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** Teru. While her estrangement from her sister is canon, there are hints that their relationship is a bit more complicated than her simply hating Saki, and [[spoiler:she does eventually admit that Saki is her sister]]. In the fic, she not only angrily denies having a sister, but also beats up Saki after losing to her.
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* AsYouKnow: At the start of the fic, Saki and Teru discuss things they already know, particularly Saki's attempts to reconcile with Teru.
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* RealityEnsues: Nodoka, who's somewhat out of shape, tries to save Saki from Teru, who is armed. Nodoka manages to push Teru away after getting the element of surprise, but after Teru recovers, Teru proceeds to perform a NoHoldsBeatdown NoHoldsBarredBeatdown on Nodoka.
* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: Teru gets this from Sumire when Sumire catches her beating up Saki andNodokaNodoka.
* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: Teru gets this from Sumire when Sumire catches her beating up Saki and
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* AdaptationalJerkass:
** Teru. While her estrangement from her sister is canon, there are hints that their relationship is a bit more complicated than her simply hating Saki, and [[spoiler:she does eventually admit that Saki is her sister]]. In the fic, she not only angrily denies having a sister, but also beats up Saki after losing to her.
** Sumire also counts. While cold and unemotional in canon, she does seem to have a certain fondness for Teru, since they've been friends since the start of high school. Here, she pushes Teru's buttons so hard Teru attacks her.
** Teru. While her estrangement from her sister is canon, there are hints that their relationship is a bit more complicated than her simply hating Saki, and [[spoiler:she does eventually admit that Saki is her sister]]. In the fic, she not only angrily denies having a sister, but also beats up Saki after losing to her.
** Sumire also counts. While cold and unemotional in canon, she does seem to have a certain fondness for Teru, since they've been friends since the start of high school. Here, she pushes Teru's buttons so hard Teru attacks her.
* FirstNameBasis:
** Saki and Nodoka switch to this in Chapter 2, just like in canon.
** Takami calls Teru by her first name, instead of the more formal "Miyanaga-senpai." In canon, Takami's a second-year, while Teru is a third-year.
** Kuro calls Yuu, her older sister, by name rather than "Onee-chan" here.
** Saki and Nodoka switch to this in Chapter 2, just like in canon.
** Takami calls Teru by her first name, instead of the more formal "Miyanaga-senpai." In canon, Takami's a second-year, while Teru is a third-year.
** Kuro calls Yuu, her older sister, by name rather than "Onee-chan" here.
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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9008429/1/Saki-After-Story Saki After Story]] is a {{Manga/Saki}} fanfic by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/2689121/Mr-FanficGuy Mr. Fanfic Guy]].
The fic takes place after the finals, in which Saki defeats her sister Teru. Her joy is short-lived, however, as Teru flies into a rage and attacks Saki, as well as Nodoka when she comes to help. The incident results in Teru being arrested and Saki and Nodoka being sent to the hospital.
The fic is currently on hiatus.
Also see ''Fanfic/TheDayEverythingChanged'', ''Fanfic/HolidayVacation'' and ''Fanfic/LuckyStarAfterStory'', by the same author.
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!!This fanfic provides examples of:
* AxCrazy: ''Teru'' - just look at [[GirlWithPsychoWeapon all]] [[HairTriggerTemper the]] [[UnstoppableRage other]] [[NoHoldsBarredBeatdown tropes]] related to her in this fic.
* BerserkButton: For Teru, it’s Saki claiming to be her sister.
* BlatantLies: The term is used verbatim to describe Teru's denying that Saki is her sister.
* DisproportionateRetribution: Teru is assumed by the announcers to have beaten up Saki [[SoreLoser over losing to her]]. It’s actually because she tried to talk to her and keeps claiming that she's her sister, [[DoubleSubversion which still counts]].
* EarlyInstallmentWeirdness: In the first chapter, mahjong is seemingly treated as a two-player game (Saki and Teru face each other, with Saki winning 112,000 points to Teru's 110,000), and Saki and Nodoka are on a LastNameBasis, as opposed to the FirstNameBasis they adopted in the training camp between the prefecturals and the nationals, at the end of the first anime series.
* GirlWithPsychoWeapon: Teru, who wields a boxcutter and a pipe.
* HairTriggerTemper: Teru goes ballistic at even the slightest mention of Saki.
* HeelRealization: Teru goes through one after beating Saki up.
