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* NightmareFuel: The character of Fred.Fred the zombie.
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* {{Jerkass}}: Caroline is a thoroughly unpleasant character throughout the story, between her strange fetishes, lovers/friends who are ''unrepentant murderers, fascists, and pedophiles'', and her disproportionate hate for everyone that rivals [[Literature/IHaveNoMouthAndIMustScream AM]]. And while she wasn't ''trying'' to [[spoiler: kill everyone in existence except herself and Lawrence]], she sure looks on the bright side when it happens.
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* EndingFatigue: From far-future science fiction about how people deal with a strongly superhuman, albeit benevolent, AGI, to [[spoiler:a (deliberately) pre-agrarian AdamAndEvePlot]].
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* EndingFatigue: From far-future science fiction about how people deal with a strongly superhuman, albeit benevolent, AGI, to [[spoiler:a (deliberately) pre-agrarian AdamAndEvePlot]].AdamAndEvePlot]].
* NightmareFuel: The character of Fred.
* NightmareFuel: The character of Fred.
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* EndingFatigue: From far-future science fiction about how people deal with a strongly superhuman, albeit benevolent, AGI, to [[spoiler:a (deliberately) pre-agrarian AdamAndEvePlot]].
* JerkAss: Caroline is a thoroughly unpleasant character throughout the story. Her strange fetishes, lovers/friends who are ''unrepentant murderers and pedophiles'', to her disproportionate hate for everyone that rivals [[Literature/IHaveNoMouthAndIMustScream AM]]: all culminating in her [[spoiler: killing everyone in existence except for her and Lawerance because somehow that is better than boredom.]]
* ScheduleSlip - The sequel, ''The Transmigration of Prime Intellect'', has been in the works since 2004.[[http://www.kuro5hin.org/story/2010/9/3/20910/05774 In 2010, the author said he got past a major bit of writer's block.]] As of mid-2015, that's his latest word on the matter.
* JerkAss: Caroline is a thoroughly unpleasant character throughout the story. Her strange fetishes, lovers/friends who are ''unrepentant murderers and pedophiles'', to her disproportionate hate for everyone that rivals [[Literature/IHaveNoMouthAndIMustScream AM]]: all culminating in her [[spoiler: killing everyone in existence except for her and Lawerance because somehow that is better than boredom.]]
* ScheduleSlip - The sequel, ''The Transmigration of Prime Intellect'', has been in the works since 2004.[[http://www.kuro5hin.org/story/2010/9/3/20910/05774 In 2010, the author said he got past a major bit of writer's block.]] As of mid-2015, that's his latest word on the matter.
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* EndingFatigue: From far-future science fiction about how people deal with a strongly superhuman, albeit benevolent, AGI, to [[spoiler:a (deliberately) pre-agrarian AdamAndEvePlot]].
* JerkAss: Caroline is a thoroughly unpleasant character throughout the story. Her strange fetishes, lovers/friends who are ''unrepentant murderers and pedophiles'', to her disproportionate hate for everyone that rivals [[Literature/IHaveNoMouthAndIMustScream AM]]: all culminating in her [[spoiler: killing everyone in existence except for her and Lawerance because somehow that is better than boredom.]]
* ScheduleSlip - The sequel, ''The Transmigration of Prime Intellect'', has been in the works since 2004.[[http://www.kuro5hin.org/story/2010/9/3/20910/05774 In 2010, the author said he got past a major bit of writer's block.]] As of mid-2015, that's his latest word on the matter.AdamAndEvePlot]].
* JerkAss: Caroline is a thoroughly unpleasant character throughout the story. Her strange fetishes, lovers/friends who are ''unrepentant murderers and pedophiles'', to her disproportionate hate for everyone that rivals [[Literature/IHaveNoMouthAndIMustScream AM]]: all culminating in her [[spoiler: killing everyone in existence except for her and Lawerance because somehow that is better than boredom.]]
* ScheduleSlip - The sequel, ''The Transmigration of Prime Intellect'', has been in the works since 2004.[[http://www.kuro5hin.org/story/2010/9/3/20910/05774 In 2010, the author said he got past a major bit of writer's block.]] As of mid-2015, that's his latest word on the matter.
