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** Haruhi and Kuyou [[CombinationAttack combining their powers]] to launch a [[ChargeAttack charged]] WaveMotionGun at a ''freaking [[http://half-life.wikia.com/wiki/Citadel Citadel]]'', blasting the gargantuan structure out of existence ''in one shot''.
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** Haruhi and Kuyou [[CombinationAttack combining their powers]] to launch a [[ChargeAttack [[ChargedAttack charged]] WaveMotionGun at a ''freaking [[http://half-life.wikia.com/wiki/Citadel Citadel]]'', blasting the gargantuan structure out of existence ''in one shot''.
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*** All the preliminary steps to this moment taken by Achakura are an amazing mix of [[GuileHero guile]] and [[IndyPloy improvisation]]: Can't activate Kyon's tools due to the genetic imprinting system? Get his sister to unlock them. Being forbidden of speaking first because of the "good-child mode"? Prompting Nonoko to speak to her first by catching her attention with simple visual signals [[LoopholeAbuse is not included in the prohibition]]. Once she got her attention, how to convince her to help [[CanNotTellALie without lying]]? Appeal to what little she knew about the girl by [[LieToChildren staging the whole thing]] as a CallToAdventure scene out of a MagicalGirl anime (modeled themes and outfits based on [[Franchise/TouhouProject two]] [[JustForFun/TropeOverdosed well known]] [[Franchise/LyricalNanoha series]] which she probably picked up from Wiki/ThisVeryWiki). Nonoko is too slow to get to Kyon in time by herself? {{Invoke|dTrope}} MegaNeko trope on ChekhovsGunman Shamisen, take a ride on his back while keeping the whole group invisible and directing him through and over traffic. Arguably the best part is that all this took place within the span of minutes.
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*** All the preliminary steps to this moment taken by Achakura are an amazing mix of [[GuileHero guile]] and [[IndyPloy improvisation]]: Can't activate Kyon's tools due to the genetic imprinting system? Get his sister to unlock them. Being forbidden of speaking first because of the "good-child mode"? Prompting Nonoko to speak to her first by catching her attention with simple visual signals [[LoopholeAbuse is not included in the prohibition]]. Once she got her attention, how to convince her to help [[CanNotTellALie without lying]]? Appeal to what little she knew about the girl by [[LieToChildren staging the whole thing]] as a CallToAdventure scene out of a MagicalGirl anime (modeled themes and outfits based on [[Franchise/TouhouProject two]] [[JustForFun/TropeOverdosed well known]] [[Franchise/LyricalNanoha series]] which she probably picked up from Wiki/ThisVeryWiki).Website/ThisVeryWiki). Nonoko is too slow to get to Kyon in time by herself? {{Invoke|dTrope}} MegaNeko trope on ChekhovsGunman Shamisen, take a ride on his back while keeping the whole group invisible and directing him through and over traffic. Arguably the best part is that all this took place within the span of minutes.
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** Happens twice in the same chapter, when we see what Kyon did to intimidate Mori after the 12 Yakuza. [[spoiler:He smashed through a skylight over thirty feet in the air, landed unharmed, made a gratuitous display of telekinesis, handed a spy over to the Organization, and blackmailed her into letting Koizumi become a liaison. He then jumps back out through said skylight.]]
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** Happens twice in the same chapter, when we see what Kyon did to intimidate Mori after the 12 Yakuza. [[spoiler:He He smashed through a skylight over thirty feet in the air, landed unharmed, made a gratuitous display of telekinesis, handed a spy over to the Organization, and blackmailed her into letting Koizumi become a liaison. He then jumps back out through said skylight.]]
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* Koizumi, after being DemotedToExtra for much of the fic, gets his when he [[spoiler:uses his Esper powers outside of Closed Space to utterly ''dismantle'' a laser-slinging future inter-dimensional death bot]].
* Koizumi gets another one in Chapter 44. He single-handedly saves the day when Kyon and Yuki [[spoiler:are surrounded by murderous Yakuza, and are completely [[PowerNullifier depowered]].]]
** Worth of notice is the fact that [[spoiler:Kyon and Yuki weren't precisely helpless until Koizumi's arrival. They went full [[BackToBackBadasses Back-to-Back]] BadassNormal BattleCouple mode on the hit squad up to the point that the biggest concern was if Kyon would [[TheGlovesComeOff start hurting people without caring about the damage done]] or if the yakuza would stop trying to gain reputation points by defeating the Kowa-Keigo in a fight and [[NeverBringAKnifeToAGunFight fall back to guns]] first.]]
* Koizumi gets another one in Chapter 44. He single-handedly saves the day when Kyon and Yuki [[spoiler:are surrounded by murderous Yakuza, and are completely [[PowerNullifier depowered]].]]
** Worth of notice is the fact that [[spoiler:Kyon and Yuki weren't precisely helpless until Koizumi's arrival. They went full [[BackToBackBadasses Back-to-Back]] BadassNormal BattleCouple mode on the hit squad up to the point that the biggest concern was if Kyon would [[TheGlovesComeOff start hurting people without caring about the damage done]] or if the yakuza would stop trying to gain reputation points by defeating the Kowa-Keigo in a fight and [[NeverBringAKnifeToAGunFight fall back to guns]] first.]]
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* Koizumi, after being DemotedToExtra for much of the fic, gets his when he [[spoiler:uses uses his Esper powers outside of Closed Space to utterly ''dismantle'' a laser-slinging future inter-dimensional death bot]].
