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* SlapstickKnowsNoGender: No male character present in any part of the story, and everypony suffers an AmusingInjury at some point or other.
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* HumiliationConga: The entire climax. You see all the tropes bulleted under AmusingInjuries above? Most of those happen in this one scene alone. ''[[UpToEleven And then some.]]''

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* HumiliationConga: The entire climax. You see all the tropes bulleted under AmusingInjuries above? Most of those happen in this one scene alone. ''[[UpToEleven And ''And then some.]]'' ''
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* PetTheDog: Both sisters indulge in toying with Trixie equally, but while Luna is shown to be the more draconian of the two sisters, Celestia is shown to be more merciful. She comes, alone, on the second day to complement Trixie on her magic abilities, even after defying and squishing them in a laundry wringer. She gives Trixie a heartfelt speech about how she's NotSoDifferent from her sister Luna, and wants to prevent her from going down the same path that her sister did. The following night, she gets Luna to dial it back during Trixie's nightmare to give her a chance to prove she's changed. On top of all that, the sisters' reaction when Trixie decides to take revenge over atonement implies that Celestia honestly believed Trixie would make the right choice.

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* PetTheDog: Both sisters indulge in toying with Trixie equally, but while Luna is shown to be the more draconian of the two sisters, Celestia is shown to be more merciful. She comes, alone, on the second day to complement Trixie on her magic abilities, even after defying and squishing them in a laundry wringer. She gives Trixie a heartfelt speech [[NotSoDifferentRemark about how she's NotSoDifferent no different]] from her sister Luna, and wants to prevent her from going down the same path that her sister did. The following night, she gets Luna to dial it back during Trixie's nightmare to give her a chance to prove she's changed. On top of all that, the sisters' reaction when Trixie decides to take revenge over atonement implies that Celestia honestly believed Trixie would make the right choice.
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!!This MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic Fanfic contains the following tropes:

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!!This MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic Fanfic fanfic contains the following tropes:
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** [[ExtendableArms Extendable Forelegs]]: The result of Trixie desperately trying to grab onto something al halt herself during the big climax.

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** [[ExtendableArms Extendable Forelegs]]: ElongatingArmGag: The result of Trixie desperately trying to grab onto something al halt herself during the big climax.
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* BlackComedy: Has the same focus on {{Slapstick}} and cartoon violence as SombrasGame, but centers on the PluckyComicRelief from ''that'' story being imprisoned, abused, tortured, and humiliated by the two cheerful, sadistic [[RogueProtagonist Rogue Deuteragonists]] with no-one around this time to make them sympathetic by comparison. PlayedForLaughs, naturally.

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* BlackComedy: Has the same focus on {{Slapstick}} and cartoon violence as SombrasGame, Fanfic/SombrasGame, but centers on the PluckyComicRelief from ''that'' story being imprisoned, abused, tortured, and humiliated by the two cheerful, sadistic [[RogueProtagonist Rogue Deuteragonists]] with no-one around this time to make them sympathetic by comparison. PlayedForLaughs, naturally.



** At this point, the Humble and Apologetic Trixie has seen the error of her ways and would likely have been far more cooperative with the Princesses, which leads directly to her voluntary internment in SombrasGame.

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** At this point, the Humble and Apologetic Trixie has seen the error of her ways and would likely have been far more cooperative with the Princesses, which leads directly to her voluntary internment in SombrasGame.Fanfic/SombrasGame.
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The 3rd MLP fetish fic by author Pablote, this story serves as a prequel to [[SombrasGame Sombra's Game]], detailing how Trixie ended up in the Princess' dungeon in the first place.

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The 3rd MLP fetish fic by author Pablote, this story serves as a prequel to [[SombrasGame Sombra's Game]], Fanfic/SombrasGame, detailing how Trixie ended up in the Princess' dungeon in the first place.

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* NeverMyFault: Trixie's FatalFlaw here. Celestia and Luna would end her sentence the instant she shows that she was willing to just ''consider'' changing her ways but Trixie is too utterly full of herself and unwilling to even think that anything she's going through could possibly be a result of her own actions. In the end she makes the completely idiotic choice to try and get even with the sisters rather than accept she needs to set things right and pays for it, all because of her own ego making her believe she's beyond consequences for what she's done.



* TrashTheSet: Inverted. Trixie spends her free time setting up an elaborate trap instead of cleaning the palace like she's supposed to. But when she gets whipped around the whole palace on a rope, hitting every painful obstacle on the way, [[RuleOfFunny by some miracle]] she ends up leaving the place ''cleaner'' than when she started. The Princesses confirm that she ''technically'' completed all the chores on the list in the process.

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* TrashTheSet: Inverted. Trixie spends her free time setting up an elaborate trap instead of cleaning the palace like she's supposed to. But when she gets whipped around the whole palace on a rope, hitting every painful obstacle on the way, [[RuleOfFunny by some miracle]] she ends up leaving the place ''cleaner'' than when she started. The Princesses confirm that she ''technically'' completed all the chores on the list in the process.
* WellIntentionedExtremist: Celestia and Luna's methods can best be summed up as ColdBloodedTorture but they are towards the end goal of getting Trixie to see the error of her ways and ''aren't'' just for laughs. Celestia in particular tries to reach out to Trixie with encouragement and concern for what might happen to Trixie if she doesn't change her life.
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* BlackComedy: Has the same focus on {{Slapstick}} and cartoon violence as SombrasGame, but centers on the PluckyComicRelief from ''that'' story being imprisoned, abused, tortured, and humiliated by the two cheerful, sadistic [[RogueProtagonist Rogue Deuteragonists]] with no BiggerBad this time around to make them sympathetic by comparison. PlayedForLaughs, naturally.

