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* BrokenBase: Chapter 30 had very mixed opinions due to Nedzu being perceived as going too far in his training of the students with the labyrinth, to the point that the [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/27019630/chapters/104971572 author had to post up a strawpoll in the subsequent chapter]] to ask if he should rewrite the Chapter completely:
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* BrokenBase: The original Chapter 30 had very mixed opinions due to Nedzu being perceived as going too far in his training of the students with the labyrinth, to the point that the [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/27019630/chapters/104971572 author had to post up a strawpoll in the subsequent chapter]] to ask if he should rewrite the Chapter completely:completely. He ultimately changed the second half of the original chapter after much deliberation:
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* AuthorsSavingThrow: The below BrokenBase was alleviated to some degree by having the brutal and maiming effects of the labyrinth be replaced with something more akin to laser tag, bringing it more in line with previous chapters in terms of tone.
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* BrokenBase: Chapter 30 has had very mixed opinions due to Nedzu being perceived as going too far in his training of the students with the labyrinth, to the point that the [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/27019630/chapters/104971572 author had to post up a strawpoll in the subsequent chapter]] to ask if he should rewrite the Chapter completely:
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* AuthorsSavingThrow: The below BrokenBase was alleviated to some degree by having the brutal and maiming effects of the labyrinth be replaced with something more akin to laser tag, bringing it more in line with previous chapters in terms of tone.
* BrokenBase: Chapter 30has had very mixed opinions due to Nedzu being perceived as going too far in his training of the students with the labyrinth, to the point that the [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/27019630/chapters/104971572 author had to post up a strawpoll in the subsequent chapter]] to ask if he should rewrite the Chapter completely:
* BrokenBase: Chapter 30
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** Some readers feel that Nedzu's actions are too cruel and excessive, due to being willing to brutalize and harm his students (bordering on what could be considered to be war crimes) while abusing the immortality that the island enables. A particular point made is that given how much the story goes out of it's way to emphasize the trauma and damage something like the comparatively tame USJ incident has caused to the students, it's immensely hypocritical and out of character for someone like Nedzu to subject them to events that arguably ''exceed'' the horrors of that event.
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** Some readers feel that Nedzu's actions are too cruel and excessive, due to being willing to brutalize and harm his students (bordering on what could be considered to be war crimes) while abusing the immortality that the island enables. A particular point made is that given how much the story goes out of it's its way to emphasize the trauma and damage something like the comparatively tame USJ incident has caused to the students, it's immensely hypocritical and out of character for someone like Nedzu to subject them to events that arguably ''exceed'' the horrors of that event.
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** Many people are stuck between these two camps to varying degrees, with some feeling that while it might be necessary, it should come with the caveat that Nedzu needs to face proper consequences for this, possibly tied into his nature as an uplifted animal and the [[BlueAndOrangeMorality disconnect in morality]] present to make him understand just how cruel his actions are.
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** Many people are stuck between these two camps to varying degrees, with some feeling that while it might be necessary, it should come with the caveat that Nedzu needs to face proper consequences for this, possibly tied into his nature as an uplifted animal subjected to horrific science experiments and the [[BlueAndOrangeMorality disconnect in morality]] present to make [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone him understand just how cruel his actions are.]]
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** Some readers feel that Nedzu's actions are too cruel and excessive, due to being willing to brutalize and harm his students (bordering on what could be considered to be war crimes) while abusing the immortality that the island enables. A particular point made is that given how much the story goes out of it's way to emphasize the trauma and damage something like the comparatively tame USJ incident has caused to the students, it's immensely hypocritical and out of character for someone like Nedzu to subject them to events that arguably ''exceed'' the horrors of that event. ** On the flipside, some think that it's fine, given that they're technically going to be alright as a result of being revived and healed of their injuries, and that due to the circumstances, TrainingFromHell might be necessary in order to ensure that the students will survive the horrors yet to come.
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** Some readers feel that Nedzu's actions are too cruel and excessive, due to being willing to brutalize and harm his students (bordering on what could be considered to be war crimes) while abusing the immortality that the island enables. A particular point made is that given how much the story goes out of it's way to emphasize the trauma and damage something like the comparatively tame USJ incident has caused to the students, it's immensely hypocritical and out of character for someone like Nedzu to subject them to events that arguably ''exceed'' the horrors of that event. event.
** On the flipside, some think that it's fine, given that they're technically going to be alright as a result of being revived and healed of their injuries, and that due to the circumstances, TrainingFromHell might be necessary in order to ensure that the students will survive the horrors yet to come.
** On the flipside, some think that it's fine, given that they're technically going to be alright as a result of being revived and healed of their injuries, and that due to the circumstances, TrainingFromHell might be necessary in order to ensure that the students will survive the horrors yet to come.
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* BrokenBase: Chapter 30 has had very mixed opinions due to Nedzu being perceived as going too far in his training of the students with the labyrinth, to the point that the [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/27019630/chapters/104971572 author had to post up a strawpoll in the subsequent chapter]] to ask if he should rewrite the Chapter completely:
** Some readers feel that Nedzu's actions are too cruel and excessive, due to being willing to brutalize and harm his students (bordering on what could be considered to be war crimes) while abusing the immortality that the island enables. A particular point made is that given how much the story goes out of it's way to emphasize the trauma and damage something like the comparatively tame USJ incident has caused to the students, it's immensely hypocritical and out of character for someone like Nedzu to subject them to events that arguably ''exceed'' the horrors of that event. ** On the flipside, some think that it's fine, given that they're technically going to be alright as a result of being revived and healed of their injuries, and that due to the circumstances, TrainingFromHell might be necessary in order to ensure that the students will survive the horrors yet to come.
** Many people are stuck between these two camps to varying degrees, with some feeling that while it might be necessary, it should come with the caveat that Nedzu needs to face proper consequences for this, possibly tied into his nature as an uplifted animal and the [[BlueAndOrangeMorality disconnect in morality]] present to make him understand just how cruel his actions are.
** Some readers feel that Nedzu's actions are too cruel and excessive, due to being willing to brutalize and harm his students (bordering on what could be considered to be war crimes) while abusing the immortality that the island enables. A particular point made is that given how much the story goes out of it's way to emphasize the trauma and damage something like the comparatively tame USJ incident has caused to the students, it's immensely hypocritical and out of character for someone like Nedzu to subject them to events that arguably ''exceed'' the horrors of that event. ** On the flipside, some think that it's fine, given that they're technically going to be alright as a result of being revived and healed of their injuries, and that due to the circumstances, TrainingFromHell might be necessary in order to ensure that the students will survive the horrors yet to come.
** Many people are stuck between these two camps to varying degrees, with some feeling that while it might be necessary, it should come with the caveat that Nedzu needs to face proper consequences for this, possibly tied into his nature as an uplifted animal and the [[BlueAndOrangeMorality disconnect in morality]] present to make him understand just how cruel his actions are.
