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* IKnewIt: Many readers guessed the twist at the merge, with a few even correctly predicting [[spoiler: the returnees]].
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* {{Adorkable}}: Has cute yet nerdy moments, such her excitement at meeting a famous celebrity and constant apologizing.
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HilariousInHindsight: Melissa is still at a level one but manages to befriend every monster instead killing them? Did {{VideoGame/Undertale}} got the idea from this fic?
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* HilariousInHindsight: Melissa is still at a level one but manages to befriend every monster instead killing them? Did {{VideoGame/Undertale}} got the idea from this fic?
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* {{Adorkable}}: Has cute yet nerdy moments, such her excitement at meeting a famous celebrity and constant apologizing.
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* CultClassic: The work is not very well-known, but the story received critical acclaim from small set of readers that 'did' read it, with major praise going to the incredibly diverse and dynamic cast, strong character development, and complex storylines.
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* CultClassic: The work is not very well-known, but the story received critical acclaim from small set of readers that 'did' ''did'' read it, with major praise going to the incredibly diverse and dynamic cast, strong character development, and complex storylines.
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* CultClassic: The work is not very well-known, but the story received critical acclaim from small set of readers that 'did' read it, with major praise going to the incredibly diverse and dynamic cast, strong character development, and complex storylines.
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* AwesomeArt: Most all readers have stated they love the art and some admit to starting the story simply because they enjoyed the artwork.
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* AwesomeArt: SugarWiki/AwesomeArt: Most all readers have stated they love the art and some admit to starting the story simply because they enjoyed the artwork.
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* BaseBreakingCharacter: Tessa; some readers find her actions towards others too mean and annoying to be likable or sympathetic. Other readers like her for being a diva character and her sympathetic backstory. Her artwork is often cited as the best as well. The fact her character and character image alludes to canon contestant Heather, who has her own strong following, probably helps.
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** Tessa; some readers find her actions towards others too mean and annoying to be likable or sympathetic. Other readers like her for being a diva character and her sympathetic backstory. Her artwork is often cited as the best as well. The fact her character and character image alludes to canon contestant Heather, who has her own strong following, probablyhelps.helps.
** Hayden. Most readers found him a rather flat character and very forgettable. Yet he does have a small following for his kind and concerned nature. In two different rankings of the characters, one reader had him as his least favorite character while another had him in their top five characters. [[spoiler: He is currently winning a poll of readers' favorite early out]].
** Tessa; some readers find her actions towards others too mean and annoying to be likable or sympathetic. Other readers like her for being a diva character and her sympathetic backstory. Her artwork is often cited as the best as well. The fact her character and character image alludes to canon contestant Heather, who has her own strong following, probably
** Hayden. Most readers found him a rather flat character and very forgettable. Yet he does have a small following for his kind and concerned nature. In two different rankings of the characters, one reader had him as his least favorite character while another had him in their top five characters. [[spoiler: He is currently winning a poll of readers' favorite early out]].
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* GeniusBonus: A small one: Rhonda refers to the individual trials in the first challenge as eleven labors. This is an allusion to the most famous labors done, The Labors of Hercules. Getting this allusion, some readers predicted there would actually [[spoiler: be twelve labors instead of eleven]] like Hercules.
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* GeniusBonus: A small one: Rhonda refers to the individual trials in the first challenge as eleven labors. This is an allusion to the most famous labors done, The Labors of Hercules. Getting this allusion, some readers predicted there would actually [[spoiler: be twelve labors instead of eleven]] like Hercules.Hercules.
*HoYay: Occasional moments between the male contestants as lead to shipping by some readers. Ignacio particularly causes this, given his attractiveness occasionally cause reactions from men...
-->'''Griswold''': So Ignacio wasn’t attracted to me. I’m kind of relieved I don’t have to reject him...but kind of disappointed he wasn’t into me...is that weird?
*LesYay: Quite a few moments or lines of dialogue have lead to some readers shipping characters, especially the friendship between roommates Lita, Ness and Seraphina.