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* JerkAss: Caroline is a thoroughly unpleasant character throughout the story. Her strange fetishes, lovers/friends who are ''unrepentant murderers and pedophiles'', to her disproportionate hate for everyone that rivals [[IHaveNoMouthAndIMustScream [[Literature/IHaveNoMouthAndIMustScream AM]]: all culminating in her [[spoiler: killing everyone in existence except for her and Lawerance because somehow that is better than boredom.]]
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* FetishFuel: Zig-zagged. The (mostly relatively outré) sex scenes might give this impression on a superficial reading, but to take them as such misses the point. While readers with sufficiently outré tastes might find them appealing, they're present in the story for the same reason as the Gorn: to demonstrate the lengths to which people will go merely to stave off the ever-encroaching boredom of immortality in a LotusEaterMachine.
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* JerkAss: Caroline is a thoroughly unpleasant character throughout the story. Her strange fetishes, lovers/friends who are ''unrepentant murderers and pedophiles'', to her disproportionate hate for everyone that rivals [[IHaveNoMouthAndIMustScream AM]]: all culminating in her [[spoiler: killing everyone in existence except for her and Lawerance because somehow that is better than boredom.]] She comes off as an bratty, ungrateful child.
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* JerkAss: Caroline is a thoroughly unpleasant character throughout the story. Her strange fetishes, lovers/friends who are ''unrepentant murderers and pedophiles'', to her disproportionate hate for everyone that rivals [[IHaveNoMouthAndIMustScream AM]]: all culminating in her [[spoiler: killing everyone in existence except for her and Lawerance because somehow that is better than boredom.]] She comes off as an bratty, ungrateful child.]]
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* ScheduleSlip - The sequel, ''The Transmigration of Prime Intellect'', has been in the works since 2004.[[http://www.kuro5hin.org/story/2010/9/3/20910/05774 In 2010, the author said he got past a major bit of writer's block.]] As of mid-2015, that's his latest word on the matter.
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* Jerkass: Caroline is a thoroughly unpleasant character throughout the story. Her strange fetishes, lovers/friends who are ''unrepentant murderers and pedophiles'', to her disproportionate hate for everyone that rivals [[IHaveNoMouthAndIMustScream AM]]: all culminating in her [[spoiler: killing everyone in existence except for her and Lawerance because somehow that is better than boredom.]] She comes off as an bratty, ungrateful child.
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* Jerkass: JerkAss: Caroline is a thoroughly unpleasant character throughout the story. Her strange fetishes, lovers/friends who are ''unrepentant murderers and pedophiles'', to her disproportionate hate for everyone that rivals [[IHaveNoMouthAndIMustScream AM]]: all culminating in her [[spoiler: killing everyone in existence except for her and Lawerance because somehow that is better than boredom.]] She comes off as an bratty, ungrateful child.
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* ScheduleSlip - The sequel, ''The Transmigration of Prime Intellect'', has been in the works since 2004. [[http://www.kuro5hin.org/story/2010/9/3/20910/05774 In 2010, the author said he got past a major bit of writer's block.]] As of mid-2015, that's his latest word on the matter.
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* ScheduleSlip - The sequel, ''The Transmigration of Prime Intellect'', has been in the works since 2004. 2004.
* Jerkass: Caroline is a thoroughly unpleasant character throughout the story. Her strange fetishes, lovers/friends who are ''unrepentant murderers and pedophiles'', to her disproportionate hate for everyone that rivals [[IHaveNoMouthAndIMustScream AM]]: all culminating in her [[spoiler: killing everyone in existence except for her and Lawerance because somehow that is better than boredom.]] She comes off as an bratty, ungrateful child.
[[http://www.kuro5hin.org/story/2010/9/3/20910/05774 In 2010, the author said he got past a major bit of writer's block.]] As of mid-2015, that's his latest word on the matter.
