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* TooBleakStoppedCaring: Overlaps with AngstAversion. Akira's life becoming a TraumaCongaLine and the Phantom Thieves (Who receive the lion's share of the story's focus) being unsympathetic assholes who actively antagonize him over the misunderstanding of his conversation with Shiho to the point that [[spoiler:Akira's cognition of Ann wants to kill him]] and consistently just make things worse may wind up putting readers off, especially as it takes ''until'' Chapter 16 for the majority of the Phantom Thieves to reconsider their actions and how they treat Akira.
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* TooBleakStoppedCaring: Overlaps with AngstAversion. Akira's life becoming a TraumaCongaLine and the Phantom Thieves (Who receive the lion's share of the story's focus) being unsympathetic assholes who actively antagonize him over the misunderstanding of his conversation with Shiho to the point that [[spoiler:Akira's cognition of Ann wants to kill him]] and consistently just make things worse may wind up putting readers off, especially as it takes ''until'' until Chapter 16 for the majority of the Phantom Thieves to reconsider their actions and how they treat Akira.
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* AngstAversion: Though the story has been praised for the wonderful story-line and characterizations that explores on the thieves flaws, along with a look to how a Joker-less Phantom Thieves would fare with the canonical events, there are a handful of readesr who felt that the story's tone was too bleak to the point of depressing due to the DownerBeginning that starts the ButterflyOfDoom in this story and how things got progressively worse with little signs of improvement for the first 16 chapters of the story, even with the story's tags of "Angst with a Happy Ending" that promises [[EarnYourHappyEnding an eventual happy ending]]. The Shujin thieves constant antagonism of Akira in this story also didn't win them favors until their HeelRealization hits.
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* AngstAversion: Though the story has been praised for the wonderful story-line and characterizations that explores on the thieves flaws, along with a look to how a Joker-less Phantom Thieves would fare with the canonical events, there are a handful of readesr readers who felt that the story's tone was too bleak to the point of depressing due to the DownerBeginning that starts the ButterflyOfDoom in this story and how things got progressively worse with little signs of improvement for the first 16 chapters of the story, even with the story's tags of "Angst with a Happy Ending" that promises [[EarnYourHappyEnding an eventual happy ending]]. The Shujin thieves constant antagonism of Akira in this story due to their AdaptationalJerkass treatment also didn't win them favors until their HeelRealization hits.
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* TooBleakStoppedCaring: Overlaps with AngstAversion. Akira's life becoming a TraumaCongaLine and the Phantom Thieves (Who receive the lion's share of the story's focus) being unsympathetic assholes who actively antagonize him over the misunderstanding of his conversation with Shiho to the point that [[spoiler:Akira's cognition of Ann wants to kill him]] and consistently just make things worse may wind up putting readers off, especially as it takes ''until'' Chapter 16 for the majority of the Phantom Thieves to reconsider their actions.
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* TooBleakStoppedCaring: Overlaps with AngstAversion. Akira's life becoming a TraumaCongaLine and the Phantom Thieves (Who receive the lion's share of the story's focus) being unsympathetic assholes who actively antagonize him over the misunderstanding of his conversation with Shiho to the point that [[spoiler:Akira's cognition of Ann wants to kill him]] and consistently just make things worse may wind up putting readers off, especially as it takes ''until'' Chapter 16 for the majority of the Phantom Thieves to reconsider their actions.actions and how they treat Akira.
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* AngstAversion: Though the story has been praised for the wonderful story-line and characterizations that explores on the thieves flaws, along with a look to how a Joker-less Phantom Thieves would fare with the canonical events, there are a handful of people who felt that the story's tone was too bleak to the point of depressing due to the DownerBeginning that starts the ButterflyOfDoom in this story and how things got progressively worse with little signs of improvement for the first 16 chapters of the story, even with the story's tags of "Angst with a Happy Ending" that promises [[EarnYourHappyEnding an eventual happy ending]]. The Shujin thieves constant antagonism of Akira in this story also didn't win them favors until their HeelRealization hits.
