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* GermansLoveDavidHasselhoff: Americans tend to hate with a passion ''Anime/DragonBallGT'', any ''Anime/SailorMoon'' season featuring Rini, any {{Anime/Pokemon}} season post Johto Journeys, anything dubbed by FourKidsEntertainment (Anime/YuGiOh and Manga/OnePiece) any post 80's Transformers series... Guess what, Spanish-speaking countries just love them, and the fic is ''made'' of them. Be aware..
* WordOfGod: So, let's clarify some things out by asking the author:
** This is a complete and utter case of AuthorAppeal.
*** WordOfGod confirms this is the case. The Token Loli groups chosen (and by extension the whole chapters) are based on his favorites. He got a bunch of fantasy-fulfillment plots and mixed them with some What If scenarios that seemed interesting.
** Most of the series are rather obscure /not mainstream enough.
*** What works for America may be different than what is liked back in Europe... See GermansLoveDavidHasselhoff. So aside from the inmortal classics, there are the series that SugarWiki/NeedsMoreLove.
** The ending comes out of nowhere.
*** WordOfGod informs us that the most visited chapters are, and I am not quoting the Bible: 'the First and the Last'. What does that mean? If you skip chapters because you don't like / don't know about the base series it uses, of course the ending will take you by surprise.
** Mike is not a loser, he is too powerful / Xig-lem is too powerful.
*** WordOfGod thinks that is a natural result of throwing an occidental otaku in TV Land: his meta knowledge instantly puts him ahead of Toon World characters. The villain is even more egregious because he is the ''villain'': he doesn't even have to abide by the rules. Seems that an AscendedFanboy can only be beaten by... another AscendedFanboy.
** Linda is just TooGoodForThisSinfulEarth.
*** Okay, spoiler alert. [[spoiler: Linda was a blank slate created by the Goddess to cater to her future savior's likings, that is: she would look like what the chosen human liked most. Also, WordOfGod says she's an artificial construct that does not age, that's what she meant in the ending: 'I can be whatever you want'.]]
** The heroes are inmediately accepted / rape the canonic plots.
*** WordOfGod states that it is because the canons visited are plagued with FriendToAllLivingThings Idiot Heroes, who don't really mind. Some dimensional travellers appear and want to befriend you? Well, weirder things have happened. For some at least. About the canon derailment... it is not really noticeable if the episode ends with a ResetButton or events just happen in time periods out of canonic plot focus (most of them happen after the base series have ended)
*** And it is easier to digest if you just think they interact with the characters in a ''Franchise/KingdomHearts''-esque way.
** The chapters always have a Suetastic DuelBoss until the end.
*** WordOfGod wants to add this: what happens when a unstoppable force meets an unmovable object? Yes: the hero and the villain had to be in an eternal stalemate until the end. [[spoiler: they are the same person from 2 different dimensions, so they just cant' kill each other. Only when Mike stripped both of them of their powers he could solve matters with good old TalkToTheFist... and then the GiantSpaceFleaFromNowhere came to steal the spotlight.]]
* GermansLoveDavidHasselhoff: Americans tend to hate with a passion ''Anime/DragonBallGT'', any ''Anime/SailorMoon'' season featuring Rini, any {{Anime/Pokemon}} season post Johto Journeys, anything dubbed by FourKidsEntertainment (Anime/YuGiOh and Manga/OnePiece) any post 80's Transformers series... Guess what, Spanish-speaking countries just love them, and the fic is ''made'' of them. Be aware..
* WordOfGod: So, let's clarify some things out by asking the author:
** This is a complete and utter case of AuthorAppeal.
*** WordOfGod confirms this is the case. The Token Loli groups chosen (and by extension the whole chapters) are based on his favorites. He got a bunch of fantasy-fulfillment plots and mixed them with some What If scenarios that seemed interesting.
** Most of the series are rather obscure /not mainstream enough.
*** What works for America may be different than what is liked back in Europe... See GermansLoveDavidHasselhoff. So aside from the inmortal classics, there are the series that SugarWiki/NeedsMoreLove.
** The ending comes out of nowhere.
*** WordOfGod informs us that the most visited chapters are, and I am not quoting the Bible: 'the First and the Last'. What does that mean? If you skip chapters because you don't like / don't know about the base series it uses, of course the ending will take you by surprise.
** Mike is not a loser, he is too powerful / Xig-lem is too powerful.
*** WordOfGod thinks that is a natural result of throwing an occidental otaku in TV Land: his meta knowledge instantly puts him ahead of Toon World characters. The villain is even more egregious because he is the ''villain'': he doesn't even have to abide by the rules. Seems that an AscendedFanboy can only be beaten by... another AscendedFanboy.
