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--> "Now that you're all beautiful and perfect, you think everything's just hunky dory. Well it's not! When I first met you, no one could even stand the ''sight'' of you. Because you were a disgusting ''freak''. And I can take you back there!"
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--> "Now that you're all beautiful and perfect, you think everything's just hunky dory. Well it's not! When I first met you, no one could even stand the ''sight'' of you. Because you were a disgusting ''freak''. And I can take you back there!"there! And don't you doubt that!"
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* Sarah finally [[spoiler: tapping into her raw magic potential and kicking Nancy's ass. Especially her stepping ''out of a mirror'' and successfully cancelling out all three girl's]] powers.
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* Sarah finally [[spoiler: tapping into her raw magic potential and kicking Nancy's ass. Especially her stepping ''out of a mirror'' and successfully cancelling out all three girl's]] girl's powers.
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* When Bonnie and Rochelle mockingly state that Sarah "probably doesn't have any powers any way" after she refuses to hang out with them [[spoiler: after they terrorised and tried to kill her]], Sarah abruptly turns around and calmly summons lightning to strike a tree branch, which almost falls on the two girls. As they're cowering before her, she simply warns them to be careful as they "don't wanna end up like Nancy." [[spoiler: whose ass Sarah utterly kicked in the previous scene]].
* Whilst [[NightmareFuel terrifying]], the scene where Nancy confronts Chris over his behaviour [[spoiler: and throws him out the window]] is pretty awesome too. Nancy goes from taunting to deranged in a matter of seconds and starts ''floating over the ground'' towards him as he backs up in fear, whilst she rants about his poor treatment of women, his "whore" behaviour and how he's "nothing" to her.
* Whilst [[NightmareFuel terrifying]], the scene where Nancy confronts Chris over his behaviour [[spoiler: and throws him out the window]] is pretty awesome too. Nancy goes from taunting to deranged in a matter of seconds and starts ''floating over the ground'' towards him as he backs up in fear, whilst she rants about his poor treatment of women, his "whore" behaviour and how he's "nothing" to her.
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* When Bonnie and Rochelle mockingly state that Sarah "probably doesn't have any powers any way" after she refuses to hang out with them [[spoiler: after they terrorised and tried to kill her]], her, Sarah abruptly turns around and calmly summons lightning to strike a tree branch, which almost falls on the two girls. As they're cowering before her, she simply warns them to be careful as they "don't wanna end up like Nancy." [[spoiler: whose ass Sarah utterly kicked in the previous scene]].scene.
* Whilst [[NightmareFuel terrifying]], the scene where Nancy confronts Chris over his behaviour[[spoiler: and throws him out the window]] window is pretty awesome too. Nancy goes from taunting to deranged in a matter of seconds and starts ''floating over the ground'' towards him as he backs up in fear, whilst she rants about his poor treatment of women, his "whore" behaviour and how he's "nothing" to her.
* Whilst [[NightmareFuel terrifying]], the scene where Nancy confronts Chris over his behaviour
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--> "[[BreakTheHaughty Did I frighten you, Nancy? I'm sorry."]]
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* Whilst [[NightmareFuel terrifying]], the scene where Nancy confronts Chris over his behaviour [[spoiler: and throws him out the window]] is pretty awesome too. Nancy goes from taunting to deranged in a matter of seconds and starts ''floating over the ground'' towards him as he backs up in fear, whilst she rants about his poor treatment of women, his "whore" behaviour and how he's "nothing" to her.
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* Whilst [[NightmareFuel terrifying]], the scene where Nancy confronts Chris over his behaviour [[spoiler: and throws him out the window]] is pretty awesome too. Nancy goes from taunting to deranged in a matter of seconds and starts ''floating over the ground'' towards him as he backs up in fear, whilst she rants about his poor treatment of women, his "whore" behaviour and how he's "nothing" to her.her.
* Also terrifying, but the DeletedScene in which Nancy chews out her friends has a moment where [[VillainHasAPoint she's actually in the right]]: she gives Bonnie TheReasonYouSuckSpeech about how she doesn't seem to care about anything or anyone else now that she's got what she wants.
--> "Now that you're all beautiful and perfect, you think everything's just hunky dory. Well it's not! When I first met you, no one could even stand the ''sight'' of you. Because you were a disgusting ''freak''. And I can take you back there!"
* Rochelle at least has the decency to stand up to Nancy in the climax, telling her the whole thing is going too far. Sure, Nancy threatens to kill her as well, but at least she tried.