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* Koizumi gets another one in Chapter 44. He single-handedly saves the day when Kyon and Yuki[[spoiler:are are surrounded by murderous Yakuza, and are completely [[PowerNullifier depowered]].]]
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** Worth of notice is the fact that[[spoiler:Kyon Kyon and Yuki weren't precisely helpless until Koizumi's arrival. They went full [[BackToBackBadasses Back-to-Back]] BadassNormal BattleCouple mode on the hit squad up to the point that the biggest concern was if Kyon would [[TheGlovesComeOff start hurting people without caring about the damage done]] or if the yakuza would stop trying to gain reputation points by defeating the Kowa-Keigo in a fight and [[NeverBringAKnifeToAGunFight fall back to guns]] first.]]
* Koizumi gets another one in Chapter 44. He single-handedly saves the day when Kyon and Yuki
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** Kyon and Haruhi's battle against [[AlienInvaders Slider Invaders]], [[spoiler:even if both needed to be bailed out of it in the end]]:
*** Kyon, [[WeHaveForgottenThePhlebotinum without weapons, shields, invisibility or AR-based tactical intel]], escaping from a pack of [[VideoGame/HalfLife2 Combine's]] [[EliteMooks Hun]][[LightningBruiser ters]] [[spoiler:while {{bridal carry}}ing a defenseless and barely responsive Kuyou]]. His tactics ranged from the clever and sound to the improvised and desperate and involved, among other things, exploiting the terrain for all its worth, utilizing his gravity manipulators to hurl blunt objects à la "gravity gun" and ''lots'' of running. [[spoiler:His one big mistake was to get himself distracted by [[SarcasmMode something as trivial as]] a gaping tear in the fabric of reality superimposing most of the sky.]]
*** If Kyon's fight reminisced a soldier in a desperate situation, then Haruhi's was like a savvy player in a new game. She invoked semi-autonomous PureEnergy {{Attack Drone}}s, made extensive use of {{Telekinesis}} to manipulate enemy fire and the terrain and was able to devise and discard several tactics on the fly while fending off a lot of enemy Synths at the same time. She easily outclassed every {{Mook}} in there but [[spoiler:[[SkilledButNaive she sorely lacked the right mindset to fight]]]].
** [[spoiler:MagicalGirl]] ''Nonoko'' and [[spoiler:MegaNeko]] ''Shamisen'' have a BigDamnHeroes moment!
*** All the preliminary steps to this moment taken by [[spoiler:Achakura]] are an amazing mix of [[GuileHero guile]] and [[IndyPloy improvisation]]: [[spoiler:Can't activate Kyon's tools due to the genetic imprinting system? Get his sister to unlock them. Being forbidden of speaking first because of the "good-child mode"? Prompting Nonoko to speak to her first by catching her attention with simple visual signals [[LoopholeAbuse is not included in the prohibition]]. Once she got her attention, how to convince her to help [[CanNotTellALie without lying]]? Appeal to what little she knew about the girl by [[LieToChildren staging the whole thing]] as a CallToAdventure scene out of a MagicalGirl anime (modeled themes and outfits based on [[Franchise/TouhouProject two]] [[JustForFun/TropeOverdosed well known]] [[Franchise/LyricalNanoha series]] which she probably picked up from Wiki/ThisVeryWiki). Nonoko is too slow to get to Kyon in time by herself? {{Invoke|dTrope}} MegaNeko trope on ChekhovsGunman Shamisen, take a ride on his back while keeping the whole group invisible and directing him through and over traffic]]. Arguably the best part is that all this took place within the span of minutes.
** Kuyou destroying [[spoiler:her alternate self]] with the activation of her ''[[FunSize chibi-mode]]''. Yes, you read that right. [[spoiler:This may require an explanation: Until the moment Kuyou joined the SOS Brigade, she didn't possess the innate capability to retain information. Instead her sentience depended on her '''enormous''' observational scope, in both the spatial and temporal sense, to re-observe each event as needed. Knowing this, slider!Kuyou tried to overwhelm Kuyou's awareness with observations of her own alternate reality by "synchronizing" with her, a process which would effectively [[LossOfIdentity overwrite Kuyou]] to the complete likeness of the former. To avoid this, Kuyou activated her [[ChekhovsHobby previously unused]] chibi-mode, becoming something practically undetectable to slider!Kuyou's perceptions. The end result was that slider!Kuyou successfully synchronized with an effective "nothing" and basically deleted herself.]]
*** Kyon, [[WeHaveForgottenThePhlebotinum without weapons, shields, invisibility or AR-based tactical intel]], escaping from a pack of [[VideoGame/HalfLife2 Combine's]] [[EliteMooks Hun]][[LightningBruiser ters]] [[spoiler:while {{bridal carry}}ing a defenseless and barely responsive Kuyou]]. His tactics ranged from the clever and sound to the improvised and desperate and involved, among other things, exploiting the terrain for all its worth, utilizing his gravity manipulators to hurl blunt objects à la "gravity gun" and ''lots'' of running. [[spoiler:His one big mistake was to get himself distracted by [[SarcasmMode something as trivial as]] a gaping tear in the fabric of reality superimposing most of the sky.]]
*** If Kyon's fight reminisced a soldier in a desperate situation, then Haruhi's was like a savvy player in a new game. She invoked semi-autonomous PureEnergy {{Attack Drone}}s, made extensive use of {{Telekinesis}} to manipulate enemy fire and the terrain and was able to devise and discard several tactics on the fly while fending off a lot of enemy Synths at the same time. She easily outclassed every {{Mook}} in there but [[spoiler:[[SkilledButNaive she sorely lacked the right mindset to fight]]]].
