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* EliminationHoudini: Due to the mangaka established a name for himself, the manga survived more than it should even though it has been in the bottom of the TOC rankings for more than 10 weeks before finally getting canceled.
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* EliminationHoudini: Due to the mangaka established establishing a name for himself, himself with [[Manga/{{Beelzebub}} his previous work]], the manga survived more in ''Jump'' longer than it should expected even though it has been in the bottom of the TOC rankings for more than 10 weeks before finally getting canceled.canceled.
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* EliminationHoudini: Due to the mangaka established a name for himself, the manga survived more than it should even though it has been in the bottom of the TOC rankings for more than 10 weeks before finally getting canceled.
* PacingProblems: The first 3 chapters are quite slow (especially when there are too many ideas planting in the premise alone), and then between this & the Battle of the Queen arc the chapters transition so bizarrely that some readers thought that they had skip some chapters.
* PacingProblems: The first 3 chapters are quite slow (especially when there are too many ideas planting in the premise alone), and then between this & the Battle of the Queen arc the chapters transition so bizarrely that some readers thought that they had skip some chapters.
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* EliminationHoudini: Due to the mangaka established a name for himself, the manga survived more than it should even though it has been in the bottom of the TOC rankings for more than 10 weeks before finally getting canceled. \n* PacingProblems: The first 3 chapters are quite slow (especially when there are too many ideas planting in the premise alone), and then between this & the Battle of the Queen arc the chapters transition so bizarrely that some readers thought that they had skip some chapters.
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* PacingProblems: The first 3 chapters are quite slow (especially when there are too many ideas planting in the premise alone), and then between this & the Battle of the Queen arc the chapters transition so bizarrely that some readers thought that they had skip some chapters.
* PlotDetour: From early on, the main plot changes several times, from Taiga being trapped in Marie's body, to an exorcism story, to a high school drama and so on, to the point that it's hard to tell what the main plot is even supposed to be.
* PlotDetour: From early on, the main plot changes several times, from Taiga being trapped in Marie's body, to an exorcism story, to a high school drama and so on, to the point that it's hard to tell what the main plot is even supposed to be.
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* PacingProblems: The first 3 chapters are quite slow (especially when there are too many ideas planting in the premise alone), and then between this & the Battle of the Queen arc the chapters transition so bizarrely that some readers thought that they had skip some chapters.
* PlotDetour: From early on, the main plot changes several times, from Taiga being trapped in Marie's body, to an exorcism story, to a high school drama and so on, to the point that it's hard to tell what the main plot is even supposed to be.chapters.
* PlotDetour: From early on, the main plot changes several times, from Taiga being trapped in Marie's body, to an exorcism story, to a high school drama and so on, to the point that it's hard to tell what the main plot is even supposed to be.
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* PacingProblems: The first 3 chapters are quite slow (especially when there are too many ideas planting in the premise alone), and then between this & the Battle of the Queen arc the chapters transition so bizarrely that some readers thought that they had skip some chapters.chapters.
* PlotDetour: From early on, the main plot changes several times, from Taiga being trapped in Marie's body, to an exorcism story, to a high school drama and so on, to the point that it's hard to tell what the main plot is even supposed to be.
* PlotDetour: From early on, the main plot changes several times, from Taiga being trapped in Marie's body, to an exorcism story, to a high school drama and so on, to the point that it's hard to tell what the main plot is even supposed to be.
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* AudienceAlienatingPremise: According to some reviewers, the reason the manga never became that popular was that the plot, besides the changing genders thing being already done, was confusing due to using a real-life figure.
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* AudienceAlienatingPremise: According to some reviewers, the reason the manga never became that popular was that the plot, besides the changing genders thing being already done, done in works like ''Manga/RanmaOneHalf'', was confusing due to using a real-life figure.figure which could have been simply skipped using any fantasy character.
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* AudienceAlienatingPremise: According to some reviewers, the reason the manga never became that popular was that the plot, besides the changing genders thing being already done, was confusing due to using a real life figure.
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* AudienceAlienatingPremise: According to some reviewers, the reason the manga never became that popular was that the plot, besides the changing genders thing being already done, was confusing due to using a real life figure.real-life figure.
* EliminationHoudini: Due to the mangaka established a name for himself, the manga survived more than it should even though it has been in the bottom of the TOC rankings for more than 10 weeks before finally getting canceled.
* PacingProblems: The first 3 chapters are quite slow (especially when there are too many ideas planting in the premise alone), and then between this & the Battle of the Queen arc the chapters transition so bizarrely that some readers thought that they had skip some chapters.
* EliminationHoudini: Due to the mangaka established a name for himself, the manga survived more than it should even though it has been in the bottom of the TOC rankings for more than 10 weeks before finally getting canceled.
* PacingProblems: The first 3 chapters are quite slow (especially when there are too many ideas planting in the premise alone), and then between this & the Battle of the Queen arc the chapters transition so bizarrely that some readers thought that they had skip some chapters.
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* AudienceAlienatingPremise: According to some reviewers, the reason the manga never became that popular was that the plot, besides the changing genders thing being already done, was confusing due to using a real life figure.
