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* JerkassWoobie: While he makes it clear that [[IAmWhatIAm he's made peace with what he is]], the story makes it clear that [[DesperatelyLookingForAPurposeInLife Alex really doesn't know what to do with himself]] and as a result of this and his experiences, is rather lonely. Also, he still remembers his many, many victims' last moments and not all of them deserved what happened to them.
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** JerkassWoobie: While he makes it clear that [[IAmWhatIAm he's made peace with what he is]], the story makes it clear that [[DesperatelyLookingForAPurposeInLife Alex really doesn't know what to do with himself]] and as a result of this and his experiences, is rather lonely. Also, he still remembers his many, many victims' last moments and not all of them deserved what happened to them.
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* FanPreferredCouple: Babs and Sun is the most popular pairing in the entire webcomic. They can be referred to as each other's girlfriend in the comments section without anyone batting an eye despite the lack of a canon RelationshipUpgrade. Page 173 reveals that Sun is indeed in love with Babs, to the point of taking back her hated curse for Babs after the demon King reveals he was the one who undid it in order to "buy" Babs.
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* FanPreferredCouple: Babs and Sun is the most popular pairing in the entire webcomic. They can be referred to as each other's girlfriend in the comments section without anyone batting an eye despite the lack of a canon RelationshipUpgrade.
* LesYay: It’s easy to interpret Sun as having a crush on Babs. She frequently stutters around her, her hair highlights have occasionally changed to hearts around Babs and Sun once calls her a ‘dummy’ in a classic {{tsundere}} fashion. Sun even denies that it’s Bab’s latent siren magnetism, so there could be something else.
* LesYay: It’s easy to interpret Sun as having a crush on Babs. She frequently stutters around her, her hair highlights have occasionally changed to hearts around Babs and Sun once calls her a ‘dummy’ in a classic {{tsundere}} fashion. Sun even denies that it’s Bab’s latent siren magnetism, so there could be something else.
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* FanPreferredCouple: Babs and Sun is the most popular pairing in the entire webcomic. They can be referred to as each other's girlfriend in the comments section without anyone batting an eye despite the lack of a canon RelationshipUpgrade.
* LesYay: It’s easy to interpretRelationshipUpgrade. Page 173 reveals that Sun as having a crush on Babs. She frequently stutters around her, is indeed in love with Babs, to the point of taking back her hair highlights have occasionally changed to hearts around hated curse for Babs and Sun once calls her a ‘dummy’ after the demon King reveals he was the one who undid it in a classic {{tsundere}} fashion. Sun even denies that it’s Bab’s latent siren magnetism, so there could be something else.order to "buy" Babs.
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* LesYay: It’s easy to interpret Sun as having a crush on Babs. She frequently stutters around her, her hair highlights have occasionally changed to hearts around her Babs and Sun once calls her a ‘dummy’ in a classic {{tsundere}} fashion. She Sun even denies that it’s Bab’s latent siren magnetism, so there could be something else.
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* Moe: All of the girls are drawn very cutely, and their personalities are even more adorable.
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* LesYay: It’s easy to interpret Sun as having a crush on Babs. She frequently stutters around her, her hair highlights have occasionally changed to hearts around her and once calls her a ‘dummy’ in a classic {{tsundere}} fashion. She even denies that it’s Bab’s latent siren magnetism, so there could be something else.
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* Moe: All of the girls are drawn very cutely, and their personalities are even more adorable.
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* OneTruePairing: Babs and Sun is the most popular pairing in the entire webcomic. They can be referred to as each other's girlfriend in the comments section without anyone batting an eye despite the lack of a canon RelationshipUpgrade.
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* OneTruePairing: Babs and Sun is the most popular pairing in the entire webcomic. They can be referred to as each other's girlfriend in the comments section without anyone batting an eye despite the lack of a canon RelationshipUpgrade.
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Flame Bait and YMMV can't be played with.
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* {{Anvilicious}}: Averted to unpleasant effect, showing how Tropes Are Not Bad. One is led to believe that a lot of the InternetBackdraft regarding [[spoiler: Henrietta]] could have been avoided had the author been much more blunt about [[spoiler: Henrietta finding her plans for Louise to be DirtyBusiness]].
* InternetBackdraft: [[spoiler: Henrietta's thoughts and actions in Chapter Nine]] have spurred... ''spirited'' debate.
* InternetBackdraft: [[spoiler: Henrietta's thoughts and actions in Chapter Nine]] have spurred... ''spirited'' debate.
