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* IronWoobie: Duane. Considering the adversity and pain he faces both physically and psychologically due to his undeath, it's impressive that he has room left over in his rotted heart for the selfless tenacity to protect and avenge the innocent and care for an obnoxious, morally ambiguous hellion. The fans don't just eat it up, they would completely disregard his being a ragdoll arrangement of stitches, leather, bones, and rotten meat to smother him with hugs if they could manage it.
--> "But of course the day is not dark, and the future is bright and the past is a pleasant warmth behind me, so what a foolish thing to ask."
--> "But of course the day is not dark, and the future is bright and the past is a pleasant warmth behind me, so what a foolish thing to ask."
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* AlasPoorVillain: [[spoiler:Ephsephin]], who, after being greviously wounded, begs his boss, Starfish, for a doctor. Starfish instead decides his mook has [[YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness outlived his usefulness]] and bashes his brains in with a whiskey bottle. He becomes even more sympathetic when WordOfGod reveals [[spoiler:the only reason he signed up with Starfish was to get a big enough payoff so that his mother wouldn't have to keep breaking her back working.]]
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* AlasPoorVillain: [[spoiler:Ephsephin]], who, after being greviously wounded, begs his boss, Starfish, for a doctor. Starfish instead decides his mook has [[YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness outlived his usefulness]] and [[NightmareFuel bashes his brains in with a whiskey bottle.bottle]]. He becomes even more sympathetic when WordOfGod reveals [[spoiler:the only reason he signed up with Starfish was to get a big enough payoff so that his mother wouldn't have to keep breaking her back working.]]
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* AlasPoorVillain: [[spoiler:Ephsephin]], who, after being greviously wounded, begs his boss, Starfish, for a doctor. Starfish instead decides his mook has [[YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness outlived his usefulness]] and bashes his brains in with a whiskey bottle. He becomes even more sympathetic when WordOfGod reveals [[spoiler:the only reason he signed up with Starfish was to get a big enough payoff so that his mother wouldn't have to keep breaking her back working.]]
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** Starfish's ''serene'' look as he's about to [[spoiler: bash Ephsephin's head in with a wine bottle]] is just unsettling on so many levels. Really, Starfish himself is just abominable.
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* AntiVillain: Mathis Quigley. He's a hireling of [[CompleteMonster Starfish]], seems pretty jaded, cynical, and amoral, and is a less-than-ideal father to Matty. However, he also has a sympathetic backstory and a lot of PetTheDog moments with Matty -- and his one flash of morality so far is to adamantly refuse Starfish's WouldHurtAChild plan.
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* TheWoobie: Jivi.
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* TheWoobie: TheWoobie:
** Jivi.
** Matty, later on.
** Jivi.
** Matty, later on.
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** Everything about [[http://www.casualvillain.com/Unsounded/comic/ch06/ch06_66.html this strip.]] [[spoiler:Matty frantically wailing that [[spoiler:Quigley]] can't die because [[spoiler:he still has five years of life left]], being ForcedToWatch because [[spoiler:Chitz can't be turned off]] (note also that he's desperately trying to close his eyes...), and the first thing that [[spoiler:Quigley]] does upon waking up is to scream [[spoiler:Matty]]'s name...
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** Everything about [[http://www.casualvillain.com/Unsounded/comic/ch06/ch06_66.html this strip.]] [[spoiler:Matty [[spoiler:Matty]] frantically wailing that [[spoiler:Quigley]] can't die because [[spoiler:he still has five years of life left]], being ForcedToWatch because [[spoiler:Chitz can't be turned off]] (note also that he's desperately trying to close his eyes...), and the first thing that [[spoiler:Quigley]] does upon waking up is to scream [[spoiler:Matty]]'s name...
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** Everything about [[http://www.casualvillain.com/Unsounded/comic/ch06/ch06_66.html this strip.]] [[spoiler:Matty frantically wailing that [[spoiler:Quigley]] can't die because [[spoiler:he still has five years of life left]], being ForcedToWatch because [[spoiler:Chitz can't be turned off]] (note also that he's desperately trying to close his eyes...), and the first thing that [[spoiler:Quigley]] does upon waking up is to scream [[spoiler:Matty]]'s name...
