History YMMV / MassVexations

28th Apr '17 5:22:02 PM NordRonnoc
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* DesignatedHero: Art can come off as this. For one, he was condescending, aggressive, and sanctimonious to a lot of people. He mouthed off a number of characters, often for petty reasons. He also ''assaulted'' Kaidan, a commanding officer, over Shepard's relationship when he met him on the Citadel after Horizon. The only form of reprisal was Tali calling him out on his crap in MV2. It was surprising no one else called him out on his behavior. As for trying to change the course of canon for the better, he hasn't done much in the grand scheme of things. The only form of change he did was playing ShipperOnDeck between Shepard and Kaiden in the first entry and her and Thane in the second. [[http://rp.rpen.us/2011/10/fanfics-mass-vexations-by-herr-wozzeck-mass-effect-life-in-thedas-by-hazza137-dragon-age-origins/ One reviewer]] noted how weird it was for him to be liked by Shepard despite his behavior.

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* DesignatedHero: Art can come off as this. For one, he was condescending, aggressive, and sanctimonious to a lot of people. He mouthed off a number of characters, often for petty reasons. He also ''assaulted'' ''punched'' Kaidan, a commanding officer, over Shepard's former relationship with him and her relationship with Thane when he met him on the Citadel after Horizon. The only form of reprisal was Tali calling him out on his crap in MV2. It was surprising no one else called him out on his behavior. As for trying to change the course of canon for the better, he hasn't done much in the grand scheme of things. The only form of change he did was playing ShipperOnDeck between Shepard and Kaiden in the first entry and her and Thane in the second. [[http://rp.rpen.us/2011/10/fanfics-mass-vexations-by-herr-wozzeck-mass-effect-life-in-thedas-by-hazza137-dragon-age-origins/ One reviewer]] noted how weird it was for him to be liked by Shepard despite his behavior.behavior:
-->'''Rogue Penguin''': Itís a strangely uncomfortable situation, actually. The narrative makes it obvious that other characters donít like this behavior, but the main character persists in engaging it long after he realizes this. For some reason, however, Shepard continues to include Art in the plot of the game and brings him on away missions to allow him to get combat experience. Itís baffling. It actually reeks of an author who is aware that Mary Sueís are frequently adored by characters for no justifiable reason, and then decides to throw in lines from other characters expressing their hate but NEVER actually following through on their hate to get away from the character. In the end, Art ends up feeling even MORE Mary Sue-ish because heís an ass, who is NOT liked, but is still not thrown off the ship (or boxed up in crew quarters to be ignored).
17th Feb '17 4:17:30 AM NordRonnoc
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* CanonDefilement: The Fade arc takes a lot of liberties with Dragon Age canon. Chiefly, the idea that the pilgrimage to the Black City would be able to purify souls when in [[Franchise/DragonAge the actual games]] this is the place that initiated the darkspawn taint.

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* CanonDefilement: The Fade arc takes a lot of liberties with Dragon Age canon. Chiefly, the idea that the pilgrimage to the Black City would be able to purify souls when in [[Franchise/DragonAge the actual games]] this is the place that initiated the darkspawn Darkspawn taint.



* DesignatedHero: Art can come off as this. For one, he was condescending, aggressive, and sanctimonious to a lot of people. He mouthed off a number of characters, often for petty reasons. He also ''assaulted'' Kaidan, a commanding officer, over Shepard's relationship when he met him on the Citadel after Horizon. It was surprising no one called him out on his behavior. The only form of reprisal was Tali calling him out on his crap in MV2. As for trying to change the course of canon for the better, he hasn't done much in the grand scheme of things. The only form of change he did was playing ShipperOnDeck between Shepard and Kaiden in the first entry and her and Thane in the second. [[http://rp.rpen.us/2011/10/fanfics-mass-vexations-by-herr-wozzeck-mass-effect-life-in-thedas-by-hazza137-dragon-age-origins/ One reviewer]] noted how weird it was for him to be liked by Shepard despite his behavior.

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* DesignatedHero: Art can come off as this. For one, he was condescending, aggressive, and sanctimonious to a lot of people. He mouthed off a number of characters, often for petty reasons. He also ''assaulted'' Kaidan, a commanding officer, over Shepard's relationship when he met him on the Citadel after Horizon. It was surprising no one called him out on his behavior. The only form of reprisal was Tali calling him out on his crap in MV2. It was surprising no one else called him out on his behavior. As for trying to change the course of canon for the better, he hasn't done much in the grand scheme of things. The only form of change he did was playing ShipperOnDeck between Shepard and Kaiden in the first entry and her and Thane in the second. [[http://rp.rpen.us/2011/10/fanfics-mass-vexations-by-herr-wozzeck-mass-effect-life-in-thedas-by-hazza137-dragon-age-origins/ One reviewer]] noted how weird it was for him to be liked by Shepard despite his behavior.