* Also terrifying, but the DeletedScene in which Nancy chews out her friends has a moment where [[VillainHasAPoint she's actually in the right]]: she gives Bonnie TheReasonYouSuckSpeech about how she doesn't seem to care about anything or anyone else now that she's got what she wants.
--> "Now that you're all beautiful and perfect, you think everything's just hunky dory. Well it's not! When I first met you, no one could even stand the ''sight'' of you. Because you were a disgusting ''freak''. And I can take you back there!"
* Rochelle at least has the decency to stand up to Nancy in the climax, telling her the whole thing is going too far. Sure, Nancy threatens to kill her as well, but at least she tried.
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* When Bonnie and Rochelle mockingly state that Sarah "probably doesn't have any powers any way" after she refuses to hang out with them [[spoiler: after they terrorised and tried to kill her]], Sarah abruptly turns around and calmly summons lightning to strike a tree branch, which almost falls on the two girls. As they're cowering before her, she simply warns them be careful as they "Don't wanna end up like Nancy." [[spoiler: whose ass Sarah utterly kicked in the previous scene]].
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* When Bonnie and Rochelle mockingly state that Sarah "probably doesn't have any powers any way" after she refuses to hang out with them [[spoiler: after they terrorised and tried to kill her]], Sarah abruptly turns around and calmly summons lightning to strike a tree branch, which almost falls on the two girls. As they're cowering before her, she simply warns them to be careful as they "Don't "don't wanna end up like Nancy." [[spoiler: whose ass Sarah utterly kicked in the previous scene]].
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* When Bonnie and Rochelle mockingly state that Sarah "probably doesn't have any powers any way" after she refuses to hang out with them [[spoiler: after they terrorised and tried to kill her]], Sarah abruptly turns around and calmly summons lightning to strike a tree branch, which almost falls on the two girls. As they're cowering before her, she simply warns them be careful as they "Don't wanna end up like Nancy." [[spoiler: who's ass Sara utterly kicked in the previous scene]].
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* When Bonnie and Rochelle mockingly state that Sarah "probably doesn't have any powers any way" after she refuses to hang out with them [[spoiler: after they terrorised and tried to kill her]], Sarah abruptly turns around and calmly summons lightning to strike a tree branch, which almost falls on the two girls. As they're cowering before her, she simply warns them be careful as they "Don't wanna end up like Nancy." [[spoiler: who's whose ass Sara Sarah utterly kicked in the previous scene]].
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* When Bonnie and Rochelle mockingly state that Sarah "probably doesn't have any powers any way" after she refuses to hang out with them [[spoiler: after they terrorised and tried to kill her]], Sarah abruptly turns around and calmly summons lightning to strike a tree branch, which almost falls on the two girls. As they're cowering before her, she simply warns them be careful as they "Don't wanna end up like Nancy." [[spoiler: who's ass Sara utterly kicked in the previous scene]].
* Whilst [[NightmareFuel terrifying]], the scene where Nancy confronts Chris over his behaviour [[spoiler: and throws him out the window]] is pretty awesome too. Nancy goes from taunting to deranged in a matter of seconds and starts ''floating over the ground'' towards him as he backs up in fear, whilst she rants about his poor treatment of women, his "whore" behaviour and how he's "nothing" to her.
* Whilst [[NightmareFuel terrifying]], the scene where Nancy confronts Chris over his behaviour [[spoiler: and throws him out the window]] is pretty awesome too. Nancy goes from taunting to deranged in a matter of seconds and starts ''floating over the ground'' towards him as he backs up in fear, whilst she rants about his poor treatment of women, his "whore" behaviour and how he's "nothing" to her.
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* Sarah's father scaring off "the snake man", and killing the snake left behind.
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* Sarah's father jumping to her defense, scaring off "the snake man", shooing Chris off the premises, and killing the snake left behind.
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Taking out the ones about Chris. While he was certainly a dick, using magic to turn him into a love slave then killing him when the spell went awry weren\'t meant to be taken as \"awesome.\"
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* Another one is Sarah turning Chris into a desperate DoggedNiceGuy for spreading fake rumors about them having sex.
* Nancy's revenge on Chris, [[spoiler: for trying to rape Sarah.]]
-->'''Chris:''' You're just jealous!
-->'''Nancy:'''' Jealous? Jealous? You don't even exist to me! You don't exist! You are nothing! You are shit! You don't exist. The only way you know how to treat women is by treating them like whores! Well, you're the whore! And this is gonna stop! Do you understand! Do you understand what I'm saying? Hmm?
-->'''Chris:''' (''frightened'') I'm sorry!