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* BlackComedy: Has the same focus on {{Slapstick}} and cartoon violence as SombrasGame, but centers on the PluckyComicRelief from ''that'' story being imprisoned, abused, tortured, and humiliated by the two cheerful, sadistic [[RogueProtagonist Rogue Deuteragonists]] with no BiggerBad no-one around this time around to make them sympathetic by comparison. PlayedForLaughs, naturally.

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** BalloonBelly: Once in a nightmare, and again when landing mouth-first on the business end of a magically-powered leaf blower.


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** InflatingBodyGag: Trixie dreams about taking the place of the Ursa Minor, and inflating like a balloon as Twilight makes her drink a whole water tower full of milk. Happens again in the waking world, when she lands mouth-first on the business end of a magically-powered leaf blower.

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* DownerEnding: Yes, the Princesses let her go in the end, but not before subjecting her to one last, humiliating, off-screen punishment. They [[KarmaHoudini get virtually no comeuppance]] for everything they put Trixie through, release her back into the world bitter, angry, and not even close to reformed, and despite having all but spelled out her domineering plans for revenge, they don't seem to notice or care at all. As if that wasn't bad enough, her angry rant and the sack of gold she "earns" implies that the end of this story directly precedes [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS3E5MagicDuel Magic Duel]], which means that Trixie's reign of terror over Ponyville and all its inhabitants, as well as her ending right back up in the dungeons as a result, can all be indirectly traced back to the Princess' careless treatment of her.

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* DisproportionateRetribution: How harsh the Princess' sentence is hinges almost entirely on how much you, personally, find Trixie at fault for what happened in her debut episode. The general consensus seems to be that Trixie is practically innocent.
* DownerEnding: Yes, the Princesses let her go in the end, but not before subjecting her to one last, humiliating, off-screen punishment. They [[KarmaHoudini get virtually no comeuppance]] for everything they put Trixie through, release her back into the world bitter, angry, and not even close to reformed, and despite having all but spelled out her domineering plans for revenge, they don't seem to notice or care at all. As if that wasn't bad enough, her angry rant and the sack of gold she "earns" implies that the end of this story directly precedes [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS3E5MagicDuel Magic Duel]], which means that Trixie's reign of terror over Ponyville and all its inhabitants, as well as her ending right back up in the dungeons as a result, can all be indirectly traced back to the Princess' careless treatment of her. Turns out [[FanFic/SombrasGame Sombra wasn't too far off about them being just as bad as him.]]
* EarnYourHappyEnding: Although the story ends on a [[DownerEnding downer]], a more positive way of looking at it is seeing this as the rocky beginning of Trixie's overall character arc:
** Starting with [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS3E5MagicDuel Magic Duel]], Trixie is still angry and vengeful, and lets the power of the Alicorn Amulet consume her as she lords over the other ponies the same way the Princesses did to her. However, she makes her HeelRealization towards the end of that episode, and leaves Twilight on amicable terms.
** At this point, the Humble and Apologetic Trixie has seen the error of her ways and would likely have been far more cooperative with the Princesses, which leads directly to her voluntary internment in SombrasGame.
** And seeing as how she's generally a much happier pony in that story, leaves the Princesses on good terms, and even gets the [[Awesome/SombrasGame Crowning Moment of Awesome]], things eventually turn out just fine for her.
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** However, since [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS3E5MagicDuel Magic Duel]] and Sombra's Game are both [[ForegoneConclusion Foregone Conclusions]], this can also be interpreted as a BittersweetEnding instead. See [[YMMV/TheSunAndMoonAreHarshMistresses YMMV]].

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* GenreSavvy: The Princesses slap an antimagic collar on Trixie as soon as she shows she's capable of some impressive feats of magic.
* [[HeroAntagonist Hero Antagonists]]: The villainous, amoral Trixie is imprisoned and systematically tortured for the amusement of the fair and virtuous Princesses Celestia and Luna.

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* GenreSavvy: The Princesses slap an antimagic collar on Trixie as soon as she shows she's capable of some impressive feats of magic.
* [[HeroAntagonist Hero Antagonists]]:
HeroAntagonist: The villainous, amoral Trixie is imprisoned and systematically tortured for the amusement of the fair and virtuous Princesses Celestia and Luna.
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* [[HeroAntagonist Hero Antagonists]]: The villainous, amoral Trixie is imprisoned and systematically tortured for the amusement of the fair and virtuous Princesses Celestia and Luna from Sombra's Game.

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* [[HeroAntagonist Hero Antagonists]]: The villainous, amoral Trixie is imprisoned and systematically tortured for the amusement of the fair and virtuous Princesses Celestia and Luna from Sombra's Game.Luna.
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* {{Antimagic}}: Trixie has an antimagic collar put on her to keep her from escaping or exacting revenge on the Princesses.
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** WhatADrag: Trixie's complex, carefully-laid trap, involving being pulled, via rope, through a DeathCourse of escalating cartoon violence. She'd intended for the ''Princesses'' to fall victim to it while ''she'' watched and laughed, but, [[HoistByHisOwnPetard alas...]]

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** WhatADrag: Trixie's complex, carefully-laid trap, involving being pulled, via rope, trap: getting pulled through a DeathCourse of escalating cartoon violence.violence by a rope. She'd intended for the ''Princesses'' to fall victim to it while ''she'' watched and laughed, but, [[HoistByHisOwnPetard alas...]]
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** StuffedIntoALocker: Exaggerated. The Princesses stuff Trixie into a tiny jar.


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* GenreSavvy: The Princesses slap an antimagic collar on Trixie as soon as she shows she's capable of some impressive feats of magic.


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** Both sisters taking her antimagic collar off after she volunteers to do chores around the palace counts.

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