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* BloodBrothers: Marshall and Chase with a slightly morbid context of [[spoiler: Marshall promising not to die before Chase.]]
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* EtTuBrute: Marshall's reaction to Chase calling him an annoyance. It's even worse in the context of them being BloodBrothers.
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* EtTuBrute: Marshall's reaction to Chase calling him an annoyance. It's even worse in the context of them being BloodBrothers.[[SwornBrothers blood brothers]].
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** Played with later in that [[spoiler: while Ryder finds himself wanting to do this to the pups when Marshall is declared dead, he's able to restrain himself, knowing it wouldn't make anything better]].
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* BreakTheCutie: Marshall is the main receiver of throughout the course of the story.
** The other pups, (sans Everest) are also broken when [[spoiler: Marshall is declared deceased]], and earlier on, they take the news of their words driving Marshall away very badly.
** The other pups, (sans Everest) are also broken when [[spoiler: Marshall is declared deceased]], and earlier on, they take the news of their words driving Marshall away very badly.
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* AdultFear: Blaze and Misty's reaction to [[spoiler: their son Marshall's (supposed) death]].
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* AmbiguouslyChristian: Marshall when he spreads the gospel of "Puppy Heaven" to [[spoiler: Chase after his father's funeral]] during a flashback in chapter 6.
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* AmbiguouslyChristian: Marshall when he spreads the gospel of "Puppy Heaven" to [[spoiler: Chase after his father's funeral]] during a flashback in chapter Chapter 6.
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* DeathWail: [[spoiler: Chase]] gives a gut wrenching one in chapter 7. What makes it worse is that the author makes sure to differentiate it from a HowlOfSorrow.
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* DeathWail: [[spoiler: Chase]] gives a gut wrenching one in chapter Chapter 7. What makes it worse is that the author makes sure to differentiate it from a HowlOfSorrow.
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--> '''''Blaze:''' "He was going to forgive you all no matter what. {laughs} That's just how Marshall is."''
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* MohsScaleOfViolenceHardness: scores a 2.7 on the scale.
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* WasTooHardOnHim: The pups after Marshall runs away.
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* MohsScaleOfViolenceHardness: scores a 2.7 on the scale.
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* GRatedSex: Averted - [[spoiler: Skye affectionately rubbed her muzzle against Chase.]]
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* GRatedSex: Averted - [[spoiler: Skye affectionately rubbed her muzzle against Chase.Chase in the last chapter.]]
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* MadeOfExplodium / EveryCarIsAPinto: Marshall's fire truck - it exploded quite easily in comparison to modern cars in RealLife.
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* MadeOfExplodium / EveryCarIsAPinto: [[spoiler: EveryCarIsAPinto]]: Marshall's fire truck - it exploded quite easily in comparison to modern cars in RealLife.
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* GRatedSex: Averted - [[spoiler: Skye affectionately rubbed her muzzle against Chase.]]
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* LegallyDead /NotEnoughToBury: [[spoiler: Marshall. This leads the pups to assume the worst, though he turns out fine (if barely)]].
* MadeOfExplodium /EveryCarIsAPinto: Marshall's fire truck - it exploded quite easily in comparison to modern cars in RealLife.
* MadeOfExplodium /EveryCarIsAPinto: Marshall's fire truck - it exploded quite easily in comparison to modern cars in RealLife.
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* LegallyDead /NotEnoughToBury: / NotEnoughToBury: [[spoiler: Marshall. This leads the pups to assume the worst, though he turns out fine (if barely)]].
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* MadeOfExplodium
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* MadeOfExplodium: Marshall's fire truck - it exploded quite easily in comparison to cars in UsefulNotes/RealLife.
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* MadeOfExplodium: Marshall's fire truck - it exploded quite easily in comparison to modern cars in UsefulNotes/RealLife.RealLife.
