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** Chase, too. Deciding that he'd rather die than [[spoiler:live without Marshall, he throws himself into the laser as it fired]], leaving the Paw Patrol with not one, but ''two'' major losses for no reason other than his own selfishness.
* WhatAnIdiot: Ryder at the end. He only has to press one button [[spoiler:to save Marshall from the laser about to disintegrate him]], only to hear Katie, his girlfriend who had also gone missing, unexpectedly call out to him.\\
'''You'd expect:''' Ryder to quickly press the button [[spoiler:and save Marshall]] before doing anything else.\\
'''Instead:''' Ryder leaves [[spoiler:Marshall in the laser chamber]] to talk to Katie.\\
'''As a result:''' Katie (revealed to be brainwashed) attacks Ryder and activates [[spoiler:the laser override, sealing Marshall's demise]].\\
'''Furthermore:''' Ryder is established as caring so deeply for his pups that losing one has the potential to break him, but this evidently doesn't stop him from forgetting all about them when his girlfriend is involved.
* WhatAnIdiot: Ryder at the end. He only has to press one button [[spoiler:to save Marshall from the laser about to disintegrate him]], only to hear Katie, his girlfriend who had also gone missing, unexpectedly call out to him.\\
'''You'd expect:''' Ryder to quickly press the button [[spoiler:and save Marshall]] before doing anything else.\\
'''Instead:''' Ryder leaves [[spoiler:Marshall in the laser chamber]] to talk to Katie.\\
'''As a result:''' Katie (revealed to be brainwashed) attacks Ryder and activates [[spoiler:the laser override, sealing Marshall's demise]].\\
'''Furthermore:''' Ryder is established as caring so deeply for his pups that losing one has the potential to break him, but this evidently doesn't stop him from forgetting all about them when his girlfriend is involved.
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** Chase, too. Deciding that he'd rather die than [[spoiler:live without Marshall, he throws himself into the laser as it fired]], leaving the Paw Patrol with not one, but ''two'' major losses for no reason other than his own selfishness.
* WhatAnIdiot: Ryder at the end. He only has to press one button [[spoiler:to save Marshall from the laser about to disintegrate him]], only to hear Katie, his girlfriend who had also gone missing, unexpectedly call out to him.\\
'''You'd expect:''' Ryder to quickly press the button [[spoiler:and save Marshall]] before doing anything else.\\
'''Instead:''' Ryder leaves [[spoiler:Marshall in the laser chamber]] to talk to Katie.\\
'''As a result:''' Katie (revealed to be brainwashed) attacks Ryder and activates [[spoiler:the laser override, sealing Marshall's demise]].\\
'''Furthermore:''' Ryder is established as caring so deeply for his pups that losing one has the potential to break him, but this evidently doesn't stop him from forgetting all about them when his girlfriend is involved.selfishness.
* WhatAnIdiot: Ryder at the end. He only has to press one button [[spoiler:to save Marshall from the laser about to disintegrate him]], only to hear Katie, his girlfriend who had also gone missing, unexpectedly call out to him.\\
'''You'd expect:''' Ryder to quickly press the button [[spoiler:and save Marshall]] before doing anything else.\\
'''Instead:''' Ryder leaves [[spoiler:Marshall in the laser chamber]] to talk to Katie.\\
'''As a result:''' Katie (revealed to be brainwashed) attacks Ryder and activates [[spoiler:the laser override, sealing Marshall's demise]].\\
'''Furthermore:''' Ryder is established as caring so deeply for his pups that losing one has the potential to break him, but this evidently doesn't stop him from forgetting all about them when his girlfriend is involved.
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'''You'd expect:''' Ryder to press the button [[spoiler:and free Marshall]] before doing anything else.\\
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'''You'd expect:''' Ryder to quickly press the button [[spoiler:and free save Marshall]] before doing anything else.\\
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* UnintentionallyUnsympathetic: Ryder. At the very end of the fic, he is shown greiving over [[spoiler:Marshall and Chase's deaths]], in spite of the fact that they were partially ''his fault''. Despite apparently adoring his pups, this isn't enough to keep him from completely forgetting about them the moment his girlfriend Katie appears, despite him being a single button-push from saving one of them. This distraction is all the time needed for [[spoiler:the laser override to be activated and for Marshall to be doomed]].
** Chase, too. Deciding that he'd rather die than [[spoiler:live without Marshall, he throws himself into the laser as it fired]], leaving the Paw Patrol with not one, but ''two'' major losses for no reason other than his own selfishness.
* WhatAnIdiot: Ryder at the end. He only has to press one button [[spoiler:to save Marshall from the laser about to disintegrate him]], only to hear Katie, his girlfriend who had also gone missing, unexpectedly call out to him.\\
'''You'd expect:''' Ryder to press the button [[spoiler:and free Marshall]] before doing anything else.\\
'''Instead:''' Ryder leaves [[spoiler:Marshall in the laser chamber]] to talk to Katie.\\
'''As a result:''' Katie (revealed to be brainwashed) attacks Ryder and activates [[spoiler:the laser override, sealing Marshall's demise]].\\
'''Furthermore:''' Ryder is established as caring so deeply for his pups that losing one has the potential to break him, but this evidently doesn't stop him from forgetting all about them when his girlfriend is involved.
** Chase, too. Deciding that he'd rather die than [[spoiler:live without Marshall, he throws himself into the laser as it fired]], leaving the Paw Patrol with not one, but ''two'' major losses for no reason other than his own selfishness.
* WhatAnIdiot: Ryder at the end. He only has to press one button [[spoiler:to save Marshall from the laser about to disintegrate him]], only to hear Katie, his girlfriend who had also gone missing, unexpectedly call out to him.\\
'''You'd expect:''' Ryder to press the button [[spoiler:and free Marshall]] before doing anything else.\\
'''Instead:''' Ryder leaves [[spoiler:Marshall in the laser chamber]] to talk to Katie.\\
'''As a result:''' Katie (revealed to be brainwashed) attacks Ryder and activates [[spoiler:the laser override, sealing Marshall's demise]].\\
'''Furthermore:''' Ryder is established as caring so deeply for his pups that losing one has the potential to break him, but this evidently doesn't stop him from forgetting all about them when his girlfriend is involved.
