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** Yosuke seems to have a little bit of ShippingGoggles himself as he sees Chie and Yu.
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[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9173652/1/Fake-Me Fake Me]] is a ''VideoGame/{{Persona 4}}'' fanfiction that takes place a week after the events of ''VideoGame/Persona4Arena''. Written by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/4472418/ReachingOutFES Reaching Out FES]]
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[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9173652/1/Fake-Me Fake Me]] is a ''VideoGame/{{Persona 4}}'' ''VideoGame/Persona4'' fanfiction that takes place a week after the events of ''VideoGame/Persona4Arena''. Written by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/4472418/ReachingOutFES Reaching Out FES]]
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** The chapters are references to songs, Strength by Music/AbingdonBoysSchool, ''Anime/GuiltyCrown''[='=]s opening song "The Everlasting Guilty Crown", and ''VideoGame/Persona3Portable'''s Opening Soul Phase.
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** The chapters are references to songs, Strength by Music/AbingdonBoysSchool, ''Anime/GuiltyCrown''[='=]s opening song "The Everlasting Guilty Crown", and ''VideoGame/Persona3Portable'''s ''VideoGame/Persona3 [[VideoGameRemake Portable]]'''s Opening Soul Phase.
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Cutting Attempted Rape since Examples Are Not Arguable, and see Handling Spoilers for how to handle spoilers. Also commenting out Zero Context Example entries.
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* [[spoiler: AloofBigBrother: Played with, Makoto ''is technically'' Minako's big brother, but he's not only aloof to her but Yu and the rest of the gang.]]
* [[spoiler: {{Angst}}: Yu has a bit of this at the end, but he gets better.]]
* [[spoiler: AngstySurvivingTwin: Makoto, the survivor, and Minako, the stillborn.]]
* [[spoiler: AnguishedDeclarationOfLove: Minako says this to Yu, with one of her last breaths.]]
* [[spoiler: AttemptedRape: Played with, the forceful kiss the Entity gives Minako can be considered it.]]
* BackToBackBadasses: Minako and Yu when they fight together.
* [[spoiler: BattleCouple: Yu's and Minako's feelings for each other are implied, and later confirmed, so that along with their fighting together invokes this trope.]]
* [[spoiler: BigBrotherInstinct: Makoto to Minako.]]
** [[spoiler: Yu's to Nanako is lampshaded.]]
** [[spoiler: Yu has a small variation to this as well with Minako because she reminds him of Nanako.]]
* BigEater: Lampshaded about Teddie.
* [[spoiler: BittersweetEnding: Though more on the sweet side as of the last few lines of the fic.]]
* [[spoiler: BreakTheCutie: Minako...a lot...]]
* [[spoiler: {{Angst}}: Yu has a bit of this at the end, but he gets better.]]
* [[spoiler: AngstySurvivingTwin: Makoto, the survivor, and Minako, the stillborn.]]
* [[spoiler: AnguishedDeclarationOfLove: Minako says this to Yu, with one of her last breaths.]]
* [[spoiler: AttemptedRape: Played with, the forceful kiss the Entity gives Minako can be considered it.]]
* BackToBackBadasses: Minako and Yu when they fight together.
* [[spoiler: BattleCouple: Yu's and Minako's feelings for each other are implied, and later confirmed, so that along with their fighting together invokes this trope.]]
* [[spoiler: BigBrotherInstinct: Makoto to Minako.]]
** [[spoiler: Yu's to Nanako is lampshaded.]]
** [[spoiler: Yu has a small variation to this as well with Minako because she reminds him of Nanako.]]
* BigEater: Lampshaded about Teddie.
* [[spoiler: BittersweetEnding: Though more on the sweet side as of the last few lines of the fic.]]
* [[spoiler: BreakTheCutie: Minako...a lot...]]
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* [[spoiler: AloofBigBrother: Played with, Makoto [[spoiler:Makoto ''is technically'' Minako's big brother, but he's not only aloof to her but Yu and the rest of the gang.gang]].
%%* {{Angst}}: [[spoiler:Yu has a bit of this at the end, but he gets better.]]