** Linda is just TooGoodForThisSinfulEarth.
*** Okay, spoiler alert. [[spoiler: Linda was a blank slate created by the Goddess to cater to her future savior's likings, that is: she would look like what the chosen human liked most. Also, WordOfGod says she's an artificial construct that does not age, that's what she meant in the ending: 'I can be whatever you want'.]]
** The heroes are inmediately accepted / rape the canonic plots.
*** WordOfGod states that it is because the canons visited are plagued with FriendToAllLivingThings Idiot Heroes, who don't really mind. Some dimensional travellers appear and want to befriend you? Well, weirder things have happened. For some at least. About the canon derailment... it is not really noticeable if the episode ends with a ResetButton or events just happen in time periods out of canonic plot focus (most of them happen after the base series have ended)
*** And it is easier to digest if you just think they interact with the characters in a ''Franchise/KingdomHearts''-esque way.
** The chapters always have a Suetastic DuelBoss until the end.
*** WordOfGod wants to add this: what happens when a unstoppable force meets an unmovable object? Yes: the hero and the villain had to be in an eternal stalemate until the end. [[spoiler: they are the same person from 2 different dimensions, so they just cant' kill each other. Only when Mike stripped both of them of their powers he could solve matters with good old TalkToTheFist... and then the GiantSpaceFleaFromNowhere came to steal the spotlight.]]
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* WordOfGod: So, let's clarify some things out by asking the author:
** This is a complete and utter case of AuthorAppeal.
*** WordOfGod confirms this is the case. The Token Loli groups chosen (and by extension the whole chapters) are based on his favorites. He got a bunch of fantasy-fulfillment plots and mixed them with some What If scenarios that seemed interesting.
** Most of the series are rather obscure /not mainstream enough.
*** What works for America may be different than what is liked back in Europe... See GermansLoveDavidHasselhoff. So aside from the inmortal classics, there are the series that SugarWiki/NeedsMoreLove.
** The ending comes out of nowhere.
*** WordOfGod informs us that the most visited chapters are, and I am not quoting the Bible: 'the First and the Last'. What does that mean? If you skip chapters because you don't like / don't know about the base series it uses, of course the ending will take you by surprise.
** Mike is not a loser, he is too powerful / Xig-lem is too powerful.
*** WordOfGod thinks that is a natural result of throwing an occidental otaku in TV Land: his meta knowledge instantly puts him ahead of Toon World characters. The villain is even more egregious because he is the ''villain'': he doesn't even have to abide by the rules. Seems that an AscendedFanboy can only be beaten by... another AscendedFanboy.
** Linda is just TooGoodForThisSinfulEarth.
*** Okay, spoiler alert. [[spoiler: Linda was a blank slate created by the Goddess to cater to her future savior's likings, that is: she would look like what the chosen human liked most. Also, WordOfGod says she's an artificial construct that does not age, that's what she meant in the ending: 'I can be whatever you want'.]]
** The heroes are inmediately accepted / rape the canonic plots.
*** WordOfGod states that it is because the canons visited are plagued with FriendToAllLivingThings Idiot Heroes, who don't really mind. Some dimensional travellers appear and want to befriend you? Well, weirder things have happened. For some at least. About the canon derailment... it is not really noticeable if the episode ends with a ResetButton or events just happen in time periods out of canonic plot focus (most of them happen after the base series have ended)
*** And it is easier to digest if you just think they interact with the characters in a ''Franchise/KingdomHearts''-esque way.
** The chapters always have a Suetastic DuelBoss until the end.
*** WordOfGod wants to add this: what happens when a unstoppable force meets an unmovable object? Yes: the hero and the villain had to be in an eternal stalemate until the end. [[spoiler: they are the same person from 2 different dimensions, so they just cant' kill each other. Only when Mike stripped both of them of their powers he could solve matters with good old TalkToTheFist... and then the GiantSpaceFleaFromNowhere came to steal the spotlight.]]
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*** And it is easier to digest if you just think they interact with the characters in a KingdomHearts esque way.
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*** And it is easier to digest if you just think they interact with the characters in a KingdomHearts esque ''Franchise/KingdomHearts''-esque way.
