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** Happens again during Chapter 15 to 18. While Chapter 15 started out strong with the reveal of Maleficent Records' Board of Directors and Roxanne, the plot grinded to a halt with the camping trip at the old nudist camp. With the exception of major character growth with Elizabeth and her getting together with Dakota, the plot doesn't resume until the middle of Chapter 18, almost 4 years later with the introduction of Seven Veils Holdings, Inc. and Mr. K.
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** Happens again during Chapter 15 to 18. While Chapter 15 started out strong with the reveal of Maleficent Records' Board of Directors and Roxanne, the plot grinded to a halt with the camping trip at the old nudist camp. With the exception of major character growth with Elizabeth and her getting together with Dakota, the plot doesn't resume until the middle of Chapter 18, 19, almost 4 years later with the introduction of Seven Veils Holdings, Inc. and Mr. K.
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** Happens again during Chapter 15 to 18. While Chapter 15 started out strong with the reveal of Maleficent Records' Board of Directors and Roxanne, the plot grinded to a halt with the camping trip at the old nudist camp. With the exception of major character growth with Elizabeth and her getting together with Dakota, the plot doesn't resume until the middle of Chapter 18, almost 4 years later.later with the introduction of Seven Veils Holdings, Inc. and Mr. K.
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* ValuesResonance: Suria's complete and utter adoration of Steg's large body, which she frequently describes as beautiful, is some rather refreshing body positivity.
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* EvilIsSexy: The first time we see Roxanne is when she is completely naked, getting massaged while looking into the news. Even when she gets angry, she still stays naked, on the verge of pleasuring herself at the idea of one-uping Seth.
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* {{Narm}}: A lot of the CoitusEnsues moments can be more than a little silly in their executions and dialogue.
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* ArcFatigue: It takes over 150 pages and a full year for the Rock Cocks to get back on the road after their truck breaks down, for reasons that are entirely their fault. For the most part, aside from the introduction of Dakota, the plot grinds to a screeching halt this entire time.
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* {{Adorkable}}: Dakota's a sweet guy and is easily flustered compared to the more experienced members of the cast. His reactions when Steg and Suria compliment his bus are quite cute.
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* FridgeLogic: Why did Coral seem annoyed at the prospect of having to move back in with her family in Arkansas? Her Midwestern parents likely aren't going to be thrilled that their nudist, lesbian daughter and her wife are now destitute after spending three years running a failed restaurant in a dilapidated resort in the middle of nowhere.
* {{Narm}}: A lot of the CoitusEnsues moments can be more than a little silly in their executions and dialogue.
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* EvilIsSexy: The first time we see Roxanne is when she is completely naked, getting massaged while looking into the news. Even when she gets angry, she still stays naked, on the verge of pleasuring herself at the idea of one-uping Seth.
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