* HotBlooded: Teru. She nearly attacks Sumire (who is shorter tempered than in canon) in their argument over whether Saki is Teru’s sister.
* IllGirl: Toki and Yuu, as in canon. Toki getting appendicitis and Yuu getting pneumonia after falling in a pond send both to the hospital around the same time as Saki and Nodoka.
* ImplausibleDeniability: Teru keeps on denying that Saki is her sister, even though Sumire knows for a fact that they are sisters.
* LemonyNarrator: The author’s notes in the middle of the story have this effect.
-->'''Narrator''': Remember when I said that Teru seems to lose control when she gets angry? [[OhCrap Well, this is happening now. And with a metal pipe and a box cutter in her possession, this is not going to end well]].
* LoveConfession: Nodoka to Saki in the hospital. Saki accepts.
* MamaDidntRaiseNoCriminal: The Miyanagas react this way after learning about Teru's attacking Saki.
* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: Teru says this almost word for word, after Sumire reminds her of Saki being her sister. She falls into “a state of semi-shock”, and remains that way when she’s arrested.
-->'''Teru''': Oh my god! What the fuck have I done?
* NoHoldsBarredBeatdown: Teru to Saki and Nodoka, sending both to the hospital.
* ObligatorySwearing: Fairly common for Teru, even in casual conversation, such as after Teru hears that the tournament won't start until noon.
-->'''Teru''': “But I want to kick some ass”
-->'''Sumire''': “You know, maybe you’ll run into your sister.”
-->'''Teru''': “God damn it! How many times do I have to tell you, Sumire? “[[PunctuatedForEmphasis I. Do. Not.]] [[IHaveNoSon Have. A. Sister]]!”
-->'''Sumire''': “Quit bullshitting, Teru.”
* OhCrap: Saki and the narrator’s reaction to seeing that Teru is armed.
* PrecisionFStrike: While there’s quite a bit of swearing in this fic, Sumire’s yelling at Teru in response to catching her beating up Saki and Nodoka, is the biggest example of this.
* PunctuatedForEmphasis: Teru’s “[[IHaveNoSon I. Do. Not. Have. A. Sister]]!”
* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: Teru gets this from Sumire when Sumire catches her beating up Saki and Nodoka
-->'''Sumire''': WHAT THE [[PrecisionFStrike FUCK]] IS WRONG WITH YOU?! Do you realize what you’ve just done?! […] And it was your own sister you did this to!
-->'''Teru''': For the last time, she is not my sister! She never was my sister! I never had a sister!
-->'''Sumire''': That is utter bullshit! I’ve had enough of your lying! I have obtained proof from your mother and father that Saki ''is'' your sister! And what you just did to her and her friend is absolutely inexcusable!
* SaidBookism: The author almost never uses “said”.
* SoreLoser: In-universe, Teru is assumed to be a [[UpToEleven particularly extreme]] case of this after attacking Saki.
* ThisIsUnforgivable: Sumire and Eri’s reactions to Teru beating up Saki.
* UnstoppableRage: Teru when meeting with Saki. It takes the rest of the members of both the Kiyosumi ''and'' the Shiraitodai teams to restrain her.
The fic takes place after the finals, in which Saki defeats her sister Teru. Her joy is short-lived, however, as Teru flies into a rage and attacks Saki, as well as Nodoka when she comes to help. The incident results in Teru being arrested and Saki and Nodoka being sent to the hospital.
The fic is currently on hiatus.
Also see ''Fanfic/TheDayEverythingChanged'', ''Fanfic/HolidayVacation'' and ''Fanfic/LuckyStarAfterStory'', by the same author.
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!!This fanfic provides examples of:
* AxCrazy: ''Teru'' - just look at [[GirlWithPsychoWeapon all]] [[HairTriggerTemper the]] [[UnstoppableRage other]] [[NoHoldsBarredBeatdown tropes]] related to her in this fic.
* BerserkButton: For Teru, it’s Saki claiming to be her sister.
* BlatantLies: The term is used verbatim to describe Teru's denying that Saki is her sister.
* DisproportionateRetribution: Teru is assumed by the announcers to have beaten up Saki [[SoreLoser over losing to her]]. It’s actually because she tried to talk to her and keeps claiming that she's her sister, [[DoubleSubversion which still counts]].
* EarlyInstallmentWeirdness: In the first chapter, mahjong is seemingly treated as a two-player game (Saki and Teru face each other, with Saki winning 112,000 points to Teru's 110,000), and Saki and Nodoka are on a LastNameBasis, as opposed to the FirstNameBasis they adopted in the training camp between the prefecturals and the nationals, at the end of the first anime series.