* [[spoiler: {{Angst}}: Yu has a bit of this at %%* AngstySurvivingTwin: [[spoiler:Makoto, the end, but he gets better.survivor, and Minako, the stillborn.]]
*[[spoiler: AngstySurvivingTwin: Makoto, the survivor, and Minako, the stillborn.AnguishedDeclarationOfLove: [[spoiler:Minako says this to Yu, with one of her last breaths.]]
* [[spoiler: AnguishedDeclarationOfLove: %%* BackToBackBadasses: Minako says and Yu when they fight together.
* BattleCouple: [[spoiler:Yu's and Minako's feelings for each other are implied, and later confirmed, so that along with their fighting together invokes thisto Yu, with one of her last breaths.trope.]]
* [[spoiler: AttemptedRape: Played with, the forceful kiss the Entity gives Minako can be considered it.%%* BigBrotherInstinct:
%%** [[spoiler:Makoto to Minako.]]
* BackToBackBadasses: Minako and Yu when they fight together.
*%%** [[spoiler: BattleCouple: Yu's and Minako's feelings for each other are implied, and later confirmed, so that along with their fighting together invokes this trope.to Nanako is lampshaded.]]
* %%** [[spoiler: BigBrotherInstinct: Makoto Yu has a small variation to Minako.this as well with Minako because she reminds him of Nanako.]]
** %%* BigEater: Lampshaded about Teddie.
%%* BittersweetEnding: [[spoiler:Yu's to Nanako is lampshaded.Though more on the sweet side as of the last few lines of the fic.]]
** [[spoiler: Yu has a small variation to this as well with Minako because she reminds him of Nanako.]]
* BigEater: Lampshaded about Teddie.
* [[spoiler: BittersweetEnding: Though more on the sweet side as of the last few lines of the fic.]]
* [[spoiler:%%* BreakTheCutie: Minako...[[spoiler:Minako...a lot...]]
%%* {{Angst}}: [[spoiler:Yu has a bit of this at the end, but he gets better.]]
*
* BattleCouple: [[spoiler:Yu's and Minako's feelings for each other are implied, and later confirmed, so that along with their fighting together invokes this
%%** [[spoiler:Makoto to Minako.]]
*
%%* BittersweetEnding: [[spoiler:
* BigEater: Lampshaded about Teddie.
* [[spoiler: BittersweetEnding: Though more on the sweet side as of the last few lines of the fic.]]
* [[spoiler:
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** "His smile makes the girls swoon!"
* [[spoiler: [[DidNotGetTheGirl Did Not Get The Girl/Guy]]: Sadly for Yu, Minako faded into nothingness. Also, same goes for Aigis with Makoto, as the same fate with Minako happened to Makoto.]]
* DirectionlessDriver: Rise. That is all.
* [[spoiler:EveryoneCanSeeIt: Everyone can see Yu and Minako care for each other that's beyond friendship....]]
* [[spoiler: FirstKiss: Implied, Entity and Minako.]]
* [[spoiler: ForcefulKiss: Implied, and not the good kind either. Entity does this to Minako.]]
* [[spoiler: [[DidNotGetTheGirl Did Not Get The Girl/Guy]]: Sadly for Yu, Minako faded into nothingness. Also, same goes for Aigis with Makoto, as the same fate with Minako happened to Makoto.]]
* DirectionlessDriver: Rise. That is all.
* [[spoiler:EveryoneCanSeeIt: Everyone can see Yu and Minako care for each other that's beyond friendship....]]
* [[spoiler: FirstKiss: Implied, Entity and Minako.]]
* [[spoiler: ForcefulKiss: Implied, and not the good kind either. Entity does this to Minako.]]
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* [[spoiler: HesBack: Yu recovers from his HeroicBSOD at the very end of the fic.]]
* [[spoiler: HeartbrokenBadass: Yu and Aigis at the end. Yu gets better.]]
* [[spoiler: HeroicBSOD: Minako, twice. Once when her shadow friends died. Second when she starts to have an internal fight with the Entity.]]
