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* The PRT gets one that they didn't in canon: When they heard about what Sophia did, they immediately sent out several teams of investigators and troopers to verify the claims. By the time Rose tries to get involved, they've finished the investigation completely.
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* The Wards vs the Undersiders. Special mention has to go to Deputy managed to hit Regent while mastered, and Synod's utter curb stomp battle of Tattletale [[spoiler: while revealing her new combat persona is based on [[Creator/Mr.T Mr. T, and calls itself "Mr. D."]]]]
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* The Wards vs the Undersiders. Special mention has to go to Deputy managed to hit Regent while mastered, and Synod's utter curb stomp battle of Tattletale [[spoiler: while revealing her new combat persona is based on [[Creator/Mr.T Mr. T, and calls itself "Mr. D."]]]]
T. Yes, you read that correctly.]]
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* The Wards vs the Undersiders. Special mention has to go to Deputy managed to hit Regent while mastered, and Synod's utter curb stomp battle of Tattletale [[spoiler: while revealing her new combat persona is based on [[Creator/Mr.T Mr. T, and calls itself "Mr. D."]] ]]
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* The Wards vs the Undersiders. Special mention has to go to Deputy managed to hit Regent while mastered, and Synod's utter curb stomp battle of Tattletale [[spoiler: while revealing her new combat persona is based on [[Creator/Mr.T Mr. T, and calls itself "Mr. D."]] ]]
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* The Wards vs the Undersiders. Special mention has to go to Deputy managed to hit Regent while mastered, and Synods utter curb stomp battle of Tattletale.
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* The Wards vs the Undersiders. Special mention has to go to Deputy managed to hit Regent while mastered, and Synods Synod's utter curb stomp battle of Tattletale.
Tattletale [[spoiler: while revealing her new combat persona is based on [[Creator/Mr.T Mr. T, and calls itself "Mr. D."]] ]]
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%% ** Funny thing is, there should be ''five'' people raising their hands there - before Rose blasted off two of its eyes, Chubster dropped a building on Leviathan, which sheared off ''another'' of the monster's eyes and one of Miss Militia's borrowed Bakuda bombs ripped his foot off.
* Deputy vs Shadow Stalker, version two. Sophia does not even come close to her Deputy-verse counterpart's results, although this time the Deputy has help from Kid Win.
* Deputy vs Shadow Stalker, version two. Sophia does not even come close to her Deputy-verse counterpart's results, although this time the Deputy has help from Kid Win.
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* 3.05: [[spoiler: Armsmaster-Dep got the Portal working, sending a USB through with a message from the Bet-Dep Wards, everyone telling Taylor that they want her back.]]
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Neither of those people were present at the meeting where the quote takes place, so there's no way they could be expected to be raising their hands. However, the actions are still awesome. I'll leave it to another/original troper to reword the example to make it fit.
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%% ** Funny thing is, there should be ''five'' people raising their hands there - before Rose blasted off two of its eyes, Chubster dropped a building on Leviathan, which sheared off ''another'' of the monster's eyes and one of Miss Militia's borrowed Bakuda bombs ripped his foot off.
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* The fact that this story ''exists'', particularly in the way that it's done. It's a recursive fic of a sequel of a recursive fic of a fanfiction. And it crossover with canon. That this story is being told as a serious story, rather than a parody or as a joke to say "Ha, I'm doing a fic of a fic of a fic!" is pretty impressive.
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* The fact that this story ''exists'', particularly in the way that it's done. It's a recursive fic of a sequel of a recursive fic of a fanfiction. And it crossover crosses over with canon. That this story is being told as a serious story, rather than a parody or as a joke to say "Ha, I'm doing a fic of a fic of a fic!" is pretty impressive.
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* The fact that this story ''exists'', particularly in the way that it's done. It's a recursive fic of a sequel of a recursive fic of a fanfiction. That this story is being told as a serious story, rather than a parody or as a joke to say "Ha, I'm doing a fic of a fic of a fic!" is pretty impressive.
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* The fact that this story ''exists'', particularly in the way that it's done. It's a recursive fic of a sequel of a recursive fic of a fanfiction. And it crossover with canon. That this story is being told as a serious story, rather than a parody or as a joke to say "Ha, I'm doing a fic of a fic of a fic!" is pretty impressive.
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So shoot me, I'm editing an entry on my own work.
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** Funny thing is, there should be ''four'' people raising their hands there- before Rose blasted off two of its eyes, Chubster dropped a building on Leviathan, which sheared off ''another'' of the monster's eyes.
* Deputy vs Shadow Stalker, version two. Sophia does not even come close to her Deputy-verse counterparts results.
* Deputy vs Shadow Stalker, version two. Sophia does not even come close to her Deputy-verse counterparts results.
