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* TheBlacksmith: Tenten has created most of the characters' weapons, and in the case of herself and Hinata, their armor as well. Naruto has also made weapons for the protagonists, most notably Hinata's BladeOnAStick.
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* TheBlacksmith: Tenten has created most of the characters' weapons, and in the case of herself and Hinata, their armor as well. Naruto has also made weapons for the protagonists, most notably Hinata's BladeOnAStick.spear.
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* WeaponOfChoice: The heroes all get one. Naruto uses a saber/cutlass, Hinata wields a short staff with a long double-edged blade that extends out of each end, Tenten has [[EnergyWeapon Soujihonou]] and [[spoiler: Umiyou,]] Gaara has [[KatanasAreJustBetter Kuroshi,]] Sasuke gets a shashka, [[spoiler: Kimimaro]] has his JoustingLance.
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* WeaponOfChoice: The WeaponSpecialization: Each of the heroes all get one. wield a unique weapon. Naruto uses a saber/cutlass, Hinata wields a short staff with a long double-edged blade that extends out of each end, Tenten has [[EnergyWeapon Soujihonou]] and [[spoiler: Umiyou,]] Gaara has [[KatanasAreJustBetter Kuroshi,]] a katana named Kuroshi, Sasuke gets a shashka, [[spoiler: Kimimaro]] has his JoustingLance.
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* ForWantOfANail: The Uzumaki Clan. They still have gigantic Chakra Reserves like in Canon, but as stated under Retcon, the Rinnegan exists as a Kekkei Genkai for them. They also have a SECOND Kekkei Genkai, although it's something that was already witnessed being used by an Uzumaki in Canon(the Chakra Chains). [[spoiler: To be fair, Word of God stated that an Uzumaki can only have one Kekkei Genkai or the other, not both(which is witnessed with Naruto and his ancestor Mito, who both have the Rinnegan, while Kushina had Chakra Chains, and by all rights should've awakened the Rinnegan under the circumstances prior to her death, but she never did); further, the canon's idea of Sharingan+Senju DNA=Rinnegan instead creates a stronger/better Rinnegan in ADS, as Madara states upon his resurrection(as Nagato's Rinnegan are not natural; just like with Canon, they're Madara's implanted eyes).]]
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From there, we start getting new plotlines woven into the ones adapted from canon, [[CrowningMomentOfAwesome along with plenty of awesome moments.]]
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* AllThereInTheManual: The author's profile is dedicated to listing every original jutsu and ninja tool in the story, among other things. Normally most of this has already been made clear in the story proper, but one example stands out. The ANBU kunai Gaara gives to Tenten in Chapter 15 is stated in the 'Additional Content' to have originally belonged to the first ANBU that Gaara ever killed. [[FridgeLogic The first ANBU Gaara ever killed was]] [[TearJerker Yashamaru]].
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* AllThereInTheManual: The author's profile is dedicated to listing every original jutsu and ninja tool in the story, among other things. Normally most of this has already been made clear in the story proper, but one example stands out. The ANBU kunai Gaara gives to Tenten in Chapter 15 is stated in the 'Additional Content' to have originally belonged to the first ANBU that Gaara ever killed. [[FridgeLogic The first ANBU Gaara ever killed was]] [[TearJerker Yashamaru]].was Yashamaru.
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* WorldOfSnark: Even Gaara has his moments, for instance in Chapter 30.
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* WorldOfSnark: Even Gaara has his moments, for instance in Chapter 30.
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--> Hi. My name is Tenten. If you survive long enoygh to fall asleep ever again, you'll have nightmares about me.
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--> Hi. My name is Tenten. If you survive long enoygh enough to fall asleep ever again, you'll have nightmares about me.
* EyeScream: as befits the source material; eye transplants rarely have willing donors. [[spoiler:Nagato]] is particularly unlucky. In his first on-screen appearance, he has an eye torn out for [[spoiler:Madara]] (although he does get a replacement). Later, he has his other eye stolen by [[spoiler:Zetsu]]; and then he goes blind in his remaining eye.