** [[spoiler: Aigis and Yu have this at the end of the fic too, or at least is implied.]]
* [[spoiler: HeartbrokenBadass: Yu and Aigis at the end. Yu gets better.]]
* [[spoiler: HeroicBSOD: Minako, twice. Once when her shadow friends died. Second when she starts to have an internal fight with the Entity.]]
** [[spoiler: Aigis and Yu have this at the end of the fic too, or at least is implied.]]
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* [[spoiler: HesBack: Yu [[spoiler:Yu recovers from his HeroicBSOD at the very end of the fic.]]
*[[spoiler: HeartbrokenBadass: Yu [[spoiler:Yu and Aigis at the end. Yu gets better.]]
*[[spoiler: HeroicBSOD: Minako, HeroicBSOD:
** [[spoiler:Minako, twice. Once when her shadow friends died. Second when she starts to have an internal fight with the Entity.]]
** [[spoiler: Aigis andYu Yu]] have this at the end of the fic too, or at least is implied.]]
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** [[spoiler:Minako, twice. Once when her shadow friends died. Second when she starts to have an internal fight with the Entity.]]
** [[spoiler: Aigis and
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* [[spoiler: IHaveYouNowMyPretty: Mavolent Entity does this with an out-of-it Minako.]]
* [[spoiler: [[ILetGwenStacyDie I Let Minako/Makoto Dissapear]]: Yu feels this, and it's implied Aigis feels this too.]]
* {{Irony}}: Lampshaded by narration.
** The irony was Yosuke, a guy, [[DirectionlessDriver wanted to ask for directions]].
* JustFriends: Yu and Minako.....[[spoiler:[[EveryoneCanSeeIt yeahhh riiiight...]]]]
* LadyKillerInLove: Yu with Minako
* [[spoiler: LastRequest: "Don't... despair."]]
* LikeAnOldMarriedCouple: Chie and Yosuke as per usual, lampshaded by characters.
* [[spoiler: [[EveryoneCanSeeIt Makoto Can See It]]: Makoto keeps saying Minako is Yu's girlfriend.]]
* [[spoiler: MindRape: Minako gets this bad...[[note]]and so do the readers to an extent before everything is explained.[[/note]]]]
* [[spoiler: MyGreatestFailure: Yu being unable to protect Minako.]]
* [[NiceGuy Nice Girl]]: Minako.
* NoSenseOfDirection: ''Apparently'' Rise.
* ObliviousToLove: Lampshaded by Rise about Yu.
* SequelHook: Author even lampshades it at the end.
* [[spoiler: [[ILetGwenStacyDie I Let Minako/Makoto Dissapear]]: Yu feels this, and it's implied Aigis feels this too.]]
* {{Irony}}: Lampshaded by narration.
** The irony was Yosuke, a guy, [[DirectionlessDriver wanted to ask for directions]].
* JustFriends: Yu and Minako.....[[spoiler:[[EveryoneCanSeeIt yeahhh riiiight...]]]]
* LadyKillerInLove: Yu with Minako
* [[spoiler: LastRequest: "Don't... despair."]]
* LikeAnOldMarriedCouple: Chie and Yosuke as per usual, lampshaded by characters.
* [[spoiler: [[EveryoneCanSeeIt Makoto Can See It]]: Makoto keeps saying Minako is Yu's girlfriend.]]
* [[spoiler: MindRape: Minako gets this bad...[[note]]and so do the readers to an extent before everything is explained.[[/note]]]]
* [[spoiler: MyGreatestFailure: Yu being unable to protect Minako.]]
* [[NiceGuy Nice Girl]]: Minako.
* NoSenseOfDirection: ''Apparently'' Rise.
* ObliviousToLove: Lampshaded by Rise about Yu.
* SequelHook: Author even lampshades it at the end.
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* [[spoiler: IHaveYouNowMyPretty: Mavolent [[spoiler:Mavolent Entity does this with an out-of-it Minako.]]
* [[spoiler: [[ILetGwenStacyDie I Let Minako/Makoto Dissapear]]: Yu %%* ILetGwenStacyDie: [[spoiler:Yu feels this, and it's implied Aigis feels this too.]]