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** Funny thing is, there should be ''four'' ''five'' people raising their hands there- there - before Rose blasted off two of its eyes, Chubster dropped a building on Leviathan, which sheared off ''another'' of the monster's eyes.
eyes and one of Miss Militia's borrowed Bakuda bombs ripped his foot off.
* Deputy vs Shadow Stalker, version two. Sophia does not even come close to her Deputy-versecounterparts results.counterpart's results, although this time the Deputy has help from Kid Win.
* Deputy vs Shadow Stalker, version two. Sophia does not even come close to her Deputy-verse
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** Funny thing is, there should be ''four'' people raising their hands there- before Rose blasted off two of its eyes, Chubster dropped a building on Leviathan, which sheared off ''another'' of the monster's eyes.
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** Funny thing is, there should be ''four'' people raising their hands there- before Rose blasted off two of its eyes, Chubster dropped a building on Leviathan, which sheared off ''another'' of the monster's eyes.eyes.
* Deputy vs Shadow Stalker, version two. Sophia does not even come close to her Deputy-verse counterparts results.
* Deputy vs Shadow Stalker, version two. Sophia does not even come close to her Deputy-verse counterparts results.
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* Rose shuts down the triage encounter from canon. Hard. "Raise your hand if you mutilated an Endbringer today." Three people raise their hands: The bug controller, the social thinker, and the Triumvirate member.
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* Rose shuts down the triage encounter from canon. Hard. "Raise your hand if you mutilated an Endbringer today." Three people raise their hands: The bug controller, the social thinker, and the Triumvirate member.member.
** Funny thing is, there should be ''four'' people raising their hands there- before Rose blasted off two of its eyes, Chubster dropped a building on Leviathan, which sheared off ''another'' of the monster's eyes.
** Funny thing is, there should be ''four'' people raising their hands there- before Rose blasted off two of its eyes, Chubster dropped a building on Leviathan, which sheared off ''another'' of the monster's eyes.
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** And to top that, at the end of the battle, after both working S&R and fighting on the front lines, she survives without any injuries that her pseudo-Brute healing can't handle.
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* Rose shuts down the triage encounter from canon. Hard. "Raise your hand if you mutilated an Endbringer today."
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* Rose shuts down the triage encounter from canon. Hard. "Raise your hand if you mutilated an Endbringer today."" Three people raise their hands: The bug controller, the social thinker, and the Triumvirate member.
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* Rachel's last stand. Yes, it killed her, but she went up against Leviathan with nothing but her dogs and held him off for Rose to extract Skitter from a pile of rubble.
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* Rose shots down the triage encounter from canon. Hard. "Raise your hand if you mutilated an Endbringer today."
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* Rose ''blows up two of Leviathan's eyes.'' Yes, they're not really vital, but still.
* Taylor, deciding to be awesome, charges Leviathan with Armsmaster's nanothorn blade and cuts off his fingers.
* Taylor, deciding to be awesome, charges Leviathan with Armsmaster's nanothorn blade and cuts off his fingers.
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* Rose ''blows up two of Leviathan's eyes.'' Yes, they're not really vital, but still.
still. This is after using Kid Wins Alternator Cannon to burn a hole clean through the monster, and saving lives while on Search and Rescue.
* Taylor, deciding to be awesome, charges Leviathan with Armsmaster's nanothorn blade and cuts off hisfingers.fingers.
* Rose shots down the triage encounter from canon. Hard. "Raise your hand if you mutilated an Endbringer today."
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* Rose shots down the triage encounter from canon. Hard. "Raise your hand if you mutilated an Endbringer today."
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* Rose has no powers other than, in her own words, "A handful of borrowed Tinkertech." There's still no question for her that she's going to participate in an Endbringer fight.
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* Rose has no powers other than, in her own words, "A handful of borrowed Tinkertech." There's still no question for her that she's going to participate in an Endbringer fight.fight.
* Rose ''blows up two of Leviathan's eyes.'' Yes, they're not really vital, but still.
* Taylor, deciding to be awesome, charges Leviathan with Armsmaster's nanothorn blade and cuts off his fingers.
* Rose ''blows up two of Leviathan's eyes.'' Yes, they're not really vital, but still.
* Taylor, deciding to be awesome, charges Leviathan with Armsmaster's nanothorn blade and cuts off his fingers.
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* The Wards vs the Undersiders. Special mention has to go to Deputy managed to hit Regent while mastered, and Synods utter curb stomp battle of Tattletale.
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* Emissary ''accidentally'' brings down Armsmaster, getting him in trouble for faking reports. ''She wasn't even trying to do that.''
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* Emissary ''accidentally'' brings down Armsmaster, getting him in trouble for faking reports. ''She wasn't even trying to do that.''''