-->'''Lita''': Ness, you’re amazing! Some guy will wise-up and realize it, or screw it, I’ll marry you myself.
-->'''Seraphina''': I’ll officiate you two if I can.
-->'''Lita''': Seraphina please, you can marry us too. I know you want to! We’re just too good for everybody else.”
*HoYay: Occasional moments between the male contestants as lead to shipping by some readers. Ignacio particularly causes this, given his attractiveness occasionally cause reactions from men...
-->'''Griswold''': So Ignacio wasn’t attracted to me. I’m kind of relieved I don’t have to reject him...but kind of disappointed he wasn’t into me...is that weird?
*LesYay: Quite a few moments or lines of dialogue have lead to some readers shipping characters, especially the friendship between roommates Lita, Ness and Seraphina.
-->'''Lita''': Ness, you’re amazing! Some guy will wise-up and realize it, or screw it, I’ll marry you myself.
-->'''Seraphina''': I’ll officiate you two if I can.
-->'''Lita''': Seraphina please, you can marry us too. I know you want to! We’re just too good for everybody else.”
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* GeniusBonus: A small one: Rhonda refers to the individual trials in the first challenge as eleven labors. This is an allusion to the most famous labors done, The Labors of Hercules. Getting this allusion, some readers predicted there would actually [[spoiler: be twelve labors instead of eleven]] like Hercules.
* RescuedFromTheScrappyHeap: For some readers, Tessa became a whole lot more likable and redeemed for her actions and friendship with Riley during the alien invaders challenge, even becoming a favorite among certain readers.
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* GeniusBonus: A small one: Rhonda refers to the individual trials in the first challenge as eleven labors. This is an allusion to the most famous labors done, The Labors of Hercules. Getting this allusion, some readers predicted there would actually [[spoiler: be twelve labors instead of eleven]] like Hercules. \n* RescuedFromTheScrappyHeap: For some readers, Tessa became a whole lot more likable and redeemed for her actions and friendship with Riley during the alien invaders challenge, even becoming a favorite among certain readers.
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* AwesomeArt: Most all readers have stated they love the art and some admit to starting the story simply because they enjoyed the images.
* BaseBreakingCharacter: Tessa; some readers find her actions towards others too mean and annoying to be likable or sympathetic. Other readers like her for being a diva like character and for her sympathetic backstory. The fact her character (and character image) alludes to Heather helps.
* EnsembleDarkhorse: While different characters have been well received or have become people's favorites, the character who was gotten positive reception across the board, being praised and high people's rankings, is [[TheDreaded Cynthia]]. This is despite the fact she didn't speak in the first two chapters. Helping is that many people love her design.
* BaseBreakingCharacter: Tessa; some readers find her actions towards others too mean and annoying to be likable or sympathetic. Other readers like her for being a diva like character and for her sympathetic backstory. The fact her character (and character image) alludes to Heather helps.
* EnsembleDarkhorse: While different characters have been well received or have become people's favorites, the character who was gotten positive reception across the board, being praised and high people's rankings, is [[TheDreaded Cynthia]]. This is despite the fact she didn't speak in the first two chapters. Helping is that many people love her design.
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* AwesomeArt: Most all readers have stated they love the art and some admit to starting the story simply because they enjoyed the images.artwork.
* BaseBreakingCharacter: Tessa; some readers find her actions towards others too mean and annoying to be likable or sympathetic. Other readers like her for being a divalike character and for her sympathetic backstory. Her artwork is often cited as the best as well. The fact her character (and and character image) image alludes to Heather canon contestant Heather, who has her own strong following, probably helps.
* EnsembleDarkhorse: While different characters have been well received or have become people's favorites, the character who was gotten positive reception across the board, being praised and high in people's rankings, is [[TheDreaded Cynthia]]. This is despite the fact she didn't speak in the first two chapters. Helping is that many people love her design.
