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** Somewhat ironic considering the fact that she was the victim in [[FanFic.{{Cupcakes}} another infamous fanfic...]]
** CorruptCorporateExecutive? Try more like a cross between an evil [[TheSocialDarwinist Social Darwinist]] of the "Improve the species at any cost" type and a [[ThoseWackyNazis death camp commandant]], seeing as how this is specifically stated to be something the pegasi do to get rid of "failures".
** Somewhat ironic considering the fact that she was the victim in [[FanFic.{{Cupcakes}} another infamous fanfic...]]
** CorruptCorporateExecutive? Try more like a cross between an evil [[TheSocialDarwinist Social Darwinist]] of the "Improve the species at any cost" type and a [[ThoseWackyNazis death camp commandant]], seeing as how this is specifically stated to be something the pegasi do to get rid of "failures".
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* RonTheDeathEater: [[spoiler:Canon Rainbow Dash? The most A courageous, loyal, awesome pony you'll ever meet.loyal JerkWithAHeartOfGold who would never abandon her friends. Factory Rainbow Dash? A [[CompleteMonster soulless and evil]] CorruptCorporateExecutive who murders Scootaloo, her surrogate little sister, in cold blood.]]
** Somewhat ironic considering the fact that she was the victim in[[FanFic.{{Cupcakes}} [[FanFic/{{Cupcakes}} another infamous fanfic...]]
** CorruptCorporateExecutive? Try more like a cross between an evil [[TheSocialDarwinist Social Darwinist]] of the "Improve the species at any cost" type and a[[ThoseWackyNazis [[NaziGermany death camp commandant]], seeing as how this is specifically stated to be something the pegasi do to get rid of "failures".
** Somewhat ironic considering the fact that she was the victim in
** CorruptCorporateExecutive? Try more like a cross between an evil [[TheSocialDarwinist Social Darwinist]] of the "Improve the species at any cost" type and a
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* HilariousInHindsight /HarsherInHindsight /FunnyAneurysmMoment: [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AaEQow-M8Pc G3 Rainbow Dash]] is, shall we say, ''uncomfortable'' telling the other ponies where rainbows come from...
-->'''Minty''': Wow, you know so much about rainbows!
-->'''Rainbow Dash''': Of course I do, darlings! If I don't know all about rainbows, who would?
-->'''Pinkie Pie''': Do you know how they're made?
-->'''Rainbow Dash''': ''(uneasy)'' Ah, well, darlings...there are some things we're not ''supposed'' to know!
-->'''Minty''': Wow, you know so much about rainbows!
-->'''Rainbow Dash''': Of course I do, darlings! If I don't know all about rainbows, who would?
-->'''Pinkie Pie''': Do you know how they're made?
-->'''Rainbow Dash''': ''(uneasy)'' Ah, well, darlings...there are some things we're not ''supposed'' to know!
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** ''Every single adult pony they meet'' being EXTREMELY cruel to our three heroes.
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* CompleteMonster: [[spoiler:Rainbow Dash oversees the murder of ponies every day, but what firmly rockets her into this territory is how she is implied to murder Scootaloo, the closest pony she had to a little sister, in cold blood. It's explicitely stated that it's Scootaloo's failure at the flight test, signing her fate, that kills the last kind feelings Rainbow Dash had in her and irreversibly turns her into a merciless monster.]]
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* CompleteMonster: [[spoiler:Rainbow Dash oversees the murder of ponies every day, but what firmly rockets her into this territory is how she is she's implied to murder Scootaloo, the closest pony she had to a little sister, in cold blood. It's explicitely explicitly stated that it's Scootaloo's failure at the flight test, signing sealing her fate, that kills the last kind feelings Rainbow Dash had in her and irreversibly turns her into a merciless monster.]]
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** CorruptCorporateExecutive? Try more like a cross between an evil {{Darwinist}} of the "Improve the species at any cost" type and a [[ThoseWackyNazis death camp commandant]], seeing as how this is specifically stated to be something the pegasi do to get rid of "failures".
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** CorruptCorporateExecutive? Try more like a cross between an evil {{Darwinist}} [[TheSocialDarwinist Social Darwinist]] of the "Improve the species at any cost" type and a [[ThoseWackyNazis death camp commandant]], seeing as how this is specifically stated to be something the pegasi do to get rid of "failures".
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* Tearjerker: TearJerker: Among other things, [[spoiler:Orion's]] death.
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** CorruptCorporateExecutive? Try more like a cross between an evil {{Darwinist}} of the "Improve the species at any cost" type and a [[ThoseWackyNazis death camp commandant]], seeing as how this is specifically stated to be something the pegasi do to get rid of "failures"."failures".
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* RonTheDeathEater: [[spoiler:Canon Rainbow Dash? The most courageous, loyal, awesome pony you'll ever meet. Factory Rainbow Dash? A [[CompleteMonster soulless and evil]] CorruptCorporateExecutive who murders Scootaloo, the closest pony she ever had to her, in cold blood.]]
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* RonTheDeathEater: [[spoiler:Canon Rainbow Dash? The most courageous, loyal, awesome pony you'll ever meet. Factory Rainbow Dash? A [[CompleteMonster soulless and evil]] CorruptCorporateExecutive who murders Scootaloo, the closest pony she ever had to her, her surrogate little sister, in cold blood.]]
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* RonTheDeathEater: [[spoiler:Canon Rainbow Dash? The most courageous, loyal, and awesome pony you'll ever meet. Factory Rainbow Dash? A [[CompleteMonster heartless]] CorruptCorporateExecutive who murders Scootaloo, the closest pony she ever had to her, in cold blood.]]
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* RonTheDeathEater: [[spoiler:Canon Rainbow Dash? The most courageous, loyal, and awesome pony you'll ever meet. Factory Rainbow Dash? A [[CompleteMonster heartless]] soulless and evil]] CorruptCorporateExecutive who murders Scootaloo, the closest pony she ever had to her, in cold blood.]]
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* RonTheDeathEater: [[spoiler:Canon Rainbow Dash? The bravest, loyalest, most courageous, loyal, and awesome pony you'll ever lay your eyes on.meet. Factory Rainbow Dash? A [[CompleteMonster heartless]] CorruptCorporateExecutive who murders Scootaloo, the closest pony she ever had to her, in cold blood.]]
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** CorruptCorporateExecutive? Try more like a cross between an evil {{Darwinist]] {{Darwinist}} of the "Improve the species at any cost" type and a [[ThoseWackyNazis death camp commandant]], seeing as how this is specifically stated to be something the pegasi do to get rid of "failures".
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* RonTheDeathEater: [[spoiler:Canon Rainbow Dash? The bravest, loyalest, most awesome pony you'll ever lay your eyes on. Factory Rainbow Dash? A [[CompleteMonster heartless]] CorruptCorporateExecutive who murders Scootaloo, the closest pony she ever had to her, in cold blood.]]]]
** CorruptCorporateExecutive? Try more like a cross between an evil {{Darwinist]] of the "Improve the species at any cost" type and a [[ThoseWackyNazis death camp commandant]], seeing as how this is specifically stated to be something the pegasi do to get rid of "failures".
** CorruptCorporateExecutive? Try more like a cross between an evil {{Darwinist]] of the "Improve the species at any cost" type and a [[ThoseWackyNazis death camp commandant]], seeing as how this is specifically stated to be something the pegasi do to get rid of "failures".
