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* AndIMustScream: [[spoiler:Her punishment after the Xor-Talatia saga. A week of solitary confinement in a device called a vacbed. With only three hours of freedom a day.]]
* CoolAndUnusualPunishment: [[spoiler:Her punishment after the Xor-Talatia saga. A week of solitary confinement in a device called a vacbed. With only three hours of freedom a day.]]
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* TheCorrupter: [[spoiler:Manifests as a "black miasma" of pure hatred, clinging to anyone associated with the world government]]
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* TheCorrupter: [[spoiler:Manifests as a "black miasma" of pure hatred, clinging to anyone associated with the world government]]government]].
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* DemonOfHumanOrigin: Was able to anchor himself to the souls of tribal leaders and feed parasitically on their xenophobia after being vaporized. After a thousand years, those tribal cheifs had evolved into the governments of the world.
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* DemonOfHumanOrigin: Was able to anchor himself to the souls of tribal leaders and feed parasitically on their xenophobia after being vaporized. After a thousand years, those tribal cheifs chiefs had evolved into the governments of the world.
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* ThisWasHisTrueForm: At the end [[spoiler:you see him as just a bitter old man before he disappears completely.]]
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* ThisWasHisTrueForm: At the end [[spoiler:you see him as just a bitter old man before he disappears completely. [[NotQuiteDead though it was later revealed that he managed to survived thanks to the darkness present in the hearts of many of humans.]]
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* WhipOfDominance: Mistress Sixx wields a riding cop as her primary weapon and is the {{Dominatrix}} protagonist of the story, as one of the heads of the "Global Dominance Association". She even refers to her employers as her "slaves".
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* WhipOfDominance: Mistress Sardonyx is also armed with a riding crop and is a {{Dominatrix}} with an equestrian motif, being able to use her whip to tame other doms, [[ForcedTransformation literally turning them into ponies]].
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* HappinessInSlavery: Turns out she actually enjoys being a pony.
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** HappinessInSlavery: Turns out she actually enjoys being a pony.
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* WhipItGood: Sardonyx wields an enchanted riding crop she calls the Tamer.
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* DeterminedWidow: Became this after the death of her husband William [[spoiler:including becoming an agent like he was]]
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* DarkSkinnedBlond: A mild example, since she has noticeably darker skin than Laura, who's also blond. [[spoiler:Subverted since she's not a natural blond]].
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* BarbarianLongHair: While not specifically barbaric, he is considerably muscular, too big to be considered a LongHairedPrettyBoy.
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* LongHairedPrettyBoy: Quite.
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* BadassBookworm: Well-spoken, well-read.
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* GeniusBruiser: Well-spoken, well-read. Also, see the trope below.
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* RapunzelHair: Even in her default style (a high ponytail), it reaches the back of her knees. WordOfGod says she can change its length at will.
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* RapunzelHair: Like her daughter, she sports a huge ponytail.
