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** Heck, how ''everypony'' in that village came to join Starlight's cult is CanonFodder. Everypony has a story, and they're all begging to be written. How did they get there, what were their lives like before the cult, and what are they going to do now that they're free? Will they return to their previous homes and families, [[IChooseToStay or will they stay in the newly-freed village?]]
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** How many people, outside of ski enthusiasts, would understand what Double Diamond's name refers to? (A double black diamond is the most difficult run at a ski resort.)
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** How many people, outside of ski enthusiasts, would understand what Double Diamond's name refers to? (A (At a ski resort, a double black diamond trail is the most difficult run at a ski resort.hardest and only for expert skiers.)
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** How many people, outside of ski enthusiasts, would understand what Double Diamond's name refers to?
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** How many people, outside of ski enthusiasts, would understand what Double Diamond's name refers to?to? (A double black diamond is the most difficult run at a ski resort.)
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** As has an image of Starlight Glimmer's rage face, as seen here: [[https://derpiboo.ru/tags/ragelight+glimmer 1]].
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** As has an image of Starlight Glimmer's rage face, as seen here: [[https://derpiboo.ru/tags/ragelight+glimmer 1]].[[https://derpibooru.org/tags/ragelight+glimmer here.]]