-->'''Nancy:''' Oh, [[MadnessMantra he's sorry! He's sorry, he's sorry,]] [[NightmareFuel HE'S SORRY, HE'S SORRY, HE'S SORRY!]] SORRY, MY ASS!
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* Nancy's revenge on Chris, [[spoiler: for trying to rape Sarah.]]
-->'''Chris:''' You're just jealous!
-->'''Nancy:'''' Jealous? Jealous? You don't even exist to me! You don't exist! You are nothing! You are shit! You don't exist. The only way you know how to treat women is by treating them like whores! Well, you're the whore! And this is gonna stop! Do you understand! Do you understand what I'm saying? Hmm?
-->'''Chris:''' (''frightened'') I'm sorry!
-->'''Nancy:''' Oh, [[MadnessMantra he's sorry! He's sorry, he's sorry,]] [[NightmareFuel HE'S SORRY, HE'S SORRY, HE'S SORRY!]] SORRY, MY ASS!
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* Nancy's revenge on Chris, [[spoiler: for trying to rape Sarah.]]
-->'''Chris:''' You're just jealous!
-->'''Nancy:'''' Jealous? Jealous? You don't even exist to me! You don't exist! You are nothing! You are shit! You don't exist. The only way you know how to treat women is by treating them like whores! Well, you're the whore! And this is gonna stop! Do you understand! Do you understand what I'm saying? Hmm?
-->'''Chris:''' (''frightened'') I'm sorry!
-->'''Nancy:''' Oh, [[MadnessMantra he's sorry! He's sorry, he's sorry,]] [[NightmareFuel HE'S SORRY, HE'S SORRY, HE'S SORRY!]] SORRY, MY ASS!
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--?'''Nancy:''' Oh, [[MadnessMantra he's sorry! He's sorry, he's sorry,]] [[NightmareFuel HE'S SORRY, HE'S SORRY, HE'S SORRY!]] SORRY, MY ASS!
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* Another one is Sarah turning Chris into a desperate DoggedNiceGuy for spreading fake rumors about them having sex.sex.
* Nancy's revenge on Chris, [[spoiler: for trying to rape Sarah.]]
-->'''Chris:''' You're just jealous!
-->'''Nancy:'''' Jealous? Jealous? You don't even exist to me! You don't exist! You are nothing! You are shit! You don't exist. The only way you know how to treat women is by treating them like whores! Well, you're the whore! And this is gonna stop! Do you understand! Do you understand what I'm saying? Hmm?
-->'''Chris:''' (''frightened'') I'm sorry!
--?'''Nancy:''' Oh, [[MadnessMantra he's sorry! He's sorry, he's sorry,]] [[NightmareFuel HE'S SORRY, HE'S SORRY, HE'S SORRY!]] SORRY, MY ASS!
-->(''[[spoiler:Chris is forced out of the window and falls to his death]]'')
* Nancy's revenge on Chris, [[spoiler: for trying to rape Sarah.]]
-->'''Chris:''' You're just jealous!
-->'''Nancy:'''' Jealous? Jealous? You don't even exist to me! You don't exist! You are nothing! You are shit! You don't exist. The only way you know how to treat women is by treating them like whores! Well, you're the whore! And this is gonna stop! Do you understand! Do you understand what I'm saying? Hmm?
-->'''Chris:''' (''frightened'') I'm sorry!
--?'''Nancy:''' Oh, [[MadnessMantra he's sorry! He's sorry, he's sorry,]] [[NightmareFuel HE'S SORRY, HE'S SORRY, HE'S SORRY!]] SORRY, MY ASS!
-->(''[[spoiler:Chris is forced out of the window and falls to his death]]'')
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* Another one is Sarah turing Chris into a deperate DoggedNiceGuy for spreading fake rumors about them having sex.
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* Another one is Sarah turing turning Chris into a deperate desperate DoggedNiceGuy for spreading fake rumors about them having sex.
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* Sarah finally tapping into her raw magic potential and kicking Nancy's ass. Especially her stepping ''out of a mirror'' and successfully cancelling out all three girl's powers.
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* Sarah finally [[spoiler: tapping into her raw magic potential and kicking Nancy's ass. Especially her stepping ''out of a mirror'' and successfully cancelling out all three girl's powers.girl's]] powers.
* Sarah's father scaring off "the snake man", and killing the snake left behind.
* Another one is Sarah turing Chris into a deperate DoggedNiceGuy for spreading fake rumors about them having sex.
* Sarah's father scaring off "the snake man", and killing the snake left behind.
* Another one is Sarah turing Chris into a deperate DoggedNiceGuy for spreading fake rumors about them having sex.
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