** [[spoiler:MagicalGirl]] ''Nonoko'' and [[spoiler:MegaNeko]] ''Shamisen'' have a BigDamnHeroes moment!
*** All the preliminary steps to this moment taken by [[spoiler:Achakura]] are an amazing mix of [[GuileHero guile]] and [[IndyPloy improvisation]]: [[spoiler:Can't activate Kyon's tools due to the genetic imprinting system? Get his sister to unlock them. Being forbidden of speaking first because of the "good-child mode"? Prompting Nonoko to speak to her first by catching her attention with simple visual signals [[LoopholeAbuse is not included in the prohibition]]. Once she got her attention, how to convince her to help [[CanNotTellALie without lying]]? Appeal to what little she knew about the girl by [[LieToChildren staging the whole thing]] as a CallToAdventure scene out of a MagicalGirl anime (modeled themes and outfits based on [[Franchise/TouhouProject two]] [[JustForFun/TropeOverdosed well known]] [[Franchise/LyricalNanoha series]] which she probably picked up from Wiki/ThisVeryWiki). Nonoko is too slow to get to Kyon in time by herself? {{Invoke|dTrope}} MegaNeko trope on ChekhovsGunman Shamisen, take a ride on his back while keeping the whole group invisible and directing him through and over traffic]]. Arguably the best part is that all this took place within the span of minutes.
** Kuyou destroying [[spoiler:her alternate self]] with the activation of her ''[[FunSize chibi-mode]]''. Yes, you read that right. [[spoiler:This may require an explanation: Until the moment Kuyou joined the SOS Brigade, she didn't possess the innate capability to retain information. Instead her sentience depended on her '''enormous''' observational scope, in both the spatial and temporal sense, to re-observe each event as needed. Knowing this, slider!Kuyou tried to overwhelm Kuyou's awareness with observations of her own alternate reality by "synchronizing" with her, a process which would effectively [[LossOfIdentity overwrite Kuyou]] to the complete likeness of the former. To avoid this, Kuyou activated her [[ChekhovsHobby previously unused]] chibi-mode, becoming something practically undetectable to slider!Kuyou's perceptions. The end result was that slider!Kuyou successfully synchronized with an effective "nothing" and basically deleted herself.]]
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** Kyon and Haruhi's battle against [[AlienInvaders Slider Invaders]], [[spoiler:even even if both needed to be bailed out of it in the end]]:
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*** Kyon, [[WeHaveForgottenThePhlebotinum without weapons, shields, invisibility or AR-based tactical intel]], escaping from a pack of [[VideoGame/HalfLife2 Combine's]] [[EliteMooks Hun]][[LightningBruiser ters]][[spoiler:while while {{bridal carry}}ing a defenseless and barely responsive Kuyou]].Kuyou. His tactics ranged from the clever and sound to the improvised and desperate and involved, among other things, exploiting the terrain for all its worth, utilizing his gravity manipulators to hurl blunt objects à la "gravity gun" and ''lots'' of running. [[spoiler:His His one big mistake was to get himself distracted by [[SarcasmMode something as trivial as]] a gaping tear in the fabric of reality superimposing most of the sky.]]
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*** If Kyon's fight reminisced a soldier in a desperate situation, then Haruhi's was like a savvy player in a new game. She invoked semi-autonomous PureEnergy {{Attack Drone}}s, made extensive use of {{Telekinesis}} to manipulate enemy fire and the terrain and was able to devise and discard several tactics on the fly while fending off a lot of enemy Synths at the same time. She easily outclassed every {{Mook}} in there but[[spoiler:[[SkilledButNaive [[SkilledButNaive she sorely lacked the right mindset to fight]]]].
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**[[spoiler:MagicalGirl]] MagicalGirl ''Nonoko'' and [[spoiler:MegaNeko]] MegaNeko ''Shamisen'' have a BigDamnHeroes moment!
*** All the preliminary steps to this moment taken by[[spoiler:Achakura]] Achakura are an amazing mix of [[GuileHero guile]] and [[IndyPloy improvisation]]: [[spoiler:Can't Can't activate Kyon's tools due to the genetic imprinting system? Get his sister to unlock them. Being forbidden of speaking first because of the "good-child mode"? Prompting Nonoko to speak to her first by catching her attention with simple visual signals [[LoopholeAbuse is not included in the prohibition]]. Once she got her attention, how to convince her to help [[CanNotTellALie without lying]]? Appeal to what little she knew about the girl by [[LieToChildren staging the whole thing]] as a CallToAdventure scene out of a MagicalGirl anime (modeled themes and outfits based on [[Franchise/TouhouProject two]] [[JustForFun/TropeOverdosed well known]] [[Franchise/LyricalNanoha series]] which she probably picked up from Wiki/ThisVeryWiki). Nonoko is too slow to get to Kyon in time by herself? {{Invoke|dTrope}} MegaNeko trope on ChekhovsGunman Shamisen, take a ride on his back while keeping the whole group invisible and directing him through and over traffic]].traffic. Arguably the best part is that all this took place within the span of minutes.
** Kuyou destroying[[spoiler:her her alternate self]] self with the activation of her ''[[FunSize chibi-mode]]''. Yes, you read that right. [[spoiler:This This may require an explanation: Until the moment Kuyou joined the SOS Brigade, she didn't possess the innate capability to retain information. Instead her sentience depended on her '''enormous''' observational scope, in both the spatial and temporal sense, to re-observe each event as needed. Knowing this, slider!Kuyou tried to overwhelm Kuyou's awareness with observations of her own alternate reality by "synchronizing" with her, a process which would effectively [[LossOfIdentity overwrite Kuyou]] to the complete likeness of the former. To avoid this, Kuyou activated her [[ChekhovsHobby previously unused]] chibi-mode, becoming something practically undetectable to slider!Kuyou's perceptions. The end result was that slider!Kuyou successfully synchronized with an effective "nothing" and basically deleted herself.]]