* GirlWithPsychoWeapon: Teru, who wields a boxcutter and a pipe.
* HairTriggerTemper: Teru goes ballistic at even the slightest mention of Saki.
* HeelRealization: Teru goes through one after beating Saki up.
* HotBlooded: Teru. She nearly attacks Sumire (who is shorter tempered than in canon) in their argument over whether Saki is Teru’s sister.
* IllGirl: Toki and Yuu, as in canon. Toki getting appendicitis and Yuu getting pneumonia after falling in a pond send both to the hospital around the same time as Saki and Nodoka.
* ImplausibleDeniability: Teru keeps on denying that Saki is her sister, even though Sumire knows for a fact that they are sisters.
* LemonyNarrator: The author’s notes in the middle of the story have this effect.
-->'''Narrator''': Remember when I said that Teru seems to lose control when she gets angry? [[OhCrap Well, this is happening now. And with a metal pipe and a box cutter in her possession, this is not going to end well]].
* LoveConfession: Nodoka to Saki in the hospital. Saki accepts.
* MamaDidntRaiseNoCriminal: The Miyanagas react this way after learning about Teru's attacking Saki.
* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: Teru says this almost word for word, after Sumire reminds her of Saki being her sister. She falls into “a state of semi-shock”, and remains that way when she’s arrested.
-->'''Teru''': Oh my god! What the fuck have I done?
* NoHoldsBarredBeatdown: Teru to Saki and Nodoka, sending both to the hospital.
* ObligatorySwearing: Fairly common for Teru, even in casual conversation, such as after Teru hears that the tournament won't start until noon.
-->'''Teru''': “But I want to kick some ass”
-->'''Sumire''': “You know, maybe you’ll run into your sister.”
-->'''Teru''': “God damn it! How many times do I have to tell you, Sumire? “[[PunctuatedForEmphasis I. Do. Not.]] [[IHaveNoSon Have. A. Sister]]!”
-->'''Sumire''': “Quit bullshitting, Teru.”
* OhCrap: Saki and the narrator’s reaction to seeing that Teru is armed.
* PrecisionFStrike: While there’s quite a bit of swearing in this fic, Sumire’s yelling at Teru in response to catching her beating up Saki and Nodoka, is the biggest example of this.
* PunctuatedForEmphasis: Teru’s “[[IHaveNoSon I. Do. Not. Have. A. Sister]]!”
* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: Teru gets this from Sumire when Sumire catches her beating up Saki and Nodoka
-->'''Sumire''': WHAT THE [[PrecisionFStrike FUCK]] IS WRONG WITH YOU?! Do you realize what you’ve just done?! […] And it was your own sister you did this to!
-->'''Teru''': For the last time, she is not my sister! She never was my sister! I never had a sister!
-->'''Sumire''': That is utter bullshit! I’ve had enough of your lying! I have obtained proof from your mother and father that Saki ''is'' your sister! And what you just did to her and her friend is absolutely inexcusable!
* SaidBookism: The author almost never uses “said”.
* SoreLoser: In-universe, Teru is assumed to be a [[UpToEleven particularly extreme]] case of this after attacking Saki.
* ThisIsUnforgivable: Sumire and Eri’s reactions to Teru beating up Saki.
* UnstoppableRage: Teru when meeting with Saki. It takes the rest of the members of both the Kiyosumi ''and'' the Shiraitodai teams to restrain her.
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-->'''Sumire''': WHAT THE [[PrecisionFStrike FUCK]] IS WRONG WITH YOU? YOU?! Do you realize what you’ve just done? done?! […] And it was your own sister you did this to!
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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9008429/1/Saki-After-Story Saki After Story]] is a {{Manga/Saki}} fanfic by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/2689121/Mr-FanficGuy Mr. Fanfic Guy]].
The fic takes place after the finals, in which Saki defeats her sister Teru. Her joy is short-lived, however, as Teru flies into a rage and attacks Saki, as well as Nodoka when she comes to help. The incident results in Teru being arrested and Saki and Nodoka being sent to the hospital.
The fic is currently on hiatus.
Also see ''Fanfic/TheDayEverythingChanged'', ''Fanfic/HolidayVacation'' and ''Fanfic/LuckyStarAfterStory'', by the same author.