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* CompleteMonster: Goodness, Mott. When Alex calls [[spoiler:General Randall]] just three-quarters on the scale of evil to you, you're one sick puppy.
** Which can come as [[FridgeHorror Fridge]] [[FridgeBrilliance Brilliance]]: The degradation of a human being to a mere animal (dog), constant abuse both physical and emotional to the point of brainwashing, the use of shock collars and the spew of superiority and righteousness of the Nobility... those are the ''exact'' same things Louise did to Saito in canon and while she never went to the extreme of Mort, she was steadily going there. [[{{Tsundere}} The difference]]: [[DudeNotFunny Louise is a small cute]] girl so it's made [[AbuseIsOkayWhenItsFemaleOnMale a-okay]].
** Which can come as [[FridgeHorror Fridge]] [[FridgeBrilliance Brilliance]]: The degradation of a human being to a mere animal (dog), constant abuse both physical and emotional to the point of brainwashing, the use of shock collars and the spew of superiority and righteousness of the Nobility... those are the ''exact'' same things Louise did to Saito in canon and while she never went to the extreme of Mort, she was steadily going there. [[{{Tsundere}} The difference]]: [[DudeNotFunny Louise is a small cute]] girl so it's made [[AbuseIsOkayWhenItsFemaleOnMale a-okay]].
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* TheWoobie: Louise is showing competence with her magic and even has an incredibly powerful and bizarrely loyal familiar but she's plagued with low self-esteem, thinks she might be losing her humanity, is showing signs of [[spoiler:[[SanitySlippage losing her sanity]] and her fiance is EVIL]]. Siesta was just a poor school worker when she happened across Louise and Alex. While she's ultimately better for it, there's no question life has been unkind to her.
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* TheWoobie: Louise is showing competence with her magic and even has an incredibly powerful and bizarrely loyal familiar but she's plagued with low self-esteem, thinks she might be losing her humanity, is showing signs of [[spoiler:[[SanitySlippage losing her sanity]] and her fiance is EVIL]]. Siesta was just a poor school worker when she happened across Louise and Alex. While she's ultimately better for it, there's no question life has been unkind to her.
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** JerkassWoobie: While he makes it clear that [[IAmWhatIAm he's made peace with what he is]], the story makes it clear that [[DesperatelyLookingForAPurposeInLife Alex really doesn't know what to do with himself]] and as a result of this and his experiences, is rather lonely. Also, he still remembers his many, many victims' last moments and not all of them deserved what happened to them.
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** JerkassWoobie: While he makes it clear that [[IAmWhatIAm he's made peace with what he is]], the story makes it clear that [[DesperatelyLookingForAPurposeInLife Alex really doesn't know what to do with himself]] and as a result of this and his experiences, is rather lonely. Also, he still remembers his many, many victims' last moments and not all of them deserved what happened to them.them.
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* JerkassWoobie: While he makes it clear that [[IAmWhatIAm he's made peace with what he is]], the story makes it clear that [[DesperatelyLookingForAPurposeInLife Alex really doesn't know what to do with himself]] and as a result of this and his experiences, is rather lonely. Also, he still remembers his many, many victims' last moments and not all of them deserved what happened to them.
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* InternetBackdraft: [[spoiler: Henrietta's thoughts and actions in Chapter Nine]] have spurred... ''spirited'' debate.
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* InternetBackdraft: [[spoiler: Henrietta's thoughts and actions in Chapter Nine]] have spurred... ''spirited'' debate.debate.
* TheWoobie: Louise is showing competence with her magic and even has an incredibly powerful and bizarrely loyal familiar but she's plagued with low self-esteem, thinks she might be losing her humanity, is showing signs of [[spoiler:[[SanitySlippage losing her sanity]] and her fiance is EVIL]]. Siesta was just a poor school worker when she happened across Louise and Alex. While she's ultimately better for it, there's no question life has been unkind to her.
* JerkassWoobie: While he makes it clear that [[IAmWhatIAm he's made peace with what he is]], the story makes it clear that [[DesperatelyLookingForAPurposeInLife Alex really doesn't know what to do with himself]] and as a result of this and his experiences, is rather lonely. Also, he still remembers his many, many victims' last moments and not all of them deserved what happened to them.
* TheWoobie: Louise is showing competence with her magic and even has an incredibly powerful and bizarrely loyal familiar but she's plagued with low self-esteem, thinks she might be losing her humanity, is showing signs of [[spoiler:[[SanitySlippage losing her sanity]] and her fiance is EVIL]]. Siesta was just a poor school worker when she happened across Louise and Alex. While she's ultimately better for it, there's no question life has been unkind to her.
