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* GermansLoveDavidHasselhoff: While the domestic boss office income was $57 million in China, it was $79 million, making it by far the most successful market for this film
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* GermansLoveDavidHasselhoff: While the domestic boss office income was $57 million in China, it was $79 million, making it by far the most successful market for this filmfilm.
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* GermansLoveDavidHasselhoff: Domestic income? $57 million. Chinese income? $79 million, leaving behind every other country by a ''huge'' margin.
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* GermansLoveDavidHasselhoff: Domestic income? While the domestic boss office income was $57 million. Chinese income? million in China, it was $79 million, leaving behind every other country making it by a ''huge'' margin.far the most successful market for this film
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* SoOkayItsAverage: Many reviews say it seems no one cared about making the movie more than passable action fodder, and it comes off more like a long test shoot or trailer for Creator/AliciaVikander to play Lara in some actual stories next time. For example, The Critical Drinker called it "[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XL-N2Girifg the movie everybody forgot]]" and viewed it as simply unmemorable.
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* SoOkayItsAverage: Many reviews say it seems no one cared about making the movie more than passable action fodder, and it comes off more like a long test shoot or trailer for Creator/AliciaVikander to play Lara in some actual stories next time. For example, The Critical Drinker called it "[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XL-N2Girifg the movie everybody forgot]]" and viewed it as simply unmemorable.
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* SoOkayItsAverage: Many reviews say it seems no one cared about making the movie more than passable action fodder, and it comes off more like a long test shoot or trailer for Creator/AliciaVikander to play Lara in some actual stories next time. For example, WebVideo/TheCriticalDrinker called it "[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XL-N2Girifg the movie everybody forgot]]" and viewed it as simply unmemorable.
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* SoOkayItsAverage: Many reviews say it seems no one cared about making the movie more than passable action fodder, and it comes off more like a long test shoot or trailer for Creator/AliciaVikander to play Lara in some actual stories next time. For example, WebVideo/TheCriticalDrinker The Critical Drinker called it "[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XL-N2Girifg the movie everybody forgot]]" and viewed it as simply unmemorable.