* BaseBreakingCharacter: Tessa; some readers find her actions towards others too mean and annoying to be likable or sympathetic. Other readers like her for being a diva
* EnsembleDarkhorse: While different characters have been well received or have become people's favorites, the character who was gotten positive reception across the board, being praised and high in people's rankings, is [[TheDreaded Cynthia]]. This is despite the fact she didn't speak in the first two chapters. Helping is that many people love her design.
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* RescuedFromTheScrappyHeap: For some readers Tessa become a whole lot more likable and redeemed for her actions and friendship with Riley during the alien invaders challenge, even becoming a favorite among certain readers.
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* RescuedFromTheScrappyHeap: For some readers readers, Tessa become became a whole lot more likable and redeemed for her actions and friendship with Riley during the alien invaders challenge, even becoming a favorite among certain readers.
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* BaseBreaker: BaseBreakingCharacter: Tessa; some readers find her actions towards others too mean and annoying to be likable or sympathetic. Other readers like her for being a diva like character and for her sympathetic backstory. The fact her character (and character image) alludes to Heather helps.
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* RescuedFromTheScrappyHeap: For some readers Tessa become a whole lot more likable and redeemed for her actions and friendship with Riley during the alien invaders challenge, even being becoming a favorite among certain readers.
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* GeniusBonus: A small one: Rhonda refers to the individual trials in the first challenge as eleven labors. This is an allusion to the most famous labors done, The Labors of Hercules. Getting this allusion, some readers predicted there would actually [[spoiler: be twelve labors instead of eleven]].
* RescuedFromTheScrappyHeap: For some readers Tessa become a whole lot more likable and redeemed for her actions and friendship with Riley during the alien invaders challenge, even being a favorite among the character.
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* GeniusBonus: A small one: Rhonda refers to the individual trials in the first challenge as eleven labors. This is an allusion to the most famous labors done, The Labors of Hercules. Getting this allusion, some readers predicted there would actually [[spoiler: be twelve labors instead of eleven]].eleven]] like Hercules.
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* EnsembleDarkhorse: While different characters have been well received or have become people's favorites, the character who was gotten positive reception across the board, being praised and high people's rankings, is [[TheDreaded Cynthia]]. This is despite the fact she didn't speak in the first two chapters. Helping is that many people love her design.
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* EnsembleDarkhorse: While different characters have been well received or have become people's favorites, the character who was gotten positive reception across the board, being praised and high people's rankings, is [[TheDreaded Cynthia]]. This is despite the fact she didn't speak in the first two chapters. Helping is that many people love her design.design.
* RescuedFromTheScrappyHeap: For some readers Tessa become a whole lot more likable and redeemed for her actions and friendship with Riley during the alien invaders challenge, even being a favorite among the character.
* RescuedFromTheScrappyHeap: For some readers Tessa become a whole lot more likable and redeemed for her actions and friendship with Riley during the alien invaders challenge, even being a favorite among the character.
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* AwesomeArt: Most all readers have stated they love the art and some admit to starting the story simply because they enjoyed the images.
* BaseBreaker: Tessa; some readers find her actions towards others too mean and annoying to be likable or sympathetic. Other readers like her for being a diva like character and for her sympathetic backstory. The fact her character (and character image) alludes to Heather helps.
* EnsembleDarkhorse: While different characters have been well received or have become people's favorites, the character who was gotten positive reception across the board, being praised and high people's rankings, is [[TheDreaded Cynthia]]. This is despite the fact she didn't speak in the first two chapters. Helping is that many people love her design.
* BaseBreaker: Tessa; some readers find her actions towards others too mean and annoying to be likable or sympathetic. Other readers like her for being a diva like character and for her sympathetic backstory. The fact her character (and character image) alludes to Heather helps.
* EnsembleDarkhorse: While different characters have been well received or have become people's favorites, the character who was gotten positive reception across the board, being praised and high people's rankings, is [[TheDreaded Cynthia]]. This is despite the fact she didn't speak in the first two chapters. Helping is that many people love her design.