*** Kyon, [[WeHaveForgottenThePhlebotinum without weapons, shields, invisibility or AR-based tactical intel]], escaping from a pack of [[VideoGame/HalfLife2 Combine's]] [[EliteMooks Hun]][[LightningBruiser ters]]
*** If Kyon's fight reminisced a soldier in a desperate situation, then Haruhi's was like a savvy player in a new game. She invoked semi-autonomous PureEnergy {{Attack Drone}}s, made extensive use of {{Telekinesis}} to manipulate enemy fire and the terrain and was able to devise and discard several tactics on the fly while fending off a lot of enemy Synths at the same time. She easily outclassed every {{Mook}} in there but
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** Haruhi and Kuyou [[CombinationAttack combining their powers]] to launch a [[ChargeAttack charged]] WaveMotionGun at a [[spoiler:''freaking [[http://half-life.wikia.com/wiki/Citadel Citadel]]'']], blasting the gargantuan structure out of existence ''in one shot''.
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** Haruhi and Kuyou [[CombinationAttack combining their powers]] to launch a [[ChargeAttack charged]] WaveMotionGun at a [[spoiler:''freaking ''freaking [[http://half-life.wikia.com/wiki/Citadel Citadel]]'']], Citadel]]'', blasting the gargantuan structure out of existence ''in one shot''.
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*** All the preliminary steps to this moment taken by [[spoiler:Achakura]] are an amazing mix of [[GuileHero guile]] and [[IndyPloy improvisation]]: [[spoiler:Can't activate Kyon's tools due to the genetic imprinting system? Get his sister to unlock them. Being forbidden of speaking first because of the "good-child mode"? Prompting Nonoko to speak to her first by catching her attention with simple visual signals [[LoopholeAbuse is not included in the prohibition]]. Once she got her attention, how to convince her to help [[CanNotTellALie without lying]]? Appeal to what little she knew about the girl by [[LieToChildren staging the whole thing]] as a CallToAdventure scene out of a MagicalGirl anime (modeled themes and outfits based on [[Franchise/TouhouProject two]] [[TropeOverdosed well known]] [[Franchise/LyricalNanoha series]] which she probably picked up from Wiki/ThisVeryWiki). Nonoko is too slow to get to Kyon in time by herself? {{Invoke|dTrope}} MegaNeko trope on ChekhovsGunman Shamisen, take a ride on his back while keeping the whole group invisible and directing him through and over traffic]]. Arguably the best part is that all this took place within the span of minutes.
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*** All the preliminary steps to this moment taken by [[spoiler:Achakura]] are an amazing mix of [[GuileHero guile]] and [[IndyPloy improvisation]]: [[spoiler:Can't activate Kyon's tools due to the genetic imprinting system? Get his sister to unlock them. Being forbidden of speaking first because of the "good-child mode"? Prompting Nonoko to speak to her first by catching her attention with simple visual signals [[LoopholeAbuse is not included in the prohibition]]. Once she got her attention, how to convince her to help [[CanNotTellALie without lying]]? Appeal to what little she knew about the girl by [[LieToChildren staging the whole thing]] as a CallToAdventure scene out of a MagicalGirl anime (modeled themes and outfits based on [[Franchise/TouhouProject two]] [[TropeOverdosed [[JustForFun/TropeOverdosed well known]] [[Franchise/LyricalNanoha series]] which she probably picked up from Wiki/ThisVeryWiki). Nonoko is too slow to get to Kyon in time by herself? {{Invoke|dTrope}} MegaNeko trope on ChekhovsGunman Shamisen, take a ride on his back while keeping the whole group invisible and directing him through and over traffic]]. Arguably the best part is that all this took place within the span of minutes.
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*** All the preliminary steps to this moment taken by [[spoiler:Achakura]] are an amazing mix of [[GuileHero guile]] and [[IndyPloy improvisation]]: [[spoiler:Can't activate Kyon's tools due to the genetic imprinting system? Get his sister to unlock them. Being forbidden of speaking first because of the "good-child mode"? Prompting Nonoko to speak to her first by catching her attention with simple visual signals [[LoopholeAbuse is not included in the prohibition]]. Once she got her attention, how to convince her to help [[CanNotTellALie without lying]]? Appeal to what little she knew about the girl by [[LieToChildren staging the whole thing]] as a CallToAdventure scene out of a MagicalGirl anime (modeled themes and outfits based on [[VideoGame/{{Touhou}} two]] [[TropeOverdosed well known]] [[Franchise/LyricalNanoha series]] which she probably picked up from Wiki/ThisVeryWiki). Nonoko is too slow to get to Kyon in time by herself? {{Invoke|dTrope}} MegaNeko trope on ChekhovsGunman Shamisen, take a ride on his back while keeping the whole group invisible and directing him through and over traffic]]. Arguably the best part is that all this took place within the span of minutes.