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* GermansLoveDavidHasselhoff: Americans tend to hate with a passion ''Anime/DragonBallGT'', any ''Anime/SailorMoon'' season featuring Rini, any {{Anime/Pokemon}} season post Johto Journeys, anything dubbed by 4 Kids (Yugioh and OnePiece) any post 80's Transformers series... Guess what, Spanish-speaking countries just love them, and the fic is ''made'' of them. Be aware..
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* GermansLoveDavidHasselhoff: Americans tend to hate with a passion ''Anime/DragonBallGT'', any ''Anime/SailorMoon'' season featuring Rini, any {{Anime/Pokemon}} season post Johto Journeys, anything dubbed by 4 Kids (Yugioh FourKidsEntertainment (Anime/YuGiOh and OnePiece) Manga/OnePiece) any post 80's Transformers series... Guess what, Spanish-speaking countries just love them, and the fic is ''made'' of them. Be aware..
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* GermansLoveDavidHasselhoff: Americans tend to hate with a passion ''Anime/DragonBallGT'', any ''Anime/SailorMoon'' season featuring Rini, any {{Anime/Pokemon}} season post Johto Journeys, anything dubbed by 4 Kids (Yugioh and OnePiece) any post 80's Transformers series... Guess what, Spanish-speaking countries just love them, and the fic is ''made'' of them. Be aware.
* ThirtySuePileup: Let's see... considering that the heroes are immediately accepted in the other worlds despite changing things up immensely, and never actually fail, they are probably two Sues, who are constantly attacked by a VillainSue who turns out to be [[spoiler: an alternate version of the protagonist who gave in to his base desires.]]
* VillainSue: Xig-lem. Come on, he's always one step ahead of everybody else and has the coolest stuff, and is never permanently defeated. [[VillainExitStageLeft He always leaves the conflict by himself.]] The only reason he ever loses is because he is up against a [[GodModeSue God Mode Stu]].
* ThirtySuePileup: Let's see... considering that the heroes are immediately accepted in the other worlds despite changing things up immensely, and never actually fail, they are probably two Sues, who are constantly attacked by a VillainSue who turns out to be [[spoiler: an alternate version of the protagonist who gave in to his base desires.]]
* VillainSue: Xig-lem. Come on, he's always one step ahead of everybody else and has the coolest stuff, and is never permanently defeated. [[VillainExitStageLeft He always leaves the conflict by himself.]] The only reason he ever loses is because he is up against a [[GodModeSue God Mode Stu]].
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* GermansLoveDavidHasselhoff: Americans tend to hate with a passion ''Anime/DragonBallGT'', any ''Anime/SailorMoon'' season featuring Rini, any {{Anime/Pokemon}} season post Johto Journeys, anything dubbed by 4 Kids (Yugioh and OnePiece) any post 80's Transformers series... Guess what, Spanish-speaking countries just love them, and the fic is ''made'' of them. Be aware.
* ThirtySuePileup: Let's see... considering that the heroes are immediately accepted in the other worlds despite changing things up immensely, and never actually fail, they are probably two Sues, who are constantly attacked by a VillainSue who turns out to be [[spoiler: an alternate version of the protagonist who gave in to his base desires.]]
* VillainSue: Xig-lem. Come on, he's always one step ahead of everybody else and has the coolest stuff, and is never permanently defeated. [[VillainExitStageLeft He always leaves the conflict by himself.]] The only reason he ever loses is because he is up against a [[GodModeSue God Mode Stu]].aware..
* ThirtySuePileup: Let's see... considering that the heroes are immediately accepted in the other worlds despite changing things up immensely, and never actually fail, they are probably two Sues, who are constantly attacked by a VillainSue who turns out to be [[spoiler: an alternate version of the protagonist who gave in to his base desires.]]
* VillainSue: Xig-lem. Come on, he's always one step ahead of everybody else and has the coolest stuff, and is never permanently defeated. [[VillainExitStageLeft He always leaves the conflict by himself.]] The only reason he ever loses is because he is up against a [[GodModeSue God Mode Stu]].
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* AntiSue: Mike, if you really think about it. Sure, it's ''claimed'' he's a loser, but... he never loses, is accepted anywhere, and [[spoiler: ends up with the girl of his dreams by the end.]]
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* GermansLoveDavidHasselhoff: Americans tend to hate with a passion DragonBallGT, any ''Anime/SailorMoon'' season featuring Rini, any {{Anime/Pokemon}} season post Johto Journeys, anything dubbed by 4 Kids (Yugioh and OnePiece) any post 80's Transformers series... Guess what, Spanish-speaking countries just love them, and the fic is ''made'' of them. Be aware.