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!!This fanfic provides examples of:
*AxCrazy: ''Teru'' - just look at [[GirlWithPsychoWeapon all]] [[HairTriggerTemper the]] [[UnstoppableRage other]] [[NoHoldsBarredBeatdown tropes]] related to her in this fic.
*BerserkButton: For Teru, it’s Saki claiming to be her sister.
*DisproportionateRetribution: Teru is assumed by the announcers to have beaten up Saki [[SoreLoser over losing to her]]. It’s actually because she tried to talk to her and keeps claiming that she's her sister, [[DoubleSubversion which still counts]].
*EarlyInstallmentWeirdness: In the first chapter, mahjong is seemingly treated as a two-player game (Saki and Teru face each other, with Saki winning 112,000 points to Teru's 110,000), and Saki and Nodoka are on a LastNameBasis, as opposed to the FirstNameBasis they adopted in the training camp between the prefecturals and the nationals, at the end of the first anime series.
*GirlWithPsychoWeapon: Teru, who wields a boxcutter and a pipe.
*HairTriggerTemper: Teru goes ballistic at even the slightest mention of Saki.
*HeelRealization: Teru goes through one after beating Saki up.
*HotBlooded: Teru. She nearly attacks Sumire (who is shorter tempered than in canon) in their argument over whether Saki is Teru’s sister.
*IllGirl: Toki and Yuu, as in canon. Toki getting appendicitis and Yuu getting pneumonia after falling in a pond send both to the hospital around the same time as Saki and Nodoka.
*ImplausibleDeniability: Teru keeps on denying that Saki is her sister, even though Sumire knows for a fact that they are sisters.
*LemonyNarrator: The author’s notes in the middle of the story have this effect.
-->'''Narrator''': Remember when I said that Teru seems to lose control when she gets angry? [[OhCrap Well, this is happening now. And with a metal pipe and a box cutter in her possession, this is not going to end well]].
*LoveConfession: Nodoka to Saki in the hospital. Saki accepts.
*MyGodWhatHaveIDone: Teru says this almost word for word, after Sumire reminds her of Saki being her sister. She falls into “a state of semi-shock”, and remains that way when she’s arrested.
-->'''Teru''': Oh my god! What the fuck have I done?
*NoHoldsBarredBeatdown: Teru to Saki and Nodoka, sending both to the hospital.
*ObligatorySwearing: Fairly common for Teru, even in casual conversation, such as after Teru hears that the tournament won't start until noon.
-->'''Teru''': “But I want to kick some ass”
-->'''Sumire''': “You know, maybe you’ll run into your sister.”
-->'''Teru''': “God damn it! How many times do I have to tell you, Sumire? “[[PunctuatedForEmphasis I. Do. Not.]] [[IHaveNoSon Have. A. Sister]]!”
-->'''Sumire''': “Quit bullshitting, Teru.”
*OhCrap: Saki and the narrator’s reaction to seeing that Teru is armed.
*PrecisionFStrike: While there’s a lot of swearing in this fic, Sumire’s yelling “WHAT THE FUCK IS WRONG WITH YOU?” in response to finding Teru beating up Saki and Nodoka counts.
*PunctuatedForEmphasis: Teru’s “[[IHaveNoSon I. Do. Not. Have. A. Sister]]!”
*TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: Teru gets this from Sumire when Sumire catches her beating up Saki and Nodoka
-->'''Sumire''': WHAT THE [[PrecisionFStrike FUCK]] IS WRONG WITH YOU? Do you realize what you’ve just done? […] And it was your own sister you did this to!
-->'''Teru''': For the last time, she is not my sister! She never was my sister! I never had a sister!
-->'''Sumire''': That is utter bullshit! I’ve had enough of your lying! I have obtained proof from your mother and father that Saki ''is'' your sister! And what you just did to her and her friend is absolutely inexcusable!
*SaidBookism: The author almost never uses “said”.
*SoreLoser: In-universe, Teru is assumed to be a [[UpToEleven particularly extreme]] case of this after attacking Saki.
*ThisIsUnforgivable: Sumire and Eri’s reactions to Teru beating up Saki.
*UnstoppableRage: Teru when meeting with Saki. It takes the rest of the Shiraitodai team to restrain her.
The fic takes place after the finals, in which Saki defeats her sister Teru. Her joy is short-lived, however, as Teru flies into a rage and attacks Saki, as well as Nodoka when she comes to help. The incident results in Teru being arrested and Saki and Nodoka being sent to the hospital.