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* AngstAversion: Though the story has been praised for the wonderful story-line and characterizations that explores on the thieves flaws, along with a look to how a Joker-less Phantom Thieves would fare with the canonical events, there are a handful of people readesr who felt that the story's tone was too bleak to the point of depressing due to the DownerBeginning that starts the ButterflyOfDoom in this story and how things got progressively worse with little signs of improvement for the first 16 chapters of the story, even with the story's tags of "Angst with a Happy Ending" that promises [[EarnYourHappyEnding an eventual happy ending]]. The Shujin thieves constant antagonism of Akira in this story also didn't win them favors until their HeelRealization hits.
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* TooBleakStoppedCaring: Akira's life becoming a TraumaCongaLine and the Phantom Thieves (Who receive the lion's share of the story's focus) being unsympathetic assholes who actively antagonise him to the point that [[spoiler:Akira's cognition of Ann wants to kill him]] and consistently just make things worse may wind up putting readers off, especially as it takes until Chapter 16 for the majority of the Phantom Thieves to reconsider their actions.
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* TooBleakStoppedCaring: Overlaps with AngstAversion. Akira's life becoming a TraumaCongaLine and the Phantom Thieves (Who receive the lion's share of the story's focus) being unsympathetic assholes who actively antagonise antagonize him over the misunderstanding of his conversation with Shiho to the point that [[spoiler:Akira's cognition of Ann wants to kill him]] and consistently just make things worse may wind up putting readers off, especially as it takes until ''until'' Chapter 16 for the majority of the Phantom Thieves to reconsider their actions.
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* NightmareFuel: The first chapter ends with Akira dreaming of Igor claiming that his rehabilitation is now impossible to come true setting the tone of what is to come for the rest of the story. And true to his word, Akira's social life in Shujin has become utter ''hell''.
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* NightmareFuel: The first chapter ends with Akira dreaming of Igor claiming that his rehabilitation is now impossible to come true setting the tone of what is to come for the rest of the story. And true to his word, Akira's social life in Shujin has become utter ''hell''.''hell''.
* TheWoobie: Akira. In addition to his canonical torments of being falsely accused of assault and having his criminal record leaked at Shujin (with this story making it clear that Kamoshida ruined his second chance before Akira even set foot in the school for no reason beyond his own ego and sheer cruelty), the fact that he MissedTheCall drives a permanent wedge between him and the people who should have been his TrueCompanions, he can't even do legitimate work at a flower shop without running afoul of someone who can and will ruin his life for the pettiest of slights, and the Phantom Thieves' jaunts into his Palace make it clear that [[CosmicPlaything he's still a victim of supernatural powers beyond his comprehension]].
* TheWoobie: Akira. In addition to his canonical torments of being falsely accused of assault and having his criminal record leaked at Shujin (with this story making it clear that Kamoshida ruined his second chance before Akira even set foot in the school for no reason beyond his own ego and sheer cruelty), the fact that he MissedTheCall drives a permanent wedge between him and the people who should have been his TrueCompanions, he can't even do legitimate work at a flower shop without running afoul of someone who can and will ruin his life for the pettiest of slights, and the Phantom Thieves' jaunts into his Palace make it clear that [[CosmicPlaything he's still a victim of supernatural powers beyond his comprehension]].
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* AngstAversion: Though the story has been praised for the wonderful story-line and characterizations that explores on the thieves flaws, along with a look to how a Joker-less Phantom Thieves would fare with the canonical events, there are a handful of people who felt that the story's tone was too bleak to the point of depressing due to the DownerBeginning that starts the ButterflyOfDoom in this story and how things got progressively worse with little signs of improvement for the first 16 chapters of the story, even if the story's tags promises [[EarnYourHappyEnding an eventual happy ending]]. The Shujin thieves constant antagonism of Akira in this story also didn't win them favors until their HeelRealization hits.