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...And that previous comment made no sense, because I have the memory of a goldfish.
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* CrowningMomentOfFunny: A little meta, but Duane and Sette's reactions to people asking about [[BoyMeetsGhoul their romantic relationship]] on [[http://www.formspring.me/DuaneAndSette their Formspring]] definitely count.
-->'''Duane:''' I question your upbringing.\\
'''Sette:''' I wager ya dish duty she's a girl. Girls gotta ruin everythin' with kissin'. Go kiss a goat, girl!
** Even moreso: At one point, after having a FreakOut over a certain question, Sette actually ''[[http://www.formspring.me/DuaneAndSette/q/266040170615156367 stole Duane's keyboard]]'' and started answering questions as him. [[http://www.formspring.me/DuaneAndSette/q/266042897835492511 The]] [[http://www.formspring.me/DuaneAndSette/q/266043378884413281 resulting]] [[http://www.formspring.me/DuaneAndSette/q/266044626320762717 answers]] are ''[[http://www.formspring.me/DuaneAndSette/q/266063696545985110 hilarious.]]''
--->'''Questioner:''' You have turned formspring into performance art.\\
'''Ashley:''' [[BlatantLies My good man, I haven't the faintest idea what you're talking about.]]
** CrackShip: [[http://files-cdn.formspring.me/photos/20111228/n4efbb44fdcab2.jpg Boo/Chitz]]
** Sette and Matty's expressions in [[http://www.casualvillain.com/Unsounded/comic/ch05/ch05_17.html this page]] (spoilers) are ''priceless''.
** The subtitle of chapter 5: "In which two [[IncrediblyLamePun wrights]] make a wrong."
** This:
--->'''Sette (to Quigley):''' Your lad hates the hat you got him, he told me.\\
'''Matty (panicked):''' ''I do not!''
** "[[http://www.casualvillain.com/Unsounded/comic/ch05/ch05_23.html You've a pine cone in your hair.]]"
** "[[RefugeInVulgarity I want a whore on each hip and a second dick but that don't mean I'm getting it.]]"
** Duane: "Thieves and whores. Disgraceful." Sette: "So's your face."
-->'''Duane:''' I question your upbringing.\\
'''Sette:''' I wager ya dish duty she's a girl. Girls gotta ruin everythin' with kissin'. Go kiss a goat, girl!
** Even moreso: At one point, after having a FreakOut over a certain question, Sette actually ''[[http://www.formspring.me/DuaneAndSette/q/266040170615156367 stole Duane's keyboard]]'' and started answering questions as him. [[http://www.formspring.me/DuaneAndSette/q/266042897835492511 The]] [[http://www.formspring.me/DuaneAndSette/q/266043378884413281 resulting]] [[http://www.formspring.me/DuaneAndSette/q/266044626320762717 answers]] are ''[[http://www.formspring.me/DuaneAndSette/q/266063696545985110 hilarious.]]''
--->'''Questioner:''' You have turned formspring into performance art.\\
'''Ashley:''' [[BlatantLies My good man, I haven't the faintest idea what you're talking about.]]
** CrackShip: [[http://files-cdn.formspring.me/photos/20111228/n4efbb44fdcab2.jpg Boo/Chitz]]
** Sette and Matty's expressions in [[http://www.casualvillain.com/Unsounded/comic/ch05/ch05_17.html this page]] (spoilers) are ''priceless''.
** The subtitle of chapter 5: "In which two [[IncrediblyLamePun wrights]] make a wrong."
** This:
--->'''Sette (to Quigley):''' Your lad hates the hat you got him, he told me.\\
'''Matty (panicked):''' ''I do not!''
** "[[http://www.casualvillain.com/Unsounded/comic/ch05/ch05_23.html You've a pine cone in your hair.]]"
** "[[RefugeInVulgarity I want a whore on each hip and a second dick but that don't mean I'm getting it.]]"
** Duane: "Thieves and whores. Disgraceful." Sette: "So's your face."
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* HilariousInHindsight: See BrickJoke on the main page. Now read that scene again. Imagine what it must seem to Duane -- it's like having a swordfight with someone, and all of a sudden they pull out a dildo and act like it's a super-powerful secret weapon.
