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* SlowlySlippingIntoEvil: Grubbs does this toward the end of the series after [[spoiler: he allows his Wolf side to surface and, in his words, "becomes a mix of a human, magician, wolf and Kah-Gash."]] These acts range from allowing Antoine Horwitzer to be slaughtered to ripping out Kernel's eyes because he refused to help with Grubbs's cause. [[spoiler: He gets better though.]]
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* SlowlySlippingIntoEvil: Grubbs does this toward the end of the series after [[spoiler: he allows his Wolf side to surface and, in his words, "becomes a mix of a human, magician, wolf and Kah-Gash."]] " These acts range from allowing Antoine Horwitzer to be slaughtered to ripping out Kernel's eyes because he refused to help with Grubbs's cause. [[spoiler: He gets better though.]]
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* MoralEventHorizon: Lord Loss does this in his [[EstablishingCharacterMoment very first appearance]], with [[spoiler: slaughtering Grubbs' family in a most cruel and horrific manner, and giving their bodies to his minions as toys.]]
* NauseaFuel: Some of the Gorn, and a few demon realms as well. Like that one from [[spoiler: The Board]] in ''Demon Thief''. You know the one...
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* MoralEventHorizon: Lord Loss does this in his [[EstablishingCharacterMoment very first appearance]], with [[spoiler: slaughtering Grubbs' family in a most cruel and horrific manner, and giving their bodies to his minions as toys.]]
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* NauseaFuel: Some of the Gorn, and a few demon realms as well. Like that one from[[spoiler: The Board]] Board in ''Demon Thief''. You know the one...
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** In another incident, a guard fires two bullets at a demon lady, who proceeds [[spoiler: to stop both bullets in mid-air, transform them into demonic butterflies, and return to sender. More specifically, [[EyeScream his eyes]], and from there, his brain. Slowly.]]
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** In another incident, a guard fires two bullets at a demon lady, who proceeds [[spoiler: to stop both bullets in mid-air, transform them into demonic butterflies, and return to sender. More specifically, [[EyeScream his eyes]], and from there, his brain. Slowly.]]
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* TheWoobie: Give just ''one'' moment when Kernel was actually happy (excluding the time spent with his little brother Art, [[spoiler:who turned out to be a ''demon'']]).
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* TheWoobie: Give just ''one'' moment when Kernel was actually happy (excluding All three of the time spent with his little brother Art, [[spoiler:who turned out to be a ''demon'']]).
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* TearJerker: [[spoiler: Dervish]]'s death.
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** Bec confronting Dervish about simply using her to relive every moment of [[spoiler: Bill-E]]'s life.
** Also [[spoiler: Bill-E]]'s.
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* TearJerker: [[spoiler: Dervish]]'s Bill-E's death.
** Also[[spoiler: Bill-E]]'s.
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* WhatDoYouMeanItsForKids: ''The Demonata'' is quite possibly the most extraordinarily hyperviolent children's series '''ever written'''. One of the tamest examples is Grubbs throwing rats guts on his sister while she showers, just a few pages before he comes across her and their parents savagely murdered corpses, in a room covered with their blood. Decapitation, dismemberment, infanticide, impalement, torture, mutilation and all manner of horrible deaths occur in every book, sometimes dozens in a single scene. To say nothing of all the bullying, kidnapping, animal cruelty and all manner of sins that the ''heroes'' get up to.
* TheWoobie: Give just ''one'' moment when Kernel was actually happy (excluding the time spent with his little brother Art, [[spoiler:who turned out to be a ''demon'']]).
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* WhatDoYouMeanItsForKids: ''The Demonata'' is quite possibly the most extraordinarily hyperviolent children's series '''ever written'''. One of the tamest examples is Grubbs throwing rats rats' guts on his sister while she showers, just a few pages before he comes across her and their parents parents' savagely murdered corpses, in a room covered with their blood. Decapitation, dismemberment, infanticide, impalement, torture, mutilation and all manner of horrible deaths occur in every book, sometimes dozens in a single scene. To say nothing of all the bullying, kidnapping, animal cruelty and all manner of sins that the ''heroes'' get up to.
* TheWoobie: Give just ''one'' moment when Kernel was actually happy (excluding the time spent with his little brother Art, [[spoiler:who turned out to be a''demon'']]).''demon'']]).
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* CrowningMomentOfFunny: The same [[spoiler:chess match]].
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* CrowningMomentOfAwesome: Grubbs' and Lord Loss' [[spoiler:chess match]] in the first book. Can we say ''epic owned''?
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* CompleteMonster: Lord Loss feeds off of humanity's sorrow and pain and has been known to torture people just for the hell of it.
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** Grubbs himself begins to do things that push him into this toward the end of the series after [[spoiler: he allows his Wolf side to surface and, in his words, "becomes a mix of a human, magician, wolf and Kah-Gash."]] These acts range from allowing Antoine Horwitzer to be slaughtered to ripping out Kernel's eyes because he refused to help with Grubbs's cause.
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* MagnificentBastard: A few. Lord Loss. The Kah Gash. Beranabus. Dear Lord, ''Bernabus''.
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* MagnificentBastard: A few. Lord Loss. The Kah Gash. Beranabus. Dear Lord, ''Bernabus''.
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* CompleteMonster: The Demonata are an entire race of {{Complete Monster}}s, but Lord Loss really [[UpToEleven takes the cake]].
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* NightmareFuel: Begins just from looking at the cover of the first book, and once you actually [[ItGotWorse read it]]...
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* HighOctaneNightmareFuel: Oh, where to start...
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** What stands out particularly is the ending to the book ''Bec'', where the titular protagonist/narrator gives a rather detailed description of the various demonic beings she is surrounded by while trapped in a tunnel underground, as the light fades into darkness. And then gives a very graphic description of the sensation of being eaten alive by the various creatures (with claws, teeth, beaks and tentacles), with the implication that the last thing she ever hears is the sound of her own screams in the dark.
** In another incident, a guard fires two bullets at a demon lady, who proceeds [[spoiler: to stop both bullets in mid-air, transform them into demonic butterflies, and return to sender. More specifically, [[EyeScream his eyes]], and from there, his brain. Slowly.]]
** What stands out particularly is the ending to the book ''Bec'', where the titular protagonist/narrator gives a rather detailed description of the various demonic beings she is surrounded by while trapped in a tunnel underground, as the light fades into darkness. And then gives a very graphic description of the sensation of being eaten alive by the various creatures (with claws, teeth, beaks and tentacles), with the implication that the last thing she ever hears is the sound of her own screams in the dark.
** In another incident, a guard fires two bullets at a demon lady, who proceeds [[spoiler: to stop both bullets in mid-air, transform them into demonic butterflies, and return to sender. More specifically, [[EyeScream his eyes]], and from there, his brain. Slowly.]]
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* WhatDoYouMeanItsForKids: ''The Demonata'' is quite possibly the most extraordinarily hyperviolent children's series '''ever written'''. One of the tamest examples is Grubbs throwing rats guts on his sister while she showers, just a few pages before he comes across her and their parents savagely murdered corpses, in a room covered with their blood. Decapitation, dismemberment, infanticide, impalement, torture, mutilation and all manner of horrible deaths occur in every book, sometimes dozens in a single scene. To say nothing of all the bullying, kidnapping, animal cruelty and all manner of sins that the ''heroes'' get up to.