* Jerkass: Caroline is a thoroughly unpleasant character throughout the story. Her strange fetishes, lovers/friends who are ''unrepentant murderers and pedophiles'', to her disproportionate hate for everyone that rivals [[IHaveNoMouthAndIMustScream AM]]: all culminating in her [[spoiler: killing everyone in existence except for her and Lawerance because somehow that is better than boredom.]] She comes off as an bratty, ungrateful child.
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* ScheduleSlip - The sequel, ''The Transmigration of Prime Intellect'', has been in the works since 2004. [[http://www.kuro5hin.org/story/2010/9/3/20910/05774 In 2010, the author said he got past a major bit of writer's block.]]]] As of mid-2015, that's his latest word on the matter.
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* EndingFatigue: Everything starts out as a decent scifi, apart from...[[{{Squick}} half]] [[{{Gorn}} of it]] [[spoiler: then it turns into a pre-agrarian AdamAndEvePlot]]
* FetishFuel - For ''horrible people'', yes, but given the amount of messed-up sex in there, it's gotta turn ''someone'' on.
** There is normal sex. Once. [[{{Squick}} Then]] [[BrotherSisterIncest it gets]] [[ParentalIncest back on track.]]
* MoralEventHorizon - The Prime Intellect ended hunger, disease, war, suffering, inequality, pain, poverty, scarcity, death, terrorism, murder, torture, rape, theft, all crime and everything else that you can conceivably imagine of as evil and anti-ethical to human existence and wishes. The protagonists [[spoiler:''kill him'' and thus are ultimately responsible for any and all evil and suffering that occurs from that point on.]]
* FetishFuel - For ''horrible people'', yes, but given the amount of messed-up sex in there, it's gotta turn ''someone'' on.
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* MoralEventHorizon - The Prime Intellect ended hunger, disease, war, suffering, inequality, pain, poverty, scarcity, death, terrorism, murder, torture, rape, theft, all crime and everything else that you can conceivably imagine of as evil and anti-ethical to human existence and wishes. The protagonists [[spoiler:''kill him'' and thus are ultimately responsible for any and all evil and suffering that occurs from that point on.]]
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* EndingFatigue: Everything starts out as From far-future science fiction about how people deal with a decent scifi, apart from...[[{{Squick}} half]] [[{{Gorn}} of it]] [[spoiler: then it turns into a strongly superhuman, albeit benevolent, AGI, to [[spoiler:a (deliberately) pre-agrarian AdamAndEvePlot]]
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*FetishFuel - For ''horrible people'', yes, FetishFuel: Zig-zagged. The (mostly relatively outré) sex scenes might give this impression on a superficial reading, but given to take them as such misses the amount point. While readers with sufficiently outré tastes might find them appealing, they're present in the story for the same reason as the Gorn: to demonstrate the lengths to which people will go merely to stave off the ever-encroaching boredom of messed-up sex immortality in there, it's gotta turn ''someone'' on.
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* FetishFuel - For ''horrible people'', yes, but given the amount of messed-up sex in there, it's gotta turn ''someone'' on.
** There is normal sex. Once. [[{{Squick}} Then]] [[BrotherSisterIncest it gets]] [[ParentalIncest back on track.]]
* MoralEventHorizon - The Prime Intellect ended hunger, disease, war, suffering, inequality, pain, poverty, scarcity, death, terrorism, murder, torture, rape, theft, all crime and everything else that you can conceivably imagine of as evil and anti-ethical to human existence and wishes. The protagonists [[spoiler:''kill him'' and thus are ultimately responsible for any and all evil and suffering that occurs from that point on.]]
* FetishFuel - For ''horrible people'', yes, but given the amount of messed-up sex in there, it's gotta turn ''someone'' on.
** There is normal sex. Once. [[{{Squick}} Then]] [[BrotherSisterIncest it gets]] [[ParentalIncest back on track.]]
* MoralEventHorizon - The Prime Intellect ended hunger, disease, war, suffering, inequality, pain, poverty, scarcity, death, terrorism, murder, torture, rape, theft, all crime and everything else that you can conceivably imagine of as evil and anti-ethical to human existence and wishes. The protagonists [[spoiler:''kill him'' and thus are ultimately responsible for any and all evil and suffering that occurs from that point on.]]