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* CrowningMomentOfAwesome: Duane successfully performing a [[http://www.casualvillain.com/Unsounded/comic/ch05/ch05_41-42.html mountain punch.]] [[BreakTheHaughty Quigley's reaction]] is glorious.
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* {{Squick}}: You can ''see [[spoiler:Ephsephin]]'s mashed brains'' stuck to the [[GrievousBottleyHarm wine bottle]] used to beat him to death in [[http://www.casualvillain.com/Unsounded/comic/ch06/ch06_54.html this]] page.
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** He later [[spoiler:''kills his own henchman'', simply because it's easier than trying to patch him up]]. ''[[NightmareFace With a smile on his face]]''.
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** [[RefugeInVulgarity I want a whore on each hip and a second dick but that don't mean I'm getting it.]]
** Duane: "Thieves and whores. Disgraceful." Sette: "So's your face."
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** The Red Berry Boys kidnap people to cut them open and replace their insides with some kind of smuggled goods. They prefer children, because you get the same money for a smaller body. Duane's discovery of a dying little girl is probably the most disturbing scene in the comic to date.
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** The Red Berry Boys kidnap people to cut them open and replace their insides with some kind of smuggled goods. They prefer children, because you get the same money for a smaller body.body, and the girls have yet to develop breasts that get in the way of the dissection. Duane's discovery of a dying little girl is probably the most disturbing scene in the comic to date.
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* CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming
** [[http://www.casualvillain.com/Unsounded/comic/ch03/ch03_37.html In which]] Duane hugs Sette, and Sette is less of a selfish, foulmouthed little brat than usual.
** [[http://ashleycope.deviantart.com/art/Such-A-Sky-105518213 Such a sky.]]
** [[http://www.casualvillain.com/Unsounded/comic/ch03/ch03_37.html In which]] Duane hugs Sette, and Sette is less of a selfish, foulmouthed little brat than usual.
** [[http://ashleycope.deviantart.com/art/Such-A-Sky-105518213 Such a sky.]]
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* NightmareFuel: So very much.
** The Red Berry Boys kidnap people to cut them open and replace their insides with some kind of smuggled goods. They prefer children, because you get the same money for a smaller body. Duane's discovery of a dying little girl is probably the most disturbing scene in the comic to date.
** Ever wonder why plods are always muzzled? Zombies are constantly, insatiably hungry: even reasonable ones like Duane go half-mad when exposed to blood.
** The Red Berry Boys kidnap people to cut them open and replace their insides with some kind of smuggled goods. They prefer children, because you get the same money for a smaller body. Duane's discovery of a dying little girl is probably the most disturbing scene in the comic to date.
** Ever wonder why plods are always muzzled? Zombies are constantly, insatiably hungry: even reasonable ones like Duane go half-mad when exposed to blood.
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** "[[http://www.casualvillain.com/Unsounded/comic/ch05/ch05_23.html You've a pine cone in your hair.]]"
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* CompleteMonster: Starfish. A violent criminal/kidnapper/slaver/pedophile/serial child murderer? If that isn't a complete monster, I don't know what is.
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* CompleteMonster: Starfish. Starfish: A violent violent, completely amoral criminal/kidnapper/slaver/pedophile/serial child murderer? If that isn't murderer. There is no depth to which he will not stoop.
* CrowningMomentOfAwesome: Duane successfully performing acomplete monster, I don't know what is.[[http://www.casualvillain.com/Unsounded/comic/ch05/ch05_41-42.html mountain punch.]] [[BreakTheHaughty Quigley's reaction]] is glorious.
* CrowningMomentOfAwesome: Duane successfully performing a
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** The subtitle of chapter 5: "In which two [[IncrediblyLamePun wrights]] make a wrong."
** This:
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'''Matty (panicked):''' ''I do not!''
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'''Matty (panicked):''' ''I do not!''