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*** All the preliminary steps to this moment taken by [[spoiler:Achakura]] are an amazing mix of [[GuileHero guile]] and [[IndyPloy improvisation]]: [[spoiler:Can't activate Kyon's tools due to the genetic imprinting system? Get his sister to unlock them. Being forbidden of speaking first because of the "good-child mode"? Prompting Nonoko to speak to her first by catching her attention with simple visual signals [[LoopholeAbuse is not included in the prohibition]]. Once she got her attention, how to convince her to help [[CanNotTellALie without lying]]? Appeal to what little she knew about the girl by [[LieToChildren staging the whole thing]] as a CallToAdventure scene out of a MagicalGirl anime (modeled themes and outfits based on [[VideoGame/{{Touhou}} [[Franchise/TouhouProject two]] [[TropeOverdosed well known]] [[Franchise/LyricalNanoha series]] which she probably picked up from Wiki/ThisVeryWiki). Nonoko is too slow to get to Kyon in time by herself? {{Invoke|dTrope}} MegaNeko trope on ChekhovsGunman Shamisen, take a ride on his back while keeping the whole group invisible and directing him through and over traffic]]. Arguably the best part is that all this took place within the span of minutes.
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*** Extra kudos for making an InUniverse defictionalization of "[[ShoutOut Master]] [[VideoGame/{{Touhou}} Spark]]" in the process.
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*** Extra kudos for making an InUniverse defictionalization of "[[ShoutOut Master]] [[VideoGame/{{Touhou}} [[Franchise/TouhouProject Spark]]" in the process.
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* The AwesomeArt present in the fic's VN is this on its own, but becomes even more impressive with the introduction of Kanae. The creators had, at most, a few pictures from the book to base her off, but their depiction of her was given as much originality and detail as the canon characters.
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* The AwesomeArt SugarWiki/AwesomeArt present in the fic's VN is this on its own, but becomes even more impressive with the introduction of Kanae. The creators had, at most, a few pictures from the book to base her off, but their depiction of her was given as much originality and detail as the canon characters.
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*** All the preliminary steps to this moment taken by [[spoiler:Achakura]] are an amazing mix of [[GuileHero guile]] and [[IndyPloy improvisation]]: [[spoiler:Can't activate Kyon's tools due to the genetic imprinting system? Get his sister to unlock them. Being forbidden of speaking first because of the "good-child mode"? Prompting Nonoko to speak to her first by catching her attention with simple visual signals [[LoopholeAbuse is not included in the prohibition]]. Once she got her attention, how to convince her to help [[CanNotTellALie without lying]]? Appeal to what little she knew about the girl by [[LieToChildren staging the whole thing]] as a CallToAdventure scene out of a MagicalGirl anime (modeled themes and outfits based on [[VideoGame/{{Touhou}} two]] [[TropeOverdosed well known]] [[Franchise/LyricalNanoha series]] which she probably picked up from ThisVeryWiki). Nonoko is too slow to get to Kyon in time by herself? {{Invoke|dTrope}} MegaNeko trope on ChekhovsGunman Shamisen, take a ride on his back while keeping the whole group invisible and directing him through and over traffic]]. Arguably the best part is that all this took place within the span of minutes.
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*** All the preliminary steps to this moment taken by [[spoiler:Achakura]] are an amazing mix of [[GuileHero guile]] and [[IndyPloy improvisation]]: [[spoiler:Can't activate Kyon's tools due to the genetic imprinting system? Get his sister to unlock them. Being forbidden of speaking first because of the "good-child mode"? Prompting Nonoko to speak to her first by catching her attention with simple visual signals [[LoopholeAbuse is not included in the prohibition]]. Once she got her attention, how to convince her to help [[CanNotTellALie without lying]]? Appeal to what little she knew about the girl by [[LieToChildren staging the whole thing]] as a CallToAdventure scene out of a MagicalGirl anime (modeled themes and outfits based on [[VideoGame/{{Touhou}} two]] [[TropeOverdosed well known]] [[Franchise/LyricalNanoha series]] which she probably picked up from ThisVeryWiki).Wiki/ThisVeryWiki). Nonoko is too slow to get to Kyon in time by herself? {{Invoke|dTrope}} MegaNeko trope on ChekhovsGunman Shamisen, take a ride on his back while keeping the whole group invisible and directing him through and over traffic]]. Arguably the best part is that all this took place within the span of minutes.
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*** Kyon, [[WeHaveForgottenThePhlebotinum without weapons, shields, invisibility or AR-based tactical intel]], escaping from a pack of [[VideoGame/{{Half-Life2}} Combine's]] [[EliteMooks Hun]][[LightningBruiser ters]] [[spoiler:while {{bridal carry}}ing a defenseless and barely responsive Kuyou]]. His tactics ranged from the clever and sound to the improvised and desperate and involved, among other things, exploiting the terrain for all its worth, utilizing his gravity manipulators to hurl blunt objects à la "gravity gun" and ''lots'' of running. [[spoiler:His one big mistake was to get himself distracted by [[SarcasmMode something as trivial as]] a gaping tear in the fabric of reality superimposing most of the sky.]]
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*** Kyon, [[WeHaveForgottenThePhlebotinum without weapons, shields, invisibility or AR-based tactical intel]], escaping from a pack of [[VideoGame/{{Half-Life2}} [[VideoGame/HalfLife2 Combine's]] [[EliteMooks Hun]][[LightningBruiser ters]] [[spoiler:while {{bridal carry}}ing a defenseless and barely responsive Kuyou]]. His tactics ranged from the clever and sound to the improvised and desperate and involved, among other things, exploiting the terrain for all its worth, utilizing his gravity manipulators to hurl blunt objects à la "gravity gun" and ''lots'' of running. [[spoiler:His one big mistake was to get himself distracted by [[SarcasmMode something as trivial as]] a gaping tear in the fabric of reality superimposing most of the sky.]]
