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** Alana Terrence's death. After being haunted by Sutornia and Cassandra, she runs out the door screaming, hoping to find relief and peace in her soul. Her friends run after her, see headlights approaching and scream at her, but she says “I have reached the end of my road. There is no return for me!” and gets hit by a car. This is accompanied by the written sound effect "BOOM".
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** Alana Terrence's death. After being haunted by Sutornia and Cassandra, she runs out the door screaming, hoping to find relief and peace in her soul. Her friends run after her, see headlights approaching and scream at her, but she says “I "I have reached the end of my road. There is no return for me!” me!" and gets hit by a car. This is accompanied by the written sound effect "BOOM".
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---> '''Arabella:''' ''“Oh no! Please stop! I am Arabella… I am famous for my wisdom and knowledge! You must honor me! Stay away from me! Oh no… that looks like trouble. I was always good and I don’t like trouble. Who can help me? I always thought… people would… ouch… oh no… respect me… but I think… I was… wrong.”''
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---> '''Arabella:''' ''“Oh ''"Oh no! Please stop! I am Arabella… I am famous for my wisdom and knowledge! You must honor me! Stay away from me! Oh no… that looks like trouble. I was always good and I don’t don't like trouble. Who can help me? I always thought… people would… ouch… oh no… respect me… but I think… I was… wrong.”''"''
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---> ''Knives and forks from the kitchen shelves darted like arrows or mini torpedoes toward Alana and Dorothy and sliced open Alana’s right arm and grinded away parts of Dorothy’s scalp.''
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---> ''The false monk Larivier had drugged Krimhilda. He now used his manhood and took advantage of her as darkness fell over Notali, the city of evil''
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* SoBadItsGood:
** Readers have been known to laugh at its quality (or lack thereof).
** The first book's movie adaptation, ''Maradonia and the Shadow Empire''. Between the [[WTHCostumingDepartment amateurish costumes]], [[SpecialEffectsFailure dollar-store special effects]], stock footage by the bucketload, and awkward dialogue with [[ChewingTheScenery ham-fisted delivery]] ([[EvilIsHammy especially from the villains]]), there's more unintentional hilarity than you can shake a stick at.
** Readers have been known to laugh at its quality (or lack thereof).
** The first book's movie adaptation, ''Maradonia and the Shadow Empire''. Between the [[WTHCostumingDepartment amateurish costumes]], [[SpecialEffectsFailure dollar-store special effects]], stock footage by the bucketload, and awkward dialogue with [[ChewingTheScenery ham-fisted delivery]] ([[EvilIsHammy especially from the villains]]), there's more unintentional hilarity than you can shake a stick at.
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* SoBadItsGood:
**SoBadItsGood: Readers have been known to laugh at its quality (or lack thereof).
** The first book's movie adaptation, ''Maradonia and the Shadow Empire''. Between the [[WTHCostumingDepartment amateurish costumes]], [[SpecialEffectsFailure dollar-store special effects]], stock footage by the bucketload, and awkward dialogue with [[ChewingTheScenery ham-fisted delivery]] ([[EvilIsHammy especially from the villains]]), there's more unintentional hilarity than you can shake a stick at.thereof).
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** The first book's movie adaptation, ''Maradonia and the Shadow Empire''. Between the [[WTHCostumingDepartment amateurish costumes]], [[SpecialEffectsFailure dollar-store special effects]], stock footage by the bucketload, and awkward dialogue with [[ChewingTheScenery ham-fisted delivery]] ([[EvilIsHammy especially from the villains]]), there's more unintentional hilarity than you can shake a stick at.
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* VanityProject: The whole "franchise" comes across as one. The family kept self-publishing these books and went as far as making a film adaptation despite the lack of interest in the ''Maradonia'' property. It really doesn't help that Gloria plays a main character in the film, which was directed by her father. Her mother plays a minor character too!