* {{Irony}}: Lampshaded bynarration.
**narration. The irony was Yosuke, a guy, [[DirectionlessDriver wanted to ask for directions]].
* %%* JustFriends: Yu and Minako.....[[spoiler:[[EveryoneCanSeeIt yeahhh riiiight...]]]]
* %%* LadyKillerInLove: Yu with Minako
* [[spoiler: %%* LastRequest: "Don't...[[spoiler:"Don't... despair."]]
* %%* LikeAnOldMarriedCouple: Chie and Yosuke as per usual, lampshaded by characters.
* %%* MindRape: [[spoiler: [[EveryoneCanSeeIt Makoto Can See It]]: Makoto keeps saying Minako is Yu's girlfriend.]]
* [[spoiler: MindRape:Minako gets this bad...[[note]]and so do the readers to an extent before everything is explained.[[/note]]]]
* [[spoiler: %%* MyGreatestFailure: Yu [[spoiler:Yu being unable to protect Minako.]]
* [[NiceGuy Nice Girl]]: %%* NiceGirl: Minako.
* %%* NoSenseOfDirection: ''Apparently'' Rise.
* %%* ObliviousToLove: Lampshaded by Rise about Yu.
* %%* SequelHook: Author even lampshades it at the end.
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* ShipTease: Yu and Minako...BIG TIME! And then for those with ShippingGoggles, below examples are as followed:
** Kanji being Kanji around Naoto, and Naoto ignoring him.
** a small one with Yukiko and Kanji
** Chie and Yosuke, lampshaded by other characters.
** Kanji being Kanji around Naoto, and Naoto ignoring him.
** a small one with Yukiko and Kanji
** Chie and Yosuke, lampshaded by other characters.
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* ShipTease: ShipTease:
%%** Yu and Minako...BIGTIME! And then for those with ShippingGoggles, below examples are as followed:
**TIME!
%%** Kanji being Kanji around Naoto, and Naoto ignoring him.
** %%** a small one with Yukiko and Kanji
** %%** Chie and Yosuke, lampshaded by other characters.
%%** Yu and Minako...BIG
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%%** Kanji being Kanji around Naoto, and Naoto ignoring him.
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** ''Manga/FullmetalAlchemist''
** The chapters are references to songs, Strength by Abingdon Boys School, Guilty Crown's opening song "The Everlasting Guilty Crown", and Persona 3 Portable's Opening Soul Phase.
** The chapters are references to songs, Strength by Abingdon Boys School, Guilty Crown's opening song "The Everlasting Guilty Crown", and Persona 3 Portable's Opening Soul Phase.
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** The chapters are references to songs, Strength by
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* [[spoiler: TheseHandsHaveKilled: Minako's and Yu's reactions about how they've killed shadows, after Minako lost her shadow friends.]]
* [[spoiler: TomatoInTheMirror: Minako, she's Makoto's Shadow, and she has the Entity hiding inside her.]]
* [[spoiler: TragicKeepsake: Yu has Minako's ribbon.]]
* [[spoiler:WillTheyOrWontThey: Yu and Minako, seems to be like this for awhile.]]
* [[YouDidntAsk You Never Asked]]: Aigis replies with this after being question why she didn't says so sooner that she had a GPS built in.
* [[spoiler: TomatoInTheMirror: Minako, she's Makoto's Shadow, and she has the Entity hiding inside her.]]
* [[spoiler: TragicKeepsake: Yu has Minako's ribbon.]]
* [[spoiler:WillTheyOrWontThey: Yu and Minako, seems to be like this for awhile.]]
* [[YouDidntAsk You Never Asked]]: Aigis replies with this after being question why she didn't says so sooner that she had a GPS built in.
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* {{Badass}}: Minako and Yu are described as this.
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** The irony was Yosuke, a guy, [[Directionless Driver wanted to ask for directions]].
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** The irony was Yosuke, a guy, [[Directionless Driver [[DirectionlessDriver wanted to ask for directions]].