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** Related to these is how Yuki, through the training dimension that she hosts each night, acts as the teacher for anyone attending. That means she's technically Kyon's master in martial arts and retains the stuff she learns in there.
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*** All the preliminary steps to this moment taken by [[spoiler:Achakura]] are an amazing mix of [[GuileHero guile]] and [[IndyPloy improvisation]]: [[spoiler:Can't activate Kyon's tools due to the genetic imprinting system? Get his sister to unlock them. Being forbidden of speaking first because of the "good-child mode"? Prompting Nonoko to speak to her first by catching her attention with simple visual signals [[LoopholeAbuse is not included in the prohibition]]. Once she got her attention, how to convince her to help [[CanNotTellALie without lying]]? Appeal to what little she knew about the girl by [[LieToChildren staging the whole thing]] as a CallToAdventure scene out of a MagicalGirl anime (BonusPoints for modeling themes and outfits based on [[VideoGame/{{Touhou}} two]] [[TropeOverdosed well known]] [[Franchise/LyricalNanoha series]] which she probably picked up from ThisVeryWiki). Nonoko is too slow to get to Kyon in time by herself? {{Invoke|dTrope}} MegaNeko trope on ChekhovsGunman Shamisen, take a ride on his back while keeping the whole group invisible and directing him through and over traffic]]. Arguably the best part is that all this took place within the span of minutes.
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*** All the preliminary steps to this moment taken by [[spoiler:Achakura]] are an amazing mix of [[GuileHero guile]] and [[IndyPloy improvisation]]: [[spoiler:Can't activate Kyon's tools due to the genetic imprinting system? Get his sister to unlock them. Being forbidden of speaking first because of the "good-child mode"? Prompting Nonoko to speak to her first by catching her attention with simple visual signals [[LoopholeAbuse is not included in the prohibition]]. Once she got her attention, how to convince her to help [[CanNotTellALie without lying]]? Appeal to what little she knew about the girl by [[LieToChildren staging the whole thing]] as a CallToAdventure scene out of a MagicalGirl anime (BonusPoints for modeling (modeled themes and outfits based on [[VideoGame/{{Touhou}} two]] [[TropeOverdosed well known]] [[Franchise/LyricalNanoha series]] which she probably picked up from ThisVeryWiki). Nonoko is too slow to get to Kyon in time by herself? {{Invoke|dTrope}} MegaNeko trope on ChekhovsGunman Shamisen, take a ride on his back while keeping the whole group invisible and directing him through and over traffic]]. Arguably the best part is that all this took place within the span of minutes.
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*** This moment gets BonusPoints because the course of action was suggested by ''Nonoko'' of all people, who didn't have any idea of the above and [[RightForTheWrongReasons just thought that]] [[WrongGenreSavvy a "fairy person" like Kuyou would have more magic at her disposal if she didn't try to sustain a larger, human-sized form]].
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*** This moment gets BonusPoints is made more awesome because the course of action was suggested by ''Nonoko'' of all people, people is the one who suggested it, who didn't have any idea of the above and [[RightForTheWrongReasons just thought that]] [[WrongGenreSavvy a "fairy person" like Kuyou would have more magic at her disposal if she didn't try to sustain a larger, human-sized form]].
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** Not just any planet - Jupiter, which is bigger than all the rest put together!
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* Kuyou attempting to bake cookies the size of the entire solar system.
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* Kuyou attempting to bake cookies the size of the entire solar system.a planet.
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** Kuyou destroying [[spoiler:her alternate self]] with the activation her ''[[FunSize chibi-mode]]''. Yes, you read that right. [[spoiler:This may require an explanation: Until the moment Kuyou joined the SOS Brigade, she didn't possess the innate capability to retain information. Instead her sentience depended on her '''enormous''' observational scope, in both the spatial and temporal sense, to re-observe each event as needed. Knowing this, slider!Kuyou tried to overwhelm Kuyou's awareness with observations of her own alternate reality by "synchronizing" with her, a process which would effectively [[LossOfIdentity overwrite Kuyou]] to the complete likeness of the former. To avoid this, Kuyou activated her [[ChekhovsHobby previously unused]] chibi-mode, becoming something practically undetectable to slider!Kuyou's perceptions. The end result was that slider!Kuyou successfully synchronized with an effective "nothing" and basically deleted herself.]]
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** Kuyou destroying [[spoiler:her alternate self]] with the activation of her ''[[FunSize chibi-mode]]''. Yes, you read that right. [[spoiler:This may require an explanation: Until the moment Kuyou joined the SOS Brigade, she didn't possess the innate capability to retain information. Instead her sentience depended on her '''enormous''' observational scope, in both the spatial and temporal sense, to re-observe each event as needed. Knowing this, slider!Kuyou tried to overwhelm Kuyou's awareness with observations of her own alternate reality by "synchronizing" with her, a process which would effectively [[LossOfIdentity overwrite Kuyou]] to the complete likeness of the former. To avoid this, Kuyou activated her [[ChekhovsHobby previously unused]] chibi-mode, becoming something practically undetectable to slider!Kuyou's perceptions. The end result was that slider!Kuyou successfully synchronized with an effective "nothing" and basically deleted herself.]]
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* The AwesomeArt present in the fic's VN is this on its own, but becomes even more impressive with the introduction of Kanae. The creators had, at most, a few pictures from the book to base her off, but their depiction of her was given as much originality and detail as the canon characters.