The fic is currently on hiatus.
Also see ''Fanfic/TheDayEverythingChanged'', ''Fanfic/HolidayVacation'' and ''Fanfic/LuckyStarAfterStory'', by the same author.
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!!This fanfic provides examples of:
*AxCrazy: ''Teru'' - just look at [[GirlWithPsychoWeapon all]] [[HairTriggerTemper the]] [[UnstoppableRage other]] [[NoHoldsBarredBeatdown tropes]] related to her in this fic.
*BerserkButton: For Teru, it’s Saki claiming to be her sister.
*DisproportionateRetribution: Teru is assumed by the announcers to have beaten up Saki [[SoreLoser over losing to her]]. It’s actually because she tried to talk to her and keeps claiming that she's her sister, [[DoubleSubversion which still counts]].
*EarlyInstallmentWeirdness: In the first chapter, mahjong is seemingly treated as a two-player game (Saki and Teru face each other, with Saki winning 112,000 points to Teru's 110,000), and Saki and Nodoka are on a LastNameBasis, as opposed to the FirstNameBasis they adopted in the training camp between the prefecturals and the nationals, at the end of the first anime series.
*GirlWithPsychoWeapon: Teru, who wields a boxcutter and a pipe.
*HairTriggerTemper: Teru goes ballistic at even the slightest mention of Saki.
*HeelRealization: Teru goes through one after beating Saki up.
*HotBlooded: Teru. She nearly attacks Sumire (who is shorter tempered than in canon) in their argument over whether Saki is Teru’s sister.
*IllGirl: Toki and Yuu, as in canon. Toki getting appendicitis and Yuu getting pneumonia after falling in a pond send both to the hospital around the same time as Saki and Nodoka.
*ImplausibleDeniability: Teru keeps on denying that Saki is her sister, even though Sumire knows for a fact that they are sisters.
*LemonyNarrator: The author’s notes in the middle of the story have this effect.
-->'''Narrator''': Remember when I said that Teru seems to lose control when she gets angry? [[OhCrap Well, this is happening now. And with a metal pipe and a box cutter in her possession, this is not going to end well]].
*LoveConfession: Nodoka to Saki in the hospital. Saki accepts.
*MyGodWhatHaveIDone: Teru says this almost word for word, after Sumire reminds her of Saki being her sister. She falls into “a state of semi-shock”, and remains that way when she’s arrested.
-->'''Teru''': Oh my god! What the fuck have I done?
*NoHoldsBarredBeatdown: Teru to Saki and Nodoka, sending both to the hospital.
*ObligatorySwearing: Fairly common for Teru, even in casual conversation, such as after Teru hears that the tournament won't start until noon.
-->'''Teru''': “But I want to kick some ass”
-->'''Sumire''': “You know, maybe you’ll run into your sister.”
-->'''Teru''': “God damn it! How many times do I have to tell you, Sumire? “[[PunctuatedForEmphasis I. Do. Not.]] [[IHaveNoSon Have. A. Sister]]!”
-->'''Sumire''': “Quit bullshitting, Teru.”
*OhCrap: Saki and the narrator’s reaction to seeing that Teru is armed.
*PrecisionFStrike: While there’s a lot of swearing in this fic, Sumire’s yelling “WHAT THE FUCK IS WRONG WITH YOU?” in response to finding Teru beating up Saki and Nodoka counts.
*PunctuatedForEmphasis: Teru’s “[[IHaveNoSon I. Do. Not. Have. A. Sister]]!”
*TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: Teru gets this from Sumire when Sumire catches her beating up Saki and Nodoka
-->'''Sumire''': WHAT THE [[PrecisionFStrike FUCK]] IS WRONG WITH YOU? Do you realize what you’ve just done? […] And it was your own sister you did this to!
-->'''Teru''': For the last time, she is not my sister! She never was my sister! I never had a sister!
-->'''Sumire''': That is utter bullshit! I’ve had enough of your lying! I have obtained proof from your mother and father that Saki ''is'' your sister! And what you just did to her and her friend is absolutely inexcusable!
*SaidBookism: The author almost never uses “said”.
*SoreLoser: In-universe, Teru is assumed to be a [[UpToEleven particularly extreme]] case of this after attacking Saki.
*ThisIsUnforgivable: Sumire and Eri’s reactions to Teru beating up Saki.
*UnstoppableRage: Teru when meeting with Saki. It takes the rest of the Shiraitodai team to restrain her.
