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* AuthorsSavingThrow: Some readers started feeling that the RunningGag of Twilight and Dimmed Star repeatedly torturing and killing Shaded in Author's Notes wasn't funny anymore. The author decided to think of ways to lessen that while keeping it funny and light-hearted. At the end of the 27th chapter, Pinkie Pie addresses this issue to Twilight and Dimmed Star who leave Shaded alone this time.
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** [[spoiler:Brutus Meadows]] [[AlasPoorVillain becomes one in the 28th chapter]] due to the MyLifeFlashedBeforeMyEyes moment that [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone makes him finally regret]] both [[spoiler:the [[AbusiveParents abuse of Scootaloo]] whom he picked up first among the orphans to adopt, and the [[TilMurderDoUsPart murder of the wife]] whom [[ChildhoodFriendRomance he knew since foalhood and loved dearly before she started gambling and he started drinking]].
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** [[spoiler:Brutus Meadows]] [[AlasPoorVillain becomes one in the 28th chapter]] due to the MyLifeFlashedBeforeMyEyes moment that [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone makes him finally regret]] both [[spoiler:the [[AbusiveParents abuse of Scootaloo]] whom he picked up first among the orphans to adopt, and the [[TilMurderDoUsPart murder of the wife]] whom [[ChildhoodFriendRomance he knew since foalhood and loved dearly dearly]] before she started gambling and he started drinking]].
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* JerkassWoobie: Business Savvy acts overly hostile towards Princess Celestia and Fancy Pants, but his hatred towards Dimmed Star is understandable, given the fact that [[YouKilledMyFather she killed his only son]].
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** Business Savvy acts overly hostile towards Princess Celestia and Fancy Pants, but his hatred towards Dimmed Star is understandable, given the fact that [[YouKilledMyFather she killed his onlyson]].son]].
** [[spoiler:Brutus Meadows]] [[AlasPoorVillain becomes one in the 28th chapter]] due to the MyLifeFlashedBeforeMyEyes moment that [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone makes him finally regret]] both [[spoiler:the [[AbusiveParents abuse of Scootaloo]] whom he picked up first among the orphans to adopt, and the [[TilMurderDoUsPart murder of the wife]] whom [[ChildhoodFriendRomance he knew since foalhood and loved dearly before she started gambling and he started drinking]].
** Business Savvy acts overly hostile towards Princess Celestia and Fancy Pants, but his hatred towards Dimmed Star is understandable, given the fact that [[YouKilledMyFather she killed his only
** [[spoiler:Brutus Meadows]] [[AlasPoorVillain becomes one in the 28th chapter]] due to the MyLifeFlashedBeforeMyEyes moment that [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone makes him finally regret]] both [[spoiler:the [[AbusiveParents abuse of Scootaloo]] whom he picked up first among the orphans to adopt, and the [[TilMurderDoUsPart murder of the wife]] whom [[ChildhoodFriendRomance he knew since foalhood and loved dearly before she started gambling and he started drinking]].
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* JerkassWoobie: Business Savvy acts overly hostile towards Princess Celestia and Fancy Pants, but his hatred towards Dimmed Star is understandable, given the fact that she killed his only son.
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* AuthorsSavingThrow: Some readers started feeling that the RunningGag of Twilight and Dimmed Star repeatedly torturing and killing Shaded in Author's Notes wasn't funny anymore. The author decided to think of ways to lessen that while keeping it funny and light-hearted. At the end of the 27th chapter, Pinkie Pie addresses this issue to Twilight and Dimmed Star who leave Shaded alone this time.
* JerkassWoobie: Business Savvy acts overly hostile towards Princess Celestia and Fancy Pants, but his hatred towards Dimmed Star is understandable, given the fact that [[YouKilledMyFather she killed his onlyson.son]].
* JerkassWoobie: Business Savvy acts overly hostile towards Princess Celestia and Fancy Pants, but his hatred towards Dimmed Star is understandable, given the fact that [[YouKilledMyFather she killed his only
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* JerkassWoobie: Business Savvy acts overly hostile towards Princess Celestia and Fancy Pants, but his hatred towards Dimmed Star is understandable, given the fact that she killed his only son.
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