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  • Ass Pull: The author is clearly throwing in everything she can think of without bothering to connect it to the plot, to the extent that the events in the story are random and nonsensical.
  • Bile Fascination: Probably the main reason why people read this story.
  • Crosses the Line Twice:
    • Uncle Larry repeatedly screwing Tiaa really shouldn't be funny, but the way the rapes are described combined with Tiaa's Wangsting makes it hilarious in a Black Comedy sort of way. Not to mention how oblivious Tiaa's foster parents are.
      • Also, the way they start being described as a minor inconvenience; "And then he made me cook his dinner and suck his cock while he ate his dinner and then he raped me and hit me with a shoe all night and I didn't even complain." - WHAT?
  • Ensemble Dark Horse: Uncle Larry is loved by the fanbase for his funny dialogue (especially his "your an evil bich" line); this is mostly thanks to RanguGamer's Dramatic Reading of the fic.
  • Fetish Retardant: We defy even the most rabid of Edward fans to find anything attractive about Tiaa's surreal and horrifying descriptions of him "doing sex on her".
  • Fridge Brilliance:
  • Hilarious in Hindsight: Tiaa comparing Jacob's penis to a "horible wet mushroom" is even funnier because in 2018, someone made a similar comment about Donald Trump's penis.
  • Jerkass Woobie: Tiaa. Yeah, she's a Jerkass of epic proportions and she seems to think beating people up is fine as long as she's the one doing it, but it's easy to feel sorry for her when she gets repeatedly screwed by Uncle Larry. When you're done laughing, that is.
  • Nausea Fuel: This fic contains what are quite possibly the squickiest Unusual Euphemisms for male genitalia ever.
  • Nightmare Retardant: A young girl repeatedly beaten and raped by her abusive uncle should be horrifying. However the writing screws that. "The pain was terrible even tough his manhood was small."
  • So Bad, It's Good: Now has reached MSTing status a la My Immortal. [1] and [2]
  • Strangled by the Red String: If you thought Stephenie Meyer was guilty of this, you ain't seen nothing yet...
  • Wangst: Tiaa is guilty of a lot of this.

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