him. [[spoiler: In addition, the roles of Benezia and Saren appear to be reversed from canon.]]
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* InSpiteOfANail: While some events have occured occurred (Relay 314, attacking a colony to secure a beacon), they have different outcomes. Desolas Arterius, despite not finding a Reaper artifact on Shanxi, still became indoctrinated and tried to active Temple Palaven; without Jack Harper, Saren himself calls the Hierarchy down on him. [[spoiler: In addition, the roles of Benezia and Saren appear to be reversed from canon.]]
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** Note, however, that virtually the enire adult population has combat training and experience, so in effect everyone can serve as infantry.
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** Note, however, that virtually the enire entire adult population has combat training and experience, so in effect everyone can serve as infantry.