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* GermansLoveDavidHasselhoff: Americans tend to hate with a passion DragonBallGT, ''Anime/DragonBallGT'', any ''Anime/SailorMoon'' season featuring Rini, any {{Anime/Pokemon}} season post Johto Journeys, anything dubbed by 4 Kids (Yugioh and OnePiece) any post 80's Transformers series... Guess what, Spanish-speaking countries just love them, and the fic is ''made'' of them. Be aware.
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* GermansLoveDavidHasselhoff: Americans tend to hate with a passion DragonBallGT, any SailorMoon season featuring Rini, any {{Anime/Pokemon}} season post Johto Journeys, anything dubbed by 4 Kids (Yugioh and OnePiece) any post 80's Transformers series... Guess what, Spanish-speaking countries just love them, and the fic is ''made'' of them. Be aware.
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* GermansLoveDavidHasselhoff: Americans tend to hate with a passion DragonBallGT, any SailorMoon ''Anime/SailorMoon'' season featuring Rini, any {{Anime/Pokemon}} season post Johto Journeys, anything dubbed by 4 Kids (Yugioh and OnePiece) any post 80's Transformers series... Guess what, Spanish-speaking countries just love them, and the fic is ''made'' of them. Be aware.
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TRS Wick Cleaning on Needs More Love. This page is full of nonsense and needs another cleanup later.
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*** WordofGod confirms this is the case. The Token Loli groups chosen (and by extension the whole chapters) are based on his favorites. He got a bunch of fantasy-fulfillment plots and mixed them with some What If scenarios that seemed interesting.
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*** WordofGod WordOfGod confirms this is the case. The Token Loli groups chosen (and by extension the whole chapters) are based on his favorites. He got a bunch of fantasy-fulfillment plots and mixed them with some What If scenarios that seemed interesting.
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*** What works for America may be different than what is liked back in Europe... See GermansLoveDavidHasselhoff. So aside from the inmortal classics, there are the series that NeedsMoreLove.
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*** What works for America may be different than what is liked back in Europe... See GermansLoveDavidHasselhoff. So aside from the inmortal classics, there are the series that NeedsMoreLove.SugarWiki/NeedsMoreLove.
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* VillainSue: Xig-lem. Come on, he's always one step ahead of everybody else and has the coolest stuff, and is never permanently defeated. [[VillainExitStageLeft He always leaves the conflict by himself.]] The only reason he ever loses is because he is up against a GodModeStu.
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* VillainSue: Xig-lem. Come on, he's always one step ahead of everybody else and has the coolest stuff, and is never permanently defeated. [[VillainExitStageLeft He always leaves the conflict by himself.]] The only reason he ever loses is because he is up against a GodModeStu.[[GodModeSue God Mode Stu]].
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This is a YMMV trope, but from the description, it sounds like it\'s invoked, warranting a move to the front page.
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* AlternativeCharacterInterpretation: The fic runs on the idea that the very first fictional Lolita (Dolores Haze) was a real person that died and became some kind of goddess/overseer of the Toon World, after her soul was cleansed, to represent the Lolicon phenomemon... On the same note, Humbert is bleached into being a hero for supossedly turning his sexual love into the fatherly kind, and shooting the 'villain' who was trying to, you know... make his daughter star a porn film.
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* GermansLoveDavidHasselhoff: Americans tend to hate with a passion DragonBall GT, any SailorMoon season featuring Rini, any {{Pokemon}} season post Johto Journeys, anything dubbed by 4 Kids (Yugioh and OnePiece) any post 80's Transformers series... Guess what, Spanish-speaking countries just love them, and the fic is ''made'' of them. Be aware.
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* GermansLoveDavidHasselhoff: Americans tend to hate with a passion DragonBall GT, DragonBallGT, any SailorMoon season featuring Rini, any {{Pokemon}} {{Anime/Pokemon}} season post Johto Journeys, anything dubbed by 4 Kids (Yugioh and OnePiece) any post 80's Transformers series... Guess what, Spanish-speaking countries just love them, and the fic is ''made'' of them. Be aware.
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** This is a complete and utter FanficChopSuey.case of AuthorAppeal.
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* GermansLoveDavidHasselhoff: Americans tend to hate with a passion DragonBall GT, any SailorMoon season featuring Rini, any {{Pokemon}} season post Johto Journeys, anything dubbed by 4 Kids (Yugioh and OnePiece) any post 80's Transformers series... Guess what, Spanish-speaking countries just love them, and the fic is ''made'' of them. Be aware.
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