Two chapters today, as Chapter 6 is short as hell:
CHAPTER 6:
The chapter opens with Amy, Blaze, Fiona, Rouge and Conor returning from shopping. Conor promptly sits down and watches TV, to see the news where we see that Sonic and Shadow have been fighting Eggman. Conor comments on this:
-So Robutnick is now an Egghead hmm something's never change he might prove useful to me another pawn in my game of chess Conor thought.-
As always, I have no idea what the hell he is saying. Seriously, what is with the author and confusing dialogue? After that, some unimportant dialogue, and a lemon. The chapter ends.
Now, you see why I'm doing two chapters.
CHAPTER 7:
The chapter begins with Doctor Eggman. Oh yes and, evidently, there's no Snively. Anyone who knows the Archie Sonic canon, which this story seems to flip-flop into trying to take place in, knows that Snively should be with Eggman - case in point: link
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So, yeah...well, whatever, I should stop expecting this story to follow anything properly. Also, apparently, Eggman doesn't like having an organic body. Even though he's always been organic, even Robotnik was organic, he just had a robotic arm, I'm pretty sure.
It seems someone has come to Eggman's island base, however. At first, he thinks the obvious, Sonic: although he doesn't use weapons! So he thinks Shadow, or...Scrouge, even though Scrouge doesn't use weapons, being the anti-Sonic from Moebius, and all.
But no, it's Conor, of course! Who gives us a Freddy Kruger-esque moment!
-1...2... Conors coming for you,
3...4... Better lock your door
5...6... With my bag of tricks
7...8... I'll make your body shake
9...10... You'll never move again-
So, Conor gets to Eggman, who freaks out, thinking he's Sonic...or Shadow. This sort of thing again, really? Well, actually, it's not. I know, I'm suprised, too! Conor was hiding his identity the entire time (albeit poorly). When he reveals himself, we get this:
-Names Conor T.H and we're old friends.
Don't know you Eggman said.
OK then your little Metal Sonic and me fought in the emerald chamber while knuckles got away Conor said.
Ah you I thought you were dead whatever Eggman said not caring.-
Note that when Conor introduces himself it's all dialogue, but it's not in script format. The guy can't even be consistent with his bad writing! Nice to see Eggman doesn't care, I like him already. Also, to reason with Eggman as to help him defeat Sonic, we get a TitleDrop:
-The Enemy of My Enemy Is My Friend Conor said with a smile.-
I mean, come on, he even capitalizes the entire phrase! He's not even hiding that it's a Title Drop! Then Conor calls Eggman Julian! Well, he seems to know about Robotnik's middle name, at least. Don't think it's meant to be Eggman's name, though.
Also, Conor pulls off an Evil Laugh.
We return to Blaze and Amy's apartment for Conor peeking in on a four-way LesYay moment. He soon joins and...after more lemon, and a brief dialouge bit between Rouge and Conor, we get more exposition!
We finally get to see why Conor doesn't want anyone to see or touch his watch!
-Don't touch that Conor shouted.
While he said this she grabbed Conors wrist took the watch it beeped and within seconds Conors right arm began to melt
OH MY GOD WHAT THE HELL IS HAPPINGING! Rouge screamed the girls came in to the room to see Conors arm melt then they saw a streak of silver in a part of his arm. Within seconds they saw that there was no skin on Conors right arm only a metal arm resembling Metal Sonics.
Oh my god what happened to your arm Rouge shouted.
You don't want to know trust me Conor said trying to cover his arm.-
You're right, we don't! But we find out anyways! Apparently, he lost his arm after that one battle that keeps being mentioned. Conor and Metal Sonic were taken to an abandoned Eggman base, where a droid that was still there (for some reason) and attached Metal's arm to Conor's...uh...why? WE MAY NEVER KNOW!!
Rouge, after the metal arm was revealed, ended up crushing the watch. It seems that Conor is stuck with his now revealed metal arm. As he moves towards Rouge, she moves away, showing some distrust to Conor at this revealation. Thus, it seems, that Conor must flee. Which he does.
Our chapter now ends, with an Author's Note as always! Oh...wait...there is no Author's Note. Oh, uh...I guess I'll see everyone later, then. *shifts away nervously*
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