* SeasonalRot: Some fans accuse the fanfic of having this in the later fanfics, citing the overusage of other characters from other universes and the entire [[VideoGame/DragonAgeOrigins Fade]] storyline.

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* SeasonalRot: Some fans accuse the fanfic of having this in the later fanfics, citing the overusage over-usage of other characters from other universes and the entire [[VideoGame/DragonAgeOrigins Fade]] storyline.



* TooCoolToLive: [[spoiler: Nogond]], we hardly knew ye... *sob*

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* TooCoolToLive: [[spoiler: Nogond]], we hardly knew ye... *sob*WeHardlyKnewYe.
8th Feb '17 9:58:45 PM NordRonnoc
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* DesignatedHero: Art can come off as this. For one, he was condescending, aggressive, and sanctimonious to a lot of people He mouthed off a number of characters, often for petty reasons. He also ''assaulted'' Kaidan, a commanding officer, over Shepard's relationship when he met him on the Citadel after Horizon. It was surprising no one called him out on his behavior. The only form of reprisal was Tali calling him out on his crap in MV2. As for trying to change the course of canon for the better, he hasn't done much in the grand scheme of things. The only form of change he did was playing ShipperOnDeck between Shepard and Kaiden in the first entry and her and Thane in the second. [[http://rp.rpen.us/2011/10/fanfics-mass-vexations-by-herr-wozzeck-mass-effect-life-in-thedas-by-hazza137-dragon-age-origins/ One reviewer]] noted how weird it was for him to be liked by Shepard despite his behavior.

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* DesignatedHero: Art can come off as this. For one, he was condescending, aggressive, and sanctimonious to a lot of people people. He mouthed off a number of characters, often for petty reasons. He also ''assaulted'' Kaidan, a commanding officer, over Shepard's relationship when he met him on the Citadel after Horizon. It was surprising no one called him out on his behavior. The only form of reprisal was Tali calling him out on his crap in MV2. As for trying to change the course of canon for the better, he hasn't done much in the grand scheme of things. The only form of change he did was playing ShipperOnDeck between Shepard and Kaiden in the first entry and her and Thane in the second. [[http://rp.rpen.us/2011/10/fanfics-mass-vexations-by-herr-wozzeck-mass-effect-life-in-thedas-by-hazza137-dragon-age-origins/ One reviewer]] noted how weird it was for him to be liked by Shepard despite his behavior.
4th Jan '17 2:04:16 PM NordRonnoc
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* CanonDefilement: The Fade arc takes a lot of liberties with Dragon Age canon. Chiefly, the idea that the pilgrimage to the Black City would be able to purify souls when in actual games this is the place that initiated the darkspawn taint.

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* CanonDefilement: The Fade arc takes a lot of liberties with Dragon Age canon. Chiefly, the idea that the pilgrimage to the Black City would be able to purify souls when in [[Franchise/DragonAge the actual games games]] this is the place that initiated the darkspawn taint.
23rd Sep '16 5:15:36 AM NordRonnoc
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* DesignatedHero: Art can come off as this. For one, he was condescending, aggressive, and sanctimonious to a lot of people He mouthed off a number of characters, often for petty reasons. He also ''assaulted'' Kaidan, a commanding officer, over Shepard's relationship when he met him on the Citadel after Horizon. It was surprising no one called him out on his behavior. The only form of reprisal was Tali calling him out on his crap in MV2. As for trying to change the course of canon for the better, he hasn't done much in the grand scheme of things. The only form of change he did was playing ShipperOnDeck between Shepard and Kaiden in the first entry and her and Thane in the second.[[http://rp.rpen.us/2011/10/fanfics-mass-vexations-by-herr-wozzeck-mass-effect-life-in-thedas-by-hazza137-dragon-age-origins/ One reviewer]] noted how weird it was for him to be liked by Shepard despite his behavior.

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* DesignatedHero: Art can come off as this. For one, he was condescending, aggressive, and sanctimonious to a lot of people He mouthed off a number of characters, often for petty reasons. He also ''assaulted'' Kaidan, a commanding officer, over Shepard's relationship when he met him on the Citadel after Horizon. It was surprising no one called him out on his behavior. The only form of reprisal was Tali calling him out on his crap in MV2. As for trying to change the course of canon for the better, he hasn't done much in the grand scheme of things. The only form of change he did was playing ShipperOnDeck between Shepard and Kaiden in the first entry and her and Thane in the second. [[http://rp.rpen.us/2011/10/fanfics-mass-vexations-by-herr-wozzeck-mass-effect-life-in-thedas-by-hazza137-dragon-age-origins/ One reviewer]] noted how weird it was for him to be liked by Shepard despite his behavior.
23rd Sep '16 5:15:15 AM NordRonnoc
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* CanonDefilement: The Fade arc takes a lot of liberties with Dragon Age canon: chiefly, the idea that the pilgrimage to the Black City would be able to purify souls when in actual games this is the place that initiated the darkspawn taint.