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* SwordBeam: One of Naruto's wind jutsu lets him throw blades of wind with his sword. [[spoiler: When this along with his other wind attacks prove usesless against Kisame, he creates a new jutsu that lets him create and throw giant blades of metal the same way.]]
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* SwordBeam: One of Naruto's wind jutsu lets him throw blades of wind with his sword. [[spoiler: When this along with his other wind attacks prove usesless useless against Kisame, he creates a new jutsu that lets him create and throw giant blades of metal the same way.]]
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[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9598944/1/A-Different-Scroll A Different Scroll]] is a Manga/{{Naruto}} {{For Want of a Nail}} fic by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/3830006/BlueWolf1923 BlueWolf1923]]. According to {{Word of God}}, the author has [[OneOfUs wanted a page here]] for a while now.
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[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9598944/1/A-Different-Scroll A Different Scroll]] is a Manga/{{Naruto}} {{For Want of a Nail}} fic by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/3830006/BlueWolf1923 BlueWolf1923]]. According to {{Word of God}}, the author has [[OneOfUs wanted a page here]] here for a while now.
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** Another difference is the Uzumaki Clan. They still have gigantic Chakra Reserves like in Canon, but as stated under Retcon, the Rinnegan exists as a Kekkei Genkai for them. They also have a SECOND Kekkei Genkai, although it's something that was already witnessed being used by an Uzumaki in Canon(the Chakra Chains). [[spoiler: To be fair, WordOfGod stated that an Uzumaki can only have one Kekkei Genkai or the other, not both(which is witnessed with Naruto and his ancestor Mito, who both have the Rinnegan, while Kushina had Chakra Chains, and by all rights ''should've'' awakened the Rinnegan under the circumstances prior to her death, but she never did); further, the canon's idea of Sharingan+Senju DNA=Rinnegan instead creates a stronger/better Rinnegan in ADS, as Madara states upon his resurrection(as Nagato's Rinnegan are not natural; just like with Canon, they're Madara's implanted eyes).]]
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* Invasion of Pain Arc: Chapters 73-Current
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* ActorAllusion: In chapter 41, Naruto briefly mentions [[NanaMizuki Hinata's]] [[AwesomeMusic/NanaMizuki incredible singing voice.]]
* AlternateUniverse: Although the premise makes the story seem more like ForWantOfANail, it's actually more of this due to multiple changes in the backstory, all of which have NOTHING to do the "Nail".
** The earliest chronological difference between ADS and Canon is the Sage of the Six Paths. [[spoiler: Just like Canon, Hagoromo is still a messianic Badass who fights and seals away his mother-turned-evil along with the Ten Tails; however, WordOfGod for ADS has stated that his brother, Hamura(who was also born with Chakra, and helped Hagoromo defeat their mother), was never born alongside him, making Hagoromo an only child.]]
** Another difference is the Uzumaki Clan. They still have gigantic Chakra Reserves like in Canon, but as stated under Retcon, the Rinnegan exists as a Kekkei Genkai for them. They also have a SECOND Kekkei Genkai, although it's something that was already witnessed being used by an Uzumaki in Canon(the Chakra Chains). [[spoiler: To be fair, WordOfGod stated that an Uzumaki can only have one Kekkei Genkai or the other, not both(which is witnessed with Naruto and his ancestor Mito, who both have the Rinnegan, while Kushina had Chakra Chains, and by all rights ''should've'' awakened the Rinnegan under the circumstances prior to her death, but she never did); further, the canon's idea of Sharingan+Senju DNA=Rinnegan instead creates a stronger/better Rinnegan in ADS, as Madara states upon his resurrection(as Nagato's Rinnegan are not natural; just like with Canon, they're Madara's implanted eyes).]]