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** Sette and Matty's expressions in [[http://www.casualvillain.com/Unsounded/comic/ch05/ch05_17.html this page]] (spoilers) are ''priceless''.
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* CargoShip: [[http://files-cdn.formspring.me/photos/20111104/n4eb3655745a91.jpg Sette/Money.]]
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* TearJerker / CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming: Sette's expression in [[http://www.casualvillain.com/Unsounded/comic/ch04/ch04_74.html this]] strip (spoilers). Especially when you consider something Duane said much earlier...
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* TearJerker / CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming: TearJerker: Sette's expression in [[http://www.casualvillain.com/Unsounded/comic/ch04/ch04_74.html this]] strip (spoilers). Especially when you consider something Duane said much earlier...
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** CrackShip: [[http://files-cdn.formspring.me/photos/20111228/n4efbb44fdcab2.jpg Boo/Chitz]]
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-->"[[spoiler:I shall one day make her weep for someone other than herself.]]"
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-->"[[spoiler:I shall one day make her weep for someone other than herself.]]"]]"
** Also, [[http://www.casualvillain.com/Unsounded/comic/ch03/ch03_09.html this scene,]] where Jivi desperately begs Matty for help, only for him to find out that his father's in collusion with the Red Berry Boys.
* TheWoobie: Jivi.
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** Also, [[http://www.casualvillain.com/Unsounded/comic/ch03/ch03_09.html this scene,]] where Jivi desperately begs Matty for help, only for him to find out that his father's in collusion with the Red Berry Boys.
* TheWoobie: Jivi.
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--->'''Questioner:''' You have turned formspring into performance art.\\
'''Ashley:''' [[BlatantLies My good man, I haven't the faintest idea what you're talking about.]]
'''Ashley:''' [[BlatantLies My good man, I haven't the faintest idea what you're talking about.]]
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** Even moreso: At one point, after having a FreakOut over a certain question, Sette actually ''[[http://www.formspring.me/DuaneAndSette/q/266040170615156367 stole Duane's keyboard]]'' and started answering questions as him. [[http://www.formspring.me/DuaneAndSette/q/266042897835492511 The]] [[http://www.formspring.me/DuaneAndSette/q/266043378884413281 resulting]] [[http://www.formspring.me/DuaneAndSette/q/266044626320762717 answers]] are ''[[http://www.formspring.me/DuaneAndSette/q/266063696545985110 hilarious.]]''
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* BaseBreaker: Sette. Fans either think she's adorable, troubled, or go on long tirades about how she ruins the entire comic.
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* BaseBreaker: Sette. Fans either think she's adorable, troubled, or go on long tirades about how she ruins the entire comic.comic.
* CrowningMomentOfFunny: A little meta, but Duane and Sette's reactions to people asking about [[BoyMeetsGhoul their romantic relationship]] on [[http://www.formspring.me/DuaneAndSette their Formspring]] definitely count.
-->'''Duane:''' I question your upbringing.\\
'''Sette:''' I wager ya dish duty she's a girl. Girls gotta ruin everythin' with kissin'. Go kiss a goat, girl!
* TearJerker / CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming: Sette's expression in [[http://www.casualvillain.com/Unsounded/comic/ch04/ch04_74.html this]] strip (spoilers). Especially when you consider something Duane said much earlier...
-->"[[spoiler:I shall one day make her weep for someone other than herself.]]"
* CrowningMomentOfFunny: A little meta, but Duane and Sette's reactions to people asking about [[BoyMeetsGhoul their romantic relationship]] on [[http://www.formspring.me/DuaneAndSette their Formspring]] definitely count.
-->'''Duane:''' I question your upbringing.\\
'''Sette:''' I wager ya dish duty she's a girl. Girls gotta ruin everythin' with kissin'. Go kiss a goat, girl!
* TearJerker / CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming: Sette's expression in [[http://www.casualvillain.com/Unsounded/comic/ch04/ch04_74.html this]] strip (spoilers). Especially when you consider something Duane said much earlier...
-->"[[spoiler:I shall one day make her weep for someone other than herself.]]"
