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1* AssPull: The author is clearly throwing in everything she can think of without bothering to connect it to the plot, to the extent that the events in the story are random and nonsensical.
2* BileFascination: Probably the main reason why people read this story.
3* CrossesTheLineTwice:
4** Uncle Larry [[MoralEventHorizon repeatedly screwing Tiaa]] really shouldn't be funny, but the way the rapes are described combined with Tiaa's {{Wangst}}ing makes it hilarious in a BlackComedy sort of way. Not to mention how oblivious Tiaa's foster parents are.
5*** Also, the way they start being described as a minor inconvenience; "And then he made me cook his dinner and suck his cock while he ate his dinner and then he raped me and hit me with a shoe all night and I didn't even complain." - WHAT?
6* EnsembleDarkHorse: Uncle Larry is loved by the fanbase for his funny dialogue (especially his "your an evil bich" line); this is mostly thanks to [=RanguGamer=]'s DramaticReading of the fic.
7* FetishRetardant: We defy even the most rabid of Edward fans to find anything attractive about Tiaa's surreal and horrifying descriptions of him "doing sex on her".
8* FridgeBrilliance:
9** Vince, the guy who has a human/vampire/panda three-way in the last chapter, shares his name with Vincent, [[TakeThat the trolling reviewer Becky Mac cursed out in the end of Chapter 1 AN.]]
10** Tiaa sings "Music/TotalEclipseOfTheHeart" at the school's talent contest. The song's author, Jim Steinman, has declared that he wrote that to be a vampire love song. Of course, this might be a coincidence, but...
11* HilariousInHindsight: Tiaa comparing Jacob's penis to a "horible wet mushroom" is ''even funnier'' because in 2018, someone made a similar comment about Donald Trump's penis.
12* JerkassWoobie: Tiaa. Yeah, she's a {{Jerkass}} of epic proportions and she seems to think beating people up is fine as long as she's the one doing it, but it's easy to feel sorry for her when she gets repeatedly screwed by Uncle Larry. When you're done laughing, that is.
13* NauseaFuel: This fic contains what are quite possibly the {{squick}}iest {{Unusual Euphemism}}s for male genitalia ''ever''.
14* NightmareRetardant: A young girl repeatedly beaten and raped by her abusive [[CreepyUncle uncle]] should be horrifying. However the writing screws that. "The pain was terrible even tough his manhood was small."
15* SoBadItsGood: Now has reached [=MSTing=] status a la ''Fanfic/{{My Immortal}}''. [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7040319/1/Forbiden_Fruit_the_tempation_of_Edward_Cullen_comm]] and [[http://theskepkitty.wordpress.com/2012/04/30/horrible-fanfiction-117-forbidden-fruit-the-temptation-of-edward-cullen-a-twilight-fanfic/]]
16* StrangledByTheRedString: If you thought Creator/StephenieMeyer was guilty of this, you ain't seen nothing yet...
17* {{Wangst}}: Tiaa is guilty of a lot of this.

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