** The earliest chronological difference between ADS and Canon is the Sage of the Six Paths. [[spoiler: Just like Canon, Hagoromo is still a messianic Badass who fights and seals away his mother-turned-evil along with the Ten Tails; however, WordOfGod for ADS has stated that his brother, Hamura(who was also born with Chakra, and helped Hagoromo defeat their mother), was never born alongside him, making Hagoromo an only child.]]
** Another difference is the Uzumaki Clan. They still have gigantic Chakra Reserves like in Canon, but as stated under Retcon, the Rinnegan exists as a Kekkei Genkai for them. They also have a SECOND Kekkei Genkai, although it's something that was already witnessed being used by an Uzumaki in Canon(the Chakra Chains). [[spoiler: To be fair, WordOfGod stated that an Uzumaki can only have one Kekkei Genkai or the other, not both(which is witnessed with Naruto and his ancestor Mito, who both have the Rinnegan, while Kushina had Chakra Chains, and by all rights ''should've'' awakened the Rinnegan under the circumstances prior to her death, but she never did); further, the canon's idea of Sharingan+Senju DNA=Rinnegan instead creates a stronger/better Rinnegan in ADS, as Madara states upon his resurrection(as Nagato's Rinnegan are not natural; just like with Canon, they're Madara's implanted eyes).]]
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* GeniusBonus: Jiraiya's chosen alias is Ogata Hiroyuki, the original name of the PublicDomainCharacter from Jiraiya Gouketsu Monogatari (the Tale of the Gallant Young Thunder), which was the story the Legendary Sannin were based on.
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* MagnificentBastard: Kabuto, after [[spoiler: subjugating Orochimaru with a Cursed Seal, taking over Oto, officially calling himself Otokage, and joining Akatsuki.]] The author openly refers to him as the Aizen of the story.
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* MagnificentBastard: Kabuto, after MundaneUtility: Less Mundane and more Brilliant, though; [[spoiler: subjugating Orochimaru At least twice so far, [[YearInsideHourOutside Tsukuyomi]] was used by Sasuke and Itachi ON THEIR OWN ALLY, but they did so to formulate Battle Strategies with said ally. In the span of an instant.]]
* NotTheIntendedUse: Sort of example; the Rasengan in Canon has only ever been used as aCursed Seal, taking over Oto, officially calling himself Otokage, Melee attack by EVERYONE who knew it, and joining Akatsuki.]] The author openly refers to him Naruto only ever used it as a ranged attack once he developed and mastered the Aizen of Rasenshuriken. In ADS, Hinata(who learns it before Naruto, since he was trying to learn/master his Rinnegan at the story.time) inadvertently performs a successful Rasengan toss while training with Jiraiya, which [[EurekaMoment completely blows his mind]]. Following that, thrown Rasengans became much more common among everyone who learned it.
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* VillainSue: YMMV, but [[WordOfGod the author]] has referred to Kouga as one.
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--> Naruto: [[NotSoHarmless [[NotSoHarmlessVillain Mizuki-sensei!]][[labelnote:Explanation]]Up until this point, the readers had been led to believe that Mizuki was captured or killed when he tried to steal the Scroll of Seals instead of Naruto doing it for him. Instead, he actually managed to get the scroll and has had access to it since the start of the story. [[/labelnote]]
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* WhatCouldHaveBeen: The author stated in early author's notes that Naruto's chakra reserves were meant to be [[{{Nerf}} nerfed]] to high Chuunin-level, but this has since been [[RetCon retconned]] away. The only times he's ever run out of chakra were in Chapter 1, Chapter 4, and [[spoiler: in Chapter 22 at the end of his over-the-top match with Hinata in the Chuunin Exams.]]
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* BFS: {{BFS}}: Tenten's latest weapon Umiyou is a six-foot-long falchion. Naruto lampshades it, but Tenten justifies it with special fuinjutsu that make it as light as a normal sword.