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* CanonDefilement: The Fade arc takes a lot of liberties with Dragon Age canon: chiefly, canon. Chiefly, the idea that the pilgrimage to the Black City would be able to purify souls when in actual games this is the place that initiated the darkspawn taint.



* DesignatedHero: Art can come off as this. For one, he has mouthed off a number of characters for often petty reasons. He has also ''assaulted'' Kaidan, a commanding officer, over Shepard's relationship. It was surprising that the only form of reprisal was Tali calling him out on his crap. As for trying to change the course of canon for the better, he hasn't done much in the grand scheme of things. [[http://rp.rpen.us/2011/10/fanfics-mass-vexations-by-herr-wozzeck-mass-effect-life-in-thedas-by-hazza137-dragon-age-origins/ One reviewer]] noted how weird it was for him to be liked by Shepard despite his behavior.

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* DesignatedHero: Art can come off as this. For one, he has was condescending, aggressive, and sanctimonious to a lot of people He mouthed off a number of characters for characters, often for petty reasons. He has also ''assaulted'' Kaidan, a commanding officer, over Shepard's relationship. relationship when he met him on the Citadel after Horizon. It was surprising that the no one called him out on his behavior. The only form of reprisal was Tali calling him out on his crap.crap in MV2. As for trying to change the course of canon for the better, he hasn't done much in the grand scheme of things. The only form of change he did was playing ShipperOnDeck between Shepard and Kaiden in the first entry and her and Thane in the second.[[http://rp.rpen.us/2011/10/fanfics-mass-vexations-by-herr-wozzeck-mass-effect-life-in-thedas-by-hazza137-dragon-age-origins/ One reviewer]] noted how weird it was for him to be liked by Shepard despite his behavior.
4th Jun '16 4:38:22 PM NordRonnoc
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* DesignatedHero: Art can come off as this. For one, he has mouthed off a number of characters for often petty reasons. He has also ''assaulted'' Kaidan, a commanding officer, over Shepard's relationship. It was surprising that the only form of reprisal was Tali calling him out on his crap. As for trying to change the course of canon for the better, he hasn't done much in the grand scheme of things. [[http://rp.rpen.us/2011/10/fanfics-mass-vexations-by-herr-wozzeck-mass-effect-life-in-thedas-by-hazza137-dragon-age-origins/ One reviewer]] noted how weird it was for him to be liked by Shepard despite his behavior.
9th Apr '16 8:46:55 PM Angeldeb82
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* AlternativeCharacterInterpretation: Is Art a GaryStu of the bygone Creator/DavidGonterman-esque variety, or is he -and the whole story- a StealthParody/Deconstruction of Gary Stus in fan fiction?

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* AlternativeCharacterInterpretation: Is Art a GaryStu Marty Stu of the bygone Creator/DavidGonterman-esque variety, or is he -and the whole story- a StealthParody/Deconstruction StealthParody[=/=]{{Deconstruction}} of Gary Marty Stus in fan fiction?



** Averted in MV 3 after [[spoiler: Tali's mind-rape and Thane's death.]]

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** Averted in MV 3 after [[spoiler: Tali's mind-rape and Thane's death.]]death]].



** It goes ''even further.'' It sounds like FanFic/SpellbindingRadiance uses the same method of getting the hero to the canon universe in question, aka, [[spoiler: The person dying and entering the Fade in the right area so that they're reshuffled dimensionally. It's outright stated that Art's teacher and Ashley Williams did the same thing, so it's not a unique thing. If this is the case, than ''how many other Self-Insert fan fictions are the result of the death of the author?'']]

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** It goes ''even further.'' It sounds like FanFic/SpellbindingRadiance uses the same method of getting the hero to the canon universe in question, aka, [[spoiler: The the person dying and entering the Fade in the right area so that they're reshuffled dimensionally. It's outright stated that Art's teacher and Ashley Williams did the same thing, so it's not a unique thing. If this is the case, than ''how many other Self-Insert fan fictions are the result of the death of the author?'']]
28th Oct '15 12:20:36 PM FF32
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* CrossoverShip: [[spoiler:Garrus and [[HeavyRain Madison]]]].

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* CrossoverShip: [[spoiler:Garrus and [[HeavyRain [[VideoGame/HeavyRain Madison]]]].
24th Jan '15 5:34:42 PM MagBas
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* JumpingTheShark: Chapter 39. The story went from primarily science-fiction with some mystical elements hinted at to weaving supernatural and spiritual elements right into the plot. [[spoiler: The Fade, a shared dreamspace/afterlife, is seen and visited, and Orange explains that there is a lot more going on than it looks.]]
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