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* AngstAversion: Though the story has been praised for the wonderful story-line and characterizations that explores on the thieves flaws, along with a look to how a Joker-less Phantom Thieves would fare with the canonical events, there are a handful of people who felt that the story's tone was too bleak to the point of depressing due to the DownerBeginning that starts the ButterflyOfDoom in this story and how things got progressively worse with little signs of improvement for the first 16 chapters of the story, even if with the story's tags of "Angst with a Happy Ending" that promises [[EarnYourHappyEnding an eventual happy ending]]. The Shujin thieves constant antagonism of Akira in this story also didn't win them favors until their HeelRealization hits.
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** The first chapter ends with Akira dreaming of Igor claiming that his rehabilitation is now impossible to come true setting the tone of what is to come for the rest of the story. And true to his word, Akira's social life in Shujin has become utter ''hell''.
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**NightmareFuel: The first chapter ends with Akira dreaming of Igor claiming that his rehabilitation is now impossible to come true setting the tone of what is to come for the rest of the story. And true to his word, Akira's social life in Shujin has become utter ''hell''.
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* AngstAversion: Though the story has been praised for the wonderful story-line and characterizations that explores on the thieves flaws, along with a look to how a Joker-less Phantom Thieves would fare with the canonical events, there are a handful of people who felt that the story's tone was too bleak to the point of depressing due to how things doesn't seem to be looking up for Akira or the thieves for the first 16 chapters of the story, even if the story's tags promises [[EarnYourHappyEnding an eventual happy ending]]. The Shujin thieves constant antagonism of Akira in this story also didn't win them favors until their HeelRealization hits.
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* AngstAversion: Though the story has been praised for the wonderful story-line and characterizations that explores on the thieves flaws, along with a look to how a Joker-less Phantom Thieves would fare with the canonical events, there are a handful of people who felt that the story's tone was too bleak to the point of depressing due to the DownerBeginning that starts the ButterflyOfDoom in this story and how things doesn't seem to be looking up for Akira or the thieves got progressively worse with little signs of improvement for the first 16 chapters of the story, even if the story's tags promises [[EarnYourHappyEnding an eventual happy ending]]. The Shujin thieves constant antagonism of Akira in this story also didn't win them favors until their HeelRealization hits.
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* AngstAversion: Though the story has been praised for the wonderful story-line and characterizations that explores on the thieves flaws, along with a look to how a Joker-less Phantom Thieves would fare with the canonical events, there are a handful of people who felt that the story's tone was too bleak to the point of depressing due to how things doesn't seem to be looking up for Akira or the thieves for the first 16 chapters of the story, even if the story's tags promises [[EarnYourHappyEnding an eventual happy ending]]. The Shujin thieves constant antagonism of Akira in this story also didn't win them favors until their HeelRealization hits.
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** The first chapter ends with Akira dreaming of Igor claiming that his rehabilitation is now impossible to come true setting the tone of what is to come for the rest of the story. And true to his word, Akira's social life in Shujin has become utter ''hell''.
* TooBleakStoppedCaring: Though the story has been praised for the wonderful story-line and characterizations that explores on the thieves flaws, along with a look to how a Joker-less Phantom Thieves would fare with the canonical events, there are a handful of people who felt that the story's tone was bleak to the point of depressing due to how things doesn't seem to be looking up for Akira or the thieves for the first 16 chapters of the story. The Shujin thieves constant antagonism of Akira in this story also didn't win them favors until their HeelRealization hits.
* TooBleakStoppedCaring: Though the story has been praised for the wonderful story-line and characterizations that explores on the thieves flaws, along with a look to how a Joker-less Phantom Thieves would fare with the canonical events, there are a handful of people who felt that the story's tone was bleak to the point of depressing due to how things doesn't seem to be looking up for Akira or the thieves for the first 16 chapters of the story. The Shujin thieves constant antagonism of Akira in this story also didn't win them favors until their HeelRealization hits.
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** The first chapter ends with Akira dreaming of Igor claiming that his rehabilitation is now impossible to come true setting the tone of what is to come for the rest of the story. And true to his word, Akira's social life in Shujin has become utter ''hell''.