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* Troll: Kiba's main strategy seems to be switching between trolling his opponents and scaring the ever-loving shit out of them. Orochimaru has also been trolling the entire cast since his debut, including the protagonists, his own subordinates, and even [[spoiler: Kabuto after the latter subjugates him with a Cursed Seal.]]
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* Troll: {{Troll}}: Kiba's main strategy seems to be switching between trolling his opponents and scaring the ever-loving shit out of them. Orochimaru has also been trolling the entire cast since his debut, including the protagonists, his own subordinates, and even [[spoiler: Kabuto after the latter subjugates him with a Cursed Seal.]]
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* GeniusBonus: Jiraiya's chosen alias is Ogata Hiroyuki, the name of the PublicDomainCharacter from Jiraiya Gouketsu Monogatari (the Tale of the Gallant Young Thunder).
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* BackFromTheDead: [[spoiler: Chronologically, Madara, Nawaki, Dan, Kushina.]]
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* BackFromTheDead: [[spoiler: Chronologically, Madara, Nawaki, Dan, Kushina.]]Dan.]]
* BadassBoast: Frequently. As an example, here's Tenten's greeting to Kisame:
--> Hi. My name is Tenten. If you survive long enoygh to fall asleep ever again, you'll have nightmares about me.
* BadassBoast: Frequently. As an example, here's Tenten's greeting to Kisame:
--> Hi. My name is Tenten. If you survive long enoygh to fall asleep ever again, you'll have nightmares about me.
* BerserkButton: Gaara loses his shit on anyone who lands a hit on Tenten in battle. Funnily enough, this is actually her BerserkButton, as she can't stand how overprotective he is and wants to win her own battles without him stepping in.
* BFS: Tenten's latest weapon Umiyou is a six-foot-long falchion. Naruto lampshades it, but Tenten justifies it with special fuinjutsu that make it as light as a normal sword.
* BFS: Tenten's latest weapon Umiyou is a six-foot-long falchion. Naruto lampshades it, but Tenten justifies it with special fuinjutsu that make it as light as a normal sword.
* GeniusBonus: Jiraiya's chosen alias is Ogata Hiroyuki, the name of the PublicDomainCharacter from Jiraiya Gouketsu Monogatari (the Tale of the Gallant Young Thunder).
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* TheBlacksmith: Tenten has created most of the characters' weapons, and in the case of herself and Hinata, their armor as well.
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* TeleportSpam: FlashStep-style jutsu are much more common in this story than canon, and one in particular, the Empty Wind, is Naruto's SignatureMove.
* TheBlacksmith: Tenten has created most of the characters' weapons, and in the case of herself and Hinata, their armor as well. Naruto has also made weapons for the protagonists, most notably Hinata's BladeOnAStick.
* TheBlacksmith: Tenten has created most of the characters' weapons, and in the case of herself and Hinata, their armor as well. Naruto has also made weapons for the protagonists, most notably Hinata's BladeOnAStick.
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* Troll: Kiba's main strategy seems to be switching between trolling his opponents and scaring the ever-loving shit out of them. Orochimaru has also been trolling the entire cast since his debut, including the protagonists, his own subordinates, and even [[spoiler: Kabuto after the latter subjugates him with a Cursed Seal.]]
* UnsettlingGenderReveal: Lampshaded and comically deconstructed by Haku himself.
* UnsettlingGenderReveal: Lampshaded and comically deconstructed by Haku himself.
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* WorldOfSnark: Even Gaara has his moments, for instance in Chapter 30.
* WorldOfSnark: Even Gaara has his moments, for instance in Chapter 30.
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* ActionGirl: Hinata and Tenten.
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* KnightInShiningArmor: Of all people, [[spoiler: Kimimaro]] has this motif, wielding a shield and JoustingLance along with heavy plate armor [[spoiler: made of his bones]]. Really, the only thing he's missing is a LadyAndKnight dynamic with [[spoiler: Karin]].
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* Sasuke Gaiden Arc: Chapters 48-52