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*** If Kyon's fight reminisced a soldier in a desperate situation, then Haruhi's was like a savvy player in a new game. She invoked semi-autonomous PureEnergy {{Attack Drone}}s, made extensive use of {{Telekinesis}} to manipulate enemy fire and the terrain and was able to devise and discard several tactics on the fly while fending off a lot of enemy Synths at the same time. She easily outclassed every {{Mook}} in there but [[spoiler:[[SkilledButNaive she sorely lacked of the right mindset to fight]]]].
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*** If Kyon's fight reminisced a soldier in a desperate situation, then Haruhi's was like a savvy player in a new game. She invoked semi-autonomous PureEnergy {{Attack Drone}}s, made extensive use of {{Telekinesis}} to manipulate enemy fire and the terrain and was able to devise and discard several tactics on the fly while fending off a lot of enemy Synths at the same time. She easily outclassed every {{Mook}} in there but [[spoiler:[[SkilledButNaive she sorely lacked of the right mindset to fight]]]].
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I\'m still unconvinced of these entries, but here they go.
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** Kyon and Haruhi's battle against [[AlienInvaders Slider Invaders]], [[spoiler:even if both needed to be bailed out of it in the end]].
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** Kyon and Haruhi's battle against [[AlienInvaders Slider Invaders]], [[spoiler:even if both needed to be bailed out of it in the end]].end]]:
*** Kyon, [[WeHaveForgottenThePhlebotinum without weapons, shields, invisibility or AR-based tactical intel]], escaping from a pack of [[VideoGame/{{Half-Life2}} Combine's]] [[EliteMooks Hun]][[LightningBruiser ters]] [[spoiler:while {{bridal carry}}ing a defenseless and barely responsive Kuyou]]. His tactics ranged from the clever and sound to the improvised and desperate and involved, among other things, exploiting the terrain for all its worth, utilizing his gravity manipulators to hurl blunt objects à la "gravity gun" and ''lots'' of running. [[spoiler:His one big mistake was to get himself distracted by [[SarcasmMode something as trivial as]] a gaping tear in the fabric of reality superimposing most of the sky.]]
*** If Kyon's fight reminisced a soldier in a desperate situation, then Haruhi's was like a savvy player in a new game. She invoked semi-autonomous PureEnergy {{Attack Drone}}s, made extensive use of {{Telekinesis}} to manipulate enemy fire and the terrain and was able to devise and discard several tactics on the fly while fending off a lot of enemy Synths at the same time. She easily outclassed every {{Mook}} in there but [[spoiler:[[SkilledButNaive she sorely lacked of the right mindset to fight]]]].
*** Kyon, [[WeHaveForgottenThePhlebotinum without weapons, shields, invisibility or AR-based tactical intel]], escaping from a pack of [[VideoGame/{{Half-Life2}} Combine's]] [[EliteMooks Hun]][[LightningBruiser ters]] [[spoiler:while {{bridal carry}}ing a defenseless and barely responsive Kuyou]]. His tactics ranged from the clever and sound to the improvised and desperate and involved, among other things, exploiting the terrain for all its worth, utilizing his gravity manipulators to hurl blunt objects à la "gravity gun" and ''lots'' of running. [[spoiler:His one big mistake was to get himself distracted by [[SarcasmMode something as trivial as]] a gaping tear in the fabric of reality superimposing most of the sky.]]
*** If Kyon's fight reminisced a soldier in a desperate situation, then Haruhi's was like a savvy player in a new game. She invoked semi-autonomous PureEnergy {{Attack Drone}}s, made extensive use of {{Telekinesis}} to manipulate enemy fire and the terrain and was able to devise and discard several tactics on the fly while fending off a lot of enemy Synths at the same time. She easily outclassed every {{Mook}} in there but [[spoiler:[[SkilledButNaive she sorely lacked of the right mindset to fight]]]].
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** Haruhi and Kuyou [[CombinationAttack combining their powers]] to launch a [[ChargeAttack charged]] WaveMotionGun at a [[spoiler:''freaking [[http://half-life.wikia.com/wiki/Citadel Citadel]]'']], blasting the gargantuan structure out of existence ''in one shot''.
*** Extra kudos for making an InUniverse defictionalization of "[[ShoutOut Master]] [[VideoGame/{{Touhou}} Spark]]" in the process.
*** Extra kudos for making an InUniverse defictionalization of "[[ShoutOut Master]] [[VideoGame/{{Touhou}} Spark]]" in the process.
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This one needs more job, I will repost it tomorrow.
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*** Kyon, [[WeHaveForgottenThePhlebotinum without weapons, shields, invisibility or AR-based tactical intel]], escaping from a pack of [[VideoGame/{{Half-Life2}} Combine's]] [[EliteMooks Hun]][[LightningBruiser ters]] [[spoiler:while {{bridal carry}}ing a defenseless and barely responsive Kuyou]].
*** Kyon, [[WeHaveForgottenThePhlebotinum without weapons, shields, invisibility or AR-based tactical intel]], escaping from a pack of [[VideoGame/{{Half-Life2}} Combine's]] [[EliteMooks Hun]][[LightningBruiser ters]] [[spoiler:while {{bridal carry}}ing a defenseless and barely responsive Kuyou]].
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** Kyon and Haruhi's battle against [[AlienInvaders Slider Invaders]], [[spoiler:even if both needed to be bailed out of it in the end]]:
*** Kyon, [[WeHaveForgottenThePhlebotinum without weapons, shields, invisibility or AR-based tactical intel]], escaping from a pack of [[VideoGame/{{Half-Life2}} Combine's]] [[EliteMooks Hun]][[LightningBruiser ters]] [[spoiler:while {{bridal carry}}ing a defenseless and barely responsive Kuyou]].end]].