* JerkassWoobie: While he makes it clear that [[IAmWhatIAm he's made peace with what he is]], the story makes it clear that [[DesperatelyLookingForAPurposeInLife Alex really doesn't know what to do with himself]] and as a result of this and his experiences, is rather lonely. Also, he still remembers his many, many victims' last moments and not all of them deserved what happened to them.
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* CompleteMonster: Goodness, Mott. When Alex calls [[spoiler: General Randall]] just three-quarters on the scale of evil to you, you're one sick puppy.
** Which can come as [[FridgeHorror Fridge]][[FridgeBrilliance Brilliance]]: The degradation of a human being to a mere animal (dog), constant abuse both physical and emotional to the point of braindwashing, the use of shock collars and the spew of superiority and righteousness of the Nobility... those are the ''exact'' same things Lousie did to Saito in canon and while she never went to the extreme of Mort, she was steadily going there. [[{{Tsundere}} The difference]]: [[DudeNotFunny Louise is a small cute]] girl so its make [[AbuseIsOkayWhenItsFemaleOnMale a-okay]].
** Which can come as [[FridgeHorror Fridge]][[FridgeBrilliance Brilliance]]: The degradation of a human being to a mere animal (dog), constant abuse both physical and emotional to the point of braindwashing, the use of shock collars and the spew of superiority and righteousness of the Nobility... those are the ''exact'' same things Lousie did to Saito in canon and while she never went to the extreme of Mort, she was steadily going there. [[{{Tsundere}} The difference]]: [[DudeNotFunny Louise is a small cute]] girl so its make [[AbuseIsOkayWhenItsFemaleOnMale a-okay]].
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* CompleteMonster: Goodness, Mott. When Alex calls [[spoiler: General [[spoiler:General Randall]] just three-quarters on the scale of evil to you, you're one sick puppy.
** Which can come as [[FridgeHorrorFridge]][[FridgeBrilliance Fridge]] [[FridgeBrilliance Brilliance]]: The degradation of a human being to a mere animal (dog), constant abuse both physical and emotional to the point of braindwashing, brainwashing, the use of shock collars and the spew of superiority and righteousness of the Nobility... those are the ''exact'' same things Lousie Louise did to Saito in canon and while she never went to the extreme of Mort, she was steadily going there. [[{{Tsundere}} The difference]]: [[DudeNotFunny Louise is a small cute]] girl so its make it's made [[AbuseIsOkayWhenItsFemaleOnMale a-okay]].
** Which can come as [[FridgeHorror
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** Which can come as [[FridgeHorror Fridge]][[FridgeBrilliance Brilliance]]: The degradation of a human being to a mere animal (dog), constant abuse both physical and emotional to the point of braindwashing, the use of shock collars and the spew of superiority and righteousness of the Nobility... those are the ''exact'' same things Lousie did to Saito in canon and while she never went to the extreme of Mort, she was steadily going there. [[{{Tsundere}} The difference]]: [[DudeNotFunny Louise is a small cute]] girl so its make [[AbuseIsOkayWhenItsFemaleOnMale a-okay]].
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** Which can come as [[FridgeHorror Fridge]][[FridgeBrilliance Brilliance]]: The degradation of a human being to a mere animal (dog), constant abuse both physical and emotional to the point of braindwashing, the use of shock collars and the spew of superiority and righteousness of the the Nobility... those are the ''exact'' same things Lousie did to Saito in canon and while she never went to the extreme of Mort, she was steadily going there. [[{{Tsundere}} The difference]]: [[DudeNotFunny Louise is a small cute]] girl so its make [[AbuseIsOkayWhenItsFemaleOnMale a-okay]].
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** Which can come as [[FridgeHorror Fridge]][[FridgeBrilliance Brilliance]]: The degradation of a human being to a mere animal (dog), constant abuse both physical and emotional to the point of braindwashing, the use of shock collars and the spew of superiority and righteousness of the Nobility... those are the ''exact'' same things Lousie did to Saito in canon and while she never went to the extreme of Mort, she was steadily going there. [[{{Tsundere}} The difference]]: [[DudeNotFunny Louise is a small cute]] girl so its make [[AbuseIsOkayWhenItsFemaleOnMale a-okay]].
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* {{Anvilicious}}: Averted to unpleasant effect, showing how Tropes Are Not Bad. One is led to believe that a lot of the InternetBackdraft regarding [[spoiler: Henrietta]] could have been avoided had the author been much more blunt about [[spoiler: Henrietta finding her plans for Louise to be DirtyBusiness]].