* Rose has no powers other than, in her own words, "A handful of borrowed Tinkertech." There's still no question for her that she's going to participate in an Endbringer fight.
* Rose has no powers other than, in her own words, "A handful of borrowed Tinkertech." There's still no question for her that she's going to participate in an Endbringer fight.
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* The very first thing we hear that Deputy Commander did after getting sent to another world? Curbstomp Uber and L33t offscreen.
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* The very first thing we hear that Deputy Commander did after getting sent to another world? Curbstomp Uber Über and L33t offscreen.
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* DeputyH becomes an internet meme.
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* DeputyH [=DeputyH=] becomes an internet meme.
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!!! Awesome Moments from ''Internship'' and ''Agent Hebert''.
* Taylor proves to be so good at finding details in photos and videos that the intel guys actually start to dislike her. Again: she has no training or experience, but she's doing better than trained intelligence analysts.
!!! Awesome Moments from ''Deputy'' and ''Deputy Commander''
* Aegis puts up a ''damn'' good fight against Hookwolf, a man who, in another universe, later joined the Slaughterhouse Nine. [[DyingMomentOfAwesome It didn't end well for Aegis,]] but he managed to hold off Hookwolf long enough for Parian to escape.
* Taylor Hebert, who has no powers, vs. Shadow Stalker in a darkened forest, when she's been taken by surprise, is already wounded and bleeding, and in Shadow Stalker's element. Through a combination of strategy, mind games, and being willing to fire her own taser while Taylor is inside of Shadow Stalker (thus electrocuting herself), Taylor wins handily.
* Panacea joins the Wards, signifying that she's going to get the mental help she needs.
** Doubles as an achievement for Deputy Commander- as her first act, she manages to recruit the best Parahuman healer in the world into the PRT's ranks, stealing her from under New Wave's noses, and all of this within ''five minutes'' of her promotion.
* Danny, instead of being a generic worrying parent like in other stories, is able to teach his daughter how to be an effective leader of the Wards, drawing on his years of experience as leader of the Dockworker's Union.
* DeputyH becomes an internet meme.
!!! Awesome Moments from ''Emissary''
* The fact that this story ''exists'', particularly in the way that it's done. It's a recursive fic of a sequel of a recursive fic of a fanfiction. That this story is being told as a serious story, rather than a parody or as a joke to say "Ha, I'm doing a fic of a fic of a fic!" is pretty impressive.
* The very first thing we hear that Deputy Commander did after getting sent to another world? Curbstomp Uber and L33t offscreen.
* Deputaylor holds her own against Alexandria in her interrogation.
* Emissary ''accidentally'' brings down Armsmaster, getting him in trouble for faking reports. ''She wasn't even trying to do that.''
* Taylor proves to be so good at finding details in photos and videos that the intel guys actually start to dislike her. Again: she has no training or experience, but she's doing better than trained intelligence analysts.
!!! Awesome Moments from ''Deputy'' and ''Deputy Commander''
* Aegis puts up a ''damn'' good fight against Hookwolf, a man who, in another universe, later joined the Slaughterhouse Nine. [[DyingMomentOfAwesome It didn't end well for Aegis,]] but he managed to hold off Hookwolf long enough for Parian to escape.
* Taylor Hebert, who has no powers, vs. Shadow Stalker in a darkened forest, when she's been taken by surprise, is already wounded and bleeding, and in Shadow Stalker's element. Through a combination of strategy, mind games, and being willing to fire her own taser while Taylor is inside of Shadow Stalker (thus electrocuting herself), Taylor wins handily.
* Panacea joins the Wards, signifying that she's going to get the mental help she needs.
** Doubles as an achievement for Deputy Commander- as her first act, she manages to recruit the best Parahuman healer in the world into the PRT's ranks, stealing her from under New Wave's noses, and all of this within ''five minutes'' of her promotion.
* Danny, instead of being a generic worrying parent like in other stories, is able to teach his daughter how to be an effective leader of the Wards, drawing on his years of experience as leader of the Dockworker's Union.
* DeputyH becomes an internet meme.
!!! Awesome Moments from ''Emissary''
* The fact that this story ''exists'', particularly in the way that it's done. It's a recursive fic of a sequel of a recursive fic of a fanfiction. That this story is being told as a serious story, rather than a parody or as a joke to say "Ha, I'm doing a fic of a fic of a fic!" is pretty impressive.
* The very first thing we hear that Deputy Commander did after getting sent to another world? Curbstomp Uber and L33t offscreen.
* Deputaylor holds her own against Alexandria in her interrogation.
* Emissary ''accidentally'' brings down Armsmaster, getting him in trouble for faking reports. ''She wasn't even trying to do that.''