*** Kyon, [[WeHaveForgottenThePhlebotinum without weapons, shields, invisibility or AR-based tactical intel]], escaping from a pack of [[VideoGame/{{Half-Life2}} Combine's]] [[EliteMooks Hun]][[LightningBruiser ters]] [[spoiler:while {{bridal carry}}ing a defenseless and barely responsive Kuyou]].
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** ''Especially'' in the Initial Conflict arc, chapter three. BigDamnHeroes, CurbStompBattle and DeadpanSnarker at the same time.
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** ''Especially'' in the Initial Conflict arc, chapter three.Chapter 26. BigDamnHeroes, CurbStompBattle and DeadpanSnarker at the same time.
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* Koizumi, after being DemotedToExtra for much of the fic, gets his when he [[spoiler: uses his Esper powers outside of Closed Space to utterly ''dismantle'' a laser-slinging future inter-dimensional death bot]].
* Koizumi gets another one in Open Battle Chapter 1. He single-handedly saves the day when Kyon and Yuki [[spoiler:are surrounded by murderous Yakuza, and are completely [[PowerNullifier depowered]].]]
* Open Battle Chapter 3: Kyon and Haruhi's battle against [[AlienInvaders Slider Invaders]].
* Koizumi gets another one in Open Battle Chapter 1. He single-handedly saves the day when Kyon and Yuki [[spoiler:are surrounded by murderous Yakuza, and are completely [[PowerNullifier depowered]].]]
* Open Battle Chapter 3: Kyon and Haruhi's battle against [[AlienInvaders Slider Invaders]].
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* Koizumi, after being DemotedToExtra for much of the fic, gets his when he [[spoiler: uses [[spoiler:uses his Esper powers outside of Closed Space to utterly ''dismantle'' a laser-slinging future inter-dimensional death bot]].
* Koizumi gets another one inOpen Battle Chapter 1.44. He single-handedly saves the day when Kyon and Yuki [[spoiler:are surrounded by murderous Yakuza, and are completely [[PowerNullifier depowered]].]]
** Worth of notice is the fact that [[spoiler:Kyon and Yuki weren't precisely helpless until Koizumi's arrival. They went full [[BackToBackBadasses Back-to-Back]] BadassNormal BattleCouple mode on the hit squad up to the point that the biggest concern was if Kyon would [[TheGlovesComeOff start hurting people without caring about the damage done]] or if the yakuza would stop trying to gain reputation points by defeating the Kowa-Keigo in a fight and [[NeverBringAKnifeToAGunFight fall back to guns]] first.]]
*Open Battle Chapter 3: The "Resonance Cascade" chapters are loaded with [=CMoA=]:
** Kyon and Haruhi's battle against [[AlienInvaders SliderInvaders]].Invaders]], [[spoiler:even if both needed to be bailed out of it in the end]]:
*** Kyon, [[WeHaveForgottenThePhlebotinum without weapons, shields, invisibility or AR-based tactical intel]], escaping from a pack of [[VideoGame/{{Half-Life2}} Combine's]] [[EliteMooks Hun]][[LightningBruiser ters]] [[spoiler:while {{bridal carry}}ing a defenseless and barely responsive Kuyou]].
* Koizumi gets another one in
** Worth of notice is the fact that [[spoiler:Kyon and Yuki weren't precisely helpless until Koizumi's arrival. They went full [[BackToBackBadasses Back-to-Back]] BadassNormal BattleCouple mode on the hit squad up to the point that the biggest concern was if Kyon would [[TheGlovesComeOff start hurting people without caring about the damage done]] or if the yakuza would stop trying to gain reputation points by defeating the Kowa-Keigo in a fight and [[NeverBringAKnifeToAGunFight fall back to guns]] first.]]
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** Kyon and Haruhi's battle against [[AlienInvaders Slider
*** Kyon, [[WeHaveForgottenThePhlebotinum without weapons, shields, invisibility or AR-based tactical intel]], escaping from a pack of [[VideoGame/{{Half-Life2}} Combine's]] [[EliteMooks Hun]][[LightningBruiser ters]] [[spoiler:while {{bridal carry}}ing a defenseless and barely responsive Kuyou]].
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* Open Battle Chapter 5. One word. Gungnir.
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** Kuyou destroying [[spoiler:her alternate self]] with the activation her ''[[FunSize chibi-mode]]''. Yes, you read that right. [[spoiler:This may require an explanation: Until the moment Kuyou joined the SOS Brigade, she didn't possess the innate capability to retain information. Instead her sentience depended on her '''enormous''' observational scope, in both the spatial and temporal sense, to re-observe each event as needed. Knowing this, slider!Kuyou tried to overwhelm Kuyou's awareness with observations of her own alternate reality by "synchronizing" with her, a process which would effectively [[LossOfIdentity overwrite Kuyou]] to the complete likeness of the former. To avoid this, Kuyou activated her [[ChekhovsHobby previously unused]] chibi-mode, becoming something practically undetectable to slider!Kuyou's perceptions. The end result was that slider!Kuyou successfully synchronized with an effective "nothing" and basically deleted herself.]]
*** This moment gets BonusPoints because the course of action was suggested by ''Nonoko'' of all people, who didn't have any idea of the above and [[RightForTheWrongReasons just thought that]] [[WrongGenreSavvy a "fairy person" like Kuyou would have more magic at her disposal if she didn't try to sustain a larger, human-sized form]].
** One word.