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* [[spoiler: NonIdenticalTwins: Makoto and Minako, lampshaded by others.]]
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[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9173652/1/Fake-Me Fake Me]] is a {{Persona4}} fanfiction that takes place a week after the events of Persona4Arena. Written by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/4472418/ReachingOutFES Reaching Out FES]]
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[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9173652/1/Fake-Me Fake Me]] is a {{Persona4}} ''VideoGame/{{Persona 4}}'' fanfiction that takes place a week after the events of Persona4Arena.''VideoGame/Persona4Arena''. Written by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/4472418/ReachingOutFES Reaching Out FES]]
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* [[spoiler: MindRape: Minako gets this bad...[[hottip:*:and so do the readers to an extent before everything is explained.]]]]
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* [[spoiler: MindRape: Minako gets this bad...[[hottip:*:and [[note]]and so do the readers to an extent before everything is explained.]]]][[/note]]]]
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* SheIsNotMyGirlfriend: Yu says this each time someone [[hottip:*:[[spoiler: Makoto]] says Minako is his girlfriend.
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* SheIsNotMyGirlfriend: Yu says this each time someone [[hottip:*:[[spoiler: Makoto]] [[note]][[spoiler: Makoto]][[/note]] says Minako is his girlfriend.
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*[[spoiler:EveryoneCanSeeIt: Everyone can see Yu and Minako care for each other that's beyond friendship....]]
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*JustFriends: Yu and Minako.....[[spoiler:[[EveryoneCanSeeIt yeahhh riiiight...]]]]
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*[[spoiler:WillTheyOrWontThey: Yu and Minako, seems to be like this for awhile.]]
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* FromDresstoDressing: Minako's ribbon to Yu's wound on head.
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* FromDresstoDressing: FromDressToDressing: Minako's ribbon to Yu's wound on head.
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* DirectionlessDriver: Inverted. Rise, that is all.
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* DirectionlessDriver: Inverted. Rise, that Rise. That is all.
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** The irony was Yosuke, a guy, wanted to ask for directions.
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** The irony was Yosuke, a guy, [[Directionless Driver wanted to ask for directions.directions]].
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* SheIsNotMyGirlfriend: Yu says this each time someone [[hottip:*:[[spoiler: Makoto]]]] says Minako is his girlfriend.
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* SheIsNotMyGirlfriend: Yu says this each time someone [[hottip:*:[[spoiler: Makoto]]]] Makoto]] says Minako is his girlfriend.
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* [[spoiler: [[DidNotGetTheGirl Did Not Get The Girl/Guy]]: Sadly for Yu, Minako faded into nothiness. Also, same goes for Aigis with Makoto, as the same fate with Minako happened to Makoto.]]
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* [[spoiler: [[DidNotGetTheGirl Did Not Get The Girl/Guy]]: Sadly for Yu, Minako faded into nothiness.nothingness. Also, same goes for Aigis with Makoto, as the same fate with Minako happened to Makoto.]]
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* [[spoiler: LastRequest: "Don't...despair."]]
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* [[spoiler: LastRequest: "Don't... despair."]]
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* [[spoiler: MindRape: Minako gets this bad.....[[hottip:*:and so do the readers to an extent before everything is explained.]]]]
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* [[spoiler: MindRape: Minako gets this bad.....bad...[[hottip:*:and so do the readers to an extent before everything is explained.]]]]
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* SheIsNotMyGirlfriend: Yu says this each time someone [[hottip:*:[[spoiler: Makoto.]] says Minako is his girlfriend.
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* SheIsNotMyGirlfriend: Yu says this each time someone [[hottip:*:[[spoiler: Makoto.]] Makoto]]]] says Minako is his girlfriend.
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* Badass: Minako and Yu are described as this.
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* Badass: {{Badass}}: Minako and Yu are described as this.
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* [[spoiler: BitterSweetEnding: Though more on the sweet side as of the last few lines of the fic.]]
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* [[spoiler: BitterSweetEnding: BittersweetEnding: Though more on the sweet side as of the last few lines of the fic.]]