* TooBleakStoppedCaring: Though the story has been praised for the wonderful story-line and characterizations that explores on the thieves flaws, along with a look to how a Joker-less Phantom Thieves would fare with the canonical events, there are a handful of people who felt that the story's tone was bleak to the point of depressing due to how things doesn't seem to be looking up for Akira or the thieves for the first 16 chapters of the story. The Shujin thieves constant antagonism of Akira in this story also didn't win them favors until their HeelRealization hits.''hell''.
* TooBleakStoppedCaring: Though the story has been praised for the wonderful story-line and characterizations that explores on the thieves flaws, along with a look to how a Joker-less Phantom Thieves would fare with the canonical events, there are a handful of people who felt that the story's tone was bleak to the point of depressing due to how things doesn't seem to be looking up for Akira or the thieves for the first 16 chapters of the story. The Shujin thieves constant antagonism of Akira in this story also didn't win them favors until their HeelRealization hits.
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* TooBleakStoppedCaring: Though the story has been praised for the wonderful story-line and characterizations that explores on the thieves flaws, along with a look to how a Joker-less Phantom Thieves would fare with the canonical events, there are a handful of people who felt that the story's tone was bleak to the point of depressing due to how things doesn't seem to be looking up for Akira or the thieves for the first 16 chapters of the story. The Shujin thieves constant antagonism of Akira in this story also didn't win them favors until their HeelRealization hits.
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* TooBleakStoppedCaring: Though the story has been praised for the wonderful story-line and characterizations that explores on the thieves flaws, along with a look to how a Joker-less Phantom Thieves would fare with the canonical events, there are a handful of people who felt that the story's tone was bleak to the point of depressing due to how things doesn't seem to be looking up for Akira or the thieves for the first 16 chapters of the story. The flaw exploration of the thieves also gave the story a MisaimedFandom that made a group of readers believe that the story is a "Phantom Thief bashing" fic in disguise that the author has to make clear several times to those who comment and claim so that it's ''not''.
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* TooBleakStoppedCaring: Though the story has been praised for the wonderful story-line and characterizations that explores on the thieves flaws, along with a look to how a Joker-less Phantom Thieves would fare with the canonical events, there are a handful of people who felt that the story's tone was bleak to the point of depressing due to how things doesn't seem to be looking up for Akira or the thieves for the first 16 chapters of the story. The flaw exploration of the thieves also gave the story a MisaimedFandom that made a group of readers believe that the story is a "Phantom Thief bashing" fic in disguise that the author has to make clear several times to those who comment and claim so that it's ''not''.
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** The first chapter ends with Akira dreaming of Igor claiming that his rehabilitation is now impossible to come true setting the tone of what is to come for the rest of the story. And true to his word, Akira's social life in Shujin has become utter ''hell''.
* TooBleakStoppedCaring: Though the story has been praised for the wonderful story-line and characterizations that explores on the thieves flaws, along with a look to how a Joker-less Phantom Thieves would fare with the canonical events, there are a handful of people who felt that the story's tone was bleak to the point of depressing due to how things doesn't seem to be looking up for Akira or the thieves for the first 16 chapters of the story. The flaw exploration of the thieves also gave the story a MisaimedFandom that made a group of readers believe that the story is a "Phantom Thief bashing" fic in disguise that the author has to make clear several times to those who comment and claim so that it's ''not''.
** The first chapter ends with Akira dreaming of Igor claiming that his rehabilitation is now impossible to come true setting the tone of what is to come for the rest of the story. And true to his word, Akira's social life in Shujin has become utter ''hell''.
* TooBleakStoppedCaring: Though the story has been praised for the wonderful story-line and characterizations that explores on the thieves flaws, along with a look to how a Joker-less Phantom Thieves would fare with the canonical events, there are a handful of people who felt that the story's tone was bleak to the point of depressing due to how things doesn't seem to be looking up for Akira or the thieves for the first 16 chapters of the story. The flaw exploration of the thieves also gave the story a MisaimedFandom that made a group of readers believe that the story is a "Phantom Thief bashing" fic in disguise that the author has to make clear several times to those who comment and claim so that it's ''not''.
